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Posted: 16 years ago
okay! changes made! heh..nothing to worry about! hehe! i just had to take out the beginning..chalo teek hain, isi bahane, my post became shorter! heh! it was, and still is, too long! hehe! alrigh,ill leave now.. is almost four! hehe! good nite reeno! byeee!
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Posted: 16 years ago
no probz yaar wat i mnt wz...any1 who continues can cont aftr ur part!
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

heyy gyz....m baq....wid a part hope u gyz lyk it!!!

while shiv was cuddling her in his arms, she went right up 2 his ear....nd whispered him a ..'2 u 2' nd giggled
GAURI: acha ab mjhe choriye...koi aajayega
SHIV: koi nhi ayega...nish...kabhi kabaar tho mauqa milta hai...
roNit cmz frm bhind...he is searching fr nisha , seeing da 2 shiv-nish 2gether, he lets out an **ahem ahem**...nish??
both gauri nd shiv r shokd...shiv quickly loosens his grip on nisha nd both r really embarassed. Nisha puts sum strands of her hair behind her ears nd gives a stern luk at shiv widening her eyes as in signalling him 2 tell 'i told u sum1 wud cm'
shiv apologetically scratches da baq of his head
NISH: haan, ronit, bolo...
rONIT: haan, woh...do u ahv da digi cam?? milind bhayya said he gave it 2 ya
nisha starts finding it dere itself. She is soo embarassed and worried kind that she restlessly moves here nd dere searching fr da cam
SHIV: nish how cd da camera get on da beach nd in2 sand?? no use lukin here. lets go nd luk insyd, sit calmly nd try 2 remember
RONI: yh nisha...dont worry...il even pretend it 2 myslf dat ive seen nthin!!😉..lolzz😆
NISH: RONIT!!!!😡
ronit laughs nd so duz shiv
nish gives another stern luk 2 shiv
he straightens himslf up as if shes her teacher nd da teacher is scolding him nt 2 laugh
NISHA: mien...moien andar jaakar dhoondti hoon
while nisha is going past da 2,
RONIT: nisha, how can u b soo irrespon...
shiv keeps his hands on ron's mouth..nd signals nish 2 go
SHIV: abey tu paagal hai kiya??....khair, sunn...yeh baat aggar tu ne kisi ko bhi batayee na... tho, tho...tho mien sab ko aur specially esha ko bta doon ga k tu ne esha ka naya perfume lekar apni grlfrnd ko diya tha b4 breaking up!!😆
nd he brsts in2 laughter
RON: tmhen kaisi pata?
SHIV: ron....mjhe sab pata hai!!!!!😃
RON: acha yaar plz esha ko nhi btana ..nhi tho....uss hi din mera RAM RAM SATYA ho jaye ga😉😆
shiv laighs nd goes insyd wid ron
shiv quickly goes up where nisha is dere, he cud see her glowing white saari nd knew it wz HER!!!
shiv runs upstairs
ronit on the other hand is still downstairs slowly following shiv
he is in his own thoughts wen sum1, in much more hurry came in frnt nd nd da 2 bumpd in2 each other nd woof..it wz a grl nd she landed str8 in2 ron;s arms...well...ofcrse he cdnt let her fell down
den ron gtz surprised 2 c tht its none other than riya...nd lukin at her he gtz all eyes!!!...as she wz lukin DAMN TOOO BEAUTIFULL!!!!
Da 2 kept starin in2 each others eyes 4 a while
then...riya, manages 2 pull herself up nd says
RIYA: im sry...i got disbalancd...umm..ron...stop starin lyk dat ....it makes me get shivers thru my spine!!!
RONIT: umm.. (still lost in his thots)...dis...uh...i mean....
ronit iznt able 2 take wrds outta his mouth.
finally, he says
RONIT:umm...tum jaldi mien thi??
suddenly riya remebers tht indeed she wz in a hurry nd gushes
RIYA: oh yes...sry...frgot
she rushes sumwhere
ronit smiles nd den lets himslf 2 get drifted in2 thots 1ce again
he quickly makes himslf seated on the stairs
he wonders 2 himslf...wat makes riya feel special 2 me dese dayz??...y hav i suddenly atarted liking watever she wears now, watever she dz now??
thinking of all dis, he imagines riya standin ryt in frnt, in da same dress
A combination of turquoise-aqua blue nd black
it wz jst another party wear tht she used 2 wear earlier...den y 2day am i feeling a sudden shirky jerk of xcitemnt in myslf??
Her long locks were fully opened nd sleekly straightened, natural colour ,.....black....seemed no artificial thing was needed to beautify her...she wz simple yet elegant nd he felt more nd more ecstastic...nd dat smyl of hers....exaggerated da scene!!
end😛 pheww......
hope u lykd it...plz do cmnt!

