a bit of an FF...

heyyyaaa guysss....😛😛😛

therz a bit of my fanfic i hav been doin in another forum i want to put in here...😉😃😉

the scene is of shubh n aastha

BEFORE THEY MEET...😳


this has other characters too... i did it in the kis desh me hai mera dil forum... so it has prem-heer n preet-meher jodi too...

prem n heer r a jodi... preet is prem's little bro...
meher is heer's sister...
aastha is prem n preet's cousin in this story
shubh is heer's cousin...

lalit n gayatri r parents to prem n preet...

i gues thats all u need to know to read about this part now... any doubts... PLZ FEEL FREE TO ASK...
n DO COMMENT GUYS... i wud feel good...😳


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morning...

heer was up early and was getting dressed...she was double-checking herself turning round and around in front of the mirror. she had to go to soni's house after breakfast and she wanted to look her best at the breakfast table.

prem, on the other hand was just brushing. he was thinking and smiling in between that his brushing was taking a lot mor time than it required.

suddenly shocking both heer and prem, there came a blood curdling cry.
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
"

heer and prem freezed on their position of combing the hair and brushing the teeth respectively. heer wondered who could be screaming and for wat but prem recognized it as preet's voice and dint miss a second to run downstairs to see wat happened{yes...with the brush in the mouth...!!!!}
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preet was still yelling..."NO NO...YE NAHI HO SAKTA..."

he was pointing at a bag that was sitting on the sofa. he was standing in the centre of the hall and yelling as if something very bad had befalled him.

but as prem looked around{still the brush in his mouth}, he saw a girl touching gayatri's and lalit's feet. as he relaxed at the sight, heer caught up wid him. she ran down the stairs to see wat the disaster was and prem couldnt help but notice that her brown and cream dress was showing her figure perfectly. heer hid her laughter at seeing prem in such a way, tousle-haired and a brush in his mouth.

preet was yelling again..."NOOO NO NOOOOOOOOO"

the girl turned and said :: enough is enough u duffer... stop screaming.

preet glared at her.

she noticed prem and ran to him. she hugged him and that brought prem back to the real world. he smiled and patted her. she broke off him and stared.

she asked: mooh me brush leke kya kar rahe ho???

preet from behind: naha raha hoon... any problem???

the girl: tumse kisne poocha???

preet glared at her again. prem smiled.

prem: preet chilla raha tha...toh maine socha kuch hua hoga toh me aise hi chale aaya...

the girl giggled..."waise looking cute... tum jaake aaram se mooh dholo...koi toofaan nahi aaya hai..."

gayatri: toofaan toh aane waala hai...ab toh tum dono yaha kya kya karoge, rab hi jaane

heer was feeling a little left out. gayatri felt it.

gayatri: heer beta...idhar aao... inse milo... ye hai humari ghar ki ladli... aastha...

preet yelled again "NO NO NO..."

aastha ignored him and walked upto heer and held out her hand. heer took it and shook it.

aastha: me prem aur preet ke cousin hoon...aur me aapko jaanthi hoon... my hone waali bhabhi...heer..correct???

heer smiled shyly: yes. waise...tumare aane se preet itna chilla kyu raha hai???

aastha giggled: main kal aane waali thi... isne muje chalenge kiya tha ki woh muje aaj aane nahi dega...hehe...aur me aagayi... preet just lost na???

heer and gayatri laughed as preet glared at both of them. aastha went and hugged preet. preet was kind of taken aback but responded equally.
she pulled off and asked..."sach me muje dekh ke khush nahi ho???"

preet made a funny face: tume kya lagta hai??? ye sab toh drama tha my darling... me itne dino se yehi wish kar raha tha ki me ye challenge haar jaaye...

aastha smiled broadly...

preet: and we hav work dear...our little mischief... aaj malhotra's ke yaha shaadi hai...kuch toh karna hai na???

aastha: be shaq...haha!!!

they walked away planning and stuff as one of the servants took the bag upstairs. heer, gayatri and lalit looked in shock at how fast preet changed his color. heer giggled and gayatri shook her head. they made in different ways to get their works done.
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after breakfast, heer left for soni's house. kripa had promised to meet her there with her dress.

