Tose Naina Laage | One Shot | - Page 3

Remind me to edit this spot, please! *hides behind her cardboard cutout* 😆

Originally posted by: Gossip Girl

I'm so glad I stalk your posts constantly on IF, else you would never tell me about this one. Hmph! Whaat? 😲😲😲 I totally would! *hmph*

I LOVED it! The way it starts, to Prem's words to her, and the way it ends. You have written it beautifully, Madz! I thought the song went very well with the tragic one. Thanks GG 😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I love both versions. The first more than the second though. I like tragedy. I blame Shabo.

Love,
Radz

Originally posted by: Innocent02

awesome.....It was lovely
don't blame you for the tragedy we should sometimes read tragic stories😉great for a change👍🏼
read both and loved both of them equally.
they were superb.
the song was very nice and the scenes too
I simply loved it & enjoyed reading it😉
great job👏👏

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Remind me to edit this spot, please! *hides behind her cardboard cutout* 😆

Originally posted by: shabo24

Which one do you think I liked the most? 🤣Tough question 🤣

Gawd, more people "liked' the fluffy one, guess they don't realize it's just fiction. 😆I know 😲

But dude, Madz, that was awesome! The song went perfect with the situation and than the way he proposed, the best way to end a fluffy scene like that is with tragic. 😆 This shot is for sure going down as one of my fave on the forum. :) Oh jeez 😆 Thank youuuuuu! 🤗

Write more (tragic!) 😆LOL I shall see 😆 I don't plan on writing at all anytime soon, but if I ever do again, it'll be tragic, no worries 😆

--shabz