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Aradhna

@Anhdara13

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Posted: 16 years ago

#21

I love both versions. The first more than the second though. I like tragedy. I blame Shabo.

Love,
Radz

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Innocent02

@Innocent02

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Posted: 16 years ago

#22

awesome.....It was lovely
don't blame you for the tragedy we should sometimes read tragic stories😉great for a change👍🏼
read both and loved both of them equally.
they were superb.
the song was very nice and the scenes too
I simply loved it & enjoyed reading it😉
great job👏👏

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 16 years ago

#23

Remind me to edit this spot, please! *hides behind her cardboard cutout* 😆

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And I should tell you because...?

@shabo24

Rocker

Posted: 16 years ago

#24

Which one do you think I liked the most? 🤣

Gawd, more people "liked' the fluffy one, guess they don't realize it's just fiction. 😆

But dude, Madz, that was awesome! The song went perfect with the situation and than the way he proposed, the best way to end a fluffy scene like that is with tragic. 😆 This shot is for sure going down as one of my fave on the forum. :)

Write more (tragic!) 😆

--shabz

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Madiha

@Dark Love

Inactive

+ 5

Posted: 16 years ago

#25

Originally posted by: Gossip Girl
I'm so glad I stalk your posts constantly on IF, else you would never tell me about this one. Hmph! Whaat? 😲😲😲 I totally would! *hmph*

I LOVED it! The way it starts, to Prem's words to her, and the way it ends. You have written it beautifully, Madz! I thought the song went very well with the tragic one. Thanks GG 😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
I love both versions. The first more than the second though. I like tragedy. I blame Shabo.

Love,
Radz

Thanks Radz! I blame Shabo for my liking tragedy too 😆

Originally posted by: Innocent02
awesome.....It was lovely
don't blame you for the tragedy we should sometimes read tragic stories😉great for a change👍🏼
read both and loved both of them equally.
they were superb.
the song was very nice and the scenes too
I simply loved it & enjoyed reading it😉
great job👏👏

Thanks so much! 😳

Originally posted by: sourpuss
Remind me to edit this spot, please! *hides behind her cardboard cutout* 😆

Nah you stay behind that cutout of yours 😆

Originally posted by: shabo24
Which one do you think I liked the most? 🤣Tough question 🤣

Gawd, more people "liked' the fluffy one, guess they don't realize it's just fiction. 😆I know 😲

But dude, Madz, that was awesome! The song went perfect with the situation and than the way he proposed, the best way to end a fluffy scene like that is with tragic. 😆 This shot is for sure going down as one of my fave on the forum. :) Oh jeez 😆 Thank youuuuuu! 🤗

Write more (tragic!) 😆LOL I shall see 😆 I don't plan on writing at all anytime soon, but if I ever do again, it'll be tragic, no worries 😆

--shabz