FanFic: Dill Mill Gayye Rewind Imp Msg. Pg:3

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Well, I know you don't know me, I wrote this part, and I'll continue the story if you want me too....waiting for your replies..
He was the most trendy, beloved, sociable intern. He was the one and only Armaan Mallik, everyone was in awe of him the minute they talked to him. He was like a magnet, attracting girls to him! He was so chivalrous and like, always said what one wanted to hear, everyone just doted on him for that -- his friends, the aunties and uncles, his patients, the staff, everyone! But it wasn't that he was emotianally attatched to evryone, he had just two buds -- Rahul and his one time almost girlfriend Nikita.
And there was naive girl, apprehensive of the world. It wasn't that she didn't like to make friends, but it was just that she didn't open up easily. She didn't have many friends, but those who were her friends, she was really close to each one of them. Muskaan, Sapna, Atul were her best friends, after her sister Anjali of course, she was her emotinal back up system.
The Mr.Not-so-popular, but a sweetheart, was Armaan's best bud, Rahul. He always took care tat Armaan didn't go overboard with his dates, and always managed everything for him. He had been with Armaan since childhood, they never hid anything from each other. They had been through thick and thin together, and their friendship never failed them.
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First Day of Intership.
Sanjivani, Nurse Station.
All the interns were standing and waiting for Dr.Keerti, they had heard a lot about her, that she was so srtict and all, but they were the new generation they thought, they could handle her! Armaan had started doing what he was good at, he saw this chic standing, wearing the doctors lab coat. Riddhima could notice him checking her sister out. She wasn't liking it. Armaan went to Anjali,
Armaan: Hey, intern?
Anjali: Yeah, any of your business?
Armaan: (to himself) : Attitude bhi hai!
Anjali: Kuch kaha tumne?
Armaan: Nahi, kuch nahi.
Just then Riddhima went upto her sister, and she gave a LOOK (just imagine it) to Armaan.
Riddhima was whispering into her sister's ears, to show Armaan that she didn't want him to hear. Armaan just walked away from there, he was going to Rahul to ask about the two girls, when he noticed he was having a fight with this girl with really urly hair, how could he start fighting with pretty girls? He decided to leave him alone and went to Niki, she would know about them. He was just going to ask her, when there was sudden silence around him.
Dr.Keerti entered and al the interns lined up around her.
Dr.Keerti: Interns, aaj aapka first day hai, all the best, aap log ek dusre ko dheere dheere pehchaan jayenge. Mai aap ki duties divide karungi. Dr.Armaan and Dr.Riddhima, General Ward.
At this Riddhima looked up, so Armaan came to know that this girl was Riddhima. He would have fun.
Armaan and Riddhima both looked up and said: Yes Maam.
She shot him a disgusted look and he just winked at her.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Amazing ! Plz...continue and do add a lil of RM in ur FF !
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awesome plz continue this made me remind of the olden days
n if u cam do pm me
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hey omg...i love it...pl zplz plz..continue...i just love it

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Posted: 16 years ago
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amazinggggggggg part sweetie
loved it sooo much
toooooooooo gooood
plz continue soon
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great part!! very interesting!!! plzz cont soon and pm me when u do!! <333
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cool new fanfic can u plz add me 2 ur pm list??/thxx


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Posted: 16 years ago
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OMG, i never knew so many of you read it and actually liked it! I thought i was so stupid to even try it! I actually completely forgot about it! Guys, let me know, if you are still interested, Ill definitely try and continue, and thanks a lot for all the lovely comments, im extremely overwhelmed!
And about that pm, im not a regular member, so im not llowed to add friends, i don't quite understand it though!
Thanks again!
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2nd Part
All the interns got duties. Today, Dr.Kirti said, that their worl load was being keot less, as it was their first day, they thought, if this was less, then what would a normal day mean. They looked around nervously at eachother, alas, it wasn't going to be as fun a they thought, it was going to be tough. But they didn't ave any idea that it would be a roller coster ride of emotions, love, friendship that would last forever, fights, pranks, something they would never be able to forget ever. The defining time of their life.
They had three senior doctors, in whose supervision they would be constantly--Dr.Kirti, Dr.Abhimanyu and DrShubhankar. Sometimes, the head Dr.Shashank also looked into them.
Well, all this did not atop the notorious bunch of restless interns from playing pranks.
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First Day of Duty.
General Ward (Armaan and Riddhima's duty)
Riddhima was checking a patients records, when Armaan went to her.
Armaan: Hello Dr.Riddhima, I'm Armaan Maalik. (taking his hand out to her in the most friendly way)
Riddhima : Tumhare paas aur koi kaam nahi hai, subah subah di ke peeche phir ab mere..
Armaan: Oh, woh tumhari di hai? (to himself- lagta hai dono bheno ko hi attitude problem hai!)
Riddhima: Haan, toh..
Armaan(murmuring): Aajkal toh bahlai ka zamaana hi nahi raha, kisi se dosti karne jao aur..
Riddhima: Tumne kuch kaha..
Armaan: Nahi.
And he went out of there, to the cafetaria. This was not how he thought the day would be. He was always liked by the girls, god knows what was wrong today. He would teach that Ridhima a lesson for sure.
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Sitting in the cafetaria, Armaan buried his head in his hands, thinking of some plan, he had to do something. He got just the idea.
Just as he was sitting over there, Niki came, her expression -- irritated and pulled a chair and sat right next to Armaan. Armaan was so deep in thought, devising his plan he didn't notice Niki till she spoke.
Niki: Woh Dr.Abhimanyu samjhta kya hai apne aap ko, aaj toh hamara sirf first day hai, pata nahi kya hoga.
Armaan looked ut at her and just muttered a Hmmm..
Niki made out that he wasn't very intrested, so she asked him how his day was.
Armaan: Kuch khaas nahi, tum woh Riddhima ko jaanti ho?
Niki: Haan, kyun, kya kiya usne?
Armaan: Kiya toh kuch nai, par itna attitude hai.
Niki: Par woh toh itni sweet hai, par tum keh rahe ho toh pata nahi, I mean, I hardly know her..
Armaan: Hmm.
Niki: Armaan?? Kya hua? Kya soch rahe ho?
Armaan: Kuch nahi, mujhe kaam hai, I'll catch you later.
Armaan left from there to put his plan into action. Huaaaheeee....Dr.Riddhima, here I come..
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He went back to the General Ward, Riddhima was still there on duty. On seeing Armaan,
Riddhima: Kahaan the tum?
Armaan: Kyun? Tum mujhe miss kar rahi thi kya?
Riddhima gave him a disgusted look, it was worthless talking to him she thought. Now Armaan would have fun, he knew Riddhima had to leave know, while talking to her only, he sprinkled talc on the floor with his hand behind his back, just as Riddhima moved forward she slipped and THUMP she was on the floor. Armaan, all the patients and the nurses burst into riots of laughter at the clumsy Dr.Riddhima.
Riddhima shot Armaan the dirties look she could muster and got up and ran out of the ward. Armaan realised he had hurt her, and followed her.
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Next Update:
Next Scene: Armaan Riddhima in Locker Room....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Aww awesum start 2 ur FF!
Loved it...Its adorabely cute! =)
Do continue soon...And do PM me when u can!
-Marisha

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