my ff:phele takrar phir pyar part 24 on page 100 - Page 14

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Originally posted by: armaanno01fan

hi mini thanks can u plz fill in ur last reserve on page 11THANKS

sowwiee.....i forgot
ill do it rite now
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~minita⭐️
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part 7

As Riddhima walked out of the car she realized that she had forgotten to give armaan his shirt back. Not knowing why she caressed the shirt. When she knocked her father dr shashank opened who was looking very angry as the emergency he was called to in the middle of the night was nothing but a prank and second because he saw his own daughter with and unknown man such late at night. His eyes were full of anger and suspicion when he saw his daughter wearing some guyz shirt. Riddhima saw that anger so she had no words to explain.

Riddhima: papa who…

Dr Sh: who par kuch nahi. Maine tumse yeh expect nahi kiya tha

anjali happy to see her dad angry at her sister: kya gulchara kila ke ayi ho

Dr Sh: humare khaandaan ka naam miti me milake ayi ho kya?

Riddhima(tears rolling down after hearing such awful things from her father and sister) papa aapko sach mein lagta hai ke mai aise waise kuch karoongi

Dr Sh: mujhe kuch nahi sunna abse tum hospital sirf anjy ke saath aa jaa kar sakti hoaur ek baat us ladke ke saath jo bhi naam hai uska usse door hi rahogi samjhi Now go to your room

Anjali was smirking to herself after such a long time her dad was angry at her sister and not her.

As ridzi was going upstairs ammy's shirt fell off her back. Dr shashank saw the rip and so did anjy. Riddhma quickly picked it up but her tears were still rolling down which she kept wiping

Dr sh: (shocked) yeh tumhare kapro ko. Armaan ne uski itni himat… ( bursting witn anger)

Riddhima was surprised. She couldn't let her dad think that the person who saved her did this to her. Though she wasn't in the condition to speak she had . just to save armaan

ridzi(crying): nahi papa who gunde…phir armaan ne bachaya… (she couldn't take anymore so she ran upstairs into her bathrooma dn washed her face and changed into her pink silky pyajamas with bunnies on them. She ahd this for some time now. Her mother had gifted it. She really missed her mum specially when no one else was there to take care of her like now. She always slept with her mothers picture. It had been two Years now since she passed away.

downstairs hearing that Dr shashnak was really feeling guilty so as he started to run upstairs to console her daughter anjy said: jhooti kahinki bahaane bara rahi hogi

dr sh: tum apna mooh band nahi rakh sakti.

when he reaches her room he sees her daughter talking to her mothers picture. He also missed his wife a lot. He had promised her to give all the happiness in the world to his daughters and seeing his daughter cry he hadn't fulfilled his promise. Tears started rolling down his eyes to.

dr sh: ridzi beta. Im soo sorry. Mujhe maloom nahi tha . tum apne papa ko maaf nahi karogi.(holding his ears)

ridzi(wiping her tears) its ok papa

they share a bondful hug. She loved her dad ever so much and vice versa with her dad. She loved these moments when she knew that someone loved her so much.

her dad leaved: goodnight beta

ridzi: good night.

Atlast a small smile spread on her face

as anjy came in she had to ruin it

anjy: tumhare waje se phirse tumhari waje se papa ne mujhe daanta sirf kyunki tum unki adopted beti ho iska yeh matlab to nahi ke who mujhe pyaar hi nahi kare(fake tears)

Riddhima hated those words adopted. Yes she was adopted. She had never seen her real parents and didn't want to because all she knew that they ahd left her in mandir because they didn't want her. She was only 1 year old. Dr shashank and padma had given her more than enough love to bring her up. They never let her feel that she wasn't theirs. But her sister always thought that they loved her more than her. Noone even mentioned it in years until now..

ridzi: (rolling tears): di aapko bhi pata hai ke who mujhse aapse zyaada pyaar nahi karte

anjali ignoring her went to bed and in two minutes she fell asleep.

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In the Mallik mansion

ammy: phone karu na karu

here ammy was confused to either call ridzi or not. He wanted to ask her if she was alright or not.

ammy picked up the phone deciding to call but then changed his mind at the last minute: nah…. Who soh rahi hogi


but then thinking to change his mind agaian: par try mein kya harz hai yaar

this was it . he had surely decided. He was going to call her. He picked up the phone but that second the phone rang which surprised him and he got scared and dropped the phone. He rushed and picked it up but without realzing he was holding it upside down. All confused and rushed he switched it over

ammy: hi hello ha…

ridzi: urmm… hi

ammy: tum iswaqt

ridzi: soh rahe the

ammy: nahi tumhe hi phone…(not finishing his line)

ridzi: tum mujhe

ammy: nahi to (avoding the truth) tumne kyun phone kiya

ridzi: oh who tumhari shirt mere saath hi reh gayi

ammy: shirt? Oh shirt koi baat nahi kal dede na

ridzi: acha bi

ammy: bi no no no no ek minute

ridzi: kya hua

ammy: who tum tikh to ho na

ridzi: haan

ammy: ok good bi goodnight

ridzi: bi

both smiling to themselves thing about each other.

