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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks alot... Please continue reading and give me a longer feedback.:)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: PyaarKiEhsaas

<font color="#ff00cc"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"> 😲 <br><br>I'm thrilled....<br><br>I can't think of any words to describe my feelings right now....! <br><br>Awesome concept and first part was mind-blowing and the preview too good. <br><br>Please continue soon!<br><br>Love, <br>Ehsaas <br></font></font>




thanks a lot da.. Keep reading my ff and gimme the feedbaks.. And also the suggestions you all want.. Thanks..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ashita




thanks a lot da.. Keep reading my ff and gimme the feedbaks.. And also the suggestions you all want.. Thanks..



Your welcome sweetly 😳

Love,
Ehsaas
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey guys.. Here goes second part.. I had typed it all and was about to post when the power went and i had to do it again..


Part 2


"who is it now at the door?.." karan said while walking to answer the door.. Both angad and karan were upstairs cleaning the rooms and all.. Their servant had gone on leave and they had no choice but to clean the rooms bcos angad's family was coming two days from then.. It had taken all energy from karans side to make angad agree to tell his family that it was his mansion..angad's family was under the misconception that angad was doing well in business..little did they know that he was more interested in music..angad was not interested in family business..and if he tell them the real motive of his indian life he was sure that his family will not let him do that..he was the only heir to khanna properties.. Angad had finished business management in london before coming to india..he told them that he wanted to prove himself and dint want any financial or any other kind of support from them..and after a year to continue his stay in india he had to lie that he was getting better in business and was quite well settled now.. But in true angad was the ceo to one of kapoor industries of karan's..angad had joined as manager ..for his expenses in mumbai..he dint want to live on someones money.. after knowing who angad was and his educational qualification karan dint want angad to do just a managers job that he made him ceo.. Angad safely chose an industry of theirs in munbai so that he could get more time for his singing career.. When family decide to alone down angad was in dilemma wat to do..then karan asked him to take them all to their house..but angad never wanted to do any trouble for karan..
Now after much persuation angad agreed with karan..
They were arranging the rooms for the guests..angad had a big family..in kapoor mansion only two rooms were used..one was karans and other was angads..now they had the work to clean all other rooms before the arrival of family..they were doing the work then that the bell had gone...

Karan answe the door.. He found a courier in the name of angad.. He took it to angad..
"what is this?"asked angad curiously.. It was a huge packet.. "its for you bro.."said karan with a smile.."guess something big..but its not your birthday today.. Then why is this?"..
"Oh hold on.. Lemme open the packet first.."saying this angad opened the packet.. Inside he say another one.. Inside another..this continued for some time.. Then finally they saw a box made of wood..something that resembled old jewellery box.. Angad and karan had lost their patience by now..
"i hope its not any stupid ornament or anythin inside.."karan said..
Angad opened it and both were shocked at what they saw in it..it had a letter inside and a cd and another cover.. Karan took the letter and opened it..

Dearest angad,

i know you must be really mad by now.. But i love seeing you like that.. I can imagine how your face would be..anyways.. I know you would be thinking who i am.. And why i send this parcel to you..well to know who i am .. You gotta wait to know that.. And why am doing all these.. Because i am madly in love with you..
i will give you a clue to find me.. I am there in those photos.. Inside the other packet.. And that cd.. A song for my singer..
Your secret lover..xxx


karan finished reading the letter.. Angad opened the packet.. Many photos were there..
"angad.. Who is these girls.?.. Hold on.. isnt that guy in that picture you? What are you doing with these girls?.." karan shot many a question in a second..
"all these girls are those who are comin here.."said angad with a puzzled face..
"what?.. Why are these girls coming?"karan found angad's answer quite confusing..
"arre.. These all are my family.. I told you na..my grand fathers best friends two sons.. Yash uncle and jai uncle.. Who are with us..these girls are their daughters..,"angad continued.. "Well.. They are all like family.. Now all are living in differnt houses but in the same compound..you know they two were bought up dadu and he never wanted them to go away..you can say these girls are the cousins i said.. Though not real cousins.." angad concluded..
"hmmm.. I think the girls are all good.. And the one who is in love with you know you quite well..even about your singing.. can i know who all these are please.."..
Angad started with telling karan about the girls..
"this is gauri and kripa.. Yash uncles daughters.. And these three are anjali, prachi and mukthi..jai uncles daughters..but who can be in love with me.." angad was still puzzled.. After a long time after not gettin any response from karan he looked towards him?. Angad saw karan, who never looked at any girl, looking into a picture of gauri and kripa..!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hope it was good.. Please comment.. Give me your suggestions on my story..
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey wow great part... lets see who is in love with angad... hope it is kripa... but i also think karan has found his dream girl... continue soon...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey wow sounds really interesting!!
Plz cont soon and pm me when u do.
Harji
Srry really bad at keeping track.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well written!
Who sent the letter?
Cant wait for Kripa's entry
Continue Soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice part

i think kripa sent dat letter 2 angad
hope he also falls in love wid her
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey wow great part... lets see who is in love with angad... hope it is kripa... but i also think karan has found his dream girl... continue soon...<br>



thanks dear.. Well.. Who is in love with angad.. He is a sweetheart.. Anyone can fall in love with him.::) and lets see if he will find out who it is..

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