JSK...2nd Feb.09'-Written Updates

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JSK...2nd.Feb.09' Written Updates...

Nandlal's House:-
Yashoda and Rohini are praying to Tulsi early in the morning, a beautiful, soulful bhajan is played..''Kripa kar do hum per...Naman tumhein shat baar Vishnu..''(too good,beautiful wordings.)๐Ÿ‘Both of them offering the tilka to cow and Vishnu, Narad and all other gods watching from heaven. Gopis comes there, calling Nand rani jee, Nand rani jee..'' Krishna sees them coming and gaves a cute surprising looks by keeping his hand on his mouth.
Yashoda ask them all of you are here,early in the morning? did you completed your vrat?
Rohini,'' lagta hai Katyaayni vrat karke seedhe yahan aa rahi ho..?
Gopi,'' yes, that also with blessing of Krishna...''๐Ÿ˜†
Yashoda,''what you mean by that?
Gopi,'' your son Krishna, was trying to prevent us by playing his flute.'
Krishna, Yashoda and Rohini are laughing at Gopis.
Rohini ask,''acha, but tell me where is Krishna now?
Ganga,''he in the jungle near the river.''
Another Gopi,''dont know why Krishna doesnt want our vrat to be completed?.
Gopi,''Thats why he was attracting us by playing flute.''
Krishna is standing in his room near a window and laughing at them.
Gopi again,''Nand rani jee, you are laughing at this matter and taking it lightly?.
Nand baba comes there and tell Yashoda,''you can talk later, go and wake up Krishna first.''
Hearing this all Gopis are surprised. ๐Ÿ˜›
Yashoda,'' sone deejiye na Usse, Woh inki liye bansuri baja bajaa kar thak gaya hoga.''
Krishna is enjoying the conversations between them.
Gopis looks are confused and look at each other.๐Ÿ˜›
Nand baba,'' Bansuri, bansuri baja bajaa kar? parantu kab bajaai krishna ne?๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Yashoda,''Abhi, thodi der pahle,woh nadi kinaare wale jungle mein."๐Ÿ˜†
Nand is surprise and says, how is it possible Yashoda?
Yashoda,''they are complaining about Krishna, thats why they are here.''
Ganga,'' you mean we are telling lie?
Nand says i dint mean to say that, Kanhaa is still sleeping in his room. How can he go to river and play flute?.๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Gopi,''Nautanki hogi uski..''๐Ÿ˜†
Nand,''acha, agar yeh uski nautanki hai toh chalo..''๐Ÿ˜›uski nautanki per parda daal do.''
They all go to his room, Krishna seeing them coming , cutely runs and jumps on his bed and sleeps, as if he doesnt know anything.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜†
They surrounds his bed and looking at him.
Nand,'' dekho, yeh jo so raha hai, yeh Krishna hi hai naa?..๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Yashoda,'' and you were saying that Krishna came to you in jungle to create hurdle in your vrat?..
Gopi,''Hum jhooth nahi bol rahe hain Nandlaal jee.'
Nand,'' abh Krishna so raha hai, yeh bhi toh jhooth nahi hai naa..?๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Gopi,'' Krishna per hum vishwas nahi kar sakte..
Ganga,''haan,yeh bada natkhat natwarlaal hai..''kissi ki bhi aankhon mein dhool jhonk sakta hai๐Ÿ˜†
Part-2..continues...
Yashoda,''kanhaa meri aankhon mein bhi dhool jhonkta hai?. she is upset.
Gopi,'' yes it is possible.''
Yashoda,''no, it is not possible.''
Gopi,'' Please, dont get angry Nand rani jee.''
Yashoda,'' why shud not i get angry?..
Krishna slowly moves his hand and holds the chunni of a gopi.
Yashoda continues,'' you are always coming here and complaining about Krishna, mere bhole bhaale krishna pe ungli uttha ti ho..''๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Krishna slowly pulls the chunni of gopi and she says, haay Ram, krishna is pulling my chunni..๐Ÿ˜†
Yashoda, Rohini and Nand baba are surprise at gopi and they look at Krishna, who is sleeping soundly as if he is unaware of their presence.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
(Too good scene and as usual Krishna is amazing..)
Nand baba,''arre,kya kah rahi ho tum?..kanhaa to so raha hai..''๐Ÿ˜›
Gopi look confused now and looks at Yashoda.
Yashoda tells her that maybe your chunni must have stuck somewhere.
Ganga ask,'' is Kanhaa really sleeping?
Krishna is looking at them and smiling, his back is towards Nand, Yashoda and Rohini.๐Ÿ˜†
Ganga says again,''Kanhaa is not sleeping, but he is pretending.''
Krishna looks at her and smiles. All of a sudden he starts crying and rubs his eyes, Gopis are shocked seeing his drama..๐Ÿ˜†
Yashoda gets upset rush towards Krishna and says to gopis, he woke up cos of your noises.
Gopis are looking at each other, confused and lost.
Krishna is still crying, Yashoda hugs him and says, na mere lalla, rote nahi lalla.''
Krishna says,''maiyya, and then pointing his finger towards gopis,'' Yeh sah Rakshashniyaan..''๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†(Hilarious, superb, funniest scene)๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜›
