love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 42

mia dear firstly i wanna say im sooo glad your back and have updated! i was really missing your ff! i even re-read it when i was really feeling like i wanted an update! haha
now coming to the update...WOW!!!!!!!!!
that was soooo good! you know the way you described the whole roof top garden set up, i could totally visualize it! and it sounds just beautiful!!!! what a romantic dinner/breakfast!!!!
and i just loooove how atul is falling for angie! that is just way to cute! they went form totally despising each other, and now he likes her! awww i hope she falls for him too! and maybe i forgot, but whats up with atul calling her stretch?
hahaah armaan climbing onto ridz room reminded me of the epi where he climbed in to appologize! at least he didnt get slapped this time! haha
the way he was mesmerized by her, his sleeping beauty, and how he tried to wake her up lol just so sweet. and he ended up carrying her to his car! awww
my favortie line was when he said trust me, and shes like, with my life!!!!!!!!! gosh these two are just perfect in your ff!
i cant wait to see what happens next! make sure to add more cute romantic scenes for their v-day breakfast! and please try to continue sooooon!

u noe wat i literally fall short of words wen it comes to praising you...ssly i love your writing, it's really professional...n i'm just wondering if this was a teaser, how will the coming part be!!!..great job girl!!! waiting..........

Originally posted by: devilofkindness

hey mia !!!!! glad that u r back !!!! n u r not just back - U R BACK WITH A BANG !!!!! 👏 excellent!!!! n yea thanks 4 da pm .... waiting to read more - do pm me

.....n ya plz do post the next part quickly OTHERWISE.....be ready for some gullal !! 😉

hey sweety..... firstly tnx so much fer d lovely lovely comment!! Totally made my day.....😳😳

will defo pm u when i update ya.....nd HAPPY HOLI!!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: saira_1

AMAZING PART 👏 !!!
loved the a-r scene 😳

tnx hun....

Originally posted by: lwfw

haila mia once again thanks for the update 😳

I shd b tnkin u hun.... if it wasn't fer u m sure i wouldn't hav updated even d teaser...... m soooo lazy!!!😆😉

you are talking about teaser OMG this is sure teasing 😉 😆

glad i cud tease ur senses..... nw u'll havta read d whole ch too!!! M so sneaky.....😛

hmm whenever i read your FF i just go at once the flow is so smooth it just amazes me whole through the reading i was not even aware that i was holding my breath 😆
my god your FF should come with disclaimer 😳

Awww...dats so sweet Shara!! Hmmm a disclaimer huh.... *beware... dis cud result in a melting of ur heart* 😆😆

ok....jokes apart....tnx fer d lovely comment hun!! m glad the flow was smooth because der r things dat i didn't write in dis teaser...it's kinda disjointed.....

Ridz was dreaming about ARmi it self.

i cant comment any more now dear 😆 i want to dream some more about them and will back and comment line by line 😆

will wait fer it.....

sorry for pestering but when are you planning to update this teaserr 😳

once again tnx a lot Shara....trust me dis whole deals entirely ur credit!!!

abt d update.... ws plannin on doin it by tomm. bt m not so sure abt dat nw.....however it'll def. b up by mon.... promise!!😉

bdw....HAPPY HOLI...*splashin u with gulal water*

love Mia.

Originally posted by: sweet-niz

finally ur back 😉
luved it
really nce da way u
explain evrythings
its soooo nicely writen
if dat mae sense lol
really nce
plzzz updte soon
👏

tnk u sooooo much hun!!! dats such a lovely comment...totally made my day!!!😳😳

Nd it makes perfect sense hun.....actually it makes a perfectly lovely sense....😃

luv Mia.

Tapasya @wonderful part. the whole set-up in the beginning was so romantic. loved it. please continue soon

Ravishing_gal @hey
omg... loved this part sooooo much...
the whole thing was reli cute-- the whole 'kidnapping' scene.....

plz plz plz upd8 soon.....

nd thnxx 4 the pm

rihanna @hey mia ur da best gal plzzz if u can pm me wen u update plzzzzzzz 😳 😛 👏

hdpatel @wow....dat was realli damn goood
plzz continue

tnk u all fer ur abso. wonderful comments!!!! 😳😳

Uur lovely comments r wat keep me in d line...otherwisw trust me i wud hav probably stopped lon gtime back!!!!😆😆

M really glad u all liked it......plz keep tuned in fer d whole ch.

Nd HAPPY HOLI guys......

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: hira_786

Hey Mia!!
wher hav u been???
neways Welcum baccc yar!!
realli missed ur FF😳..

k back to da part!!
Dis part was jussss superbbb hun..
Luveeed da way u described the arrangement.. As if like m watchin on da Tv or sumthin😳😆..
If m nah mistaked in it AR's first date??
umm its guna be blassst den..

plzzz udn takee too long to update again..
m eagerlii waitin to read da nex part yar..
plzzz cont soon..
n memba to Pm me😳

Lotssssa luv;Hira😛

hey hira.....missed u lots hun!!!!!

firstly tnx a lot fer ur lovely lovely comment lol.....as always dey left me grinnin widely...!!!!😳😳

Nd yup...it's der first date.....nd trust me its gonna be awesum....I'll make sure of dat!!! I knw m kinda runnin real late...abt a more than a month late.....bt d ff will pick up speed nw......

once again tnx fer d comment lol.......nd....HAPPY HOLI......

luv Mia.

hi, just read yur prt, it was awesome, and i knw tht the next prt will be more awesomer thn this. so carry on writting fabulous prts 👏

Originally posted by: lwfw

tnx love.....abso adored ur comment......made me c it d way u interpret it!!!

luv Mia.

hey mia
long come back yaar iwas waitin 4u
ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh....... jus luv ur ff ..... 😃
luved da prt 👏
cont super sooooooooooooooonn
luv ya n tak care
mahru

ooo intezaar ka phal meetha hota hai! 😳
I liked the way Ridz woke up and touched him and then fell asleep smiling again! that's something I would SOOOO do! 😆
good job as usual! can't wait for the next part Mia! 😊

Shweta

mia 😳 happy holi to you dear, hope you had a nice one with lots of colour
for me gulal 😉 for you purple colour hope you will like it 😉

me waiting for your continued FF 😍

dear your words make my imagination run wild 🤣
hope my comments will make you some more teaser 😳
the way serial is running i very much needed your FF
and thanks a bunch of it 🤗

hehe anything i catch about you 😉 , courtesy my daugty 😆 she just loves her LA (english ) the LA teacher 😳

take care 😳

Originally posted by: Catwoman

Amazing my god woman u run rings around my attempts 👏

Aweee Mia u writting is expanding into just simple beauty!!...gosh love Armaan in this ff 😊

Kat

tnx Kat....😳😳

Missed u hun......hw r ya???

It's binn abso ages.....just caught up wid ur ff.....nd as always....simply fab hun!!! love the whole scenario....too gud!!!!👏👏

luv Mia.

welcome back Mia,
i so much missed your ff.

loved the little sneak peek 👏 👏