FF: THE HIDDEN CINDERELLA ~ Part26 UPT pg151 mar19 - Page 112

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: ~nikki1992~

hey Parth Bhaiyaa

how r u?
i loved ur update!! just superb.
the prem-heer scene was just beautiful..very very nice..a cute scene. the coffee scene was very sweet too. and preet-prerna scenes were just too sweet..just like icecream😆😉. lol..loved the relationshp preet-prerna share.
Virnda!!!! yay she made her entry..and she already noes Yug?!?!?!?!?!?!? thisi is definantly going to be very interesting... do they like noe eachother fromAmerica?? i cant wait for the nexxt update..but do so wen u get the chance, and take care..
~nikki😳🤗





hey sis....i m fine...how r u???i loved ur reply....yes she noes him n they love each odr....hey vrinda never went to america...she waz completing her studies....rest u ll noe in d update....😳😳😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzz asap waitingggggggggg





sis plz give me 2 mins😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Iqra238

Hey bro!!!...sorry for being sooo late!!!.
hey dont be sorry
.. iw as reeally busy in other things!!!.....infact i m also sorry...for being late.... oooo prerna got better!!!... it's really a miracleyes where there is true love there r miracles😃...aww they seem soo tired sitting there...loved how everyone is takin care of prerna...especially preet!!!..yes he loves her so y he ll not take care of her...hehe.. oooo Loved heer's dream..i loved writing it too😆😆😆.wish it was real!!!...*sigh* finaly there is someone for yug Virinda...but how does virinda know yug???..yes vrinda is for yug...n u ll noe much more in next update.loved the premeer scene it was soooo cute and not to mention preet and prerna scene!!!...prerna nad preet were really in for a surprise...😆😆good luck for your exams!!! 😊thanks sis




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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: pisces26

😲After many days leaving comments on your or any ff may be months .

First of all it is superb ff.no one at forum can write like you . I read the whole again as I left it in center some where .it is shocking

your story and real life of a friend is same let me share with you .

let met tell you a story

how can so many coincident I am ........😲😲

1

your story

Heer have a lot of pain she does not cry she like to write diary very lonely

real life

ABC is same as heer of your story like to write diary don't cry.

2

Your story

Prem read her diary like

Real life

Xyz too read her diary . to know how she feel

3

Your story

Heer favorite place is Beach , icecream ????

Real life

ABC favorite place is Beach

4

Your story

9 part

Heer try to commit suicide

Real life

ABC try to commit suicide too. On same date as I remember I was reading your ff got a mail .

5

Your story

DEC 16 imp day

Real life

ABC should not think as DEC ' is an imp day she should be happy as she had lost someone on that day

6

Your story

FEB 8 2009

A character in coma , I.C U , Prem to Preet go sit with her she will listen you talk to her prove your love or show . arranged a VIP room

Real life

FEB 8 ABC in I.C.U and same lines said by friend sit with her talk to her . even lines are same

HOW so many same things I mention only few but there are many things same why like this ????????????? coincident is only one not so many 😔 very sad





di i m aslo worried....i hope everything gets fiine...but i dont noe how everything is similar...this is my fiction...not a real story...i dont noe how cum so much coincidences happened...😕
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: sweta2005

update plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz asap waitingggggggggg





now only 1 min...😃
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Posted: 16 years ago



hey guys y r u not replying me?? i mean when i started there were so many replies...but now...there r only few...r u guys loosing interest...??? or this ff is geting boring...i got 3-4 new readers but the old readers r not replying me...is this ff not gud now...plz tell me...thts y i ask u guys to tell me my mistakes so tht i can correct it...my readers matters d most to me....plz tell y r u guys not replying me...😕




Part 25

The silence waz spread all over…while tht vrinda laughed…n heer n prem too…preet n prerna looked surprised…they saw ech odr confused…then vrinda told them tht it waz her plan to act angry…then by listning to their laughs yug came out rubbing his eyes…he waz sleeping n every1 forgot abt him..he came out n stood near d staircase…while odrs were down…

