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Posted: 16 years ago
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Title: Jab We Met

EPISODE:3
Author: Abeer Khan

Recap:
Shilpa was insulted by Karan...
She met her Mentor Dr. Armaan Mallik...

Scene 1: Dr. Armaan Mallik's Residence...

Armaan is screaming his heads off.. Ridhimma Ridhimma......
Ridhimma got scared and ran upstair towards there bedroom...
Armaan was sitting on the floor near the wadrobe..
R: (worriedly) Armaan Kya hua?
A: (with a tear in his eye) Ridhimma...
R: Armaan..
A: Ridhimma Meri shirt.. tumne gift ki thi.. Button... sniff
R: Armaan ... Tum bhi na... Kitna Darr gayi thi mein... Lao..
Mein theek kar dete hoon...
A: SNIFF SNIFF
R: Paagal..
Ridhimma gets a box which has needles and threads..
Ridhimma starts fixing the button..while armaan is watching her.
When ridhimma is about to cut the thread with her teeth she looks up at Armaan who is looking at her with all the love in this world...
R: Kya Hua?
A: Kuch Nahi..
R:phir aisa kia dekhrahe ho?
A: Dekhraha tha ke aakhir meri kismat mein kaisi biwi likhi hai...
R: kyun??
A: matlab, ab dekho meri haar zaroorat ka tumhe khayal hai...
R: woh toh har biwi ko apne pati ka hota hai..
A: nahi.. tum special ho. sabse alag... pata hai kyun..
R: kyun?
A: kyunki tum meri ho aur sirf mere liye bani ho... special order pe..
R: armaaan..
A: Ridhimma...
R: I love you..
A: I love 23456789....
He pulls ridhimma n makes her sit on his lap... Armaan is totally engrossed in her... he is catching her by her waist... She is blushing like crazy... but this time.. she really dosent want him to leave her..He starts kissing her neck ...her removes her hair.. she has closed her eyes... They both dont want this moment to end.. they want to stay like this for lifetime.....

Armaan is very very very close to kissing ridhimma's lips....
Suddenly the phone starts to ring..
Armaan's facial expression change...
A: Basket ab dekhna yeh jis kisi ka bhi phone hai na mein uski kia haalat karta hoon
Ridhimma laughs at this irritation of Armaan's

Armaan answers the phone call..N without listening to who is on the line ...
A: Kaun hai Bey? Yeh koi waqt hai phone karne ka .. Kisse baat karni hai..
Voice: Beta.. Mein hoon.. Tumhara Sasur Jee... Aur Subah ke 8:30 baj chuke hai
aur mujhe apni betii se baat karni hai...
A: (HYLA .. YEH KYA??) heheh.. sorry sir..woh papa.. meine soccha ki koi.. woh kaafi der se wrong no..toh Ridhimma... Pyare Paapa ka phone hai.. heheh Pyaare papa.. ..Ur are an excellent father sir... mein bilkul aap ki tarha banna chahta hoon... just perfect..
Shus: I know beta.. Ab ridhimma ko phone do..
R: Kiska phone hai..
A: Pyaare Papa.. ka
R: Pyaare Papa..???
Armaan smiles n leaves...

R: Hello..
Shus: Good Morning Ridhimma Beta..
R: Good Morning Papa.. How r u ?
Shus: Mein theek hoon beta.. tum batao?
R: theek papa.. aur maa kaise hai aur nani?
Shus: Sab theek hai..Meine isiliye phone kia tha.. ke tumhare maa chahti hai ke tum aur Armaan Aaj raat ko dinner hamare saath karo..
R: Dinner?? looking at Armaan for his approval...
Armaan showing thumbs up ... he is hell embarrased for what happened on the phone..
R: (laughing) jee papa... hum sham ko ajayenge...
Shush: Theek hai beta.. Tum log 8 baje ajana.. Aur haan..
Armaan se kehna ke hamari baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai..
R: (giggles) Jee papa.. Batadoungi..
Shush: Bye Beta
R: Bye papa..

