|| Kabhi Alvida Naa Kehna || Premeer One Shot - Page 2

meera, that was beautiful.......seriously. xxxxx i heart you:)

This was really good, Meera. And touching! I really enjoyed reading it though. Great work :)

Originally posted by: Anhdara13

I loved the last paragraph, because really, it describes Prem in this shot to the T. He should have followed her, especially after knowing the truth. He should have searched for her, instead, he wallows in self-pity. Hmph. If he does this on the show, never mind the leap, I shall strangle some people - or things.

Love,
Radz

Awww really? 😳 I'm sooo glad you liked it...and strangling? can we leave Prem outta it? I don't want him to die! 😆 But I'm shocked that the last paragraph was good cus I wrote that exactly two minutes before I was getting rushed out of the house! 😆

Originally posted by: -Pooji-

Hey Meera
wow that was super
soo touching
the video was very nice
loved the title of ur one-shot

Thank you sooo much Poonam! 😳 Means a lot to me! 😳

Originally posted by: meiskan

Hey Meera! I think this one-shot was good! 😳 I really liked the part where you wrote Prem pretended he was on Heers lap ⭐️ very nicely written ! 😃

Awww thanks so much! 😳 That means a lot to me! 😳

Originally posted by: sweetness4eva

Wow, Beautiful..

And darn, I m crying again!!! urghh, this was very touching...😭..
I could feel prem's pain...I mean hugging the pillow thinking it was heer wiping his tears, was beautiful....I can imagine what it feels like when you feel that you dont deserve the other person because you've wronged them...BUT prem, dont forget, ke Prem aur Heer to aik hi hain...

Beautifully written...And the song was beautiful..and yes i m still crying!

Mahrukh

Sorry Mahrukh! *hugs* I didn't want anyone to cry, and awww thanks so much! 😳 I'm glad you liked it though! 😳

Originally posted by: atop

That last shot of Heer leaving and Prem not being able to stop her all because she had given him the word of her respect and Prem was bound to just abide of not following her because in no circumstances could he afford to do anything at the cost of her respect...
I loved the wya you portrayed it here with the song of KANK..
Awww thanks so much! 😳 And I really think that was the Premeer to me, they came back for that one episode to show us what they always are for us! (makes sense kinda?😳)
you know meera, i have always avoided reading your one-shots cause i was so sure of getting myself hooked to them and here i am reading it for the first time and I know from now on I would not be able to part from it, something I always dreaded..

Awwwww sorry! 😳 I don't know why you feel that way, oh but if you feel too much like that you can read this one I wrote called "aaye ho meri zindagi mein" it's the worst one I've written!😳

Great job.(I know i don't need to say that)

This gets my heart all the more heavier and the reasons bets known to you too for putting up with this song in here right now, wonder i made a Vm long time back and am apprehensive of putting in here cause it was a tragic Vm...
Awwww thanks 😳 You shud post it, I'd love to see it, I think emotional things are really what shows what a great writer or mixer someone is! 😃😳

Luv atop

Thank you soooo much atop! 😃 *hugs*😳

Originally posted by: ..kashish..

hey meera tht was really touching! yeah i know what u mean by that last para! that was just mag! hmm...loved it!

no words to describe it!

Thanks Kashish, I was actually thinking the last one sucked! 😆 😳 But I'm glad you all enjoyed it! 😃

Originally posted by: shabo24

I for one am lost because I thought the beginning was a lil "below" your standards but I LOVED the ending. It kinda gave a reason to her leaving, like a story something solid Prem can play of off and correct. Have I told you how much I love your honestly? Seriously? 😳 Because it means sooo much ot me that you can actually say what you feel 😳 Awww thnks! 😊

VM was outstanding, it was sad, the way..I don't know, this scene is such a heart ripping one, with the payal and all and you added the song and that was really good Meera! I'm glad you liked it! 😃

--shabz

Originally posted by: pakibeauty18

meera, that was beautiful.......seriously. xxxxx i heart you:)

Aww thanks, I heart you too! 😃 *hugs*

Originally posted by: SaNyA_21

This was really good, Meera. And touching! I really enjoyed reading it though. Great work :)

Sorry Sanya! 😳 I'm glad you liked it though! 😳 The happy one was posted after though! 😉

And thank you to all the people who pressed the 'like' button! 😃 *hugs*

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