FF: THE HIDDEN CINDERELLA ~ Part26 UPT pg151 mar19 - Page 116

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Posted: 16 years ago

Part 26

Next day I woke up late…and when I went out dressed in d best outfit I had I saw tht the party waz cancelled n d decorations were taking out…I told them tht I ll pay for the decorations n the decorations ll not b taken out…

I searched d gal who did the decorations…n found her nowhere…then I became rele sad tht she mite left coz of me…

I searched her out of the hotel too…I asked the manager for her address but he only had her name, occupation, phone number n room no of her in d reception book…n I had no power to call her…she waz so angry last nite…

I had no power that to call her…but I cant do anything else…I dialed her number…but when she picked up, I cutted it….then I asked d manager to open d room in which she waz staying…may b she left any sign…I went there...i found nothing accept her photo which she tore herself…he put d pieces together n it formed a beautiful picture of her n behind it I luckily found d address of her…

When I went to d address I heard so many noices of broking glass n things to b thrown…I thot it wud not b a gud tym to meet her…may she is very angry….but then I heard a scream of her…I rushed n found a boy mis behaving wid her…she waz crying n she waz hurt on her hand…

By seeing d blood on her hand my blood became cold…but then the temperature raised n I beated the boy like hell…he ran away…n I helped her…then v FINALLY became frnds…n the meetings were often regular n at last she accepted my proposal…

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Yug: so this waz our love story…

Prerna: MINDBLOWING!!! (she got up n clapped while every1 stared at her n preet smiled)

Prem: ok ookkkkk.....every1 go to sleep now...its high tym to b up...so go to bed...(prem announced standing n in loud voice)

Heer: (heer also acted strict n said) yes he is ryt…go to bed..

Vrinda: (requested) oh pb can v stay up for sum tym..

Preet: please pb please....

Prerna: haan prem pleeeeaaassseeee (making a puppy face)

Prem: dont show me tht face...n according to me...u were not allowed to go OUT of ur ROOM n see where u have landed up...?? (prem said strictly)

Prerna: but please sum more tym....

Prem: NO!! N go to bed RYT NOW!!

Prerna: (seing down n rolling eyes) ok daddy…

Heer: gud night...

Every1 went to sleep...

After 2 n 1/2 months....

Everything has gone fine....prerna waz well again n waz allowed to go out...n vrinda waz back to her college....yug seemed rele sad...but he waz busy in his office work...prerna waz working on d hospital wid preet....when they got tym they had lunch together n coffee too but they have not confessed yet…

Prem n heer were delighted tht everything seems to b fine…they were busy in their life…prem hardly managed d tym for heer as it waz office tym….lallu n gaya3 were back…

AND NOW THEY WERE PLANNING FOR PREMEER SHADI….

No1 knew but this idea stuck in d brilliant mind of gaya3…she wanted a bahu badly…she waz getting tired of managing everything…even though heer n prerna were still there but she wanted heer as to b her bahu…

She talked to Lallit n he quickly agreed…they were managing to talk to heer n prem but they didn't get the tym to…prem waz busy in business n heer waz occupied by house work…

But one day they called prem home early…every1 waz present even vrinda finished her college work n came n every1 got seated in great hall on d sofas…prem heer smelled sumthing fishy as they knew tht this day wud cum…they knew what gaya3 n lallu r going to say but still were unaware of how to react….

Finally lallu spoke…

Lallu: so when v r all here lemme tell u all the motive of this family meeting...(but gaya3 spoke in b/w)

Gaya3: yes i ll tell u all tht we r planning a wedding in our house...the d groom is none odr than PREMMMM.. !!!!(gaya3 shouted n so do lallu)

Lallu: n bride is HEERRRRR !!!!

Prem: but…(every1 looked at him) but don't u think it's a bit early…

Gaya3: EARLY???? Ask me?? I m dying for a bahu….(gaya3 made a face)

Lallu: (lallu joined) yes me too…but lets ask heer …what she thinks…

Heer: I ?? I think …I think tht…tht (shyly) whatever u ppl decide ll b ok…(she shyly said n looked down)

Prem: so its ok…mom dad whatever u guys say…v ll do…(prem said n gaya3 n lallu nearly danced at d news)

Gaya3: wow son u r soooo sweettttt!!! Love u….