Gopi,''Hamein rakshash bola toh main maaroongi.'
Krishna shows his tongue to her and teases her.๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜›
Rohini,''you are scared Kanhaa.''
Yashoda,''nahi lalla, nahi rote.'' he cries again.
Gopi again,''he is not really crying, but acting.''
Yashoda tells him to sleep, Nand is smiling at him and Krishna looking innocently at gopis. They leave from Nand baba's house.
Ganga's friend ask her what happen?..she says nothing, now nothing can be done, i wont be able to complete my vrat.
Her friend replies, that you take a rest today and we are all with you, if you will not go to river tomorrow, thn we will also not go.
Ganga,''Kanhaa's wish will be fulfilled.''Kanhaa doesnt wanted my vrat to be
completed, he was telling my mother that she shud not allow me to go to river.''
Ganga is really looking sad and her friend also disturbed.
She is feeling dizzy, as she is about to fall, her friend holds her.
Kshirsaagar:-
Narad,''Narayan, Narayan, Bhagwan, Ganga swasth nahi hai. iska vrat kaise poora hoga?
ShriVishnu, ''Devarishi, yadi mann swasth ho, toh maanav apni aswasth ta ko aparajit kar sakta hai..Devarishi vrat to ek upchaar hai, jo mann ke saath saath sharir bhi shudh karta hai, parantu, jab mann mein Ishwar darshan karne ki, ishwar se ek roopi hone ki aass prabhavi hoti hai, tab manushya ke aswasthta bhi uske uddhhaar ke maarg ki baadha nahi banti.''
Devarishi, jab insaan apne praanon se adhik mahatwa ishwar praapti ko deta hai, tab swayam ishwar uske praanon ki raksha karte hain.''
(ShriVishnu says to Narad, that if the mind of a person is healthy, he can defeat his physical illness, Fasting is like a treatment, which cures and purifies the mind and body. But when a mind has urge and a desire to see God and to be one with him or merge in him, thn the physical illness will also not bother him in the path of Salvation.
Devarishi, when a person, gives importance in achieving God more than his life, than God himself protects him,'')
Narayan, Narayan..
Part-3 Ganga's house:-
Vaid jee is checking Ganga, her mother is beside her alongwith other gopis.
Her mother ask Vaid jee that everything is everything fine?..
He looks at her and tells that the situation is not good, he says further that Ganga has fever..and the temperature is high, if it increases and the fever reaches her brain, than..?..
Her mother is in tears now and all her friends concern about her..
One of her friend says, Mausi dont worry, nothing will happen to Ganga, be calm.
Ganga is restless, Vaid jee says, that i am giving the medicine, you hav to give her on time.
Gopi,''Parantu hamara vrat?
Vaid jee,''to keep the vrat, it is important that one has to be alive.''
All are shocked hearing those words of Vaid jee and he informs that the fever shud not go to her brain. Her mother is worried and looking at her.
Her friend says that now Kanhaa can cure her, we have to go to Kanhaa now.
Gokul:-
Krishna, Balraam and his friends are in jungle, He sits on a stone and ask hi friends that what game are we going to play today?..
One of his friend says Krishna today we will play Ishwar, Ishwar game..๐Ÿ˜†
Hearing this Balraam ask Krishna,''Chhotey, yeh ishwar, ishwar kaunsa khel hai? Krishna holds his ears and thn folds his hands and looks at him innocently..๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
His friend says that other day he made Sridhama ishwar..?
Krishna looking at Balraam cutely with his hands fold.
His another friend says that today you make me ishwar..๐Ÿ˜›๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Balraam looking at him,''Chhotey..?
Krishna,''Dhauu bhaiyya, yeh hamare mitra hain, inke sukh dukh, hamare sukh dukh hain, inhein zara saa anand milta hai, tab hum bhi anand lete hain na bhaiya?..
Balraam says angrily,''bus bus, lagaao chhotey lagaao, apne dhau bhaiyya ko maakhan lagaao....'๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†
Krishna is laughing at him and Balraam too joins with him.
Gopis comes towards him and call him, Krishna, Kanhaa,..but Krishna looks at him with anger..and goes away with his friends.
Gopis follow him and calls krishna, krishna please stop.
Krishna ask why shud i stop for you?
Gopis calls,''ruko Krishna..''
But Krishna and Balraam doesnt stop and goes with his friends..
On the whole another beautiful episode with meaningful dialogues..
Thanks.
God Bles You All..
Waiting for your views and comments..
Jai Shri Krishna..๐Ÿ‘
Set_raj....๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by set_raj - 16 years ago

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Outstanding first part....please continue with the rest Raj bhai!!!!! Fantabulouse description!!!

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