love comes only once (ff), Ch. 9, Pg 55 - Page 41

Originally posted by: pixiecuty

This one's for all you guys.....

I know it's bin absolute ages since I updated... life's bin so so crazy lately... 😆 😉
no problem dear now you came up with the best teaser ever i am fine 😳
Just wanna tnk all u guys fer not forgettin me... love u all!!!!

no we have not forgotten and we wont let you forget us also 😉



Chapter 9

Calling Angie, Atul gazed around at the whole set-up. Waiting for the all clear, he shook his head in exasperation over Armaan. Though he had to admit, once the guy got over his reluctance and his absolute denial, he was a steam roller!! In less than 2 hours he had come up with all the arrangements...

hmm how do you put emotions so well in the words 👏👏 i could just imagine our dear atul doing this 😆
Their little roof-top garden was set with thousands of twinkling small fairy lights. There were basins of water set with floating flowers and minutely small lanterns were hung all over the climbing treeses of the vines that enguffled the whole garden.

Gentle chimes set against the over hanging were twinkling softly, playing a gentle rythym with the mild breeze and to glaze it all over the soft grass was strewn with tentatively sparkling mist.

hehe me teaching adjective to my daughty can find so many here 😆 but
seriously how do you right like this , is excellent yaar 👏👏

The night itself was soft, magical with its spotted clouds and shying stars. Even the breeze had tapered down to caressing tones. The slight drizzle was touching the petals, sprinkling crushed diamonds trapping the light into thousands of subdued shiny rays.


In the middle of it all Armaan had set the table, a low rung table with reclining chairs. The whole shying display of soft lights threw a shadow over the table, giving it a warm cozy feeling. The lone small candle was the only accessory complementing the sheer elegance of crystal glasses set on shimmering tablecloth.
😍 i cann nicely imagine this too. how romantic 😳

Talk about a valentine's night or in this case morning dinner, thought Atul waiting for Angi to pick up.
Tonight had been a night of some very very interesting revelations!!
agree to it 😆 i would love to know the talk between atul and Armi 😉

Listening to a very sleepy 'hello' from Angi, Atul automatically smiled coughing out,
"Listen stretch, Armaan will be there in like 15 mins. Ridz is sleeping na??... Ya ya good, don't wake her up and get out of your room. The kids need privacy!!"
😉 my imaginations over flowed here 😆
Smiling even more widely at her string of curses, Atul cut her off,
"Stretch, isn't it obvious! You come out in Armaan's car... the one your sister stole tonight....

hehe loved it yaar 👏👏
Grinning widely at her hissing..... Atul corrected,
"ok.... borrowed not stole... and pick me up from here. Meanwhile Armaan will get Ridz here... get it??"

very nice thought Angie seems to be in adventures mode 😉

Taking her abrupt hang up as a sign of approval, Atul chuckled. She sure got into his skin and he had a hunch he was pretty much treading the same path as Armaan.

would love to see this too 😳

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Hanging on to the pipe, Armaan chided himself... irritated at the world in general.
"Girls... he thought in exasperation.... ' you give them an inch and they take over your whole world!!'

🤣so Arman knows that world has gone upside down 😆 good for him.

hope this happens for theArmi in the serial too 😉 Painstakingly pulling himself upward, he mutterred,

'That Angi!! She couldn't have made this a little easier for him... she could have just let him in through the back door... but noooo!!' Armaan mimicked,
'This way is more romantic she says... '

why he agreed them 😉
poor guy what and all he will end up doing now 😆

Climbing through the last remaining inches, Armaan dropped lightly over the balcony catching his breath... only to loose it again as he looked into her window.

this is the best line i felt , again nice thoughts yaar, catching his breath .. only to loose it again , 👏👏👏 just loved this sentence so simple yet shows how captivated he is by ridz 😆


Once again he lost himself in her world... marvelling at the deep contentment that inevitably stole through his soul enchanting his spirit.
She looked so captivating... even when sleeping her lips were slightly upturned like she was smiling in her dreams.
He found himself yearning to be the part of that dream.
'No', he chucked softly, 'not just a part of her dream, but her dream.'

hehe whole of this na is very very romantic yaar 😆 well done 👏

Walking into her room his eyes already adjusted to the dim glow thrown by the moon, Armaan reached her bedside leaning over to softly whisper her name.

