Dec 18: laxman kills atikaya and other ev

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Tannistha

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Laxman and atikaya share a war of words. Atikaya mocks him and his teacher too. And then he says: war happens only between equals, so that both can set an eye on other, you are already degraded in my eyes as you r not even making an eye contact.

An angry Laxman replies:

only a mean makes fun of the teachers, even if he is the teacher of enemy. My teacher has taught me to put my feet on ground so that I can aim at things in sky well. You! Mocker of teachers, meet my arrows.

They briefly exchange arrows without any effect, atikaya blocks almost all laxman's arrows and vice versa. As the fight goes on, Laxman now uses strong words to make Atikaya agitated, he tells him the fate of everyone who fought without the protective shields of Ravan. How one by on their brothers died, how they haven't gained senses even after seeing the end of their uncle Kumvkaran.

Now suddenly Atikaya vanishes and reappears with his chariot in air. From the sky he challenges Laxman and Laxman also replies back. They exchange heated words and sharp arrows.

Mean while ravan comes to high queen Mandodary to find her crying. He address her kindly, she cries out my sons: trishira, devantak, narantak

R: yes I know all fell down.

M: don't you feel hurt!

R: a king has to tolerate a lot.

M: but I am a mother how can I?

R: a mother has her possession on her sons only when they r boys. As they grow up, they belong to the state. Wipe you tears. The war will continue, it will continue unless and until a solution is reached.

In the battle field , Sugreev kills Akampan.

Back in Lanka, Trijata gives Sita all the news from battle field and how lanka is terrorised. Sita comments that perhaps ravan is awaiting his downfall.

Inside the palace, ravan tells Mandodary that yes he is waiting for the victory.

M: what use will be this victory ? who will be there to celebrate it? No onein the city, no one in the palace.

R: victory is victory! I will kill ram and get what I want

M: have u got sita? No! but you lost your sons, your brother, you soldiers in the war. There is still time, stop the war, call back atikaya. Is Sita more important than your family? Is she so high that there no place for lanka and its people in your heart?

Ravan cries and leaves.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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Laxman and atikaya keep on the exchange of. arrows without any effect, Atikay seems to gain and advantage because of his position.

He can repell all of laxman's arrows. At this point of time, hanuman comes in and watches this unequal fight for some time.

H: brother Laxman, your enemy is is the air, you on ground, you are not fighting equally! Please sit on my shoulder and fight frm air too!

L: do not worry, I will finish of this war now.

Some how, Laxman cannot reach atikaya, all his arrows are stopped midway.

Now hanuman forces Laxman to accept his request and sit on his shoulders and fight. He says: atikaya is applying magic and we will deal him with magic too.

Atikaya is surpised to see Laxman up in air, on hanuman's shoulder.

Meanwhile, Indra and Vayu come and watch the war.

I: Vayudev, this rakshashas is not going to be defeated so easily.

V: I know ! seems like I have to do something now.

he disappears and comes to Laxman. Laxman and hanuman pays their regards to him. He blesses them and says:

atikaya has been gifted with a special shield from Lord Brahma. So your arrows cannot do anything against it. To kill him, you have to apply one and only Brahmastra.

And he disappears.

Accordingly Laxman summons Brahmastra. Atikaya is afraid on seeing it but the egoist he is, he tries to stop it too.

But even before he can shoot, Laxman shoots his weapon . Atikaya along with his chariot and its driver, is burnt into ashes in a minute.

A victorious Laxman goes back to ram. Ram blesses him. They along with bhibisan discuss a while. Bibhisan says : now more hardship is to follow.

L; we are not afraid. Today four of Ravan's sons were killed. We will destroy more as they come. We are not afraid of any challenges.

B: I am thinking of that day , the scene when the whole lanka will be full of corpses and no one will be there to cry for them.

He talks with ram and little and Ram says:

Rationalism and humanity will be fully accepted only when men will not need to fight for truth and law.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Tannistha

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A distraught Dhanmalini comes to ravan, tears in her eyes and speaking what and what not to get her son back.

D: please retrn me my son! He was the only reason of my existence; please give him back to me! Else I will die, striking head to the ground. Please give me my son back Husband.

R: queen, atikaya was not only your son, but also mine. Please be calm.

Mandodary is seen silently weeping.

D: patience! It was that which you burnt in your fire of passion. Not only my son, you also sacrificed akshyakuamr, prahasta, devantak, narantak; all to the fire of this devastating war. I ask you , even if you get Sita, won't you see the corpses of you children in her ?

Ravan turning rigid and angry gradually, madodary is weeping.