Lallu: wow I love u too prem…u never deny to our wishes…(lallu said tht n kissed his forehead)

Heer: I m coming..(heer cant bear anymore…she got badly shy n ran in her room)

Prerna: wow it means its yes from her side too…(prerna said in excitment)

Preet: wow this calls a party…

Yug: yo buddy!! The party is so important…so I ll arrange a party…

Every1 waz delighted at tht tym..n agreed to d party…they decided tht they ll do a small ring ceremony tomorrow n then d shadi date ll b fixed by a pundit…gaya3-lallu were so delighted tht they sent d children to buy sum party wears for them..n gaya3 went in d kitchen to make a sweet dish as its d day of happiness….lallu went to call d close family mmbrs…

Every1 waz out from shopping but they dint show their cloths to each odr…as they said it waz d surprise for every1…

The PARTY DAY…RING CEREMONY DAY……..

The guests were here but the couple were not there…prem n preet n yug were getting ready…while prerna n vrinda were making heer ready…finally the couples arrived…prem in a blue sherwani wid silver embroidery n black mixed wid blue color sumwhere…n heer matching him wore a blue mixed wid black lehenga…which waz looking awsum on her…like an angel has came to earth…

Prem saw her n she waz looking down in shyness…she smiled n prem waz staring at her shamelessly…she waz seated on d sofa where d couple were to sit…prem came n sat on it too…then the program got started…

First dance waz of yug n vrinda…they danced on mauja hi mauja…

Then preet n prerna danced on love mera hit hit…lallu raised his eyebrow by listening d song but enjoyed….

Then the rings arrived…both rings were same…just d sizes were diff…lallu announced tht d ring ceremony is to take place…

Then PH exchanged the rings…heer waz extremely happy…but sumwhere she felt d emptiness in her eart for her father…as soon as the ring took place on heer's hand, prem motioned her to see at d gate…she saw n a tear dropped but waz held by prem's palm…heer saw prem all teary eyed…prem nodded in yes n she went running to him…

Balraaj held her close to him…as if he waz saying sorry for those years she spent alone dreaming of him…he moved apart n gave her a gift…heer opened it n saw a gold chain…wid a heart shaped pendant…but the special thing of this pendant waz that it does not have 2 places for d photograph…but four…it had Balraaj, teji, prem n heer,s photo…heer thanked him by hugging him once again….then he came in n went to prem…

Balraaj whispered a lil thanks n prem bent to touch his feet…heer didn't miss BR saying thanks to him…she knew tht only prem cud imagine to bring him here…

Every1 had a blast on d party…BR met lallu n gaya3 n thanked them too…coz they were wid his daughter when he himself waz not….

Heer took prem to a side n thanked him for bringing BR to d party….

Heer: thankyou prem…I cant tell u how happy I m….

Prem: I noe…

Heer: I wud give anything u want for this…

Prem: I want a ……………

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Sooooo srrry guys I m sooo sorry…I didn't updated from ages na….u all must b angry wid me…but a gud news…my last exam is day after tom…n after tht regular updates ll b given…yaaaaayyyyyyy….n a BIG update on Friday- 27 march…

Bye n plz I m waiting for ur comments…plz reply…

PARTH😳

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Sanayaa

SEE bhai everyone is telling u dat ur ff is not boring
ab to convince ho chuke ho na????????????



yes sis i m convinced now..hehe..thanks dear...😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitingggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
Bro wat is dis u ended on widout tellin what Prem wanted
very bad


Bro dis part was also very nice
Yug Vrinda's story was good
Wow Gayatri dying for a bahu so sweet
so she will be getting her official daughter in law very soon
Prem nd Heer's engagement cerymony at last
I m so happy dat means deir marriage will be soon
Prem is such a sweetheart he called Balraj so swwet of him I just love him

Bro d part was awesome as always

Take Care
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Parth Garewal



yes sis i m convinced now..hehe..thanks dear...😳


Thank god u r convinced 😆
never think like dis again😡

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Dese were for d last 3 parts

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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey parth !!! that was an awesome update... aww yug and vrinda's story was so cute.... I loved the engagement part..specially when Balraaj arrives.. post the next part soon..dying to know what Prem asked from Heer.
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome update waitng for next parttttttttttttttttttttttttttt plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz updat eit as soon as possible plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
Edited by additi10 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey bro
ur ff is interesting
yug vrinfa story very goood
prem heer engagement
tooooooo goooooood awesome fantastic
loved it every bit of ur update
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hi bhaiya,
awww Premeer are finally engaged!...... i cant wait till the wedding!!...... hope Preet nd Prerna confess soon!......
-Pari
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hello Parth bhai,
Could you please start a new thread for this FF as it had crossed 150 pages.
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