Ri: Armaan papa ne 8 baje dinner pe bulaya hai.. aur
Ar: Aur?
Ri: Kaha hai .. ke abhi tumhari aur unki baat khatam nahi hui hai.
Ar: Hyla yaar.. gadbad hogyi...
Ri: Ab gadbad ki hai toh bhugto...walking back..
Armaan holds her hand and pushes her back...
Ar: Accha.. mein bhugto... Toh dono baap beti mujhe phansa ke khush horahe hai.
Ri: Armaan chodo..
Ar: Kyun? Bhugat ne se pehle thoda sa Romance karlene do..
Ri: Armaan hospital ke liye late horahe hai.. Chalo..
Ar: Arey haan yaar... Hamesha hamare beech koi na koi aajata hai...
Ri: Tumhara bad luck kharab hai...
Ar: I swear..

Scene 2: Temple...
Once a week Avni visits the Temple... She has a lot of wishes

Avni: Bhagwaji pshsphspshspshs...
She notices a man lying down on the floow right next to her... Praying ...
Av: Pata nahi kaunse paap kiye hai isne... Jo itni maafian maangraha hai...
The man sits upright and sits comforable besides avni... She identifies the man
Its Aditya..
Av: Tum!!!
Aditya...Arrg!! Tum!!! Both pointing at each other..
Av: Tum yaha kia karahe hhai?
Adi: Tum yaha kia karahi ho?
Av: Log mandir mein kia karte hai ...
Adi: mein bhi wohi karaha hoon
Av: Tum?
Adi: Haan mein kyun mujhe mana hai kia?
Av: Tum kisi se please bhi nahi kehsakte aur tum Yaha itna gir pad ke maafian mang rahe ho..
Interesting..
Adi: Tum se matlab.. Accha dekho.. kisi ko mat bata ke mein yaha aya tha ok
Av: Kyun???
Adi: Bas.. Nahi batana..
Av: Pehle Kaho Pleaseeeeee...
Adi: HEY BHAGWAN!!!!!!!!
Av: P-L-E-A-S-E!!!
Adi: (sligtly whispers) Please..
Av: Kia kaha kuch sunai nahi dia?
Adi: Now Screaming PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Av: Shssshshs.. Mandir hai.... Moh bandh karo... prathna karo.. aur nikallo...
Adi: Thanks...
Av: acchi progress hai roz practise karna sikh jaoge...
Adi: Looks at her irritatingly...
After there prayers are over...
Aditya is leaving soon after he finishes his prayers... Suddenly Avni jumps on him..
Av: Kaha ja rahe ho... itni jaldi bhi kia hai?
Adi: Mujhe hospital ke liye derr horahi hai..
Av: Accha ek kaam karo na... mein bhi tumhare saath chalti hoon..
Adi: Sorry mein lifts nahi deta..
Avni starts speaking to an unknown lady right beside her..
Av: Aunty pata hai yeh Aditya Raajvansh hai... The Famous Hitler..
Lekin yeh mandir aate hai...how sweet na...
Adi: Accha meri maa... chalo...
Avni: Feelin proud of her self... HAAN CHALO..

Scene :3
Shilpa is in her room with her eyes closed and praying..
Oh God.. Please mein ab thak gayi hoon sabki rudeness sahte sahte..
Ab mein kisi se bhi pyaar ki umeed nahi karti.. God... Please meri zindagi
mein kabhi kisi ko mat bhejna... Please God Please... She has tears is her eyes...
She is fed up with her life... She wants to end this but she wants her career life
to be good..

After 5 mins: Sister Ann Arrives at her room
Sister ann is the care taker of the orphanage in which Shilpa lived..

Sl: Sister ANN, aap what a pleasant surprise.. please aaye na..
SA: Child. I know ke tum life se bohut upset hai.. hum tumhara
pura childhood dekha..humko maalom tum kitna disappointed hai
life se... Par dekhna... God tumhari life mein mercies ke baarish
karedega...
Sl: I hope so too Sister Ann...

Precap Interns plan a Party... But Karan does not want Shilpa to Join in...

Thanks n please Comment.. Loads of Love
Abeer Khan..

