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reserved!!!
gonna leave a detailed comment on this one sookie...in a bit.... :D
for now, can just say ....me loved it!!
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alrighty! lets get on with it 😃
after reading ur note of the title being ironic, i was more curious...enough to go and read ahead...hehe....hv to say the feelings of the characters, dialogues, the atmosphere, their reactions and all of this combined together created a realistic image...loved the ridhimma in this one shot...her views are of a rebel who wants to break away from the rules and regulations that bound ppl to a certain limit...i can quite relate to or better say understand wht shez trying to convey, however, i do think that the existence of rules may bind u to a certain degree but they're at the same time present for our own good....am not saying that her decision to operate wasn't right cuz i can see she had no choices and she just tried to do wht shez supposed to....
and i loved how she stood up for her integrity ...really liked her character in the story....it was the main highlight..and armaan was the backbone holding all the pieces together.....loved ur story hun....though i hvn't read the book u mentioned but truly enjoyed this since only a cross reference was made to the dialogue from it but the "explanations" from AR helped to comprehend the whole story....really enjoyed reading this piece hun....great work....ur really creative and a great story teller!!!!
oh my, didnt realize the comment would get this long...lol....hope it didn't bored ya...
ps: sorry.. i didnt get around ur other stories....thanks for ur constant pms, though!!
tc,
ania :)
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