[[[important!!! i forgot to mention where teji was in all this commotion. she went to her devar's house the previous nite to meet them up...and they forced her to stay there.]]]
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SHAADI

everyone was there... heer was in a dark green choli whereas prem was in a cream suit. kripa was in marroon and aastha in yellow. they all stood around the mandap. prem and heer were stealing glances and so were kripa and angad as the saat pheres took place. both the couples couldnt help but imagine themselves in those positions... and next to them aastha was having her own single dream... who would be her dream guy...she wanted to fall in love too... preet was busy checking out the other girls present at the marriage.

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THAT EVENING...

there was a special function for near and dear ones at jeet's house. it was more like a party...for all of them to dance and celebrate their son's marriage.

just then preet and aastha took over the mike and announced.

"aaj hum soni aur jeet ke shaadi ke khushi me ek game khelte hai... its practically a romantic game and everyone is welcome. okay guys...all of u youngsters and those still young at the heart come on to the centre. okay....game aisa hai...ki main is bowl se kisi ka naam lenge aur preet ke haath me jo bowl hai usse ek parchi lenge... jiska naam muje mila hai use woh parchi me kya likha hai, wahi karna hoga... understood...aur uske baad...that person will chose a chit and give that work to anyone of their choice...okay???"

everyone applaused.

preet: theek hai...aastha...u go on...

both preet and aastha put their hands in and took out one chit each.

aastha: isme apna dulheraja..JEET ka naam likha hai...ab preet tum bataao...jeet ko kya karna padega...

preet: jeet ko wohi karna hoga jo uske mehbooba ko pasand hai...

jeet looked at soni and walked upstairs and brought his guitar. he played and sang...

pal pal dil ke paas
tum rehti ho
jeevan meethi pyaas
ye kehti ho
pal pal dil ke paas
tum rehti ho

evryone applauded him...

jeet took a chit from preet and took the mike..

jeet: okay...ummm...next is... ha! kripa tum... par ye toh bahut easy ho gaya...

preet: kya hai???

jeet: isme likha hai...apne pyaar karne waale ke saath romantic dance...

heer: theek kaha...bahut hi easy ho gaya...

kripa glared at heer and everyone else laughed. angad was looking smug.

aastha: ek kaam karthe hai...kripa tum gaana gaake angad ke saath romantic dance kar lo..

kripa was too embarassed... angad walked upto her and whispered, "cmon my princess..."

kripa sang...and took angad's hands. she placed one on her hips and the other in her hand. they slow danced as kripa sang..

mohobbat zindagi hai...
aur tum meri mohobbat ho
tumhi ho bandgi meri
tumhi meri ibaadat ho

tumhare pyar ne dil main
umango ko jagaya hain
tumhari muskurahat ne mujhe
jeena sikhaya hain
tumhi ho jeene ki wajah
tumhi meri jaroorat ho
tumhi ho bandagi meri
tumhi meri ibadat ho
mohabbat zindagi hain
aur tum meri mohabbat ho
tumhi ho bandagi meri
tumhi meri ibadat ho

evryone clapped as the two lovers came back... it had been an intense moment...everyone could feel their love and felt their own love increasing.

aastha came to kripa and said"kripa...ab tum bataao...kisko karna padega agla kaam???"

kripa thought for a while and said: prem...

prem started and wondered wat he had to do.

kripa took the chit and smiled to herself after reading it.

kripa: prem...you have to kiss the person u love most in this world.

this one got thunderous applause. prem was a well know shy person. they were sure this is gona be difficult for him. all eyes fell on heer now that everyone knew they were a pair. even prem looked at heer and heer looked at prem. both their eyes met.

prem slowly walked towards heer. she knew wat was coming. she felt awkward...they havnt even talked and such a thing... she truely wanted to taste those lips...those lips that flashed the most sweetest smile she has ever seen but not in front of everyone...he was coming closer...oh ...more closer...

heer felt herself move backwards with every approaching step of prem. he was more closer now..they were just inches apart...they kept on moving...she moved backwards...till she hit the pillar and stood frozen next to gayatri. gayatri was smiling, seeing her loving shy son do something like romance that too in front of everyone... prem was eyelocked with heer...now no one moved. they stood with bated breath looking deep into each others eyes. heer felt herself say 'let it happen'

prem's face was coming more closer... she closed her eyes... and waited... waited... waited... but wat she expected did not come... she opened her eyes slowly...prem was standing jus where he was...right in front of her smiling broadly...

