mayur sajan FF- BITTER SWEET-part14 & 15 pg38.....

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TITLE-- BITTER SWEET

FF ON MAYUR AND SAJAN

Characters

Nupur seth(nonie) and Dia seth are fav sisters of each other

Very awesome and cool funloving gals

They lived together in the same house in mumbai from class 7th till 11th.

In 11th gunjan and nupur fall for this guy called rahul singh.

And have huge fight.

Then nupur shifted to delhi in 12th.

Gunjan shifted to nyc with her brother abhinav seth whos supposed to be a bartender.

Bhenji is going out with anne

Jaco and uday are unidentical twins.

While jaco is serious. Uday fools around most of the day.

Jaco and mayank are best friends.

Gunjan(jhunjhun and cm/chui mui) is supposed to be a kicckass football player.

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In this im introducing mayanks sis anvita sharma

She later bcums best frenz wid nupur and they bcum a trio.

Dia nupur and anvita.

Gunjan knows anvita from a football camp.

Anvita calls mayank yankee!

And keeps comparing him to daddy yankee.

Gunjan and and nupur are real sisters and dia is their cousin.

nupur mom and dias mom die in a car crash when they were in 5th. Bcoz of a drunk driver from the opposite side.

Char sketches-

Mayank- hes organized and disciplined, dedicated and loyal ' especially at studies. Excellent performances and strong commitments are standard for him.

Nupur is sort of a tomboy allrounder. Good at sports and studies.

Anvita-

shes friendly, pleasant and easy to be around; her relationships are mostly strong. shes a social creature, and get all her energy from being around other people. Anvita plays the keyboard.

Gunjan- dedicated gal to her sport. Cant take it if she loses.

Samrat- a straight forward guy. Good looking. Nice parents. Not too flirty. Normal guy. Nothing special.(or so he thinks.) damn hacker of a guy. Can do like anything with gadgets.

Dia ' friends with almost everyone. Enjoys being around people. Lively person. Caring and energetic. And sometimes possessive.

If you like the concept plzz lemme know ill put more updates.

Do rate and comment
the links to the parts are----
introduction and part 1 on page 1--
part 2-- page 3--
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=3
part 3- page 4--
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=4
part 4- page 5
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=5
part 5- page 8-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=8
part 6- page 10-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&PID=21348467&#21348467
part 7-page 15-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&PID=21363506&#21363506
part 8-pg 20-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=20
part 9- pg 22
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=23&#21481995
part 10- pg 25-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=25
part 11- 28-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=28&#21708697
part 12- pg 31
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1160297&TPN=32
part 13- pg 35
part 14- pg 38
part 15- pg 38-
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Posted: 16 years ago
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BDW guys this is my 1st time on ffs .. so i dnt know whether u ll like it but i hope you do!
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i loved the introduction.please pm me when u update 😊
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hey i really like it , do continue.
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Part 1- (gunjan before joining excel)

12th march'2009

It was 8 30pm. Gunjan seth stood in the parking lot thinking about him.

Thinking about ayden josh.

Her so called boyfriend.

Just then she heard a thump on her window.

It was him,her bf.

she quickly got out of the car and gave him a huge bear hug.

Gunjan- hey josh. Whats up?

Aj- nothing gunjan.

Gunjan – soo u said u wanna talk about something….soo what isit?

Aj- I dunno how to say this… I mean…I dunno how youll take it.. I ummmm..

Just then a girl came from behind him, and kissed him on his lips.

She was a exquisite looking brunette. Definitely hot.

Aj- ummm gunjan this is Tammie. Tammie Blackburn. Shes uhh….

Tammie- his girl friend….!

A smile playing on her lips.

Gunjan- your joking rite…?

Her voice had begin to choke.

Aj- im srryy gunjan its just, just look at her shes soo totally like…

Gunjan- hott is I think the word your looking for.

She said with a sudden boldness. Quietly waiting for him to leave.

She would not let him see her cry.

Gunjan- you know what mr ayden josh, you disgust me.

Get lost!!

Aj- gunjan im sorry, its just…

But before he could complete what he was saying Tammie came from behind

And dragged him away saying-

Josh cmon don't waste ttym. We've got a beautiful night awaiting us.

She saw him going ..goin.. and he was gone.

