FF:Tum Dil Ki Dharkhan Mein. *Note pg.46*

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Hi everyone!!! After reading soo many ff's i got inspired to do one of my own...It's my first attempt so plz tell me if u like it or not....
Introduction of characters:
Divya: A sweet, loving, caring, simple, shy, respectful and really beautiful girl. She's 22 years old and is going to the 3rd year of college. She lives with her mother, Gayatri, (in Delhi) as her father left them when Divya was born because he wasn't ready for a family. Divya loves her mother a lot and wishes never to do anything against her mother's wishes. She does sometimes feel the emptiness of her family without her father but she never lets her mother know that. Divya is Bharat's cousin. Divya also has a best friend from childhood named Aditi, who she considers to be her sister.
Sagar: A handsome, caring, rich and outgoing guy. He's also 22 years old but is a few months older than Divya. He's also going to the 3rd year of college 9same college as Divya). He just moved to Delhi from U.S as his dad is sick and needs him. He loves his parents a lot and just like Divya he also doesn't want to do anything against his parents wishes. He is a mama's boy. He is Aditi's cousin. His childhood best friend is Bharat and Sagar considers Bharat to be his brother.
Jaya Bhattacharya hspace5Gayatri: Divya's mother. She loves her daughter and hates her husband for leaving them. She's Divya's father and mother. Gayatri does her best to fulfill all of Divya's wishes and wants Divya to be married in a nice family ad lead a happy life with her husband. She also considers Aditi to be her daughter.
Surinder Kaur hspace5Jaya: Sagar's mother. She is a loving and caring mother and always fulfills all of Sagar's wishes. She wants a beautiful, respectful, simple and caring bahu. She also considers Bharat to be her son.
Rajendra Gupta hspace5Rajendra: Sagar's father. He is a big business man. He loves his son a lot and wishes to see his bahu before he dies. (He stays sick all the time). He considers Bharat to be his son.
Aditi: A sweet, outgoing and beautiful girl. She's Sagar's cousin and Divya's best friend (she also considers Divya to be her sister). She studies with Divya.

Bharat: A handsome and smart guy. He's Divya's cousin and Sagar's best friend (he also considers Sagar to be his brother). He studies with Sagar.

I'll try to continue with the first part a.s.a.p

Luv,

Farhana

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Posted: 17 years ago
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Srry guyz..i'm having trouble with Bharat's pic...so here's the link....
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love the character description and plz continueee soonnnn, will be waiting for it.....
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Wow......sounds soooo good! Update jaldi plz...:D
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ohoooooooooooooooooooooo sounds very much interesting....continue soon farhana................m waiting
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omg it's so goos
continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
wonder how will sagar and divya will meet
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Wow !!!

Yet another FF ...I'm gonna have a fantastic time rading it ,I'm sure !!

Waiting for the first part Farhana !!!!

All The Very Best !!

No doubt , your FF will just come out wonderfully...😉😉😊

All The Best !
Vidya😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Farhana,
Loved the intro! Can't wait for your FF to begin! Bet it is going to be terrific! 😊
**ehem** jaldi, jaldi Farhana ... 😉 gg~
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Meri pyaari si choti behen is writing a ff ! Yayy ! 😃
Great job dearest, it sounds very interesting and i am anxiously waiting for the first part ... Abh jaldi se update karo jee, please 😛
Luv ya !
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Thnx everyone for your support!!!
Here's the first part of "Kyon ho gaya na, Ishq!" (Title made with the help of Manusha Di!)
Hope you enjoy....

Part 1:
It is a beautiful monday morning...the birds are chirping happily...we see a beutiful middle sized house...everything is quiet in the house but then all of a sudden an alarm starts to ring loudly..
The alarm keeps ringing and ringing and then we hear an annoyed voice
"Divya!!!! Divya beti please turn off your alarm! It's sooo annoying and loud!!!"
(The voice is of none other than Divya's mom, Gayatri.)
The alarm is still ringing and no one seems to be making an attempt to close it.
Frustrated, Gayatri walks up the stairs and says "Divya, my dear, you are in lots of trouble!!"
The door of Divya's room is open so Gayatri just enters.
She sees that the bed is empty so with a frustrated sigh she goes and turns off the alarm.
She then looks around the room for Divya but there is no sign of her...
"Uffff! God knows where this pagli went!!!" says a frustrated Gayatri and she goes of to search for Divya.
Gayatri looks all over the house but there still isn't any sign of Divya...
"This girl is too much!! She's knows that it's the first day of her 3rd year in college and yet she disappears!" Gayatri says to herself and walks off to the house mandir...as soon as she enters she hears a sweet voice praying..
Voice: "Please Shambunath Ji, make this day be good....it's my 3rd year starting in college today...please make it go well..."
(The voice is of none other than our sweet and beautiful Divya)
After finishing her prayer, Divya turns around and sees her mother standing in the doorway, smiling.
Divya: Good morning, Mom!
She goes and takes her moms blessings.
Gayatri: Jete raho, my dear! I thought that you were fooling around somewhere but once again you proved me wrong...I'm so proud of you!
Gayatri and Divya share a quick hug and break apart...Gayatri looks at Divya for a moment and then starts to laugh.
Divya: Mom, what is soo funny? Why are you laughing?
Gayatri: Oh Divya! You're still in your pjs and you look soo funny and cute.
Divya *embarassed*: Mom! Aap bhi na!
Divya runs off to her room to get ready while her mother goes and prays.
Gayatri: Please Shambunath Ji, keep my daughter save and please take good care of herself. Shambunath Ji, please make Divya get a good rishta soon and please get her well settled before I---.(cuts off there)
Gayatri starts to cry and in her head thinks "I'm so sorry, Divya...please forgive me beacause I'm hiding something big from you! I just want to see you happy!"

