mayur sajan FF- BITTER SWEET-part14 & 15 pg38..... - Page 2

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Posted: 16 years ago
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its superb
gud work
continue plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz do continue soon its fab!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks guyzz.... ill update as soon as i can... hope u guys njy!
bdw disha thnx for d suggestion!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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but guyzz its nt gonna go dt fast paced.. khaafi slow jayega storyy... hope u guyz dont mind.. its gonna be a long story...
:) sorrry guyz
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Posted: 16 years ago
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very nice and sewwt keep updating i will be waiting
Edited by tanyaaaa26 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks anjalika and tanya.. ill be updating in a few mins!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Awesome character sketch and wonderful narration and timing! Please continue as soon as possible! Please pm me when you update!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The next morning gunjan woke up with a call from her sister dia seth.

Gunjan- hello

She said in a croaky voice

Dia- heyy gunjan.how are you doing?

Gunjan- ohh heyy dia. Gudd gudd. And you?

Dia- gud enough swty. Listen your daddy wants to talk to you.

Gunjan- what..no..dont…wait..

But before that she gave the phone to her dad.

Dad- hello gunjan beta. How r your studies going?

Gunjan- hey papa. Its good.

Dad- how is that good for nothing brother of yours?

Gunjan- dad cant you just…

Dad- no. anyhow beta that wasn't what I called you for. I wanted to tell you that you are going to do collg in one of the most prestigious colleges of all times in Mumbai. Excel college.

Gunjan- but papa. I haven't even had my 12th exams yet.

Dad- wont matter. I have many contacts there.

Gunjan- but dad-

Dad- youll be under good influence for once. Both your sisters dia and nupur are in excel.

Gunjan- dia ? but shes of my age. How come shes already got in?

Dia- this is India beta. They've done their exams. And already applied for collgs. And now got in.

Gunjan- but what about abhi bhaiya?

Dia- let that scoundrel stay. He doesn't need anything.

Gunjan- but papa-

Dad- that's it. Do you wish to talk to nupur.

Gunjan- no as always.

Dad- take care beta. Bye

Gunjan- bye dad.

She ran to her brothers room to tell him what had happened. He listened to her and after that said-

Gunjan, dads right. You need good guidance. You're just 17. live life dads way. He always wants best. I am suffering for not listening to him. Don't let that happen to you. Be daddys girl. He loves you gunjan.

As he said it a tear fell down his cheek.

Gunjan- if I go to Mumbai then promise me that youll come too. Start a new life. Forget all this.

She said picking up the cigarette box that washidden inside his shoes.

Abhinav- gunjan that's actually—

Gunjan- I don't care. You're coming. I wont let you suffer here while im there.

Abhinav- alright, but for now you must study. Do well in your exams. When are they from.

Gunjan- next week.

Abhinav- how much have you done?

Gunjan- not much. But I promise ill do my best. For you!

Abhinav- go ahead ill get you some coffee and baked potatoes.

She went to her room and freshed up, and began studying when-

TRING TRING.

It said samrat saxena calling.

She quickly picked up.

Gunnjan- hi samrat.

Samrat- hey gunjan. Wassup?

Gunjan- nothing rilly.

Samrat- so lets have lunch together?

Gunjan- I cant. Got my exams from next week. 12th boards sort.

Samrat- heyy then I can help you. Ive just last week given my 12th boards. You want my help?? Im sort of good at all that!

Gunjan- you know what I could really do with some help. And we can talk too.

Samrat- great ill there in an hour. Bye

Gunjan- bye samrat

As she kept the phone she couldn't help but smile and think to herself-

Hes such a sweet heart.!

She went to her closet and started looking for something to wear. In that 1 hour she tried atleast 16 different combos of clothes. And finally found something just perfect.

She wore a cute purple jumper with a nice denim skrt knee length. And her favourite chain which had her name on it.

As she got ready she heard the door bell ring outside. She quickly straightened her jumper and ran to get the door. There he was in a light blue formal shirt and a dark blue jeans with blue reebok shoes.

'Awww hes sooo cute', she thought

gunjan- hey come in!

samrat- hey you look cute.

Gunjan- you look …. neat!

***giggles***

gunjan- alright come on in.

she said with a huge smile on her face.

Samrat- hmmm..finally we've got something in common.

He said looking around the house.

Gunjan- what is that?

Samrat- a messy place

More giggles.

Gunjan- anyways this is my room

Samrat- nice room.

He looked around the room and then asked-

Are you mad about ronaldino or are you mad about football

Gunjan- I think both

Samrat-So lets sit down to study.

Gunjan- yeah sure. Cmon

They sat on the bed and began studying, she reading through the notes and he giving her some extra key pointers and explaining things to her. Then at around 3pm they went to lunch and had some great time talking and flirting with each other.

Gunjan told him about josh and Tammie Blackburn and all her recent problems- her football, her bros cigs and so on. While samrat told her about his life in Mumbai. About how he loved gadgets and hacking and they talked about how disgusting the Manchurian was. All in all they had a great time. Then he would drop her home and let her revise and read through more notes. Gunjan loved being around him because he made her smile and laugh. For gunjan it had been a long time since she had smiled and laughed like maniacs with someone. A few days later as she put her head on her pillow some memories came flashing back. She remembered that last person who used to make her laugh like maniacs. Her sister nupur seth.

She felt a strange guilt running through her all of one. And a tear trickled down her cheek.

She turned to the bedside table and saw the picture- the picture of her and her sister. her sister had cared so much for her and she had been so mean to her.

That night after a long time she cried herself to sleep. And promised herself that she would makeup for what she had done to nupur.

Hope you like it.

Pls rate and comment!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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oh but please can we have mayur soon. it was realy good jan, keep it up.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ya im going to get them in the next update!
srry its suppossed to be sort of slow paced hope u njy d next one!

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