[FF] Koi Mil Gaya [A One-Shot Meet Songfic]

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Bhavna

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Okay, so I realised I hadn't replied to comments on this yet, and since I've got around two hours before I've to go off to work (at a tuition centre that I previously left because I kept doing admin stuff that I hate!), I figured, why not get around to it? Finally...Heh...😳

Originally posted by: -Ravjot-
Reserved😎

Unreserved

I love how you should who restless Preet was and how he discovered the reason when he saved Meher from falling. I love how you should that Peet was annoyed and how his thoughts kept drifting back to Meher. Ooh and Mehe was just as lost in thoughts about Preet as he was about her. And the last bit was awesome! The way he cornered her and told her that the towel paper was behind her😍 Oh and I love how they both described the girl by saying she has a big forehead😆 It was very descritptive alright😆
Thanks! Yeah I thought the big forehead thing made for a little comic relief...😆

Me loved it! Can't wait to read more one shot by you =)
Awww thanks! 😳

@ shikha87: No, no, thank you for commenting on this! 😳

Originally posted by: Anhdara13
mine. Am so glad you posted it today!

*edited*

I came back to this really, really, really late. 😆 Sorry.

😆 Lucky for you I forgot about this too...😳

I love this, the way you had them meet, the instant connection, the same thoughts they had about the woman with a really big forehead. It was wonderfully done, and made so much sense, in it's straight-forewardness. No twists and turns, just instant attraction, and the want to get to know each other better. Absolutely wonderful, and funny, and beautiful.

Thanks! Everyone seems to like the big forehead lady...*wonders why* 😆

Love,

Radz

@ zaibun, jamune, NehAditya8791: Thank you! 😃

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Bhavna

@sourpuss

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Originally posted by: shabo24
So cute. Sometimes I wish that Meet would have met like this, but maybe their relationship would not have been at the same stage or whatever...I love this pyaar-dosti thing. =]
Yeah the pyaar-dosti thing really is the cutest...Though you can't help but wonder WHEN they're gonna admit they have feelings for each other...Sigh!
🤣The side-comments and the comedy was fantastic! With the big forehead, random spills, and the unattractive aunty with the yellow sari! You should really write a purely comedy shot. But that would b pretty hard with this serial...🤔
Oooh purely comedy, huh? Hmm...That could be a challenge...*goes off thinking*
Anyway really cute part, loved how they both had such deep effects for each other without really knowing it!
😳 Thanks!
--shabz

Originally posted by: indiandoll89
My spot!😛

*unreserved*

I loved this one Bhav! 😃 The song itself is just so awesome😛
I know! I actually started off with the Koi Mil Gaya song from KKHH, but I realised that wasn't working out, so I tried it with this one and TA-DAH! Brilliance, if I don't say so myself! 😆
Teehee, the way they met was just so classic, and I swear despite all the cute moments in it, the one that sticks out the most for me is, "I hate you, you know that?"😆😆😆
😆 I'm glad that stuck out for you!
I just love all your Meet stories!😳 They're all so happy and even the depressing ones are just so descriptive that it makes us envision the entire scene happening! 😃
Yay! Although so far I've still got just one tragic one...I need to start thinking up more tragic stuff...
Write more soon, I will! 😃

Love you, Love you too!

Meera😳

Originally posted by: Khushi34

Aww Bhav!!

You're a Meet specialist lol!!! Love all your one shots and this one was fab ( as always...Not that i need to say it) i LOVE THE SONG

😆 Thanks! I pride myself in writing (mostly) about nothing but Meet! Though I do feel rather bad when people wonder where Prem and Heer are...😳 Thank you! 😃

And it went so well with the one-shot. Aww...Preet is such a cutie-pie. Loved them both in here.

take care

xx