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Posted: 14 years ago
#21
**Scenes written by duffodils.dudu**
 
 
 
 
 
SCENE 1
 

abhi :ab bolo  tumhe kya chahiye
nikki:dont u knw wat i need
abhi:may b u wish to b d head of hospital
nikki:tum sadoo hi nahi double sadoo ho...yeh sab mein apni mehanath se bhi paa sakthi hu
abhi:toh teek hay tumhi batao tumhe kya chahiye
nikki:woh jo har  ladki ko chahiye ...ek pyara sa pati
abhi:[turns away frm nikki so tht she wont c the tears in his eyes]*poor abhi* tumhareliye mein kaise laa saktha hu ..
nikki:dekho modi ..tumne waada kiya tha..ab nibavo ..
abhi:[without facin her]teek hay..par tum kisse pana chahthi ho?
nkki:tumhe..[abh all shoked turns to face her tearfuk eyes big in surprise.]
[thn a sweet hug]
nikki:tumhe kya laga ...tum muje etna pyar karoge aur muje pata bh nahi chalega?

~The End~

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Posted: 14 years ago
#22
Thankz a lottt 4 thiz thread guyzz...lve ya 2 4 ur effort + a Biggg Congratz 2 all the 'Creative Riterz'👍🏼
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Posted: 14 years ago
#23
Thank you so much for this!! really appreciate it!! =D
Posted: 14 years ago
#24
All the scenes are really good keep it up............
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Posted: 14 years ago
#25
Luved Nikita's Scene! :D And I Deffi Will Preitha and Eru! :D <3
XOXO
SADI<3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#26
Note to the Viewers:
Hey everyone!
The scenes have been updated under each author's name.
Please check them out.
And if you have any AN scenes you would like to submit please pm them to me or Prietha!! Thanx!!

Edited by Erutan99 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#27
 

** Scenes Written by Prietha**

 
 
 
 
 
SCENE 7
 
In the hospital, Abhi is sitting in his cabin when Nikki knocks on the door. Hearing Abhi's response she enters the cabin while Abhi is reading some file.

Nikki – Sir, mujhe kuch din ke liye chhuti mil sakti hai?

Abhi – arre waah.. waise baat kya hai aaj kal tumhare nakhare kam ho rahe hai aur tum tamizz bhi sikhane lagi ho…

Nikki – Please Modi.. mujhe sach mein chhuti chahiye…

Abhi – Kyu?

Nikki – mai apni Nani ko milna chahti hoon... unki tabiyat bahut kharab hai na…

Abhi looks at Nikki with concern.

Abhi (sad)– ohh.. kitne din ke liye tum jaa rahi ho?

Nikki – shayad 4-5 din ke liye

Abhi (surprised) – chaarrr paanchhhh din?

Nikki – haan.. kyun koi prob hai?

Abhi – haan woh kya hai naa ki mai bhi aaj raat jaipur jaa raha hoon to phir kaam?

Nikki (excited) – Jaipur… mai bhi waha jaa rahi hoon..

Abhi looked at her and said wow.. excellent… tum mere saath chal rahi ho..

Nikki – kya matlab hai tumahara?

Abhi – no no don't get me wrong… tum Jaipur ke baaren mein kaafi kuch jaanti hogi na?

Nikki – haan.. to iska matlab yeh nahin ki mai tumhare saath chalugi

Abhi – arre yaar mai pahele kabhi waha gaya nahin.. to agar tum saath hogi to mai confortable feel karuga… thats all

Nikki thinking to herself, "tumhe to mai baad mein dekh loogi… waise Nikki it's a good idea.. tumhe ride bhi mil jaayegi." She then gets an imagination of standing in the bus and getting pushed by people and all that. She comes back to earth, "Nahin nahin, isse achcha to yeghi rahega ki mai Abhi ke saath chali jaau.."

Abhi asked her what she is thinking.

Nikki – said nothing… mai taiyar hoon lekin

Abhi – lekin??

Nikki – Armaan?

Abhi gets a bit angry but doesn't say anything.

Nikki – Kya hua tumne kuch kaha nahi

Abhi – iite then don't come.. I'll go alone But make sure you have fun with that hippopotamus, Armaan

Nikki – kya kaha tune?

Abhi – wahi jo tumne suna, I must say Hippopotamus n Billi ki jodi kuch ajeeb Nahi lagti

Nikki gets mad and starts hitting him lightly on his back. Abhi stops her by grabing her hand then twisting her hand. They both get lost in each other's eyes. Just then Nikki's hair is flying because of wind. Abhi makes her hair aside from her face holds her face between his two hands.  

