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Posted: 16 years ago
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ARMAAN



Hey guys i actually wrote some FF but not there, and i know i am not that good, I read some FF, they awesome that's why i think to try to write an FF here on AR, I think one of the most romantic couple (and ya guys it's KASH but u can imagine as KASU, I put a pic of KASH, I like them more)


Hey guys as u know i can't read all the FF, if my story id similar to an other FF please tell me that i can change my story


INTRO
(u will know about the character in the FF)

friday-morning

A girl is in her room, doing her homework,she is doing medical studies, there is whole one year left to finish her studies, her classes start a week ago, she is preparing for an exams, her look:she is very simple, she is fair, perfect tall, she always wear salwar kameez whereas in her college every girl is trendy, they wore skirt, full make up.... but she was completely the opposite and she is 20 years old. She has one step-older sister Anjali,3 months older than ridzy, she is also doing medical studies, angie has done her studies in london and for her too there is one year left, actually ridz isn't shashank's own daughter,shashank's wife's name padma, she is shashank's sister's unwanted daughter, that shashank adopted but padma hate ridhima, but angie loves her too much and shashank too

Her father comes to her

dad:ridhima mujhe tumse baat karna chahti houn

ridz:yes dad

dad:ridhima tumhare liye ek rishta aaya hai, mein chahta houn ke tum us ladke se milo, aaj sham ko woh hamare ghar aa rahe hain

ridzi:ok papa jaise aap ki marzi

in the evening

(the boy's family had come, they r sitting in the hall)

boy's mom:ridhima kahan hai?

pad:woh bas aati hogi

(in the room)

ang:yaar ridzi tu bhi kabhi fashion kiya kar na, yeh kiya aise hi old fashion aurton ki tarah rehti,

rid(nervous):di aap bohot bolte ho

ang:tu nervous hai?

rid:han

ang:yaar nervous hone ki kiya baat hai, just go down and attack, ab chal warna mom tumhe phir se aaj bhi ghussa hongi

(anjali takes ridhima in the hall, boy's parent are happy to see ridhima, ridzi noticed that the boy isn't there, y then a boy enter, he is behind ridhima)

boy:sorry woh call aa gaya tha

(ridzi turns and are shocked it's armaan, he is 20, 6 months older than ridzi, he is a flirty boy, who had everytime at least ten girls around Him, she is shocked,actually she had crush on him, they wear and are in same class, ammi looked at her, she is wearing a blue salwar kameez, and ammi is wearing jean and black t-shirt of which two top button are opens)

ammi(thinking:maine isse kahin dekha hai)

shashank:ao armaan, yeh meri beti hai ridhima, aur ridhima yeh armaan

armaan(he offer his hand to ridzi):hi

ridhima:hi (she shakes her hand, then quickly take her hand back)

Armaan feels someting awkward, when she take her hand back

shashank:ridhima beti armaan ko apna room dikha do

Ridz nods and take him to her room

ammi:nice room, hey by the way I was wondering if I see u somewhere before?

ridzi:we r in same class

(then armaan remembers)

ammi:oh ridhima, who toped every year, sorry

ridzi(feel bed):it's ok

ammi:tell me something about u, did u have any boyfriend?

ridzi:no

ammi(thinking:i shouldn't ask this as i knew it just from her looks) u will not ask me that question?

rizi:did u have any girlfriend

(armaan goes closer to her, ridzi feel something, armaan too)

armaan:ya

ridz :abhi bhi ?

ammi:abhi koi bhi nahi

ridz:ok

ammi:hey i just want to tell u that i am not intersted in mariage, comitment... my parents told me so i come there, u r a nice girl, but i need time

ridz:it's ok (well I not also prepared my parents tell me today morning, short notice, but she didn't tell him)


Hey guys actually i made also a post inDMG nad it automatically comes there so pls catch up there i will continue on this post. The link is here
https://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1074323


Hey guys just tell me if I should continue or not, pls leave ur comments, i need them, if I make any mistake tell me that i can improve my FF


Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago
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yaaye i am first one very good FF yaar plzzz continue n pm me okay byee

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey nice start i realy like it plz cont soon i fell realy bed for ridhima.......... but i m glade that armaan is right on the point n not lying about not to merry or anyting that short do PM me when u updat nruti
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Sounds gud... Hey dear will b waiting for ur updates.... Plzz continue soon.. n do add me to ur PM list.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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gud work
we r waiting 4 updates



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Posted: 16 years ago
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waoh👍🏼 its really a nice one⭐️ sound intresting😊😉 plz continue it soon😊

"Memories r treasured
no1 can steal.
Parting is heartache
no1 can heal.
Sum'll 4get u wen ur gone
but i'll remember u
no matter how long.."


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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey Ridz tender,pure love is going to change Armaan.but how let me
find in ur ff, so plzz zzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz. cont. soon & pm me👍🏼

Edited by janu1610 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Heeyy ,

Nice part,
really cool. Faboulas start,
Lovee ure FF
please cont Soon!
Take care❤️
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HUH? where's d oder topic gone of ure ff?

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