SS: 15 Afternoons (complete) Note pg 2 - Page 2

Hi Dhani, despite being a hardcore fan of Jai and bani, I couldn't accept their relationship in this story.......this is purely lust, not love.........it would be different if Bani had divorced her hubby, you know what I mean?

This has been one of the best SS's I have read 👏the story is very real and anyone can relate to it.

Bravo, that was really nice. I don't know what to say because I truly am speechless, but I will say that thought I don't support affairs I can understand their sentiments, you portrayed the listlessness and loneliness they respectivley felt in their lives beautifully.

Hey guys,

Thanks for all the wonderful comments!!! To be honest I was expecting such mixed reactions!!!! And niruba, no need to be sorry!!! At least in my posts you people are free to write whatever you feel like!!!

To be frank, extra-marital affairs are difficult to be assuaged…they can't be judged on the balance of right and wrong…

I think Jai and bani's relation was undefined, it might be love, lust or something else…it was open to interpretation…

As a writer I wanted to write something different so I just wrote something, as a person even I don't quite support extra-marital affairs, adultery etc. etc. but such things do happen…like it or not!!!!

"Sometimes, truth is stranger than fiction"!!!

But thank you for appreciating it!!! I hope the writing was okay if not the theme!!!

God bless

Dhani

Dhani, I think I liked the treatment of the story. Especially the last part Bani is trying to make an effort to bring back life ! But unfortunately such flings might make you happy in the short term but in the long run you might continue to remain disppointed as you can never have or its almost like a forbidden fruit. It was well handled and I kind of felt that I saw more maturity in the way you handled your scenes in this one.