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HiGuyz... Actually... Since a very long time i have been vising the India Forums... n reading all ur wonderful work....
I know that i can't match ur levels of writing but still trying...
Anyways...

So here goes.. Please wish me all the very best..
Title: Jab We Met.....
Author: Abeer Khan
Episode :1

DILL MILL GAYYE SEASON 3.

Internship days are over..

Status of Couples.

Armaan & Ridhimma: The love birds... Its been 2 years since they got married. It was tough, but they managed. But there love life is still the same. Ridhimma still blushes when she sees Armaan... And OUR Armaan.. As always the cool dude.. Hamesha ki tarha Ridhimma ke aage piche.

Atul & Anjali: Ridhimma aur Armaan ki shaadi ke kuch mahino baad hi In dono ne bhi shaadi karli... Akhir Anji ko hi yakeen agaya ke usklie Atul se Accha ladka aur koi ho hi nahi sakhta..

Rahul & Muskaan : Aaj tak nahi samajh paye ke woh ek doosre se kitna pyaar karte hai. Ab tak us jhooti shaadi ki saath rehrahe hai.
Par waqt ka koi bharosa nahi...

New Interns:

Karan Kapoor: Hottest guy in town.. (Ofcourse Ammy ke baad... lekin naam ka kuch toh asar padega ...lolz) No.1 in everything.... Ladkian patana ho ya Padhai.. Karan se koi nahi jeet sakta... Lekin kia yeh Pyaar ko hara payenga?

Shilpa: Har Film ki herione ki tarha khoobsurat toh nahi hai lekin uski sadgi hi uska sabse bada sringar hai. Uske liye uspa apna kehne waala koi nahi. Anaat hai. Zindagi mein bohut mushkiloun se aage badi hai .. Lekin apna sapna pura karne woh Sanjeevni aayi hai...Pyaar pe iska yakeen atuut hai.. Kia Isse apna Jeevan saath milega?

Aditya: Smart, Handsome, Sexy, Par Apne aap par itna guroor.. Ke bardaast ke kabil hi nahi hai ... Kia kabhi yeh aapne baare mein nahi kisi aur ke khayaloun mein bhi khoye ga?

Avni: Sweet n Simple.. Har kisi ke baare mein soch ne waali. Usse kisi aur ka dukh dekha nahi jaata hai... She is extremly sensitive... N of a sweet nature.. Kia yeh pyaar mein milne waale dukh sehpayengi?

Salman Ayaz Khan: Apne naam ki tarha strict . Apne kaam aur sirf apne kaam ki fikr karte hai ... Inki koi shauk nahi Aur na hi yeh kisi bhi kism ke bekaroin mein mubtila hai... I mean he does not appreciate people who waste there time here n there.Kia isse koi special milegi?

Ermeena Ali: The fun types... Ise baarish, phool, Mausam... Bohhhhhut pasand hai.. Har cheez mein koi na koi khoobsurti nikalna iskeliye bohut aasan hai... Kya pyaar ki khoobsoorti se yeh zyaada din door rehpayengi?

Day 1: Locker Room
Shilpa was the first one to reach the hospital. She was totally nervous and happy as well. Woh khush thi ke woh apna khwab pura... Saanjeevni jaise hospital merin karegi..

Avni enters.
AV: Hi..!!!
S: Hi.
AV: I'm Avni... Aur tum?
S:Mera naam Shilpa hai...
AV: Nice name..
S:Thanks
AV:New Intern?
S: Yep..n u?
AV:Mein bhi...by the way... Kia aap mujhse dosti karengi?
S: (Happily) Ofcourse...FRIENDS!!!

They shake hands..