Gunjan seth was a innocent, vulnerable girl with beautiful brown eyes and a

Knowing smile. For gunjan, things had always been the gunjan way.

What she wanted had to happen or nothing happened at all.

But in the past few days things had all of a sudden begun to go downhill.

She had been the school football star.

But the past few days her football had been bad.

And the coach had put her off the team.

She was never good at studies.

Her grades had been slipping down from Cs to Ds and yesterday she had got her

First F.

And now josh.

It felt like the world was falling to pieces. How could this be happening to her.

She was gunjan seth. The unbreakable,the ice girl.

Isn't that what people around her called her then how could this happen.

She turned and walked into the bar. And saw her brother,abhinav seth ,

serving drinks.

He signaled her to sit.

She went and chose a sit near her brother.

Sitting there in the bar she scanned the room filled with dullness.

She finally felt strong enough and was about to turn, when all of a sudden a really cute guy asked her if she had seen his wallet. He narrated to her that he had been sitting there earlier and had forgotten his wallet there.

She looked around and finally found it lying there between the slump of drinks.

Cute guy- 'thanks.'

Gunjan- 'no problem.'

He turned to go when he heard her shout to the bartender-

'bhai pls jaldi kar.'

cute guy- hey excuseme miss. Are you Indian.

Gunjan- yeah. How'd u know?

Cute guy- nice. Im Indian too. Samrat saxena.'

He said stretching out his hand.

Gunjan- 'ohh heyy. Im gunjan, gunjan seth.'

She said taking his hand.

Without her knowing a smile got plastered on her face.

Gunjan-'so do you live here?'

Samrat- no im here on a vacation. I actually live in Mumbai.

Gunjan- hmmm, interesting.

Samrat- so till your brothers here, you mind joining me for a dance.

Gunjan- yeeahh sure, id like that.

He pulled her hand and rushed into the crowd. And they began dancing;

They enjoyed thoroughly. And soon her brothers shift got over, so she had to go.

Gunjan- hey I rilly had a great time. Hope to see ya round.

Samrat- yeahh same here.

She turned to go when—

Samrat- gunjan can I have your no?

Gunjan- uhh ya. Note it.'

He took out his cell and noted it.

And then gave her his no instead.

Gunjan- anyways I should be going. Take care and do keep in touch.

As she walked through the door. She waved at him, he waved back.

At the back of her mind – mayb me and josh weren't meant to be.

She thought with a huge smile playing on her lips.

Her brother came out with all his stuff packed.

Abhinav- heyy gunjan

He hugged her, and kissed her on the cheek.

Gunjan- hey bro

Abhinav- who was that guy with you?

Gunjan- samrat from Mumbai. Is in new york for a vaca.

Abhinav- hmmmmmm….

Gunjan what?

Abhinav- I was just thinking abou something.

Gunjan- what r u thinkng bout mey I know SIR!

Abhinav- nothing. Its just I was thinking how many customers in the bar wanted me to check im out for them.

***GIGGLES***

after 5 mins they reached their house which was 10 blocks from the bar.

As they entered they looked around the place- at the untidy place filled with clothes, shoes, gloves, papers and so on, and gave each other a huge grin.

Abhinav- well im sleepy,we'll try cleaning tomorrow.

Gunjan- yeaahh.

She said pretending a yawn.

They said goodnight to each other and went to sleep in their respective rooms.

Gunjan dreamt about samrat the whole damn time. Thinking about those intelligent eyes, the cute winks, the sweet smile, his clean pressed white shirt and cute black jeans.

She just couldn't stop thinking of him.

What she didn't know there were some suprises awaiting her the next.

Some pleasant and some unpleasant.

Please rate and comment!

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thanks senny, ammy luvs ridz.. hope u lyk my new update!
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wowowow your good plzzzzzzzz contuied soon i love it
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superb yaar.please update soon.😊
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really cute:]
i love it<3 update soon.
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hey sindhya.....cant belive it....such an awesum concept....sumthn really unqiue...i want all d characters 2 soon b in mumbai....in exel of course..!! cant w8,....well mayb u cud show..tht yea gunjan was pretty studious....but as she got busy in football...n tht aj incident got hr marks down.....n in future id lyk 2 c a football match in xcel...mayb sams intelligent theorires n gadgets...wud help her win etc...!!

really awesum update....d sajan scne..!!

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