reeno superbbbbb u updated kool
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: loveabletwinz

Hey guys, here's a continuation of the Party at the Kapoor Resort! I thought ill end the night myself!hehe' so here goes! Hope u guys like this one too :-D

While Shiv and Nisha were doing there own things, everyone else was working on decorating the room for the night. Shiv and Nisha had not seen the final room and now that they were downstairs and clear of all the hugs and kisses and a few stomach punches for Shiv, they could clearly see the room. It was beautifully decorated. Although all the lights were off, the room was bright. The room was decorated with candles all over. White, and sometimes red, vases held candles in them whose fire would move as the wind blew. The flames, carving a shadow in the walls, had a frequent visitor- the wind. The windows had been left open and each time the wind blew, the candle flames wavered and they're shadows making various shapes, engraving them in the memories of the walls. The curtains were white, and the plants added a hint of green in the room.

Mahen brought a bottle of champagne to open and together with Karan, did the honors. Mahen held the corkscrew in place and on the count of three, Mahen and Karan turned the cork, letting out a large fizz of champagne escape the bottle. Everyone cheered as the champagne poured out and soon everyone was spending the time chit-chatting and sipping from their glasses.

12:30 AM

It had gotten cold outside, and the chilly breeze was beginning to blow inside'blowing some of the candles and sending shivers through spines. To keep the place warm and cozy, Sumit closed the windows and pulled the curtains. The noises in the room got louder and Sumit looked around as he saw his family laughing and having a good time. He walked up to the table that had the drinks served and picked up the last drink and as he did so, another hand grasped the glass and refused to let go. Sumit turned his eyes upward to see who it was and found Esha. She was dressed in a dark blue, sleeveless dress. The dress carefully caressed her body, making her look perfect in the candle light. Her dark brown hair was let loose and fell right up to the chest of her dress. The front of her dress was occupied by a big, blue bow whose hanging strips fell almost up to the dress length. The bottom of her dress fell like an upside down umbrella and stopped above her knees. Her eyes were lowered as she was looking at the glass she held in accordance with Sumit.

Sumit: Hello, missy, yeh mera glass hain.

Esha: Nahi, yeh mera glass hain

Sumit: Main pehle yaha aya tha

Esha: Ispe haat mera pehle laga tha

Sumit: Jhooti'maine pehle liya tha phir tumne haat lagaya tha

Esha: Jhoot tum bol rahe ho..maine pehle liya tha.. thum chodthe ho ya main shor machaon?

Sumit: Are, thum tho aise baat kar rahi ho ki main koi chor hoon..shor kyun machaogi? Hamare aapas ka mamla hain, ham hi handle karte hain na..

Esha: teek hain, tho phir mujhe mera drink de do!

Sumit: Lo karlo baat, baazi kheli hi nahi aur tum jeetne ki baat kar rahi ho!

Esha: Sumit, thum zyaada smart banne ki koshish mat karo varna main Pa ko bataongi!

Sumit, raising his eyebrows: Dhamki?

Esha, giving off a sly smile: nahi, Vaada!

Sumit: Acha?

Esha: Ji!

Sumit, with a contrite look on his face : Tho ham bhi dekhte hain ki yeh drink '..