Ermeena enters.
EM: Hi... I am Ermeena Ali... Kia aap donu naye interns hai ?
S: Yes.. Aao... I 'm Shilpa
AV: N i am Avni.
EM: HI!!!!
AV: Jaha tak mera khayal hai... hum kul milake 6 interns hai ... hum 3 toh aur 3 kaha hai?
S: Pata nah.. (Suddenly... SAARE INTERN RECEPTION PAR REPORT KARE)
EM: Chalo reception par dekhte hai. Shayad wahi hoon.
AV:Chalo

The three girls arrive at the reception.. Finding three boys standing there.

AN: Good Morning Doctors.
INTERNS: Good Morning
AN: I am Doctor Anjali Joshi. Aaj se mein apki mentor hoon... Mein hi apko duties dia karoungi n I am responsible for you..
An: Well.. First thing is first... Is hospital ke kuch rules hai. Aap apne cell phone lekar nahi ghum sakte..
Karan: What!
An: (now her temper starting up..) Excuse me.. Koi mujhe beech mein interrupt kare mujhe bilkul pasand nahi hai.
Karan: Sorry Doc.. mein toh bas yehi pooch raha tha..
An: Its D-O-C-T-O-R Anjali... Dr. Kapoor.
Karan: sorry mam.
After all the briefing the interns leave for the locker room.

Karan: Kaisi chandal type Hitler hai yaar..
Salman: Unhone theek kia.. Aap ne beech mein bola hi kyun?
Karan: Aye! Beech mein matlab kia haan?
Adi: Good lord, So cheap.. figthing for such a silly thing.
K: Abey angrez ki aulad... whos fighting.. were just arguing anyways.. apna intro nahi hua yaar,
S:Hamara naam Salman Ayaz Khan..
K: Accha.. Ayaz aur Khan kaha hai.. late hogaye kia?
S: Yeh hamara pura naam hai.
K:OHO!! Sorry Boss. Woh "Hamara" sunke mein samjha..

Girls enter
Av: I think shes pretty.. hai na:
S: Hmm... Maine suna hai woh bohut hi acchi doctor hai.
Em: Hmm.. but yeah.. she is pretty..
Karan and Shilpa have neighbouring lockers... n so does Salman n ermeena n adi n avni

AV: HI mein avni hoon aur tum?
Adi: Meine poocha?
AV: abey paagal hogaya hai kia ... dimagh Birmingam Palace mein chod ke aya hai kia?
Adi: EXCUSE ME... Kia kaha tumne..
AV: SHOUT.. DIMAGH BIRMINGAM PALACE MEIN CHOD KE AYA HAI KIA?
SLP: Avni, chila kyun rahi hai chod na..
av: abey isko dekhto... idiot
adi: how dare u
av: eyh dekh phir muh khola
adi: hm! (n he leaves)
K: abey aise chilagi toh kia hoga... hm karke hi toh jayea.. chalo chod kuch nahi..
av: khair mein aisa ghado ke liye apna mood kyun kharab karron by the way i am AVNI..
k: hum sub ne sunliya
av: accha..n laughs
k: mein karan hoon..
s:mein shilpa..
k: he literally ignores her.
ER: Mera naam ermeena hai..
SAK: N i am salman ayaz khan

After intro they all leave..

Please guyz tell me if i shud continue with the story or no... Par meinek aur episode likhongi... Aap log please mujhe bataye... please.
Take care loads of love
Abeer Khan.. 😉

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Posted: 16 years ago
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kooly kooly very nyc darling
keep it up!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#3
nice start...love the humor! Especially this part:
S:Hamara naam Salman Ayaz Khan..
K: Accha.. Ayaz aur Khan kaha hai.. late hogaye kia?
S: Yeh hamara pura naam hai.
K:OHO!! Sorry Boss. Woh "Hamara" sunke mein samjha.. 😆😆😆
Keep it up! 👍🏼
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Actually Guyz I Have a very Humorous personality.. So u r gonna find a lot of fun here.. Pls.. Read and comment... Inshallah I will try and post everyday...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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heyy.....great start!! lol.....it was very funny!! plzz cont soon and can u plz pm me when u continue?
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Posted: 16 years ago
#6
Jab We Met... Episode 2
All interns have been given there respective duties.
Karan & Shilpa:ICU
Aditya & Avni: General Ward.
Ermeena: Assisting DR. Muskaan in Surgery.
Salman: Rectal Examinations.