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Posted: 16 years ago
#12
nice FF i liked the comic timing in it,
n loved the cute armaan -riddhima moment in part 3
is this a kash FF???
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Posted: 16 years ago
#13
HMM NICE WORK
DO UPDate SOON
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Posted: 16 years ago
#14

Title: Jab We Met


Recap:
AR moments..😳
Avni and Aditya in Mandir😆
Shilpa ... praying not to have anyone in her life.😭


Ab... Aage..

Scene1 : Hospital
A couple is fighting like crazy n entering the hospital..
Who else can it b? 😕
Dr. Rahul Garewal n Dr. Muskaan Chaddha Garewal..

Mu: Dekh rahoooooool... Mujhe kia pata tera special pen kaha hai?
Ra: Muskaan dekh sedhe sedhe batade ke kaha hai warna...
Mu: Warna kia ..haan?
Ra: Warna...
Just then Armaan and Ridhimma Enters..
Ar:yaar tumlog thakte nahi ho ladte ladte?
Ra: Dekhna armaan mera woh lucky pen ... kaal dia tha ..pata nahi kaha rakhdiya
is gadhi ne..
Mu: Tu Gadha...tera khaanda
Ra : Dekh Muskaan Mujhe kuch bhi kehle magar khandaan par mat jaa.. samjhi...
Mu: Teri to mein...!!
Ri: Muskaan Muskaan.. Chod... Relax.. Deep Breathing kar..hm
Anjie enters...
An: Hi guyz... kia horaha hai?
Ri: Wohi ko roz hota hai..
An: Oh god... Yaar Ab sach too much hogaya hai..
Mu: Chod.. Chal canteen mein coffee pete hai...
An: Hmm.. Good idea..
The girls leave towards the canteen...

Scene : 2 Locker Room

Ermeena and Salman are the first one the Reach the locker room...

ER: Hi Salman
SAK: Hi Ermeena.. Kaisi ho?
ER: Fit... Aur tum?
SAK: Bilkul theek..
ER: Waise ek baat kaho..
SAK: haan kaho na..
ER: Aaj tum bohut handsome lagrahe ho.
SAK: Slightly blushing... Thx😳
ER: Nahi sach.. black really suits u..
Avni.. enters
Av: hi guyz
ER N SAK: Hi Avni
Av: U Yaar hum teen pehle hi agaye... nice
Er: Hmm
Shilpa Enters
Sl: Hi (in a low tone)
All: Hi ..
Av: Shilpa kal shift khatam hote hi toh chali kyun gayi... meine tujhe kitna dhoonda...
Sl: Woh bas aise hi..
AV: kal ki baat ko lekar aaj bhi gusse mein hai
Sl: Gusse mein nahi mujhe aadat hogayi hai..
Karan enters..
K: Hi all...
Everybody replies except Shilpa..
Shilpa keeps her cell phone n takes her id card , coat n Stethoscope n leaves..
Everybody notices the anger in her behaivior..
Er: Karan.. Tumhe itni rudely usse baat nahi karni chahiye thi.. I mean usne toh kuch bhi nahi kia..😡
K: Dekho... Mujhe koi farq nahi padhta kaun kya sochta hai n ways mein kuch aur kehne aaya tha
Av: Kaho..
K: HMM.. Kyun na is sunday ko sab Kahi party kare?
SAK: Sorry.. Mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi hai..mein nahi aaonga..
K: Abey yaar. chal na kuch nahi hota... Please yaar hamare liye..
SAK: Dekh Karan mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi..so
ER: Please Salman Chalo na.. Kuch derr hamare saath bhi waqt guzarlo..Please
SAK: From nowhere.. Ok Fine..Later on he realised what he did... With just one request from Ermeena.. He agreed to do something which he has never done in years... What the Hell..
Av: Kool... kab aur kahaan... batado... phir mein plan Shilpa aur Aditya ko bhi batadoon...
K: Dekho... Mein nahi chahta ke Woh Shilpa hamare saath waha aaye... Ok I have reputation.
Av: Karan... Agar Shilpa nahi ayengi toh mein bhi nahi aaongi..
ER: Count me out as well.
SAK: Same here dude..
K: OK THEN... le aao.. jab tumhe beizzati sehni padegi na.. tab pata chalega.. i mean look at the kind of clothes she wears.. Eww..
Nobody realised.. that Shilpa was standing right listening to this conversation..
Av: Shilp..
Sl: Tum logoun ko meri wajeh se plan cancel karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai..
Er: Par..
Sl: Its ok..
Shilpa walks out...
K: So guyz... Chale...
Everybody gives him a disgusted look..
ER: tum logoun ka pata nahi but i am not coming..
K: Accha baba i am sorry..
Av: Karan tune Hamara nahi Shilpa ka Dill Dukhaya hai.. maafi tujhe usse mangni hogi...
K: What!!! no way..
Av: Kya tum saare ladkoun ko sorry, thank you aur please.. kehne mein koi problem hai..
K: Matlab?
Av: Chod... Haan... Jab tak Shilpa tujhe maaf nahi kardeti... hum tere saath kahin nahi jayenge.. isf she forgives u then its cool.. par agar usne tujhe maaf nahi kiya. to phir i am sorry..
Sak: Exactly..
Av: True.
Aditya Enters..
Adi: Kia hua Kis baat pe ladai horahi hai?
Avni narrates the whole story... but before he cud say anything..
SABHI INTERNS RECEPTION PE REPORT KARE..