He rubbed his eyes n saw down…he saw every1 is up n saw vrinda…he rubbed his eyes once again n saw her…while vrinda saw him shocked…he smiled nervously n vrinda ran upstairs n hugged him…

Every1 saw them…prem n preet's jaw dropped n heer n prerna were shocked…

Every1 saw them wid a confused expression…vrinda hugged him tightly like never wantd to loose him again….she waz in his arms n prem n preet were seeing it jaw dropped….prerna n heer were shocked…y a gal who is PREM's SISTER hugging him?????????? How yug noe her??? Y is she so frank wid him????these were d questions ringing on every1's head….then finally prerna spoke…

Prerna: what is happening infront of my eyes???? (turned to heer) heer ll u plz pinch me…I don't get what I m seeing…plz pinch me…(heer turns to her n pinches her hard….prerna screams n yug n vrinda move apart n every1 faces her)

Yug n vrinda realize what they were doing n infront of every1…they awkwardly n slowly move downstairs n prem n preet fold their hands on their chests n looked at vrinda angrily….yug got nervouse tht what ll they do….heer n prerna joined them in angry session….yug looked at prem n saw down…he then tried to speak..

Yug: prem…wo…i….i mean…I n vrinda…wo…college….(while that vrinda spoke out everything)

Vrinda: pb I n yug love each odr….(yug saw her shocked tht how she spoke it out…then saw prem n preet who passed each odr a look n heer's mouth waz open in d shape of 'O')

Prem passed a wink to preet which waz not missed by heer n prerna but yug n vrinda dint see it n said in d acting of anger…

Prem: kabse?? (d word did it….yug thot he ll b dead in d next moment)

Preet: haan kabse????(preet added d fuel to d fire...yug got more nervous)

Prerna: u dint even told us yug???(prerna said shocked)

Yug: wo..i waz abt to tell u guys...but then...(yug said in a nervous tone)

Heer: but then??? Then what yug...u dint u told us....(heer said getting angry)

Vrinda: bcoz of me...(b4 heer cud scold yug more vrinda spoke)

Preet: bcoz of u??? u didn't wanted us to noe,…MY GOD!! (vrinda's eyes got welled up)

Yug: preet don't scold her…it waz my fault…I shud have told u all…but I didn't knew tht vrinda is prem's n urs sis…seriously I dint knew…if I knew this b4 I wud have told u…(yug tried to explain in d nervous tone...but this made every1 laugh)

Prem: (laughs) relax…v were kidding…

Heer: (laughs) yess …yug u had chosed d best gal for u…

Prem: (stops laughing) yess vrinda…yug is rele nice guy…v wud never b able to find a better match for u …

This made d atmosphere lighter for yug….he sighed….then preet spoke…

Preet: cmon tell us how u guys met…????

Preet asked n yug started to narrate the story…

Story::::::::: in yug's POV ::::::::

Once I went to Mumbai…place where vrinda studied…I went there to meet d foreign delicates…they wanted me to meet them urgently…when I stepped-in in Mumbai I took a car n moved towards d office….then at d traffic signal my car stopped….

At d odr side of d road I saw a big hotel waz getting decorated… the hotel waz looking so beautiful tht I wished to stay there….but to meet d clients I waz getting late….i waz staring at d hotel n a gal waz standing on a ladder making it more beautiful….

(prerna excitedly said in d middle.. "n tht gal waz vrinda?? Ryt??" yug nodded in yes n asked how she noes....but prerna waz no where going to tell tht she reads romantic stories n usually 2 lovers meet lyk tht only....she said "well I m a phychiatrist n I noe whts up in ur mind" every1 waz satified but preet waz not…yug continued)

The green signal waz ok n my driver moved the car but I waz still looking at d hotel n tht gal….(every1 smiled)

Then I met d foreign delicates n it waz almost 1:45 when the meeting waz over…I headed to d parking n told d driver to take me to d same way from which we came…driver told tht he needs to go home…as its already 2 am in d morning n his wife wud b worried for him…so he ll drop me in my hotel n they will go there after wards….