--1 hour later--

Divya is still getting ready and Gayatri is in the kitchen when the doorbell starts to ring.
Gayatri: I'm coming!
When Gayatri opens the door, she sees that it is Aditi.
Aditi: Namaste, Aunty!
Aditi takes Gayatri's blessings.
Gayatri: Jete raho, beti! Come in..Divya is still getting ready....
Aditi: (walks in the houses) What????!!! She's still getting ready??!!!! Gosh, this girl is going to make us late!!!! I'll go see, Aunty..
Aditi turns around to go up the stairs but as soon as she turns someone says "BOO!" and Aditi screams...
Divya: (laughing) Oh my god! Did you see that, mom?? Aditi, you should have seen your face! (continues laughing...)
Aditi: Come here you! I'm not going to leave you!
Both Divya and Aditi start to run around the house wildly...Divya runs behind her mom and Aditi tries to catch her...
Gayatri: (laughing) Bas, you two! That's enough!
Aditi: Divya, Aunty saved you this time but whose going to save you when we go to college, huh??
Divya: Oh, don't worry! My sapno ka raja will come to my rescue!
(Both the girls start to laugh...)
Gayatri: O.k, O.k! Let's go have some breakfast...(sees that Aditi is going to say something) No, Aditi. I will not take "no" as an answer....
Divya starts to giggle and Aditi gives her the "i'll deal with you later" look...
Everyone is eating break fats when the door bell rings again...
Divya: I'l get it!
(She goes and opens the door and sees that it's Bharat...)
Divya: Hey, Bharat! You're here early! Come in...
Bharat and Divya both go to the kitchen and Bharat goes to take Gayatri's blessings...
All the while, Aditi is staring at Bharat...after a while she goes up to Divya...
Aditi: Hey Divya, who's that? (still starig at Bharat...)
Divya: Oh that's my cousin Bharat...
Aditi: Oh so this is Bharat! Finally I get to meet him after soo long!!!
(Bharat walks up to the girls...)
Bharat: Hey Divya!! Are you ready??? I've got a friend waiting in the car...so let's go...
Divya: O.k, but first meet my friend Aditi..
Bharat: Oh so, this is Aditi? Divya talks alot about you..Nice meeting you! (extends hand for handshake..)
Aditi: (shakes hand...) Yup, it's nice meeting you too!
(Both are lost in each other's eyes and Divya just stands there and smiles...)
Divya: (clears throat) Umm, can we get going anytime soon??
(She starts to giggle and both Bharat and Aditi look down in embarassment...)
Divya: Bye, Mom! (Gives Gayatri a quick hug..)
Bharat & Aditi: Bye, Aunty!
Gayatri: Bye, kids! Have a great day and take care!
(The threesome leaves and goes to Bharat's car...)
Bharat: (looking in the car..) Come out, for a second...
A guy opens the paasenger door and steps out...It is none other than our Sagar!!!
Aditi: SAGAR?
Sagar: ADITI?
Bharat: You two know each other??!!!
Aditi: Well yeah! He's my---(gets cut off by Bharat)
Bharat: Oh I see! He's your boyfriend, right? Sagar yaar, why didn't you tell me before??
Sagar: Bharat--(gets cut off by Bharat)
Bharat: It's o.k pal! No need to say sorry---(gets cut off by Adit..)
Aditi: Bas! Can you let my talk??? Sagar is not my boyfriend, dummy! He's my cousin!!!
(Bharat looks shocked and embarrassed that he was so stupid...)
Aditi: Anyways, Sagar you and here? When did you come back from U.S??....Sagar?
(Sagar wasn't paying any attention to Aditi beacause he was tooo busy having an eye lock with Divya...)
Sagar: (thinking in head..) Wow!!! She's soo beautiful! I just feel like having her in my arms!!!
Divya: (thinking in head..) This guy is soo hot!! I just feel like hugging and kissing him!!!
Aditi: (clears throat)
(Sagar and Divya both come out of their trance...)
Bharat: Sagar, this is my cousin Divya..
Aditi: And she is also my bestfriend!
Sagar: Hi, nice meeting you! (extends hand...)
Divya: (shakes hand..) same here!
Bharat: O.k guys--
Aditi: and girls! (glares at Bharat...)
Bharat: (Glares back at her) Ufff! Come on let's go!
Bharat and Aditi start to sit in the car and Divya is coming down the enterance steps when...she trips and Sagar catches her...
Sagar was at an angle so he wasn't able to keep his balance when he caught Divya and thus he fell to the ground and Divya was on top of him...
Both of them share an intense eye lock....
The eye lock is broken by the laughter of Aditi and Bharat...
Adit: (laughing) Divya! Get up!
But Divya was soo mesmerized by Sagar's hot features that she couldn't find the strenght in her to get off of Sagar and Sagar couldn't find the strenght to take Divya off of him...
So both of them layed there on top of each other....
That's it for now guys!!! Please forgive any mistakes...Hope u like it!!!
Luv,
Farhana😃

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