CANTEEN:

Anj:Chalo guyz lets make a move.. Mentors ka intro abhi nahi hua hai.
Everyone leaves towards the Reception.

Scene 3: RECEPTION
Anj: Good Morning Doctors..
Interns: Good morning Dr. Anjali..
Anj: Interns mein aaj aap sab ko apne mentors se introduce karaonge... Jo apko career mein help karenge aur apki waqt be wat salah aur maswara bhi dete rahenge..
Dr. Shilpa Agarwal - Aapke Mentor hai Dr. Armaan Mallik..
Dr. Avni Shastri - Aapki Mentor hai Dr. Muskaan Chaddha Garewal
Dr. Aditya Raajvansh- Aapke mentor hai Dr. Atul Joshi
Dr. Ermeena Ali - Aapke Mentor hai Dr. Ridhimma Mallik
Dr. Salman Ayaz Khan Aapke Mentor hai Dr. Rahul Garewal
And Dr. Karan Kapoor.. Apke liye special Dr. hai
K: Really Maam.. Kaun
A: Main. Dr. Anjali Gupta Joshi!!!
K: Kya!!!!!
Everyone Giggles..
K: (literally crying) Itni Khushi....Itni Khushi...Itni Khushi mujhe aaj tak nahi hui... sniff sniff..😭
(Govinda in Partner)
The All leave to there respective jobs

Scene 4:General Ward

Today Avni and Shilpa have shifts in THE GENERAL WARD.
Shilpa was busy in her work...
Avni was attending a patient. A little loafer types..
Av: Haan toh Rishi Yeh aapka medicine chart ready hai... apni dawaiya time pe lene aur zyada stress mat lena ok?
Ris: Agar aap mere saath coffee pene chalenge toh mein Stress nahi lounga
Aditya Overhears..
Adi: Dekho.. chup dawaiya khake soo jau... Warna Kuch aur khiladounga toh acha nahi rahenga..
Rish: Sorry Doctor..
Av: Abey Aditya.. Kia baat hai tu toh hero nikla aur mujhe bachaliye... So sweet yaar. Thank you!!
Adi: Ur welcome..😆
AV: teri galatfemi hai ki mein tujhe aisa sab boloungi.. Abey ghade.. kia zaroorat this tujhe patient se is tarha se baat karne ki.. agar woh complaint kardeta toh..
Adi: kare... mein kia karo.. woh tere saath batameezi kare.. aur mein yaha khada dekta rahoon..
Avni was speechleess.. she dint have anywords to express her feelings ..

