Dust of the Dandelions (2)-14A-pg17-6/21 - Page 16

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Posted: 17 years ago
Hi sheena,

Awesome part. Finally Natchiket has confided in Jai about his feelings. Hopefully Bani and Natchikets relationship will be better.

I hope Jai gets to see Bani before she gets really mad with him.

Please continue soon.

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Posted: 17 years ago
Sorry Di for the late comment, did read before, but didn't have time to leave a comment before. Anyways, it was wonderful! 😃 I felt so horrible for Nachiket throughout it. Poor kid is traumatized. Loved the heart to heart convo between him and Jai. It was exactly what Nattu needed. 😊 I'm looking forward to seeing him and Bani bond. 😃 That will be interesting to read. But more importantly, want Jai to go back to Bani asap! Bechari has waited for him long enough and she needs him by her side during her pregnancy. Also looking to seeing how he takes care of her. 😉 Please update soon! 😃
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Posted: 17 years ago
Shobuuuuuuuuuuu diiiiiiiiiiiiii

update karo na.. plzz.. plzz plzz plzz plzzz
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Posted: 17 years ago
ab to maine bhi update kar diya hai!!!!!!!!! ur turn plssssss
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Posted: 17 years ago
hey sheena
kab update karogi yaar.... v r waiting...
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Posted: 17 years ago
Where are you Shoba? Been awhile.
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Posted: 17 years ago
Please continue soon
when are you going to update?
pooja
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Posted: 17 years ago
Heyy Shobzzz sorry dear for being late in commenting (despite pming you) actually one thing or the other came and it slipped from my mind. top of all new format of IF cant let me login..
anyways come to the story... i m happy that everything is fine btwn jai & bani as i was wondering there could be some problem coz of nachiket. but thank god nothing that sort happend .. even jai is successful to find nachiket...
jai, for the first time i found him a TRULY responsible, who knows his responsbility towards everyone (not only his wife and unborn child but his brother be that step brother..) liked the way how he told nachiket about his becoming uncle and taking care of bani, if something happens to him (btw why did he say something like that... if it is some daily soap i would have been expecting a drastic mishappening.... is something like that coming in ur story too...)
please please please if possible post next part soon... i know u r busy but please do try..
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Posted: 16 years ago


Hi, read your FF today. It'sa very compelling and captivating story.

Have you though of continuing with it.


Give it some though, you're a terrific writer.

Thank you.
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Posted: 16 years ago

Hey, all you , newbie, oldie, and silent readers, lets all give some much

needed encouragement to "Sheena_Row", to come back, and continue with her writing

Her talent as a writer is too good to waste.

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