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Huduga

@Huduga

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

Nice lovely story.. :-)

"he had a smirk on his face just like normal older brothers do when they tease you or they think you are being stupid. "

waiting for more of it.
please continue..

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Sareeta

@sareeta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

Nice , crisp narrative style; curiosity of the reader is held through the narration without being overdone and certain phrases that are crisp and yet so deep ,tug at your heart out of the blue. These little sudden tugs at your heart are what make you wanna read what is up next faster and last but not the least, the reader can relate to the writer well, such is a the blatant and yet simple narration!

Do continue! Will look forward to the next installments!

PS - You might want to edit the text for typos! Jus a quick observation. :-)

Edited by sareeta - 16 years ago

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