~The End~

 
 
 
 
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SCENE 8

In the party, Nikki arrives with her friends. Muskaan is so excited to see such a huge party. They all feel happy to be part of the event.

Few minutes later, Nikki's eyes fall on a handsome man wearing light turquoise stripe shirt with an Armani jacket on top and nice stylish jeans on bottom. He looks like a rock star. Nikki couldn't take her eyes off of none other than Abhi.

Atul walk up to Abhi and says "arre wah Abhi, aap aaj kya lag rahe ho.." Then he hugs him and whispered in his hears "kya yeh kisi ladki ke jaadoo ka asar hai.." Abhi's eyes are wide open and he let go of Atul. Abhi let him know that he will see him later and then who will spare him? Atul start dancing with Anji and Muskaan. All start enjoying the party.

Nikki comes to reality when Ridz calls for her few times. She couldn't believe how handsome Abhi is looking.

Abhi is standing quite at the party while everyone around him is dancing. Atul notices Nikki was feeling bored. So, Atul drags both of them, Nikki and Abhi, to the dance floor and places Nikki's hand in Abhi. Nikki starts feeling uncomfortable to the act of Atul and tries to refuse to dance but he doesn't listen and leaves. Abhi asked her to dance with him but Nikki pulls it away and walks away. Nikki takes a drink from a waiter in anger without knowing what kind of drink is it. Abhi follows her.

Abhi – rukho Nikki.. mujhe tumse kuch kehna hai.

Nikki stopped and turns back.

Nikki – kya hai… tumhare paas aur koi kaam nahi hai kya

Abhi – hai na… lekin yeh kaam abhi jaroori hai

Nikki – jaldi bolo, kya kaam hai

Nikki is about to drink when Abhi snatches her class away and give it to Rahul who was having a conversation with someone.

Nikki (mad) – yeh kya batamazi hai… apne mahemano se aise pesh aate hai… tumhare mummi papa ne kuch sikhaya hai ki nahi

Abhi gives her a disgusting look and tells her "tum jaisi chuikali se aur kis tarah pesh aao…"

Nikki – tum jaise saandh se aur ummid bhi kya ja sakti hai…

Abhi – tumne mujhe saandh kaha.. ab dekho mai kya karta hoon…

Nikki starts pushing him in the chest and says "kya karoge tum, gadhdhe ke bachche"

Abhi - aur tum kiski bachchi ho, kutte ki

Nikki raised her hand to hit Abhi in anger but stops in the midways seeing a Drunk man misbehaving with Dr. Shashank.

~The End~

 
 
 
 
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SCENE 9
 

In the party, Abhi was about to announce but unfortunately stopped seeing a waiter crashed into Nikki who was holding a glass of drink which fall on her dress.

Nikki looks at a waiter. Waiter seeks for forgiveness.

Waiter (looking down) – I am sorry, madam.. maine jaan bhuj kar nahin kiya

Nikki – koi baat nahin bhaiya..

Waiter – thank you madam

Waiter leaves. Nikki asked Muskaan to show her a wash room so she could clean her clothing. Muskaan gives instructions from outside. Nikki gets to the washroom and cleans her outfit. She was making her way out when Abhi sees her inside so he grabs this opportunity to take a revenge for challenging him to dance. She made it half way through when all the lights go off and it's really dark. She gets tensed.  She starts searching her way out but in vein. So she starts looking for a candle and matchstick and finds it later after a lot of difficulty.

She is relived and thinks to herself, "chalo ab to candle aur match dono hi mil gaye… jaldi se mai ise jala leti hoon… warna yahin na reh jaaoo"

Abhi lighten the candle and take a deep breath but it blow off as the strong wind from the window occur. She gets more tensed and scared. She starts running and bumps into Abhi.

Seeing Abhi with her she hugs him tightly and said "achcha hua tum aa gaye, mujhe andhere se bahut hi darr lagta hai… Please mujhe chood ke mat jaana". Abhi couldn't believe his ears. He was shocked hearing what Nikki  just said. He just looked at her, and could see how scared she was so he let go of her and lightens the matchstick.

They have an eye locking session. They were lost in their own world. It was a strange feeling that they both could feel. Both keep staring at each other until Abhi gets burned by the flame of a matchstick. They both realized their position so they take few steps back in different directions. They start walking opposite side and think to themselves.

