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Posted: 16 years ago
#31

Originally posted by: swansea

luved it sweetie toooo goood wow 2 parts in one day loved it cakes do continue soon swancy



thx ill let u knwo when i continue

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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
wah wah!!!luvd it anam!!!
it ws nt at all long it ws awesum!!!!
n btw whn usay abt atul n anjy's duty in path lab .. u wrote it bath lab.....
wierd u c.....😆
luvd armaan in dis 1!!
ahh!!i cant stop imagining KASH in it!!!!
de gud olden dayzz......
luvd it...well u knw u dint leave any corner for criticizm it ws all awesum .... wait for more......
luv yaa
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: sanisweetie

wah wah!!!luvd it anam!!!

it ws nt at all long it ws awesum!!!!
n btw whn usay abt atul n anjy's duty in path lab .. u wrote it bath lab.....
wierd u c.....😆
luvd armaan in dis 1!!
ahh!!i cant stop imagining KASH in it!!!!
de gud olden dayzz......
luvd it...well u knw u dint leave any corner for criticizm it ws all awesum .... wait for more......
luv yaa



thx alott
i changed it lolz bath lab😆

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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
really nice update plz pm for the next update thanx- misha
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: mkp1995

really nice update plz pm for the next update thanx- misha



thanx ill put u on my PM list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36

hey dear..

nice part....... continue sooon....
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37
Hey that waz a really nice prt. Continue soon!1
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: armaanno01fan

this 3rd part is for rinku and sani 🤗..Awww! thank you! a BIG 🤗for you!
for encouraging me soooo much 2 write

so here we go

PART 3

dr kirti: so this locker room is only for interns (showing the interns by pointing and leading them)
ridzi: running in out of breath: sorry maam
dr kirti: as i was saying dr armaan and dr riddhima aapke lockers us corner mein hai (pointing towards the chnaging area)
ridzi gives ammy a stern look and walks up to there and ammy jus laughs
dr kirti: dr anjali and dr muskaan us corner mein aur dr atul and dr rahul us corner mein.... app sab thora relax ho jaye phir 10 minute mein nurse staion par ok
all interns: yes maam

dr kiirti leaves

ammy lying down on the bench streching
ammy: so ridzi
ridzi: dr riddhima call me dr riddhima
ammy: ridzi ridzi ridzi
ridzi: urghh armaan (opens her locker and finds a stethescope and lab coat ... she wears it and goes in the changing room to look how she looks)
ammy follows her
ridzi: tumhe koi tameez hai ki nahi .. aise koi ladki ka peecha woh bhi changing room me get out
ammy: tum change thori kar rahi thi....😆... ok bii (gets out laughin)

muski and anjy talking

muski: hi anjali im muskaan wanna be friends?
anjy: sure by the way tumhe in sab ladko se kaunsa ladka sabse
HOT lagta hai
muski: atul is kinda cute and rahul urghh amy tikh hai na par usne
mujhse baat hi nahi ki ab tak aur waise bhhi hum kaam karne
aye hai shaadi karne nahi meri mummy ko pata chala ke me
yaha ladko ke dekh rahi huun to mari shaadi fix

anjy: luaghs

atul: hi anjy (giving her a rose) tum kitni pretyy ho

anjy: thanku (and takes the rose)

voiceover: sab interns nurse station pe report kare

ridzi : chalo di muski...
I dont like it when Jenny calls Muskaan 'Muski' now....its not what the previous Riddhima's use to call her...im not liking it! if you dont mind me saying 😊

the three girls walk of

atul : hi armaan tum to bare fit...
HAII! ☺️ 😆 ho mujhe bhi sikhado anjali mujhse
impress nahi hui

rahul: abhi to tum aye ho aur ladkyon ke peeche shuri...
where does he learn it from...Armaan off course 😉

ammy: chup beth dr rahooooooooooool yaad hai woh college ke din

atul and ammy laugh and walk off and rahul folows

all interns waiting at the nurse staion when dr shashnk come

dr shashank : hello interns im dr shashank sanjeevani ka boss aur
mein aapko good luck kehne aya huun aapke pehle~
din ke liye aur yeh bhi ke har mahine ek award hota
hai intern of the month aur joh bhi woh jeetega woh ek
hafte ke liye duties sign karega sab ke liye...
I can just imagine the DMG intern tune playing in the background....when ever Dr Shashank speaks to them this way...its always playing in the background!

ridzi: yes papa i mean dr gupta

evryone starets at her in shock

ammy: PAPA (shocked)yeh tumhare papa hei
whisperng to himself ...... matlab beti patao papa phasoa aur sab ka raaj karo (laughs weirdly)...😆😆😆

muski: (wierd lagh) hana dr armaan (puts her hand on ammy but ammy doesnt notice her )

dr shashank: NO dr armaan yeh award mehnit se milega sab ko and mein inka papa sirf ghar pe hospital mein sab ka boss ok

interns: yes sir

dr shanky 😆😆 What! 😆😆... walks off

dr kirti: to armaan and muskaan aapki duties general ward mein

ridzi: whispering: ys mere saath nahi hai

dr kirti: app ne kuch kaha

ridzi: yes maam i mean no maam

dr kirti : dr riddhima aap mere saath duty karengi

anjali: mein aapke saath nahi kar sakti ..ridzi hi kyun?

dr kirti : kyunki maine kaha koi problem

anjali: no maam (luks at her siter in jelousy but anger)

dr kirti: dr anjali and dr atul in the path lab

atul: YESSS

everyone looks at him shocked but ammy jusy smiling cheekily

atul: sorry


dr kirti: dr rahul aap bhi general ward mein muskaan aur riddhima ke saath ..aap sab apne apne duties par lag jaye


hope it wasnt too long this time
hope you enjoyed it

please comment
and crticzize is also welcomed
i will just learn mroe
plzzz




Im loving it so far! 😃

although you should have just put riddhimas and Armaans duty together! it would be soo cute and funny! 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: jessica18

Hey that waz a really nice prt. Continue soon!1



thanku shall i put ur name on the Pm list
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40

Originally posted by: rinxkashsujen



Im loving it so far! 😃

although you should have just put riddhimas and Armaans duty together! it would be soo cute and funny! 😃





THANKS ALOT

nah i dont know why i didnt wnat their duties together
wierd me! lolz
fine just for you ill make sure ridzi doesnt call muskaan muski lolzz its just c zi cudnt be bothere 2 typa her full anem each tym lolz

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