Before Sumit could even finish what he was saying, someone was pulling at his hand. Esha was trying to pry the glass out of his hand and was almost succeeding when Sumit pulled back with equal force. As so they fought like that for about half a minute and in the process emptying half the glass. When they got too loud, the Kapoor and Malhotra families turned head to find the source of the noise and as soon as they found it, Disha and Nikhila ran to their respective children.

Nikhila: SUMIT!! Thum yeh kya kare rahe ho? Chodo use!

Sumit: Nahi mom, yeh baazi tho main hi jeetoonga

Disha: ESHA yeh kya pagalpan hain, thum log lad kyun rahe ho?

Esha, through clenched teeth: Sumit ne'mera drink..cheen liyaaaaa!

Nikhila and Disha: KYA?

Sumit: mom, main pehle aya tha aur ab yeh meri drink chori kar rahi hain!

Esha : Tumne mujhe chor bulaya?? and she fought harder, this time spilling more champagne than she expected and some of it fell on her.

Esha: AHHHHHHH!!! Dekho tumne kya kiya, mere dress pe gira diya!

Sumit: Maine? Tumse kisne kaha tha meri drink chori karne ke liye

Esha: Badi Ma dekhiye na, usne phir se mujhe chor bulaya!

Mahen: OFOOOO!! Kya pagalpan hain yeh..Sumit chodo use..

Sumit: Lekin Dad

Mahen: Abhi!

Sumit: Lekin main kyun, drink to meri hi hain..

Mahen: Tum jis drink ke barein mein baat kar rahe ho, voh tho saara carpet pe ghira hua hain!..thum log ab kis baat pe lad rahe ho, voh Rab hi jaane.

Sumit and Esha, both, gave a frantic look at the glass in their hands and Mahen was right, they had spilled half or at-least all of the champagne on the floor. Sumit let go off the class and looked around as everyone was either smiling broadly or letting out a giggle.

Mahen: Thum dono ka bachpana kab khatam hoga, voh bhi Rab hi jaane. Shaadi ki umar ho gayi hain leking phir bhi, DONO, vaise ke vaise hain.. thum dono ek doosre se lade bagair nahi reh sakte kya? Har chees pe ladte ho! Vaise, thum dono share tho kar sakthe the na?

Sumit and Esha: Ji?

Mahen: Ha bhia..thum dono drink share to kar sakte the na..UFF! Main tho chala'dance anybody?

Mahen dragged Nikhila into his arms and danced her off into the night. Soon enough everyone followed and as each couple partnered up with eachother, Sumit, Esha, Rahul and Shreya and Milind stood by themselves, looking on as their own parents and brothers and sisters danced.

Sumit looked at Esha as he flashed her a dorky smile and Esha reciprocated the gesture. They had grown up together and had always fought. For even the slightest things, but they were still best friends. They told each other everything and trusted eachother more than anyone. As Esha stood by herself, she saw a hand approach her from the right.

Sumit: May I?

Esha, letting out a big grin: Yes, you may! And she placed her hand in his, and she let Sumit guide her through the crowd.

1:00

By 1:00 everyone was on the "dance floor", having a merry time. Rahul had partnered up with Shreya and Milind would take his chance with each one of his sisters, until he had to go and receive and important business call.

Samar was dancing with Trisha, making very sure that she was not uncomfortable and attending to her every need. The music slowed down and Trisha laid her head on Samar's shoulder, still allowing him to hold her right hand in his left.

Samar: Kya soch rahi ho?

Trisha: Kuch bhi tho nahi!

Samar: Kuch tho soch rahi ho, Itni chup kyun ho?

Trisha: Main bataongi tho aap hasenge tho nahi na?

Samar: Are batao to sahi!

Trisha: Samar pehle aap promise keejiye

Samar: Acha teek hain baba, nahi hasoonga

Trisha: Vaada

Samar: Are, abhi to vaada kiya tha.. sachi! Nahi hasoonga

Trisha: Acha teek hain..main na' voh'umm..naam soch rahi thi..

Samar: naam? Kiske naam?