Scene 1: I.C.U.
Shilpa was checking a file when she noticed that Karan was looking for a Pen.

Slp: Pen?
K: No, Thanks.
Slp: Don't Worry.. Mere paas ek extra pen hai.
K: (very rudely) par mujhe tumhari help ki koi zaroorat nahi hai .. so just mind ur own business
Shilpa was very hurt by this rude behavior of Karan. But Shilpa was used to such behavior beacuse
she was an orphan plus she wasnt that good looking. So this was nothing new for her.
Par shilpa bhut acche nature ki thi... She forgot abt the whole thing n proceeded wih her work.

General Ward:
Avni was busy attending a patient..
Aditya noticed that he forgot his stethoscope in his locker.

Adi: iss ladki ki wajeh se mein apna stethoscope bhi bhool gaya.

Aditya walks upto Avni.

Adi: Sono, aapna stethoscope dena mein lana bhool gaya.

Avni turns n gives a mischevious smile.

AV: Kyun, palace mein bhool ke India agaya.. tumhare "BUTLER" ko bula lao..
she starts walking.. tabhi aditya uska haath pakad leta hai..

ADI: Dekho..stethoscope do.. warna mein..
Av: Pehle baat... mera haath chod..(Adi immediately leaves her hand)
Doosre baat yeh ke agar tum mujhse seedhe seedhe PLEASE kehke
mangoge.. toh mein dedoungi.

ADI: please? meine aaj tak kisi ko bhi please nahi kaha hai samjhi..
AV: Isiliye yeh haal hogaya hai tumhara.
Adi: What did u say...
AV:Kuch nahi... Yeh lijiye Sarkar.. wapus kardena.
ADI: Mujhe kisi ki cheez lena pasand nahi hai... woh toh..
AV: toh wapus karde..
Adi: nahi.. abhi 2 mins mein deta hoon..
They both continue there work..

AV: Kitna ajeeb ladka hai
ADI: Kitni ajeeb ladki hai.

After the Interns finish there duties...
Karan was sitting in the Cafeteria alone.
Ermeena enters the cafe..n sees Karan sitting alone..
EM: Hi Karan
Karan..(thinking ...chalo koi toh mili flirt karne ke liye) HI..
EM:Kia horaha hai?
K: Kuch nahi aap hi ka intezaar horaha hai..
EM: (confused) Mera intezaar ... kyun?
K: Aap jaisi khobsurat ladki ka ek baanka sajeela nawjawaan intezaar kyun karta hai bhala?
EM: Karan soch na bhi mat..
K: Kia?
EM: Mujhse flirt karne ka sochna bhi mat..
K: apne toh mere armaano kuchal ke hi rakh diye..
EM: yeah watever
Avni enters..
AV: Hi guyz... Kia horaha hai... Abey waiter ek coffee la yaar..
K:Kya hua thak gayi kia..
AV: Haan.. lekin jo abhi Ermeena ne kaha hai na.. uska amal mujhpar bhi karle... Mera saath bhi flirt karne ki koshish mat karna...mein bhut bura thapad marti hoon..
K: ALE... ab mein is hospital mein bore nahi hojaonga..
AV: chal chod..KOI NAHI KOI NAHI

Salman N Aditya enters together.
Salman comes n join the Intern gang.. While Aditya goes directly to the counter takes his coffee n is abt to leave
When Karan calls from behind..
K: Abey Aditya kaha jaraha hai..yahan beth hamare saath..
Adi: Nahi.. mein chalta hoon mujhe
AV:Imitating him.. mujhe baggi pe beth ke aapne mahal jaana hai
Everybody starts laughing
ADI: Tum mera picha kab chodo gi..
AV: jab tum doosre se dhang se baat karounge
Adi: Whatever.. n he joins the gang..
AV: was dinking her coffee n she widens her eyes n spits her coffee.
EM: Kya hua ??
AV: Looks at Aditya... Abey chor saale mera stethoscope chura ke bhag raha tha...
Adi: Oh.. Mein toh bhul hi gaya tha..He giver her the stethoscope..

