ff: kiski shararat!:)AK-KG part 3 updated

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Posted: 16 years ago
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introduction


"man..i am in trouble.." shouting aloud he ran upstairs.. He threw the codeless phone to the sofa while running upstairs.. By the time he reached the room at the on the second floor he was out of breath..he looked into the room..no one was inside it..he was gonna search next room but then he heard the bathroom door open.."angad..what happened?.."asked the man who came out.. He was a handsome guy of around 28 years..dressed in a white kurta salwar he was a guy whom any one liked in an instant.. "karan..am in a big trouble dude"..said angad still in a shock..karan looked at angad..he knew he was trouble lookin at angad..his best friend was not a guy who gets worried for most of the things that would worry a common man..so this was somethin big..he looked towards angad again..what can it be? It was only time he came from his joggin..he was still in his track suit.. "kya hua.." karan asked in a curious tone.. "you know what..they are all comin here.."
karan was going nuts now.. Who was coming now.. "who?".. "the whole lot..not just one..my whole family is coming here next week for their vacation.." saying this angad fell onto the bed..

why on earth is angad scarred about his cousins and parents comin?..
If you liked the starting i'll write the next part.. Please do comment..

Angad is our own iqbal khan and karan is the dear hiten... Rest of the characters wil be told as the story proceeds..


Part 1- page 1..
Part 2- page 3..
Part 3- page 4
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Posted: 16 years ago
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The plot sounds kinda cool. I'd totally read it for sure!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sabi2010

The plot sounds kinda cool. I'd totally read it for sure!<br>


thanks dear.. I am really happy to know you liked the plot.. I'll post the first part tonight..do read and please comment..:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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part1

"what are you saying karan?.. I don't think thats a idea.." angad said with a frown face.. He could not accept what his best buddy was asking him to do..karan and angad met only two years back.. And instantly become friends.. They shared a great bonding with each other.. Karan and angad were total opposite natured people..when karan was the silent , softspoken character.. Angad was the cool natured guy whom every girl died to be with.. But nothing could come in between their friendship.. Karan had stood as the supportin hand for angad for the past two years.. But angad was a good guy who never took advantage of his friend.. now karan was again offering his helpin hand..but angad as usual was reluctant to put his friend to trouble..

(now the story will be in angad's view..)
"how can i agree to karan..he cant love me so much.." now i know that karan had no one in this world he could call his own.. His parents had passed away in an accident when he was six years or so leaving him all alone in this world..he never knew what a family is.. And i know he like me as his younger bro..more than a friend.. And what would i have done in this city if he were not there..he gave me shelter, job and more than anything a big brothers love..now i know that its not anythin that is hard for me to get..the only son of the khanna family..angad..had everything..atleast this is what all my friends thought.. Little did they know that i never had the power to take my own decisions.. May be thats the sole reason i left my home in london and came here..to another country..my parents and all my chachu's think am a big business man here.. But how can i tell them that i never ever wanted to be a business man on the first place.. I wanted to be a rock star.. But here no one wanted to support me..i could have easily got through the auditioms if i told them my real identity..latt i dint want anythin through my family name.. I want to do it on my own.. Thats why i ve been not listening to karan too.. In badly wanted to help me out.. But thats against my principles.. And now i don't have any other choice than accepting karan's help..but what can i do otherwise..who thought all my family is coming to india now..and that too to stay wit me?..

Next..khanna's in angad.s place:-)

please comment..give me your suggestions.. Hope you all liked it..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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preview of next part: "well..all these girls you see in these pictures are my fathers second cousin's daughters..they are pretty close to my grand father and dad..this is gauri and kripa..yash uncle's daughters..and this is anjali, prachi and mukthi.. Jai uncle's daughters.. And you know what..when i was a little kid i was the only guy around them..from then on girls were behind me..you see" angad said wit a little attitude.. "but who among these five will fall in love with me?.. I cant get it.."gettin no response from karan angad looke at him..there he saw a different karan.. A karan looking into a girls picture.. That of kripa and gauri..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey great first part...great promo.. continue soon..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey
Great Part
AK are cousins??
Continue Soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: NYPunjabii

Hey

Great Part

AK are cousins??

Continue Soon


they are not first cousins.. Dont worry.. I wont make kripa as angad's sister.. All the girls are remotely related to angad..but their fathers are great frenz.. And next part will give you a big news!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😲

I'm thrilled....

I can't think of any words to describe my feelings right now....!

Awesome concept and first part was mind-blowing and the preview too good.

Please continue soon!

Love,
Ehsaas
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great first part...great promo.. continue soon..<br>



thanks dude:) working on second part..will post it today..

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