Trisha: hamare bache ke liye

Samar, looking surprised and happy at the same time, said his next line with a naughty look on his face : ACHA, already? Itni jaldi?

Trisha: Aur nahi to kya samar, pata nahi che mahine kaise beet jayenge aur you know, prepared hona koi buri baat nahi hain!

Samar: ACHA?! Tho teek hain, batao, kya socha hain?

Trisha: Pehle aap bataye..

Samar: teek hain, ladki hogi tho'

Trisha: Simran

Samar: are, tumne no mere bolne se pehle hi bata diya!

Trisha: Voh actually kya hain na, ladki ka naam maine already soch liya hain'aap ladke ka naam bataiye!

Samar: Aur ladki ka naam Simran hi kyun hona chahiye?

Trisha: Kyunki Simran ka matlab hota hain, Bhagwan ka Dan'aur jho bhi bacha hame paida hoga, voh hamare liye bhagwan ka taufa hi hoga

Samar: oh oyee! And as he slightly kissed the roof of her head, he said : Tho Simran hi sahi, making Trisha smile, as she hid her face in the between of Samar's neck and shoulder.

Trisha: Aur ladka hua tho?

Samar: ummm. Sameer!

Trisha: Chee!

Samar: KYUNNNN?

Trisha: Hamare bache ko suite nahi karega!

Samar: Aur tumhe kaise pata hain?

Trisha: bas pata hain and she lifted her head to look up at Samar and giggled, making Samar laugh along with her.

Samar : Acha teek hain, umm Vivek

Trisha: Nahi , voh tho hamare sadde chachu ka naam hain!

Samar, letting out a noise that sounded like a scoff and laughter: Acha, phir voh tho bilkul nahi.. ummm'Aman?

Trisha: Aman?!

Samar: Kyun, pasand nahi ayi tho change kar lenge

Trisha: Nahi Samar, its perfect!

Samar: acha?

Trisha: Bilkul!

Samar, letting go of Trisha's right hand, pulled her into a full embrace and held her tight, like he would never let her go.

Samar: I love you!

Trisha: I love you too.

And they stood there, entwined in each other, and moved with the music and after a few long, but sweet minutes, Trisha spoke.

Trisha: Acha Samar, yeh bataiye..Agar ladka ho, tho aapko kaisa chahiye?

Samar looked down at his wife. Her questions were so innocent, so sincere.. and he loved them.

Samar: categories bhi hain?

Trisha,in a taunting tone: Samar!!

Samar: acha baba teek hain.. agar ladko ho tho bilkul meri tarah hona chahiye.. mera hi dimaak, mera hi voh har baat pe apni bhai behen ko chedna , mere hi itne ache good looks, bilkul mera chehra aur

Trisha: Aur mera kya? Aapka beta sirf aap pe jayega? Mera kuch bhi nahi?

Samar: Aur tumhare aankhein

Trisha, lowering her voice, her eyes suddenly glistening, making it hard for her to see: Samar?

Samar: ha, bilkul tumhari jaise aankhein aur agar ladki ho, tho tumhari hi tarah khoobsurat, tumhari hi tarah sushil, bholi-bhali, masoom!

Trisha, talking through her tears: Acha?

Samar: ji ha bilkul! And they held each other again, moving with the music.

2:00 AM

As time passed, the music constantly changed and as per Kapoor traditions, time for "partner-change" was coming up. Every year, no matter what the occasion was, if the Kapoor family was dancing, they always had one song where everyone would switch partners. Everyone was dancing in and unintended circle and the rule was, when the time came, the ladies would move down one partner to the right and the men would move to the left. As that time of the night came closer, everyone prepared themselves.

The disc changed track and as if on an unheard command or silent order, everyone switched partners. Coincidently enough, Mahen was dancing with Disha and Karan with Nikhila. Shiv was dancing with Esha, Sumit with Trisha, Samar with Nisha, Rohit with Shreya, Ronit with Riya and Rahul with Diya.

5:00 AM

The couples danced for hours together, having their own individual conversations and at around 5 in the morning, everyone went out to the beach.