suddenly he spoke..."iss duniya me...sabse zyaada pyaar ..main apni maa se kartha hoon,,,"

and in a second he kissed gayatri on her cheek. and walked back to even more applause... heer felt embarassed...especially because she wanted that kiss... but she laughed with the others and joined the game again. she took caution not to look at kripa or prem.

preet: okay bhai...that was one big escape...well...who do u chose???

prem: meri pyaari behen...aastha...

preet: aahhhhhaaa...ab aastha ke liye kya kaam chunenge...??

prem put his hands in the bowl and took out a chit as an anxious aastha looked on...

prem: aastha...tume apne pyaar ke baare me bataana hoga... describe him...

preet: interesting...aastha... abhi bhi single hai...kiske baare me bataayegi???

and he started laughing till aastha pinched him hard.

prem: aisa karo...tell about your dream guy

aastha thought for a minute...

aastha: mera pyaar.... handsome hoga...

miles away, in an airport, a very handsome guy is shown...he is getting out of the cab..he is shown from toe to head... truely handsome...he flashes a smile as he paid the cabby...


aastha continues: mature ho...
she is truely in a dream world...

the guy looked at his watch and exclaimed..."arre baap re...phir se late"
and he ran pell mell over and around other people towards the immigration after security check. there he caught up with a middle aged man and his almost 20 daughter.

the man aimed to hit him but he ducked and escaped.
the man: phir se late??? flight jaane waali hai... tume main aaj nahi chodoonga

the guy laughing: arre...maama...chodiye na...abhi bhi nahi check in ki toh sach me flight chali jaayegi...

the girl laughed and all three of them made to the flight.


aastha: jo bilkul pyaara ho

in the way to the flight, he saw a little baby crying in his cart. his mother or anyone else wasnt there. he sat on his toes next to the baby and tickled him till he stopped crying...
then the baby's mother came...and she thanked him... he kissed the baby and walked into the flight and sat on his seat.


aastha: jo mujse bahut pyaar karta ho... aur haan...bilkul ye preet ke tarah flirty na ho

and everyone laughed.

the guy caught an air hostess's as she turned to leave.
she turned to face him...her mouth wide open at this behaviour...

the guy flashed his most seductive smile and the air hostess felt herself melting...

the guy: hey mis... ummm

he squinted at the name on her coat

the guy: miss samantha... you look very hot

the blonde american smiled and blushed at the compliment...

samantha: thank you...mr...??

the guy: shubh...shubh ranawat

samantha: thank you for the compliment mr. ranawat...but i am sorry i dont have time to flirt. have a good flight. and she walked off still wearing a worn off smile.

shubh smiled to himself and the girl with whom he had come looked over to him from the next seat and said, "shuru ho gaye bhaiyya???"

shubh: yes meher...kyu??? achcha nahi laga???

meher: muje nahi...papa ko zyada achcha lagega... bata doo???

shubh: oh no no no no

meher laughed: tumhari aur koyi kaam nahi hai kya???

shubh: naa...i am jus checking out all the girls... shayad wohi ho jo meri liye rab ne bana diya hoga...

meher: tume itni koshish karne ki zaroorat nahi hai... rab ne jise bhi tumare liye banaayi ho...woh tumare chaal me toh aasaani se patne waali nahi hai bhaiyya...

shubh: meher meri jaan...u better shut ur mouth...

both of them laughed...


aastha: bas utna hi hai conditions...

heer: tume zaroor tumare sapno ke raajkumar mil jaayenge...

aastha: jaise ki aapko apne raajkumar mil gayi...haina bhabhi??

heer smiled and looked at prem, who smiled back at her.
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teji and gayatri were having a talk.

gayatri: kab aayenge bhaisaab aur humari meher betiya??

teji: woh log ab flight me hi honge..saath me shubh bhi aa raha hai...meri behen ke beta hai... kal subah pahunch jaayenge...

gayatri: kaun pick up karne jaa rahi hai???