😆 hmm i hoope they show the same thing in serial also 😳
Smiling at her tching at being disturbed, he tenderly smoothed a lock of stray hair from her face... amused at her gentle grumbling. Going down he reflected admiringly at the total control she had over the whole situation.

yet again one more good stuff yaar 👏👏 you imaginations is wild 😉
Even before he felt the gentlest breeze of love, she had it all enguffled around her, not just enguffled, but expertly twisted into her persona.
Shaking himself at her sigh, Armaan nudged her with slightly more force this time.
Turning on her bed, Ridhima felt a strange nudge. Trying to shift her mind from beyond the mist of dreams, she tried to concentrate. Opening one eye she peered around sleepily, seeing a faint outline of Armaan.
Smiling, she lifted her hand slipping it through his hair before tucking his hand with hers and promptly fell asleep once again.

hehe another magical one 😉 thank god poor arman did faint at her touch 😆

Bubbling with laughter over her behaviour, Armaan tried to free his hand from her grasp. He couldn't believe she just fell right back to sleep once again!! Just like she was living a dream...

hmm wonder what he will do if he really comes to know that he was in her dreams 😉
Irritated with his attempts, Armaan wrapped the sheet around her, slipping his other hand under her waist fluidly lifting her off the bed while tucking her head on his shoulder... amazed at the way she just shifted herself adjusting to his embrace. Shaking his head, he moved towards the door, taking care not to make any noise.

👏👏👏 was english your favourite subject during school 😉
Stealing softly through the back door, Armaan reached his car, adjusting her on the seat...
thank god he used the back door this time 😉

Feeling a little cold, Ridhima wrapped the sheet tightly around her and tried to stretch... finding her feet tucked beneath her, she abruptly opened her eyes... a little frightened... with a scream lodged in her throat!
Finding a finger on her lips, she heard a soft whisper,

"Trust me"...

Without even turning she settled back in the seat with a smile, closing her eyes... all the strain gone from her stance.

As she felt him move towards the drivers seat, she softly sighed,
"With my life"

OMG you do have way with words yaar, see you could have just mentioned whisper but no you will say soft whisper and it becomes very nice to read them👏

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Looking a little aprehensively as Atul drove in on the bike, Angi tried to sound flippant... "Do you even know how to drive this thing?"
where ar they going 😆
Amused at her hesitancy, Atul smiled,
"Come on stretch, where's your sense of adventure."
On a wink he added,
"Don't worry... won't let you fall"
same as serial atul, oh i simply love this guy😳

Tossing back her hair, Angali climbed onto the back on a huff,
"Well you had better be a damn good driver!"
hehe very much angie style too 😆

Suddenly revving up, Atul laughed out when Angi clutched at him...
"Trust me"

And oddly enough Angi did just that...

hmm when will you continue 😆

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This is just a part of the ch. guys...

I promised Shara I'll update today.... so here's d teaser....

thanks it was indeed a very much of teaser, i am waiting for the AR scene when she wokes up in the morning 😍
Hope u liked it..... 😉 😉 ... nd plz do leave ur frank comments...

liked it 😆oh i loved it 😉do not have words to express it yaar 😳

luv Mia.

luv shara 🤗🤗

Originally posted by: jia..

😳Miaaaaaaaaaa.............* a big huggie frm my side*.🤗

heyyyy Jiaaa..... *running towards you for dat big hug* 😃

Missed u soooooooo much dear😳

Awww.... me missed u too hun.... more dan i can say!!!!😉

Coming to the ff well this time i can just say

" WAT A COMEBACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

I Mean it was absolutely amazing and mesmerizing as always...........👏

Tnx sweety... as always ur comment bought dis huge grin on my face....

This time the start was truly a phenomenal one.........👏

glad u thought so.... though dis is just the begginin... like i said the teaser stuff.... m gonna improvise on it all!!!

