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Posted: 16 years ago
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HAPPY NEW YEAR

Hi frndzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!!!1

This is a joint fan-fiction of kiyudnive(annum aka yudi) and kiran_baidya(kiran aka kiru)

We two decided that we will continue the story of DV as Shifali didi said!!!!!!

We thought what better gift of New Year could we give!!!!! So this is wat we thot!!

Hope u all like it!!!!!! Enjoy!!!!!

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(DHARAM IN VEER'S ROOM)

Dharam: veer…. Veer. So gaye kya?? Kuch baat karni thi tumse!!!


Veer; arre nahi dharam bas, yuhi leta tha. Purane bathe yaad kar raha tha!


Dharam; puraani bathe!!!! Dil mein bahut badi chot di thi hamare kal ne!!!!!! ab sab thik ho gaya! Hai na????


Veer; bilkul…. Ab sab thik ho gaya…. Ab bas tumhari shaadi baki hai!!!!


Dharam; sirf humari ya phir tumhari bhi!!!!!!!


Veer; sab se pehle BADE BHAIYYA!!!!!!


Dharam; ladhai mein aage veer, jagdhe mein aage veer, masti mein aage veer, ghodhe ki dordh mein bhi veer aage rehna chahta hai magar shadi ke liye dharam BHAIYYA aage????


Veer; haaaaaa!!!!!!!!!! Kyun nahi!!!!!! Tum jo bhabhi se pehle mile the! Main toh shera se baad me mila tha!!!!!


Dharam: nahi….. shaadi se pehle hume rajya ke liye rajyasabha!!!!! Aur acche rajya mantri chahiye……… waise Pari maa kab aa rahi hai!!!!!!


Veer; kya kaha tum ne??????? pari maa???????


Dharam: haa. Pari maa…. Kyun????? Kuch galat kaha???


Veer: nahi phir ek baar kehna!!!!!!!


Dharam; tumhari aur humari pari maaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ab jab sab thik hai toh main unhe pari maa bola sakta ho na?


Veer;bilkul... bahut jald laaoga tumhari pari maa ko!!!!!! Waise MAHARANI SWATI ka baa raahi hai????\


Dharam; bahut jald! Tum toh jante hi ho ki maa stambh ke hadse ke baad nana ke paas gayi thi, unki tabyat karab ho gayi.. phir mama ke ek dost ke bhai ke bete ki shaadi thi. Tum toh jante hi ho ki maa ko sabki khusjiyo mein shamil hona accha lagta hai. Magar phir dosre mama ke patni ke chacha ke bhai ke bete ke dost ke sasur ki moth ho gayi toh uske liye maa waha ruk gayi. Phir woh yatra ke liye nikli……. Toh phir ab who bahut jald aa jaygi (don't worry)……….. ab hum chalte hai tum aaram karo………..

THEY HUG AND DHARAM LEAVES

Veer; thiK HAI

veer lies on the bed and thinks; mama ke bete ki patni ke sasur ka dehant?????? Gets up wid shock and says; Dharam ke mama phir???????? Nahi nahi woh toh pehle hi guzar gaye the!!!1 phir ye kya????// chodna na main kyun apna dimaag khao!!!!!!! And sleeps and then gets up screaming; SHERA!!!! Mujhe use milne jana tha

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SIA AND DHARAM

In dharam room

SIA; HUM aaye under!!!!!!!!!!!1

Dharm ; bilkul............ aaye naaa

Sia; toh phir..... aap kese hai?????

Dharam; hum??/// hum toh badya hai!!!!!!! aap baatai aap apne rajya wapis kab jaa rahi ho?????

sia; ji??????????// hum waise????????// apne rajya??????/ hum ab wapis nahi jaa rahe!!!!1

dharam; kyun??????? aapko wapis jaana chahiye!!!!!!

sia; kyun?????// kya tum veer ki baat ko sach karoge ki tum apne pitaji ke ladki shaadi karoge?????

dharam; nahi nahi! aap galat samjhi..... (laughs and says) hum yeh is liye keh rahe hai taki hum saari riti- riwazo ke saath aapko hamare mahal mein laaye aur humari maa ki bahu banaye!!!!!!

sia; nahi!!!!!!1 hum waha nahi jayage!1 agar hum waha chale gaye toh phir humari maa hamari shaad.....
DHARAM INTERRUPTS
DHARAM; aisa kuch nahi hoga!!!!!!! apko agar humpe bharosa hai toh phir. aap waha jaya ge aur hum ssari rasmo ke saath aapko yaha lekar aayege!!!!!!!!!!!


HOPE U LIKED IT!!!!!!!!!!!!


WELL IN THE NEWSPAPER A NEWS CAME THAT "SOME OF THE TV SHOWS TO WATCH OUT FOR IN 2009
DHARAM VEER KA NAAM 7TH HAI!! DOES IT MEAN THEY WILL SHOW REPEAT OF SOMEYTHING
?????

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Posted: 16 years ago
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is it in 2009 then gr8 btw the story was mindblowing.
Edited by hiri - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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omg. I loved it. Please do continue
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Dharam; bahut jald! Tum toh jante hi ho ki maa stambh ke hadse ke baad nana ke paas gayi thi, unki tabyat karab ho gayi.. phir mama ke ek dost ke bhai ke bete ki shaadi thi. Tum toh jante hi ho ki maa ko sabki khusjiyo mein shamil hona accha lagta hai. Magar phir dosre mama ke patni ke chacha ke bhai ke bete ke dost ke sasur ki moth ho gayi toh uske liye maa waha ruk gayi. Phir woh yatra ke liye nikli……. Toh phir ab who bahut jald aa jaygi (don't worry)……….. ab hum chalte hai tum aaram karo………..

It's too funny.😆
Ur story is so sweet,plz continue.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOO MUCH FOR APPRECIATING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1😛😊

WILL CONTINUE VERY SOON!!!!!!!!!!!1 HOPE THE FORUM WILL NOT BE CLOSED BY THAT TIME
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😆😆 wow Yudi.. nice story.. i like it.. keep it up.. and continue plz 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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😆😆 Yudi... u already started it...... gr8 yaar....apne Dharam ko bahot cool banaya hai😆.....
gr8 start.... do u hv u're nxt part ready? or do u want me to post anything😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
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it was lovly update enjoy reading it very nice new year gift when u update plz pm me

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Posted: 16 years ago
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LOVELY AND SWEET
CONTINUE SOON WHEN U HAVE TIME
CANT WAIT 4 NEXT PART SPECIALLY DHARAM & SHERA
BUT ILL WAIT
SEE YAA
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow that was awesome n wats dat veer bhul gaya apni shera se milna ab to padegi use plzz do continue soon

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