my ff:phele takrar phir pyar part 24 on page 100 - Page 13

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Originally posted by: armaanno01fan

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PART 6

As everyone's duties had finsihed they were all in the locker room set to go home after a triring first day

voiceover: Dr riddhima aur Dr armaan Dr shubankar ko report karein

ammy: ab kya hai yeh humien kabhi chen ki saans lene denge

ridzi: kyu bulaya hoga di?

anjy: mujhe kya pata by the way mein ghar jaa rahi hoon tum auto mein aa jana

atul: mein tumhe chod du

anjy: NO mere paas gari hai

atul: phir tum mujhe chod dogi haai hw sweet....😊

anjy: NO and walks off

ridiz: par..... (but shes already gone)

ammy: chalo

ridzi walks off without a word as she is still angry with ammy and ammy follows

muski walks to atul and links arms: Atul.... tum mujhe ghar cho doge please

atul: sorry mere paas ek cyclye hai aur mujhe nahi lagte ke tum fit hogi(looking at her top to bottom) 😆 FIT NHI HOGI!!😆

rahul interupts: mein cho du

muski ignoring: acha koi baat nahi

they both say bi to each other with a hug and then atul levaes

rahul: tum usse gale kyun mil rahi thi

muski: tumhe kyun jalan ho rahi hai

rahul: nahi to

muski: phir kyun

rahul: tum aise waise ladko se duur raho to acha hai

muski: tumhe kab se meri phikir hone lagi

rahul: tumhari phikir to humesha se hi thi par tumne

muski: kyun

rahul: yeh sawaal tum apne aap se puucho to acha hai

muski: tum uss baat ko bhool kyun nahi jaate

rahul: kaise bhuladu us baat ko KAUNSI BAAT??

muksi walks off

rahul in anger punches the locker
to himslef: muskaan kyunnn

muski to herself: tum nahi samjhoge rahul
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AR: good morning sir

dr shubankar(dr S) maine aapko yaha bulaya hai ki aapko night duty karni paregi sirf aaj ke liye ek emergency hai kaafi patient aye hai aur doctor kam hai so..

ridzi: par

dr s: koi problem?

ammy: NO sir

Dr s: good. here you go patients files

AR take it and walk off

few hours later in the ward

ridzi is checking a patient and still ahnt uttered a word to Ammy

ammy: im sorry please ab to baat karo. kitni baar maafi mang chuka huun aur kya kar sakta hu awwwwww hw sweet

ridiz carrying on checking patient. she takes the file and is looking for a pen to write with but cant find any so ammy offers adoorable...

and ridzi accepts it

ammy smiling whispering to himslef: ok good start 😊

riddhima is giving the patient an injectionwhen her fringe keeps coming in fornt of her eyes distratcing her form doing her work. even though she tried to put it behind her ear it backfired as it didnt stay there Ammy notices her trouble and for a minute just adores her all troubled and frustrated oyye hoyee but then realizes he should do something


Ammy: mein ek minute mein aya

he wlaks offf

ridzi: kaam chor 😆 kahin ka yeh kaha gaya waise bhi mujhe kya ....zaroor koi badmaashi karne gaya hai... ridzi tu apne kaam par dhyan de and (gets back to giving the injection)

As 10 minutes pass by ridzi start wondering where Ammy went so as shes very curious she starts to leave the ward when ammy enters and they bump into each other

Ridzi: Im sorry

ammy: im sorry .........is ke liye nahi par pehle waali galti ke liye

ridzi just walks back to another patient but the hair is still annoying her. ammy walks to the other side of the bed where ridzi is standing. he hold her by the shoulder and makes her turn his way. he takes a clip out of his pocket and clips her fringe back. riddhima feels this breeze on her cheek as his hand softly touches it. she is shocked but still is smiling sweetely oyye hoyye hw sweet!!