Abhi thinking in his head, "yeh..yeh kaisa ehsaas tha..kyun mujhe aisa laga jaise mai kisi apne se mil raha hoon"

Nikki "aaj Abhi ki aankhon mein dekh kar aisa kyu mehsoos kyun hua ki jaise hum dono ek dusre ke bahut kareeb hai… "

Abhi continues "humare bich yeh kaise rishta hai??"

Nikki, "ek anjana sa ankaha rishta.."

They both walk back to party. 

~The End~

 
 
 
 
 
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SCENE 10

Nikki's eyes were constantly on Abhi who was dancing with a girl.

Nikki smile at Abhi who gives a quick look at Heer once. She thinks in her mind "Abhi ko dekhte hi yeh mujhe kya ho jaata hai?? Uski choti choti shararate mujhe cute si kyu lagti hai? Kya woh bhi mere baarein kuch bhi sochta hai?? uske dil mein kya chal raha hai woh mujhe kaise pata chalega??" She comes back to her sense when Ridz joins her.

Ridz compliments Nikki, "you look stunning,Nikki". Nikki smile at her and thanks her. Ridz asked Abhi, how Nikki looks today?. Abhi gives her a compliment, "yeh you look nice." Muskaan teases him that he complimented Nikki but not her so he gets embarrassed and praise her too, "oh sweetheart, tum to ho hi achchi toh phir tariff karne ki jaroorat kya hai" Ridz burst out laughing hearing his words while Nikki is shocked to see Abhi being flirtious. Ridz, Nikki, Abhi and Muskaan, all enjoy each others company.

Rahul – Nikki, Tumse ek baat puchu??

Nikki – sure

Rahul - kya tum Abhi se shaadi karke unki house wife banana pasand karogi?

Abhi is thrilled hearing what Rahul said.

Nikki (embarrassed) – tum pagal ho gaye ho Rahul… shaadi aur woh bhi is Bandar se..

Ridz and Rahul starts laughing.

Abhi with a disgusting look on his face "mujhe bhi tum jaise chudel se shaadi karne mein koi dilchasbi nahi hai..samji??"

"Arre tum shaadi tab karoge na jab mai haa kahoogi" says Nikki in angry tone.

Abhi – arre tumhare saath jo bhi shaadi karega na woh hamesha deewar pe apna shir fodta hi milaga… aur mein pachtana nahi chahta… samji chuipkali

Rahul gets an idea to stop the fight between them and bring them closer. So he asked them to dance. But Abhi refuses saying that he doesn't know how to dance. Nikki decides to takes this opportunity to make fun of him.

Nikki – ab tumhe pata chalega ki apni beizatti kya hoti hai..

Nikki announces that Abhi will be performing a special dance on a song "Mauja hi Mauja" for all. Abhi is stunned at her announcement as she challenges him to dance. They both are starring at each other in anger but accept the challenge.

Abhi is standing in the center of the entire crowd and Rahul asks him to dance. Abhi soon starts dancing on the music. Everyone cheers for him by clapping and yelling. Nikki was shocked seeing his performance. She couldn't believe what her own eyes have seen and also couldn't take her eyes off of Abhi. She just stares at him and stand still. Then Rahul and Muskaan joins him as well as others on the dance floor. They all are dancing and having blast.

Nikki thinks to herself "oh my god… kya yeh sach mein Abhi hi tha yeh phir main koi sapna dekh rahi hoon.." She pinches her hand and learns that he was really dancing. She again get lost in her thought "haila… yeh to sach mein dance kar raha tha aur who bhi itna accha.. he is a very good dancer..wow.."  Abhi moves toward Nikki that brings her to reality.

Abhi comes to Nikki to ask if he lived up to her expectations. Abhi gives her a naughty smile and states "agar tum kisi ko nicha dikhana chahti ho to itna yaad rakhna ki saamne walen ko kabhi bhi kamjor mat samajna…"

Someone calls for him so he leaves leaving Nikki behind surprised.

~The End~

Edited by Prietha - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#28
Thanx Prietha!!! I luv them!!! Wonderful b-day gifts for me!!!!!!! Yayyyy!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
 Happy Birthday  Ivy! Awesome scenes Prietha!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
Thanx Sonali!!! I luved ur scenes in ur ff too!!! Its really cute!!!! do u have any new scenes to add here though?!!!