||Bin Tum|| Premeer One Shot - Page 4

Originally posted by: sourpuss

Yo! I shall try to be as critical as I can! =D

This was pretty amazing. What I really liked was the way Prem flashback-ed. You could feel his pain as he watched Heer and Veera cry, and it knotted me up. If it makes you feel any better it made me want to cry (=

The progression of his emotions when Heer came were believable. Like, she's just going on and on and on and not telling him what's really going on (or something like that. It sounded better in my head!), and there he is, getting frustrated...Totally awesome.

Looking forward to your next...stuff!

Love,

Bhav (:

Awww Bhav, you weren't critical! 😔 no cookies for you! 😛 Na I'm kidding! *hold out plate* 😳

Really? I'm soooo glad someone saw the emphasis on that flashback part with the haldi, because if you see the scene, again, there;s a part where hes at the window and to me, that was the real prem, looking helpless in a way! 😳 I really wanted a chance to add that in somewhere! 😳 Eee I made you want to cry...that's the biggest compliment EVER Bhav!😳😳😳

Awww it was what was basically happening!😆😆 But thank you so much for liking it! 😛

My next stuff? I'm not sure, I feel that after that first one shot this week, I'm gonna try to think of a fluffy one, that's still happy and cute!😆😆😆

Love you loads,

Meera😳

Meera....did i ever tell you you're such an amazing writer? Well, if not them i am right now. I love this one-shot, its one of my favs now. keep it up and can't wait for more stuff.

Awww Anzi! 😳 *blushy* You're embarrassing me now! 😛 But thank you, really from the bottom of my heart! 😃😳 It really means a lot to me! 😃