Ridzi: um.. thankyou

ammy: its ok

ridzi getting conifdent : tum kaha gaye the

ammy: yeh clip lene. mein ladki ka clip apne jeb par thodi lekar ghumta hoon. woh kaye ladkyion se manga woh mujhpe hasne lagi .....jab mujhe meri purnai girlfreind milgayi usne mujhe dediya 😆

ridzi: girlfriend

ammy: kyun tumne kabhi boyfreidn anhi banye

ridzi: mein waisi ladkyion si nahi huun

ammy: kaisi ladki ho phir?

ridzi: sidhi saadhi

ammy: oh kk wlaks 2 another patient

ridzi follows

ridzi: steshcope paas karo plz


ammy take sit out of his neck where its hanging as he gives it to her their hands touch.(slow backround music lolz) [ishq leta hai kiase imtehaan....]

no one was moving they were jst straing at each others eyes without blinking. ridzi had totally forgotten her anger and all she could see was ammy's caring eyes staring at her with a sweet smile.😊😊 she couldnt care about anything els. this was feeling like a specieal moement for her which she didnt want it to finish. ammy was feeling the same. he didnt want this special moment to end . he didnt know what happened to him. he was just into her eyes, her besutiful simple eyes which were straing back at him without any anger this time. he didnt know what but kuch to tha.... the silence broke as the patient was gaining consciuos ridzi snatched the stethescope and helped the patient to get up. Ammy did the same. though they were helping the patient they were secretly looking at each ohter and when theyr eyes met they would look back at the patient so sweet...


Dr S entered: you two can leave now

AR: thankyou

they both walked to the locker room where there was not a peep. they put their lab coats away

breaking the pin drop silence

ammy: tum ghar kaise jaa rahi ho

ridzi: auto se

they were wlaking outside by now

ammy: mein tumhe chod dunga

ridzi: nahi its ok tum waise bhi savera lift de chuke hotumhe takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahi.

they were walking out the lift


ammy: takleef kaisi ek akeli ladki ko mein ..... oh no(as he checks his pockets)

ridzi: kya hua

ammy: mein apne bike ki chaabiya locker mein bhool aya . tum yahi rahena MEIN hi tumhe ghar drop karunga ok

ridzi: acha baba kitni zidi ho

ammy laughing walks off : well THATS ME i luv it whn he says thats me!!

ridzi outsyd closes her eyes and feels the coldd breeze. she was feeling so happy and she didnt even know the reason but this happiness didnt last for to long.


a few boyz surrounded her. she tried to wlak off but they held her wrist.

gunda 1 : wahh kya maal hai yaar. pataka hai bilkul

ridzi: chodo mujhe( really scraed)

gunda 2: wah yeh maal to bol bhi sakti hai(and snatches her dupatta)

and when ridzi tried to take it gunda 3 pulled her close to him. close enuff that they were touching chests . riddhima struggling kicks him in place which hurts and as she backs off the gunda gunda 4 takes hold of her salwar and when she tries escape it rips

tears roll her eyes as all the gunde come near her.

ridzi: ARMAAN ARMAAANN BACHOAAAAAA

but noone is there in the sunsaan gali at 2.30 at night

gunda 2: yeh maal to mujhe chayhiya

gunda 3: adha adha karlenge( he puts his ahnd to touch her but a man holds his hand making a grand entrance and makes him do a back filp which then he falls on the gorund.

the man is none other than Ammy go ammy go!!! our superman!!

ridzi: relieved runs to armaan: armaan

armaan punches one and kicks another. blood is coming out of their mouths. gunda 1 is about to stab him on his back


ridzi: ARMAAANN PEECHE DEKHOO

ammy looks back and gets hold of the knife. As the fighting continues no one is able to touch ammy but gunda 4 hits him with a stcik on his back and he falls on the ground.

riidzi showing concern.. still tears rolling down: armaan tum tikh to ho na....

ammy gets up but by that time all the gunda have run away

Ridzi is crying really badly

ammy wipes her tears and slowly opens his buttons of his shirt and puts it on her so it covers the bit where it ripped. he also brought her dupatta form the ground and put it around her neck cho chweett


ridzi(crying): THANKYOU SO MUCH tum nahi hote to...

