Unwritten (AR) part 16 pg 14 16/04

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Hi I am Aishu/Ash/Aishwarya (whatever you wanna call me) and i am new to this forum so I thought I would start off with a fanfic that has been in my head for a while. I have a storyline but im not sure who to base it on. Ill post a promo and please can I have help on what jodi would suit the character most. The promo is like an autobiography of the girl and this story will be from the girl's point of view for ages until the boy's character is established. So im sorry for going on and on and here is the promo:


I dont remember being born- obviously. In fact I dont remember much after that till i was about 5.mum has told me that I was a good baby that never bothered anyone as long as I got my food. I would fancy myself as that now as well but ma thinks otherwise. As a child i was cheeky but loved and protected by all. I did however keep the good girl image and still do. I just have a temper at times. Once when i was about 5 and my brother was annoying me, i got a fork, pointed it at him and said dekh, mere haath mein kya hai dekh! Oh, and I was always teased by my brother's friends about me being so cute, so little etc etc. Aur main to bohot chid jaati thi. At secondary/high school, not many people knew me that well. I had lots of friends but they did not know the real me. Instead they saw me as the shy but helpful girl until year/standard/grade 9 when I started to come out of my shell. I was known to give good advise and being smart but they still didn't know me. Well i cant blame my friends and it isn't my fault either. I left India when I was 6 to go to New York with my older brother, mum and dad- and then we moved to england when I was 8. I stick out like a sore thumb in England due to my indian skin colour and even though I have excellent English and passable French, I am very sanskari and know and love my tradition. Whenever I am on holiday to India, I would be wearing chudidaars 4 times out of 7 and would normally speak in hindi. That is enough about me when I was younger. It is now that matters. I have finished my education in England, I am 21 and am at a crossroads. Should I go back to India or stay here?

That was it and when i get the characters will be when I upload next. I'll call it UNWRITTEN for now (as in the song). You should listen to it, it is by Natasha Beddingfield and it suits this well. I hope you like the fanfic and please reply and comment soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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umm...
i actually dnt noe about d couple..
but my choice will forever n eva b Armaan-Riddhima / KaSh
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for replying.
i was thinking about choices like:
dmg- KaSh, KaSu, mileyjht- SaJan, MaYur, KGGK- AdiMets, KYPH- Angad Kripa, KZK- Prem Mukti.
If you like any of these or have any other suggestions please reply coz im really stuck on who to make as the jodi.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hi
i am huge fan of KaSh
plz write iton AR (KaSh)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I think it should be Armaan Ridz(KaSh)......Bcoz they rock.........😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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KASH rock i'll be happy if they r the lead role of ur ff

Kashish
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Posted: 16 years ago
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i think its should be angad and kripa
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Posted: 16 years ago
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nice intro
plz base the FF on AR KASH
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I think it should be Angad Kripa
BTW nice storyline...girl traditional..nice...it was funny how the girl gets irritated fast. I wonder if she will get irrittated by the hero.
Angad and Kripa will best suit the role. Kripa getting irritated fast and Angad annoying her..😆
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Posted: 16 years ago
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ok guys i have an idea to make a fanfic on kash as well as angad kripa. The stories will be related to each other and the second story will be the girl's brother and his partner's story. Here is some info on the characters' personalities.
The girl in the promo(riddhima)- traditional but knows foreign stuff as well. Left india when she was 6. Lived in NY and London. Wondering wether she should go back to india as she is 21 now (i am not sure on indian education ages but in this story she will go to her final year in college even though she has done 1 year in uni at london). Gets irritated easily with family but is as cool as a cucumber with most friends as not many people know her that well. She is a good girl and wants to break free of the innocent girl image but will never change her principles and what she believes in. Her brother and her do not get along as they fight like cats and dogs even though she is now 21 and he is 26. Believes in love strongly and hopes she will find her prince someday but in her heart she has the nagging doubt that she may not be lucky enough to find it. Gives great advice as she is like an elder with tonnes of experience even though she might not even have been in the situation before. Can be fussy but loves to try new things. Is a scaredy cat on the outside but incredibly brave on the inside. Was the smartest girl in her school/uni at london.

Guy who is opposite the girl in the promo(Armaan)- (haven't decided much about him yet) He will be mischevious and the prankster of the lot. He is 4 years older than the girl but due to a personal reason, he had to leave college early and went back 2 years ago to complete it. Is very smart but doesn't show it.
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