As Riddhima lied down on her bed she had flashbacks of armaan saving her, putting the clip on her… his smile.. those cute dimples…and without realzing she fell asleep.
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The next morning

the sun shone in her eyes. She tried to cover it but couldn't as her nani didn't let her.

Nani: Riddhima beta utho na subha hogayi

ridzi: do minute nani

nani: aaj hospital nahi jaana

ridzi: di ko pehel uthao

nani: di to kab se chali gayi

ridzi shocked that anjjy was ready before her and not only that but had already left. She rushed to the bathroom and when she cam out she was wearing a tight silky blue salwar which shoed her slim body perfectly. She was looking very pretty. She smudged some eyeliner on and put some mascara and then eye shadow. She was ready now. She was going to go downstairs when she had loud horn sound. She looked outside her window and there he was smiling widely showing his cute deep dimples.

ridzi: tum yaha

ammy: who yaha se guzar raha to socha ke tumhe bhi chod du

ridzi: mein aayi

grabbing his shirt she rushed downstairs and ran out of the house

ridzi shouting: bi nani

nani form indside: nashta to karke…. (no point of finishing she had already left)

ridzi catching her breath: tum

ammy: chalo hospital ke liye der ho rahi hai or us Hitler ko acah nahi lagega

ridzi: Hitler?

ammy: dr kirti. Unkeliye naya naam ache hai naa(feeling proud of himself) acha ab betho

ridzi: (sitting) tum kyun lene aye

ammy: abhi to kaha aise hi guzar raha to soch ke tumhe bhi chod du

ridzi smiled and slowly put both of her hands on his shoulders

after a few minutes of silence they arrived.

they both ran as they were late but luckitly dr kirti wasn't their

ridzi: hi muskaan, atul rahul di

ammy: hi atul, rahoooool , hi anjy babes, hi mukaan

anjy: hii armaan

dr krit came: aapke duties sab kal ke hi hai par Riddhima aap OPD mein hai. Mere saath nahi aur anjali aap mere saath hai

anjy: YES I mean yes maan

dr kirti: apni duties par lag jaye

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3 hours of their duties had gone….. they was still an hour left for their break

Ridzi was having this weird emotion.. she was all alone .. no more doctors was their…she was actuaaly missing armman but wasn't admitting it .
she decided to go see him.

she entered the general ward where ammy was working.

ridzi: armaan ek minute baar aao.

ammy walking outside with her

ammy: kya hua

ridzi: woh … (trying to find a excuse) tumhari shirt mene tumhare locker mein rakhdi

ammy: oh kk thanks

ridzi: woh break ke liye aadha ghnata hai

ammy: (awkwardly) maloom hai

ridzi: tum coffe peena chahoge mere saath

ammy surprised: sure hospital canteen mein aadhe ghante mein pakka

ridzi with a widegrin: acha thanks

ammy wlaked back in feeling really happy. He was surpised that Riddhima had actually asked him but he was glad.

Riddhima was feeling the same. She never expected to ask a guy this. But she had and she wasn't regretting it.

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30 minutes later

ammy was waiting at a tabvle for Riddhima when she entered
.Ammy couldn't stop staring at her. As she flipped her long straight hair back with a sweet smile. She was looking soo beautiful. He had never seen a girl so beautiful. He was adoring her when ridiz clicked her fingers in fornt of his eyes

ridzi: kya hua

ammy: woh kuch nahi

ridzi laughing sat down

ammy: kya logi

ridzi:urm coffee

ammy: oh yh (feeling stupid as they were here for coffee only na.) waiter 2 coffees plz

ridzi (trying to start a topic to talk about) tumhara favourite colour kaunsa hai

ammy: urmm… white tumhara

ridzi: black

ammy: remembering: woh tumhari behen tumse tikh se baat kyun nahi kar rahi thi if you don't mind huh?

ridzi: no who (she explained everything that happened yday including her fight with anjy and that she was adopted. She had never ever ever told anyone. She didn't know but she trusted ammy like anything though she had just met him.)

tears were rolling down her cheek as she told the part of being adopted

ammy: tum phiar mat karo. Mein ksikio nahi bataonga

ridzi: thanks(wiping her tears)

ammy: (thinking of a solution) mein tumhe wada karta huun ke mein tumhe aur tumhari behen ke rishto ko tikh karduunga

ridzi: sachi

ammy: muchi

ridzi starting to smile: thanks a lot

this beautiful moment of them trusting each other and consoling each other was interrupted by a voiceover..

voiceover: saare intens dr shashank ko report kare

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few minutes later everyone was waiting in dr shashanks office

dr sh: maine yaha aapko bulaya hai ki mein apne ghar par aaj raat ek party throw kar raha huun aap sab interns ke liye as apne abhi abhi join kiya hai

all interns excited

dr sh: to mere ghar par tikh aath waje

Interns: yes sir

and they left the office chatting to ecah other in excitement

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