SS:The Indiscretion Last Part+EPI, Pg 10

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Abhilasha Sharma

@abhilashasharma

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Posted: 17 years ago

#81

oh oh... i dint expect you to finish it off so quickly... that was a surprise.. but all is well that ends well... i liked the confession part of bani very much.

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Pooja_fren

@Pooja_fren

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Posted: 17 years ago

#82

hey dhans,

what is this. one day, no no one night i didnt open computer and its already finish

but that was nice prt

Poor Bani

she had to go through a lot

waiting for new one

thankssssssssssssssss

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Shamu (my brother calls me that)

@sweet_gurl61

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Posted: 17 years ago

#83

That was a great SS. Read all the parts in one go. Loved how everything came together. What a beautiful ending! I loved this Jai. In fact, I love any Jai but I this one was great. When are you starting a next one?

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Shreshta

@ducky_euro

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Posted: 17 years ago

#84

aww that were so sweet parts

poor jeet anyways............

jb came together

i didnt expect from u to end this ss so fast :(

but cant wait to read more of u

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MrsKhan-Sobti

@MrsKhan-Sobti

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Posted: 17 years ago

#85

dhani it was a beautiful story n a rly good ending..loved it thoroughly...do write more n more n more
waiting to read them
luv,
teenu

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tropa

@moonlitnight

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Posted: 17 years ago

#86

hi great ss dear loved the less dramabazi 👏 keep them coming

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diana

@hooman

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Posted: 17 years ago

#87

hey dhani,

my favourite part was when jai realized that he loves her and actually went to look for her not just sit and become a devdas..good going jai..

thank God deb became good and went away from their lives..

great ending, jai forgived bani they live happily ever after..i just love happy endings..do write another one

nadia

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RANJANA_RRJ

@RANJANA_RRJ

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+ 2

Posted: 17 years ago

#88

Hey Dhani!! That was a very cool SS, I like the wasy you took situations from the serial and gave them a place in your SS.
The last scene was perticularly very sweet and very mills and boons!!

I will PM you with an Idea. Start shivering!!

Byebye

Ranjana

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