Shilpa enters...
AV: Arey Shilpa aa beth.. she was pulling a chair ...
K: whispers... Chod yaar please.. mein nahi chahta ke yeh yaha bethe apne saath..I dont like her.
Shilpa hears this and without saying a word leaves from the cafe.
AV: Karan,how rude ... tune aisa kyun bola yaar woh bechaari naraz hogayi..
K: who cares.
Shilpa was actually very hurt by this.. She walking really fast with a cup of coffee in her hand..
She dint realise n bumps into some..
S: Nazar nahi aata apko.. apna drawing room samjh ke ghoom raho kya?
Man: I am really sorry..
S: Sorry... Yeh aacha hai angrez chalegayi Apko yaha chod gaye..
Man: I am really sorry..
S: Sorry..
Shilpa looks at the Identification card which was hanging on the man's coat..
it was written in Bold Letter... DR. ARMAAN MALLIK.
Shilpa was slightly frigtend .. she actually shouted at a senior doctor.
S: Sir, Aap i am sorry.. meine notice hi nahi kiya ke aap hai... i am very sorry sir.
A: its ok.. dont worry ..Aap nayi intern hai right... Aapka naam?
S: Shilpa .. Shilpa Agarwal
Ar: I was looking fr you.. Mein apka mentor hoon
S: Oh.. I am very sorry sir.. Mujhe iss tarha aap par cheekh na nahi chahiye tha
A: its ok.. Par mein yeh jaane mein zyada interested hoon ke aap itni frustrated kyun hain?
S: Chodiye sir, mere saath toh yeh roz hi hota rehta hai
A: Arey .. kyun hote rehta hai?
S: Ab saar jis insaan ne kabhi aapne nahi dekhe.. koi usse apna kyun samjhega..mein Anath hoon
A: I am sorry..
S: Its ok sir..
A: Lekin yeh toh koi wajah nahi hai..
S: Sir anath hoon upar se dekhne mein kharab hoon.. isse bura aur kia hosakhta hai?
A: Yeh aapse kisne kehdia ke aap buri haiin.. I think u r l od looking
S: SIR, Chalein?
A:.. laughs.. Chalo

Dr.Armaan's Cabin.

A: Hmm. Tu tum samjh gayi na..
S: Jee Sir... Mein.. Suddenly some opens the door...Its Ridhimma
A: Hi Basket...
R: Armaan kaha ho.. Pura din tumhe dhoondti rahi..
A: Sorry busy tha.. nways inse milo... yeh hai nayi intern DR. Shilpa Agarwal.
R:Hi. Mein Dr.
S: Janti hoon... Dr. Ridhimma Mallik..
R: Wow!! I am famous.. dekha..
A: Gives her a flyin kiss.
R: Gives him the usual "tum nahi sudhroge" look..
S: Its a pleasure meeting you mam.
R: Same here.
Ridhimma's pager starts ringing.. Armaan mujhe jaana hai .. so i'll c ya around.. ok bye
A: Bye.. muah


Precap: All Interns Plan a party.. Par Karan nahi chahta ke Shilpa waha aaye..

Please Guyz Comment.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great part! Karan is sooo mean. I don't understand his problem because Shilpa didn't even do anything to him. Hopefully he will change soon.
My favorite character so far is Avni...Love how she makes fun of Adi. 😆
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keep it up jaanu!
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Shilpa was insulted by Karan... 😔
She met her Mentor Dr. Armaan Mallik...😃

Scene 1: Dr. Armaan Mallik's Residence...