The waters that looked mystical at night looked even more magnificent at the break of dawn. Far away in the distance, the ocean seemed to meet the sky. The heat waves of the sun stay afloat in between the water and the ball of fire, conveying the impression of carrying their unheard conversations to each other. The sky was a mixture of blue, pink and yellow. The clouds were beginning to show and as they appeared out of the darkness, their silhouettes, reflecting the water below, the sun slowly rose. The island in the distance was still a shadow, still dark and still murky. The fish had awakened from their night slumber and were up and about again. The mist from the water had risen up, as if trying to reach out to the sky and had blurred the vision of the island. There were a few stars left in the morning sky, and they seemed to be nodding in silent approval of the breaking dawn. The Kapoors and Malhotra's had their last drink, signaling the end of the last year and cheered to a new year.

At around 6, after a cup of strong coffee, everyone hit their own beds. No matter the coffee was strong, the night had taken a toll on everybody. They were to leave the resort at 1 in the afternoon and until then, everyone slept and with them, so did everything else'or so it seemed. The birds had stopped singing their songs before time, and the wind had stopped talking'everything was calm and peaceful..and they slept they day off, until it was time to leave.

Phew! Why do I get the feeling that this gets longer every time I write! Hehe! Well anywho, this will be my last one for a long time. College starts tomorrow and my classes are crazy hard, so I wont have time to do anything much. Hopefully if I find any time during the weekends, then maybe ill try writing a post..but I doubt that will be possible either'Church has got me really occupied..but nevertheless, I hope u guys liked this part too..it wasn't anything elegant, it was just a simple part! But I thought we had to mention Samar and Trisha and we have to introduce our other jodies too! Hehe! Alright,u guys have a good day and hope to be back here in a short time!

Thanksss!

AnnJan!

readers lyk long updates annjaan amazing update keep it up😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
HEY!!!!!!THT WS FAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!both of u gyz did sooooo well n dont u tweeny(if dats allrite wid u luvabletwins 4 me 2 call u dat)say dat ur part ws simple bcuz it ws FAB!!reeno, ur part ws a bit 2 short but also FAB!!nice 2 read ur upd8s agen n yh,it didnt colide with nybit of each oders part.con soon!!(im srr i cant upd8 nowadayz but im jus a bit 2 buzy wid al da work but will try if i hv time)tc
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Posted: 16 years ago
hahaha, starfan, you can call us tweeny! lols.. or annjan is wat everyone calls us..but suite urself!heheh! and thanks bnchess! yeah,i wont be able to update for AGES now..thank God sonia is doing daily updates for the show, otherwise i would be missing out on SOOO much of KAA! lols..
anyways, u guys all take care and talk to soon!
-AnnJan-
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: starfan.shrk

HEY!!!!!!THT WS FAB!!!!!!!!!!!!!both of u gyz did sooooo well n dont u tweeny(if dats allrite wid u luvabletwins 4 me 2 call u dat)say dat ur part ws simple bcuz it ws FAB!!reeno, ur part ws a bit 2 short but also FAB!!nice 2 read ur upd8s agen n yh,it didnt colide with nybit of each oders part.con soon!!(im srr i cant upd8 nowadayz but im jus a bit 2 buzy wid al da work but will try if i hv time)tc

aaww...plz try 2 updt asap aroosa!!!!!!
well thnx fr da appericiation!
luv u
reeno
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Peepo

G8888 friends Im loving it.

thnx yaar
bt wen will u updt??
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Reeno!!!

aaww...plz try 2 updt asap aroosa!!!!!!
well thnx fr da appericiation!
luv u
reeno
hey!no need 2 say thx n yh i wil upd8 2 but im stuck gyzzzzz.i dunno what 2 rite cuz my mind 4 sumreasons hs gone totlly blank 🤢now n i dunno how to start it of so,, plz help n make ny suggestions of what i should rite bout n mayb give me a boostr?? thx soo much!!!1👏👏

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Posted: 16 years ago
hre it iz!!... aroosa darlingg is finally updatingg gyz!!!!!!

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