D: answer me , answer me my king ! how can you marry her turning the burning pyres as the matrimonial site? When she will come , wearing the dress of lanka's woe, who is going to greet her? The walls of the palace will cry : destroyer of your family, killer of your sons! It will point its fingers at you! How will you face your innocent subjects. This war has taken one or other from each family! Your greed, your wish to have others women has turned lanka into this. You are not the king, you are the killer! The killer!

An angry ravan shouts and tell Mandodary to take her away.

Dhanmalini continues.

D;; yes didi, lets go before lanka turnes into a necropolis. Please king! My son will never come back, but donot empty the breast of your dearest queen Mandodary! Only Indrajeet is left ! only Indrajeet is left among this whole family. Please keep him away from the war, which was commenced by you to commit suicide.

Indrajeet comes at this point, pays his regards and say : mother, the tears do not look good in the eyes of the wife of ravan and the mother of Atikay.

D: these tears , which r shown in my eyes today will be shown in your mother's eyes tomorrow. Is possible, stop her tears, tell your father to stop the war now.

I: the war will not stop now, as it has turned into the question of the power and self respect of the whole rakshas family. Now its not time to shed tears , to decrease the patience of father or make him disturbed. Its time to stand by him. I , your son, promise you, I will take revenge by killing thousands of them for each of my brothers. Respected mother, take her away!

A worried ravan comes and stands beside Indrajeet and leaves gradually, heads low.

Precap: Indrajeet shoots nagpas.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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waho as ususal very nice epi today also i missed ramayan but ur update is worth reading just loved it keep it up now i m waiting for indrajeet that wil be intresting
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shruti_gauri1

waho as ususal very nice epi today also i missed ramayan but ur update is worth reading just loved it keep it up now i m waiting for indrajeet that wil be intresting

monday indrajeet will throw nagpas and then my two weeks stay will be ruined by showing how garuda tries or otehrs trie to free of nagpas
man i am so bored
but todayz epi was really an emotional and sentimental epi and i liked the way ravan bowed his head down and move, why rent they shoing indrajeet's wife? she was strong and very powerful lady
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Posted: 16 years ago
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indrajeet is supposed to be a very great warrior and he would fight a lot before laxman kills hiim in nikumvila yajnagar, hope they show it all details, an di am looking forward to see his wife
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Again, you came up with a good update, Tan!! Thanks!! It was a heart wrenching episode for sure with both mothers grieving for their sons!! Dhaniamalini's questions to Ravan and his reactions were awesome!! Aww, Indrajeet, the ever loving, dutiful, brave, son!! Ankit needs to deliver his dialogue properly, when he shows anger!! Today his tone was just awful!! He has been in the show for 11 months, and still his voice modulation has not improved. Sagars need to teach him that!! When he gets angry, he screeches like a little boy, not a brave warrior!! Where did Gurmeet's great portrayal of emotions go!! Nowadays, Gurmeet seems tired, and seems his mind is occupied somewhere else!! He needs to come back to the original emotions he did in the beginning of the show!! I know the shooting hours are long, but this is a very critical if not one of the main parts of this epic!! Sagars need to wake up Ramji and company soon for the big fight!!😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: Mallika113

Again, you came up with a good update, Tan!! Thanks!! It was a heart wrenching episode for sure with both mothers grieving for their sons!! Dhaniamalini's questions to Ravan and his reactions were awesome!! Aww, Indrajeet, the ever loving, dutiful, brave, son!! Ankit needs to deliver his dialogue properly, when he shows anger!! Today his tone was just awful!! He has been in the show for 11 months, and still his voice modulation has not improved. Sagars need to teach him that!! When he gets angry, he screeches like a little boy, not a brave warrior!! Where did Gurmeet's great portrayal of emotions go!! Nowadays, Gurmeet seems tired, and seems his mind is occupied somewhere else!! He needs to come back to the original emotions he did in the beginning of the show!! I know the shooting hours are long, but this is a very critical if not one of the main parts of this epic!! Sagars need to wake up Ramji and company soon for the big fight!!😊

i loved your analysis, just awesome!
and i really appreciate indrajeet, heknew they r going to lose, he knew his death is inevitable but still he stood by his pride, self respect and duty,!though this vanity of him , which he inherited from his father. costed them so much, so many lives but some how i always appreciate him!
as for the actors, they knew what was going to happen when they got selected, but also i think we need to giove them some allowances for getting tired sometimes, as they r human too.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Nice Update Tan, thanks. I liked how you wrote Dhanyamalini's dialogue. Poor woman....😭
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow...lovely update!!! man, i havnt watchd the Ramayan for a long long time....well...now i know where exactly are we right now!! oopss...still in the war!!! thnx tan...

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