Unwritten (AR) part 16 pg 14 16/04 - Page 2

I am not sure I can do them at the same time but there will be two. The other story is her brother's. This one is totaly different in her eyes to her brother's.
The brother(Angad)- Is 26 and a clever and succesful businessman who has very high hopes for the future. He fights madly and unneccesarily with his sister and he can be very annoying. He is funny for those who know him like family but those who don't know him as a tough guy who keeps to himself. Does not believe in love at all but is surprisingly religous. He is going through a lot and two people only can get the worst out of him and that is the girl who will love him and his sister. He fights a lot with sister but when she is in trouble, there is no1 as loving and kind as him.
The brother's girl(Kripa)- She is like the 'it' girl as everyone wants to be her. She looks and acts kindly but is still very popular. Nobody knows her that well except for her cousin and even he does not know her dark secret. She is very popular, fashionable and charming to all except one who is Angad. She hates him but it is not clear why.

P.S. the two stories are linked but will be seperate fanfics.

Hey pretty interesting promos..... I feel the brother-sister duo should be Angad n Ridzi..... n of course the guy n girl will b Armaan n Kripa.....😊

Ok I have decided that there will be two fanfics: one on AK and one on AR. The AR one can be imagined with Sukruti or Shilpa- I do not mind and their storyline will be of the sister and her boy whilst AK's story will be the brother and his girl. Read the Character sketches for more info on the characters as I have now changed it so that you know who is who. For those who don't know who either pair are:

Angad- Iqbal Khan:

Kripa- Neha Bamb:

Angad-Kripa jodi:

Armaan- Karan Singh Grover:

Riddhima- Shilpa Anand or Sukruti Khandpal:

Shilpa:

Sukruti:

AR:

Here is the first part of unwritten. Please forgive the terrible writing skills as I am a first-time writer.

I have now come to a decision. I will go to India. After all I can always come back whenever I want to if I don't fit in there. Papa bohot khush hai par Ma can't stop the tears from falling. They want to go back more than me but they want to give me my freedom so they have made an excuse to me that they like the quiet atmosphere here. They can't lie to me. Ma to bilkul nahin- ek rota hua chehra lekar mere pas aati hai aur kehti hai ki wo bohot khush hai. I will personally bring them to India myself as a surprise on their anniversary in 7 month's time but till then ' they are right. Mujhe bhi thoda waqt akela chahiye. Tab taq main mere mama aur mami ke ghar rehne wali hun aur chotti se bhi mil lungi. Ab toh who 17 hogi. Rrring! Uh oh. Mera alarm baj raha hai aur iska matlab hai ' last day of Uni!!! Although I have one year of uni to go, I have enough qualifications to step foot into the fashion industry. I chose fashion a long time ago. I even went to the best university for fashion in the world! But even then- I want to try something different for once. I suppose it's too late now.

After my usual mad rush to get ready- extra specially ready this time after all its my last day, I went downstairs to see Ma with her new favourite look on her face. I took one look at those bloodshot eyes and udas face and knew what she was thinking about. 'Ma, aapko to koi chinta nahin hai na meri? Dekho mujhe pata hai tum bohot khush hogi mujse chutkara paakar but don't think you can get rid of me that easily! Par ab toh tumhe koi tang nahin karega, sab tere baat maanege aur mujhe bhi aapki special peas aur broccoli nahin khaane padenge. Toh tumhare face par aisa look?"

"Pagli, kya main tumhe kabhi jaane ko kahungi? Ab to tum sirf 21 ho. Mujhe pata hai tumhe to yeh bohot badi umr lagti hai par mere liye to tum ab bhi ek choti si bacchi ho. I will miss you a lot aur bhool mat jaana." Her tears cascaded down her eyes and she pulled me into her embrace, forcing me to shed my tears as well.

"Maa, ab toh Uni ke liye late ho raha hai" I said wiping my tears and sniffing slightly. My routine at the house was almost over and now it's time for my last day of uni!

ok guys i will continue with a few more short parts like this for a while and i won't be able to update on weekends so i am trying to give you a long part on fridays.

Hey
I cant see the picture. I'm kind of confused? Kripa has a brother that she hates or she hates Angad?
The AK fanfic will be posted in a new thread or the same thread

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Originally posted by: sheetal00

Hey
I cant see the picture. I'm kind of confused? Kripa has a brother that she hates or she hates Angad?
The AK fanfic will be posted in a new thread or the same thread

The AK fanfic will be in a new thead but I am busy for two weeks so I can't manage two fanfics. I'll post the link to the other one up when I start the thread. Riddhima's brother is Angad and it is brother-sister hate between them which is nothing serious but Kripa will come on to hate Angad eventually. The pictures did not show up because i am new and do not know how to put in pictures, the pictures i put in did't show up. If you want to see the pictures, type the names into google or tell me how to format pictures in IF. I hope that cleared everything up and I will continue that part today but not too long because like I said i am majorly busy for a while so there will only be short and unfrequent parts until i have more time on my hands.

Originally posted by: swetha10

Hey pretty interesting promos..... I feel the brother-sister duo should be Angad n Ridzi..... n of course the guy n girl will b Armaan n Kripa.....😊

Thanks and the duos are how you wanted them.

Originally posted by: *tiny*

oh AR/KaSh please....

There are both jodis and you can imagine AR as whoever you want to: KaSh or KaSu but they will be known as Armaan and Riddhima.

Originally posted by: cutie13

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i think kash or ak jodi will be the best

cont soon

Thanks and im continuing now.

Hey fabulous part continue soon and PM please

Kashish