ammy: thankyou kis baat ke liye yeh to mera farz tha ab chalo kaafi der ho chuki hai

they wlak to his bike

ammy : OH NO TYRE PUNCTURE is waqt to auto bhi nahi milegi

ridzi: ab kya karenge meri to phone ki battery bhi dead hai

ammy: meri phone mein to balance hi nahi hai

ridzi: ab?

ammy: ab kya.. pedal jana parega

ridzi(still in shock but stopped crying) fixes ammy's shirt on her shoulders

ammy puts his arm aorund ridzi: phikir mat karo mein huun na ab ek smile kardo tum smile karte hue bahutt sunder lagti ho

ridzi: a small smile: flirt kar rahe ho

ammy: nahi sach bol raha huun ab chalo

They start to wlak. theres an awkward silence. None of them have anything to say. they just look at ecah other and again when theyr eyes meet they look away

ridzi breaking the silence

ridzi: tumhe koi chot to nahi lagi

ammy: nahi to mard ko dard nahi hota

ridzi: ek baat batao tumne meri khaatir apni jaan kyun khatre mein daali. tum ek the aur woh paanch

ammy: mein ek hokar bhi sabko mardiya na phir kyun aur waise bhi tumhe bachan ek dost ka farz tha

ridzi: dost?

ammy: kyun mein tumhara dost nahi huun

ridzi: ho par aaj savera jo hua

ammy: by the way im sorry

ridzi: nah its ok i should be saying thankyou

ammy: eh dosti mein no sorry no thankyou

ridzi: to friends?

ammy: sure . to tumne mujhhe maaf kiya

ridzi: ya

as they carry on walking a car passes by which slows down and reverses and stop right next to them. the window slides down and there is a man in a black suit looking angry

ridzi: papa aap

dr shashank( Dr Sh) tum yaha iswaqt ek anjaan ladke ke ssat woh bhi aise( looking at ammy who is dressed in a black vest and u can see his broad chest with big muscles which ahve decorated tatoos on him ohooo nyc anam..dis is called hotness!! which stand out and then looks at riddhima who is wearing his shirt)

ridzi: papa woh humari night duty thi aur auto nahi mil rahi thi aur phir....

Dr Sh: tum aise ladko ko nahi jaanti

ridzi: papa woh aise ladko sa nahi hai

Dr Sh: interupting mujhe emergency par bulaya hai warna mein hi tujhe ghar drop kardeta par koi baat nahi mein driver abhi ke abhi bhejta huun
he drives off

ridzi turning to ammy: unki baat ka bura mat maan na

ammy: baro ki baat kya bura mann na woh to tumhara bhala hi chahte he

ridzi smiles at his good values

They wait in silence but soon the driver comes

ridzi sits down
ammy: acha bye then

ridzi: tum kaha jaa rahe ho

ammy: ghar aur kaha

ridzi: gari mein aao driver chod dega

ammy: nahi tumhare papa ko acha nahi lagega

ridzi: nahi aao naa

ammy: koi baat nahi mein pedal chala jaaonga

he strats walking off when ridzi hold his wrist to stop him ammy looks back at his hand smiling so ridzi leave sit quickly

ammy: acha baba aur tum MUJHE zidi keh rahi thi khud ko dekha hai

ridzi: woh to mein huun

ammy sits down laughin and they reach home in a few minutes

ammy goes : acha byee (waving)

As he was walking home he was having flashbacks about ridzi when she was anoyied by her hair. He was smiling widely to himslef dimples!!!oyyye hoyyee😊😳

to himself: kuch to khaas hai is ladki mein

he turns back and see that ridzi is still there she waves back and then drives off

ammy runs home smilingg

how was it plzzz comment and crticize
my dear aanam!!! fantastic yaar!!! luvd dis part!!!juz wht i wanted long n only AR!!!!

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