Armaan is screaming his heads off.. Ridhimma Ridhimma......
Ridhimma got scared and ran upstair towards there bedroom...
Armaan was sitting on the floor near the wadrobe..
R: (worriedly) Armaan Kya hua?
A: (with a tear in his eye) Ridhimma...
R: Armaan..
A: Ridhimma Meri shirt.. tumne gift ki thi.. Button... sniff
R: Armaan ... Tum bhi na... Kitna Darr gayi thi mein... Lao..
Mein theek kar dete hoon...
A: SNIFF SNIFF
R: Paagal..
Ridhimma gets a box which has needles and threads..
Ridhimma starts fixing the button..while armaan is watching her.
When ridhimma is about to cut the thread with her teeth she looks up at Armaan who is looking at her with all the love in this world...
R: Kya Hua?
A: Kuch Nahi..
R:phir aisa kia dekhrahe ho?
A: Dekhraha tha ke aakhir meri kismat mein kaisi biwi likhi hai...
R: kyun??
A: matlab, ab dekho meri haar zaroorat ka tumhe khayal hai...
R: woh toh har biwi ko apne pati ka hota hai..
A: nahi.. tum special ho. sabse alag... pata hai kyun..
R: kyun?
A: kyunki tum meri ho aur sirf mere liye bani ho... special order pe..
R: armaaan..
A: Ridhimma...
R: I love you..
A: I love 23456789....
He pulls ridhimma n makes her sit on his lap... Armaan is totally engrossed in her... he is catching her by her waist... She is blushing like crazy... but this time.. she really dosent want him to leave her..He starts kissing her neck ...her removes her hair.. she has closed her eyes... They both dont want this moment to end.. they want to stay like this for lifetime.....

Armaan is very very very close to kissing ridhimma's lips....
Suddenly the phone starts to ring..
Armaan's facial expression change...
A: Basket ab dekhna yeh jis kisi ka bhi phone hai na mein uski kia haalat karta hoon
Ridhimma laughs at this irritation of Armaan's

Armaan answers the phone call..N without listening to who is on the line ...
A: Kaun hai Bey? Yeh koi waqt hai phone karne ka .. Kisse baat karni hai..
Voice: Beta.. Mein hoon.. Tumhara Sasur Jee... Aur Subah ke 8:30 baj chuke hai
aur mujhe apni betii se baat karni hai...
A: (HYLA .. YEH KYA??) heheh.. sorry sir..woh papa.. meine soccha ki koi.. woh kaafi der se wrong no..toh Ridhimma... Pyare Paapa ka phone hai.. heheh Pyaare papa.. ..Ur are an excellent father sir... mein bilkul aap ki tarha banna chahta hoon... just perfect..
Shus: I know beta.. Ab ridhimma ko phone do..
R: Kiska phone hai..
A: Pyaare Papa.. ka
R: Pyaare Papa..???
Armaan smiles n leaves...

R: Hello..
Shus: Good Morning Ridhimma Beta..
R: Good Morning Papa.. How r u ?
Shus: Mein theek hoon beta.. tum batao?
R: theek papa.. aur maa kaise hai aur nani?
Shus: Sab theek hai..Meine isiliye phone kia tha.. ke tumhare maa chahti hai ke tum aur Armaan Aaj raat ko dinner hamare saath karo..
R: Dinner?? looking at Armaan for his approval...
Armaan showing thumbs up ... he is hell embarrased for what happened on the phone..
R: (laughing) jee papa... hum sham ko ajayenge...
Shush: Theek hai beta.. Tum log 8 baje ajana.. Aur haan..
Armaan se kehna ke hamari baat abhi khatam nahi hui hai..
R: (giggles) Jee papa.. Batadoungi..
Shush: Bye Beta
R: Bye papa..