So it finally dawned upon our dear darling hero that he is in love😆😆😳

Yup finally... he's in the boat... rocki ng though it still is... but m sure ridz won't let him fall 😆😆😉.... nd if she does don't worry hum hain na...sambhal lenge!!😆😛

But i must emphisize here that the entire setup was excellently and brilliantly put together once again by u.

"Their little roof-top garden was set with thousands of twinkling small fairy lights. There were basins of water set with floating flowers and minutely small lanterns were hung all over the climbing treeses of the vines that enguffled the whole garden.

Gentle chimes set against the over hanging were twinkling softly, playing a gentle rythym with the mild breeze and to glaze it all over the soft grass was strewn with tentatively sparkling mist.

The night itself was soft, magical with its spotted clouds and shying stars. Even the breeze had tapered down to caressing tones. The slight drizzle was touching the petals, sprinkling crushed diamonds trapping the light into thousands of subdued shiny rays.

In the middle of it all Armaan had set the table, a low rung table with reclining chairs. The whole shying display of soft lights threw a shadow over the table, giving it a warm cozy feeling. The lone small candle was the only accessory complementing the sheer elegance of crystal glasses set on shimmering tablecloth"

My gosh how do manage to achieve such a remarkable feat again and again????????? I mean that those lines are just out of the world!!!!!!!!!!!!

Once again Jia... tnk u so much for pennin down such a sweet comment hun!! So totally made my day... nd gave me a nudge to write the whole chapter....😊

Wanted the set-up to be wildly romantic... after all dis is der first date...

And then the entire AA scenario😆😆😆...........with atul telling angie " Give the kids some privacy" was like an icing on the cake. BRILLIANT is just the word here that i am left with as usual....................😳

m so so glad u liked d AA scene... i simply love writin abt dem....esp. Atul...he's so entertainin...

And now coming to the show stealer..................ARMAAN ofcourse😳😳

Well u hav just managed to make fall for him a 100000th time !!!!!!!!!!

To surprise is lady love he almost sort of lands up kiddnapping her😆😆

I knw d poor poor thing.... bechara kaha romance ke chakkar mein kidnapper ban gaya!! But... seriously who wud mind gettin kidnapped by such a hunk!!!😉

Well u cant say kiddnapping here but landing up at in her bedroom climbing up the pipe as usual (this time courtesy anjie)😆

I swear... bechara Armaan yaar!! kaha he ws used to girls dancin to his tune nd nw... he's dancin to their's!!!

😆 .............And then just sweeping her away was one of those truly fantastic ideas of yours which now i falling short of words to describe................😳😳 And our lady in love saying "With my life" was like decorating the cake with cheeries and sugar roses.......😳

cheries nd sugar roses....wow!! u sure know hw to ice-up a delectable concoction hun.... my mouth's waterin...nw i want cake!!!😆😉

Okkkkkkk so now as usual u hav landed up making me really impatient for the next part as always...............More this time bcoz i cant just wait for ridz's reaction.................i mean its gonna officially be their first date rite?????????

yup...der official first date. Promise ur gonna love it!!😊

AND DARE u take such a long time to update😡😡😡.....................

nope sweety.... d whole ch. will be up by sun latest....

Also ur writing skills hav the same old out of the world charm..........dont feel that u hav touch bcoz i feel that u hav come back with even more sharpened skills now..................😳😳

awww...dats so so sweet of u!!! but seriously i feel dat dey need a lot more practise nw......

But there is one thing that u hav forgotten i guess and that is how much i adore ur lengthy parts...............its like the more the merrier.............😳

hw can i ever forget dat hun!!! don't worry d whole ch's lengthy as usual....u just be ready to write a lengthy comment....😉

So darling i want a super long continuation of this chapter frm u and IT BETTER BE FAST........................or else i am coming with a big danda behind u to Mel.........................

ofcourse dont forget to pm me............

