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vasundhara

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Posted: 16 years ago

hello guys...
we all are sad as there are no fresh episodes of bidaai this week so i just thought to start a thread where we all can show our creativity..... actually i saw a similar topic in MJHT forum and found it quite interesting so thought to start it here.....

so it goes like this...
one member has to start a fanfic and the next member has to continue the fanfic from the point the prev member has ended it..... and the next one can add his creativity and at the end we will get a new fanfic created by all the members of bidaai forum.....

i wont b writing now as i am not that creative but will surely try to write after few members have continued the fanfic.....
hope to see many creative writers participating😊

if the mods find this topic irrelevant then they can surely close the topic...

*~VASUNDHARA~*

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Posted: 16 years ago

I am trying to write...!!! 😊😊😊 Good topic....!!!!

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Posted: 16 years ago

Wow...!!! Thats a nice idea...!!! I was about to open a thread similar to this one...!!! 😊😊😊 Well, I wish to jot down...!!! Hope everyone will like it...!!!

She was sad. The anguish was clearly seen on her face. A tear rolled down her cheeks. The girls were standing beside her but her grief cannot be understood by anyone. She was happy to see her family's smiling faces, she knew that her gonna be hubby is a nice man and she will be happy with him yet she was not satisfied.
"Ragini."
A girl called out.
But she was lost in her thoughts. She was staring at the mirror as asking herself 'why is she not happy?'
"Ragini."
This shout dragged her out from her thoughts. She looked at her.
"Ooo...!!! So our sweet Ragini is thinking about jijaji..." The girls joked, they were her friends when she used to go to dance class. They started laughing and teasing her more but she was unaffected...
"I think this marriage doesn't mean to me... Oh God! Why I am doing this? Why I am destroying Shishir's life... When my hear is beating for someone else then how can I promise to be with Shishir all the time and in any situation..."
The girls were choosing the jewelery for the dress...
"I think this will suit you..." Ragini looked at the set...
"You look amazing in this colour, Ragini..."
"Ranvir...!"
She turned but Ranvir wasn't there...
"Sangeeta, I want to be alone for a while. If you don't mind, please..."
Payal: Oh yes Ragini... We know our presence...........
The ringing of the phone cut Payal...
Payal: That must be jijaji... We are going... And we WON'T DISTURB...
Ragini picked it up...
"Hello..."
It was Shishir on the other side...
"Hello Raginiji.."
Ragini was a bit hesitant... Why Shishir has called? Was there something wrong? Or does he know about Ranvir?
"You..."
S: Were you waiting for someone else's call?
Ragini was surprised... There was taunt in his statement...
Ra: I.......I......
S: Oh Raginiji, I was just kidding.... You know Raginiji I am so happy... We are going to be one... I couldn't wait to fill sindhoor, take promises.... Raginiji I am the happiest person today... But there is something which I haven't told you....
Ragini was confused....
"What?"
S: I love you Raginiji....
Ah... What have been happen to her after hearing this was inexpressible... Telling someone that he loves her who has already felt the pain of the separation... How is she bearing this cannot be felt by anyone else... All thought she is happy but she is depressed, alone and sad... She is away from her love but it was her own choice...
S: Hello... Are you there?
Ra: Yes...
S: You are tired, I guess, no problem I will call you later...
Ra: It is not like that...
S: It's alright... I will call you later...
The phone was disconnected... Ragini was angry at herself... She stood infront of mirror...
"How can I be so selfish? How can I hurt someone else's feelings..."
She then looked upward....
"WHY HAVE YOU PLAYED SUCH GAMES WITH ME.... WHY HAVE YOU WRITTEN THESE TEARS IN MY FATE...." She then breakdown in to tears...
"I cannot be away from Ranvir" Looked up again... "HAVE YOU LISTENED... I CANNOT LIVE WITHOUT RANVIR....AND IF YOU ALREADY KNOW THIS THEN WHY.....(cried harder) WHY DID YOU BRING SHISHIR IN MY LIFE....WHY...."

Cannot think of something more now...!!! Hope everyone will like it...!!!

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vasundhara

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Posted: 16 years ago

awesome dear👏👏👏 loved it
chalo nw its my turn 2 write...

Ragini was completely in tears n she was blaming herself for everything that was happening.
she looks at the phone that was lying on the bed and recollects those tyms when she used to talk to her anmol whenever she used to feel sad or depressed... suddenly she hears the phone ringing and when she picks up she gets shocked as there was ranvir on the other side.... ranvir was in pain of being apart from ragini and he could also feel the pain that ragini was going through.... ragini and ranvir both were in tears.... ranvir was just about to say something when ragini interrupted and said that "ranvir main tumhare bina nahi reh sakti,...... u are everything for me, u r the only one with whom i will be happy throughout my life............. but abhi koi raasta nahi nazar aa raha hai jo hum dono ko mila sakta hai,😭 shishir se shaadi karna meri majburi hai par tumse pyaar karna meri zindagi ki sabse important cheez mai is special feeling ko chhodke, kisi aur se kyu shaadi kar rahi hu????? ye zindagi mujhe kis do raahe pe leke aa gayi hai jahaa mujhe apne pyaar se alag hona pad raha hai woh bhi us insaan ke liye jisse main pyaar tak nahi karti...( then she stops for a while and says)............ ranvir maine ab tak bas tumhara hi intezaar kiya tha aur jab tak meri shaadi nahi ho jaati mai sirf aur sirf tumhaara intezaar karungi...... main kisi aur ke saath meri zindagi nahi guzaar sakti kyunki maine apni zindagi tumhare naam likhdi" and saying this she cuts the phone....

now m not getting nething more 2 write but guys do continue...

*~VASUNDHARA~*

Edited by cuty_pie - 16 years ago

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Posted: 16 years ago

Its Ragini's wedding day and she is waiting for Ranvir to do something, but Ranvir is so confused he does not know what to do.

Ragini marries Shishir and lives with him happily ever after.

Well i know no one wants this type of an ending, but i see this FF is becoming a FF of RagVir and not of Biddai as such. For now i am closing this thread and members if they are bored can participate in the dedicate a song!!!! and GOTW - Acronyms and the DOTW: Vasu's Vengeance. If there is no new episodes next week we can close the songs and continue with the FF, making it a whole Bidaai FF rather than RR FF.

For now Topic Closed.

Edited by pinkykhan - 16 years ago

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