Tose Naina Laage | One Shot | - Page 2

OMG!!! Both of the versions are amazing! You're a really good writer! =D

Originally posted by: indiandoll89

You posted both? 😲 Yes 😆😆😆

*edited*

Blame me for making you? 😛 If you remember correctly, you just said the song was good, and I just agreed and told you that you shud write it! 😛 Nothing else! 😃😳 Yea okay, I said the song was good, you said I should write on it, I said I had something in mind but it was too short, THEN, you gave me the *narrowed eyes* smiley on MSN till I wrote something yesterday. And that something was this. So you are to blame. 😊😆

Anyways, I think it worked with both versions VERY well! 😳 Because it did have that whole maut line that makes me all sad! 😔 I love that line 😍

But okay, the whole proposal bit has me giggling, Prem really has a way with words doesn't he? Aha I love Prem...when it comes to his dialogue, I just have to picture his face, expressive eyes, intensity of his love for Heer, and it comes flowing out 😍😍😳 I'd do longer comments, but you already know what I thought of it! 😃😳Yess I do! Thank youuuuuuuuuuuu! 🤗

Love you,

Meera😳

P.S. WRITE MORE!!!!! *narrowed eyes smiley*

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

I love fluffyness =)

Originally posted by: Garima93

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Heyy Maddy! Hey there! 😃

I honestly thought that both parts were awesome! Lies 😆

I liked both the tragic and the fluff, even though I"m not a very big fan of tragic, but I can still handle it! 😆I've become a sudden fan of tragedy 😳 But to tell you the truth, the song suited more with the tragic one, idk why...it just felt like a tragic song! LOL! Agreee! That's what I thought too, which is why I made it tragic at the last minute 😆 I even listened to it after reading both your one-shots, and yeah it just suited better with the tragic one! It was the lyrics right? 😳 But I seriously loved both! and I think you should write more one-shots!!! Not happening for some time now 😳 I've been a silent reader for your previous ones, but you should know that I LOVED all of them! You have amazing talent! 😃 Please do write more!! I love reading them...keep up the great work! Byee! Thank you so much though, it means a lot! 🤗

~Garima 😳

Originally posted by: cute_bear

welli for one liked the fluff version much better than the tragic

Originally posted by: Pyari_Zahra

Wow, just wow, I'm totally speechless.

Will come back to edit this 😳 xx

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

love the fluff version
both one-shot was awesum

Originally posted by: noneeM

How awesome is it that you have both versions written out!!!!! Super-cool!!!!! Not really, just undecided 😆

And as usual, you have woven magic with your words....You really are amazing! *hides* You're being too nice w/your comments!

I'll be back to comment properly.

My Spot! Okay 😳

And I thank Meera and everyone who's inspired you....for putting this up. I LOVE the way you write and hope you keep writing...Aww thank you nonee!!

Love:-Nonee

P.S. I loved the tragic version....So haunting....am going to get tragic dreams tonight...😆 Tragic dreams? 😆 You are so cute! 😆

Originally posted by: Dark Love

Originally posted by: Dark Love