Love u

Jia😳

tnx so much jia.....loved readin ur comment!!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: yamnovbloom

thanks it had been days to read ur wonderfull FF were u a writer or a reporter earlier really u r acting as magician of expressing feling in words.
its just muahhhhhhhhhhhhhh
😳
😳

tnk u sooo much hun.....m really glad u liked it!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: prernawaghray

hi mia
what a comeback sweety awesome part yaar u totally rocked the part n if tthis was a teaser matlab picture(part) abhi baki hai wow simply superb
n i just loved the part where armi says trust me n ridz says with my life aawwwwwwwwwww 😳 it was soooooo cute
but this ones fgor u
👏

tnx so so much sweety.... missed u all ya!!!!

m really happy u liked dat part.....its my fav one too

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: srimitt

Mia Mia....

OMG..thanks for updating and the PM of course. The teaser trailer is amazing!!!!! I can't wait for the actual movie..will be waiting impatiently today for your whole update.

-Priya

hey priya.....tnk u so much for d lovely comment hun!!! m really sorry bt d whole ch will be up latest by sun... hope u don't mind waitin fer a bit.

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: marisa

oh mia 🤗 whr hav u been yar?i ws so waiting 4 ur update 😛 thnx a ton 4ur PM..thts soo sweet of u. i simply luved ths teaser part 👏 👏 beautifuly wriiten.climbin thru balcony reminds me of som scenes of show.wish they hav shown such awesome moment thr 😍 😍 ..its wonderful..

tnx a lot fer d wonderful comment marissa......nd m really sorry fer d long delay!!!

bt promise dis won't happen again......

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: Vieledbeauty

Yayyyy!! Back.. after such a long time

tnx sweety.....will wait fer d update!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: dmg_sonia

hey mia

wow loved the pt...armi almost kidnapped her hehe....poor chick,i wonder where he is taking her....n yea angie's advice hehe climb n go hehe....k coming 2 aa they r dam kool yaar....n in short wonderful,mind-blowing part...totally rocking...do continue soon

hey sonia.....it's bin so long!!! tnx so much fer d lovely comment hun.....

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: ifrahnaquash

Miiiiiaaaaaa! hiiiii!! *runs in slow motion towards Mia n hugs her* 🤗 🤗 🤗

Hiiiiiii sweety!!! *runnin towards u for dat hug*😃

where have you been, yaar?? missed you soooo much!!

Awww....dats so sweet of u!! me missed u too....😳😳

about your new chapter, it was very good, yaar! 👏 👏 loved the way you romanticized the begining!! out of the world, it was!! 👏 👏

tnx so much hun.....dat ws a lovely comment....m glad u liked it!!

btw, happy holi!! *spryas some color on Mia from her pichkari*
don't make us wait again for the next chapter.. warna i'll throw a bucket full of color on you! 😆 😆 😆

*runnin away to get a pichkari.....turnin to spray u back now*

Happy Holi......to u too sweety!!!! nd promise won't make u wait fer d nxt part for so long hun!!!

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: Naina123

YAY!!!!ur back!!!!
after such a looooooonnnnngggg tym..... 👏 👏

You write with so much grace and power...wow!!...its amazing....The characters are just soo brillaiantly sketched out...Cant wait to see Ridzies reaction 😉

Thnx 4 the PM...and dont make us wait too long next tym 😆 😆 😆

Take Care
Naina
xxx

tnx naina....m so glad u enjoyed readin my ff!!!

Nd ridz reaction's gonna be awing!!! just wait nd read.....

luv Mia.

Originally posted by: ashvez

Mia sweety...Give me a hug... 🤗 🤗 🤗 *Running fer d hug!!!!*😃

Missed ya sooo much.(will be replying soon to ur PM...CHORRY)MMMuuauauauanananh!!!

Aww...missed u too hun!!! Like crazy....bt nw m baaccckkkkk!!!!😆😉

Nd don't worry abt d pm sweety....take ur time....just not as much as i took ok!!!😛

The kidnapping was wonderful...awwww so cute...and good that AA have joined hands.

yup dey have...fer d time atleast!!!
The entire set up done...makes me wanna go there...beautiful...I cld just imagine the picture in front of me.

i knw wat u mean....wish i cud go der too!! 😉
HAppy Holi .."Taking some gullal and rubbing all over on mia....ready for some pichkari" 😊 😉

Ever ready fer pichkari hun.....just lemme spray u wid mine first!!!! Happy Holi!!!

tnx Ash....fer d lovely comment!!

luv Mia.