Ri: Armaan papa ne 8 baje dinner pe bulaya hai.. aur
Ar: Aur?
Ri: Kaha hai .. ke abhi tumhari aur unki baat khatam nahi hui hai.
Ar: Hyla yaar.. gadbad hogyi...
Ri: Ab gadbad ki hai toh bhugto...walking back..
Armaan holds her hand and pushes her back...
Ar: Accha.. mein bhugto... Toh dono baap beti mujhe phansa ke khush horahe hai.
Ri: Armaan chodo..
Ar: Kyun? Bhugat ne se pehle thoda sa Romance karlene do..
Ri: Armaan hospital ke liye late horahe hai.. Chalo..
Ar: Arey haan yaar... Hamesha hamare beech koi na koi aajata hai...
Ri: Tumhara bad luck kharab hai...
Ar: I swear..

Scene 2: Temple...
Once a week Avni visits the Temple... She has a lot of wishes

Avni: Bhagwaji pshsphspshspshs...
She notices a man lying down on the floow right next to her... Praying ...
Av: Pata nahi kaunse paap kiye hai isne... Jo itni maafian maangraha hai...
The man sits upright and sits comforable besides avni... She identifies the man
Its Aditya..
Av: Tum!!!
Aditya...Arrg!! Tum!!! Both pointing at each other..
Av: Tum yaha kia karahe hhai?
Adi: Tum yaha kia karahi ho?
Av: Log mandir mein kia karte hai ...
Adi: mein bhi wohi karaha hoon
Av: Tum?
Adi: Haan mein kyun mujhe mana hai kia?
Av: Tum kisi se please bhi nahi kehsakte aur tum Yaha itna gir pad ke maafian mang rahe ho..
Interesting..
Adi: Tum se matlab.. Accha dekho.. kisi ko mat bata ke mein yaha aya tha ok
Av: Kyun???
Adi: Bas.. Nahi batana..
Av: Pehle Kaho Pleaseeeeee...
Adi: HEY BHAGWAN!!!!!!!!
Av: P-L-E-A-S-E!!!
Adi: (sligtly whispers) Please..
Av: Kia kaha kuch sunai nahi dia?
Adi: Now Screaming PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Av: Shssshshs.. Mandir hai.... Moh bandh karo... prathna karo.. aur nikallo...
Adi: Thanks...
Av: acchi progress hai roz practise karna sikh jaoge...
Adi: Looks at her irritatingly...
After there prayers are over...
Aditya is leaving soon after he finishes his prayers... Suddenly Avni jumps on him..
Av: Kaha ja rahe ho... itni jaldi bhi kia hai?
Adi: Mujhe hospital ke liye derr horahi hai..
Av: Accha ek kaam karo na... mein bhi tumhare saath chalti hoon..
Adi: Sorry mein lifts nahi deta..
Avni starts speaking to an unknown lady right beside her..
Av: Aunty pata hai yeh Aditya Raajvansh hai... The Famous Hitler..
Lekin yeh mandir aate hai...how sweet na...
Adi: Accha meri maa... chalo...
Avni: Feelin proud of her self... HAAN CHALO..

Scene :3
Shilpa is in her room with her eyes closed and praying..
Oh God.. Please mein ab thak gayi hoon sabki rudeness sahte sahte..
Ab mein kisi se bhi pyaar ki umeed nahi karti.. God... Please meri zindagi
mein kabhi kisi ko mat bhejna... Please God Please... She has tears is her eyes...
She is fed up with her life... She wants to end this but she wants her career life
to be good..

After 5 mins: Sister Ann Arrives at her room
Sister ann is the care taker of the orphanage is which Shilpa lived..

Sl: Sister ANN, aap what a pleasant surprise.. please aaye na..
SA: Child. I know ke tum life se bohut upset hai.. hum tumhara
pura childhood dekha..humko maalom tum kitna disappointed hai
life se... Par dekhna... God tumhari life mein mercies ke baarish
karedega...
Sl: I hope so too Sister Ann...

Precap Interns plan a Party... But Karan does not want Shilpa to Join in...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Great chapter! Love your humor...Especially the interaction between Avni and Aditya. Keep it up!

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