I nodded in yes n v headed towards d hotel…but in my heart I wanted to go there…I felt certain attraction to tht gal tht I cant explain…(preet elbowed vrinda n winked…n vrinda shyly smiled)

I opened my laptop to forget her but my eyes were seaching tht hotel only…but no chance to see it here n there…coz it waz ryt infront of me!!!

I saw the hotel in an O shape opened mouth….i saw d driver…n asked him…

Yug: why u brought me here???

Driver: sir this is ur hotel…(driver said looking at me)

Yug: my hotel?? It never looked so beautiful….

Driver: sir its ur hotel…see the board….(the driver indicated towards d board in which it waz written – "the king's palace")

Yug: yes it my hotel…ok I ll go in n find out…u go ur wife ll b worried….

Remembering of his wife he went to his home…as I stepped in I found out tht there waz a party planned in my hotel next night…the hotel had a new touch this tym…it waz not d previous one…it had sumthing new….i asked tht who has done the decorations…I want to meet him…then I waited on d restorant n d manager brought vrinda…she waz in her college tht tym…

She came n sat infront of me…she looked confident in everything she wanted…I waz soooo touched by her happy go lucky attitude at d first meeting only…i waz flat on her…..

We talked abt the decorations…n then when she waz leaving….

Yug: it waz nice meeting u….(we stood up n shaked hands)

Vrinda: same here…(she smiled n turned to leave)

Yug: will u cum wid me for d dinner???

Vrinda: (turned) what???

Yug: I asked will u cum wid for d dinner tomorrow???? Plzz….

Vrinda: u r out of ur mind…(vrinda said narrowing her eyes on me)

Yug: no I m out of my heart….n u r in….

Vrinda: what???

Yug: will u come wid me tommorrrooowwwww…….

Vrinda: no….

Yug: but y…..plzzzzzzzzz

Vrinda: what??? R u mad???….

Yug: yes I m….in ur love….

Vrinda: WHAT??? U r a psyco….i think u need a doc….(vrinda said totally in anger n tried to leave)

Yug: plz don't leave…I ll b sad….plz….

Vrinda: I don't care…(she said tht n left)

After she left I realised what I have done…n what I have said to a gal…n I badly needed to apologize…

Next day I woke up late…and when I went out dressed in d best outfit I had I saw tht the party waz cancelled n d decorations were taking out…I told them tht I ll pay for the decorations n the decorations ll not b taken out…

I searched d gal who did the decorations…n found her nowhere…then I became rele sad tht she mite left coz of me…

I searched her out of the hotel too…I asked the manager for her address but he only had her name, occupation, phone number n room no of her in d reception book…n I had no power to call her…she waz so angry last nite…

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Hey guys soooo sorry again….i m late as again…but I m all set to announce tht I m going to write a new ff….yes u read it ryt….new ff…it will b named as GUNS AND ROSES….so this name is reserved for me…ok…hehe…so if any1 thinking to start a ff by tht name so plz stop…hehe

I ll start it on april or may…when this ff is over….i told u this as I had to give sum gud news on this holi….so happy holi….n njoy holi to d fullest but beware of colors…it may damage ur eyes….

Wid love

PARTH

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Posted: 16 years ago
awesomeeeeeeeeeeee too good very nice part waitinggggggggg for next asap.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey bro ur ff is goood
ur ff is interesting always
update was fantastic
loved yug point of view
ur ff is interesting brilliant
Happy Holi to u too

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Posted: 16 years ago
bro it was fantastic part............
awesome n brilliant......
bro i m relli very sorry i m very much busy wid my study schedules that i don't come online regularly bt i promise frm this time i w'l regularly post my comments
luv
heena
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Posted: 16 years ago
awesome.Kahani mein twist...Wow Yug and Vrinda together.Loved it.

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