Muneefah's poetry collection-poem 3-pg 5

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

Originally posted by: robbieluvr
OMG yaar wow muni You are reallyyyyyyyyyy very talented
ahhww..thanku
These poems are both just fantastic The words and the way the lines are put together it's all just brilliant im really speechless The feel is sooooooo beautiful keep up the great work
ohh.iman,u always support me..thanks for likin my work..u rock
i will read your peoms regularly from now on
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i missed this post
glad u finally saw it..coz ur comments mean alot to me

Anyways Mindblowing, fantastic
thanks dear

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

POEM no#3
Robbie to KAsturi
Kabhi tou aye ge meri wafaaon se sharminda ho kar
Phir hum usko na miley ge dubara zinda hokar
Kiya mila us ko meri duniya chor kar,
Khud bhe tanha rahe ge mujhey tanha chor kar

Edited by muneefah - 16 years ago

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Sari

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

munefah u made this kia
its lovely

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Iman

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

Very beautiful i loved it it was so emotional please keep up the good work and make more im waiting for the next one

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meepha

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Originally posted by: robbieluvr
Very beautiful i loved it it was so emotional please keep up the good work and make more im waiting for the next one

thanks iman buh i wud like to clear one thing-dey r not written by me-its my collection..i hav heard dese n written dem down..i wont take credit for wat i havemnt dun n i havent dun dis,,,its jus wat i heard