Dinner At the Gupta Residence..
Armaan's car stops right outside the Gupta Residence.
Ri: Armaan??
Ar: Ridhimma Aaj Sasur Jee meri band bajane wale hai..
Ri: Armaan Aisa kuch nahi hoga relax
Ar: Nahi Ridhimma Tum Aapne Baap..
Ri: Armaan!!
Ar: I mean 'Hamare' Pyaare PAPA... ko nahi jaanti..
woh kabhi bhi kuch bhi karsakhte hia..
Ri: Armaan..
Ar: Accha Ridhimma Shaheed Hone se Pehle.. Ek kiss toh dedo..
Ri: Armaan.. Hum ghar ke bahar khade hai... Andar Chalo..
Ar: Nahi Pehle kiss..
Ri: Armaan..
Ar: Theek hai agar tum mujhe kiss nahi dogi toh mein tumse baat nahi karonga..
Ri: Armaan ..yeh kaise zidd hai
Armaan Covers his Ears with his hands n starts singing NA NA NA NA NA NA(rock on)
Ri: Armaan meri baat to suno..
Ar: NA NA NA NA NA
Ridhimma knew that now it is impossible to convince him..
So Ridhimma with full force n energy takes Armaan Face in her Hands and Kisses him as passionately as she can😳😆
Armaan was shocked by this that Ridhimma actually did this...He can never expect this..
They are still kissing ...
2 MINS ... 3 MINS.. 4 MINS..
KNOCK KNOCK...!!!
Ridhimma Releases Armaan both of them totally out of breath..
Ar: ha ha ha😆 .. Kaun hai... He looked at Ridhimma.. She was Blushing as she never blushed before.😳.
She was literally Red..
Armaan turned to look who it is.. It was Rahull.. Laughing his ass off..
Ridhimma ran inside due to embarassment....
Armaan came outside ...
Rahul: Tu..hahahahha😆
Ar: Abey teri toh main..
Ra: Jab bhi tu...hahaha😆
Ar: Saaf saaf bol kya hai?
Ra: ha.hahaha... jab bhi tu kuch karne jaata hai hamesha main ya Dr. Shashank beech mein ajaa hahahahaha.😆
Ar: Kameene tu ispe has raha hai.. Saale teri toh mein...
Ra: Chal sab tera khane pe intezaar karahe hai...
Ar: Khane ke baad teri batata hoon ...sabr rakh..
Ra: Chal Chall Bad me dekhenge..

Inside:

DR. Sh: aaye DR. Mallik..
ar: abey yaar... pita
ra: kyun?
ar: bata ta hun
he narrates the whole story..
rahul starts to laugh again..
ar: abey tu tuh paagal hogaya hai mehngai ki waje se.. dimagh kharab hogaya hai tera.. Itna has kyun raha hai..
ra: hooooo.😆.. ek baat bata... tabbhi tu kuchiko karne ke process mein tha..
ar: yaad mat dila..
Rahul laughs ever harder..

ar: good evening dr. shanshank
sh: armaan ab mujhe papa ke sakte hai.. jus make sure its not 'abey papa'
ar: highly embarassed.. I am very sorry papa.. i dint know ke aapka phona hai..
sh: Its ok son.. I understand..

They all have dinner ...


Precap: Karan trying to apologize ...

Thanks for liking my work..
I really appreciate this..
Mein Daily Episode post karne waali hoon..
Wish me All the very best..


Take care
Loads of Love..
Abeer Khan..⭐️


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Posted: 16 years ago
#15

Hi Guyz.. Thanks for Liking my work.. Appreciate your comments..

I have decided to give my Characters a face.. Some one known in the Television Industry. Hope you like it.. Don't Forget to give in your suggestions.Karan Kapo
Karan Kapoor
Shilpa Agarwal:
Aditya Raajvansh:
Avni Shastri:
Salman Ayaz Khan:
Ermeena Ali:
Hope you all like it...
And don't forget to read...
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Posted: 16 years ago
#16
hey
i hve read ur ff nd i really liked it....we dont know each other but i luv dmg....and ur ar moment is awesome
i luv rm i hope i will see more of dem also 😃

Edited by nadia1995 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#17
great chapter! And I like your choices for the characters too....well, except, shouldn't Ermeena be Anita Hassanandani? She makes a better couple with Eijaz.

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