teji: main toh nahi jaa sakti... maine kaha ki me kal daljeet ke yaha jaayenge... unhe kuch kaam tha mujse... heer ko bhej doongi.. preet bete bhi chalenge na??... prem beta ko kaam hai na??

gayatri: haan...heer aur preet ko bhejenge...

lalit put his nose into the conversation ...

lalit: kya baat ho rahe hai???

gayatri: kuch nahi...balraaj bhaisaab aur meher beti aa rahi hai kal... hum bas usi ke baat kar rahe the ki...heer aur preet airport jayenge unhe lane ke liye

lalit: arre hum bhi chalenge...kitne saal ho gaye balraaj ko dekhte hue...

gayatri: theek hai aap bhi jaayiye...


~~~~~~ how was it???
do teme... n wil post other cute parts from my ff too... but in case u wana read the whole ff...

heres the link

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/963020/ph-ff-rab-ne-bana-di-jodi-end-lastpart-p24pg64

it is a completed ff...

thanx for readin by the way...😉😃

AMAZIBNG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


plz do post the other parts luved it!
awesome...luv ur style!!

The update was really good dear..and update soon dear.

oh how sweet!!!
thanx... at least 2 of u wana read it...
wil post the parts frm now on where shubh n aastha are there... like i told its a mixd couple fic so u wil have to read abt others too

wait wil post em now

heyyy guys...
i see a lot of people are reading but only a very few is replying...
but thats k...
i wil post in watsoever...

its only a few parts n i have alrdy completed it... so no probs...




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THE AIRPORT

preet and heer had come in one car and lalit had taken his own car with the chaffeur. they waited outside the airport.

heer was anxious to meet her father, sister and cousin. preet could understand heer's anxiousness and excitement. the flight was more than an hour late. preet smsed and evn made a few calls... heer smiled unbelievingly at how much flirty he was.

heer: itni meethi meethi baate banana kaha se seekha tumne???

preet: bhai coaching classes dete dhe...

heer hit him as he laughed out loud. heer resumed her anxiousness.

preet: bhabhi...ye bataao...aapki ek behen hai na??? woh bhi aa rahi hai na???

heer eyed preet suspiciously. she looked from head to toe.preet looked at himself wondering confusedly wat heer was looking at.

preet: aise kyu dekh rahe ho???

heer: kuch nahi...me ye dekh rahi thi agar tum mere behen ke saath flirt karne lage toh me kaha kaha maruu tumhe...

preet acted as if he is hurt.

preet: aap mere baare me aise sochte ho???

heer: of course

preet: shut up

both of them laughed. but their laugh was drowned by a loud snore. preet started looking hither and tither and sighed loudly as he caught his father asleep next to him.

preet shook his head and said in a low voice, "sona hi tha toh aaya kyu dad???"... heer smiled

in a few minutes, the flight arrived. the scene changed from sitting to hugging and tears. preet and shubh had shook hands and lalit and balraj were hugging.

heer and meher were crying like anything. shubh and preet looked at them amused.

shubh: heer...muje lagta hai tum dono ko koi ghalat fehmi hui hai

heer wiped her tears and looked confusedly at shabd as meher copied her sister.

heer: kis baat pe???

shubh: hum abhi aaye hai...jaa nahi rahe...tum dono aise ro rahe ho jaise ke hum kahi lambi safar pe jaa rahe hai

heer: aate hi shuru ho gayi teri mazzaak???

she looked angrily at shubh. shubh looked concerned. he turned to preet.

shubh: arre yaar preet...ye bata tere bhai kaise type hai...???

preet: bahut serious type hai... kaam me dhoobe rehte hai... sharmila hai...bas pyaara hai...kyu bhabhi???

shubh nodded his head sadly at heer: lagta hai asar already cha gayi hai...

heer blushed at the inner meaning while meher and preet laughed.

preet was eyeing meher interestedly. but dint get a chance to make a move right then.

"kafi traditional lagti hai...modern bhi hai... good...very good...ghar chal babes...",preet thought.

shubh observed preet...he knew that look very well... shubh felt happy to have found his partner in flirty land...this was going to be intresting...

shubh: penny for your thoughts preet.

preet came out of his trance and smiled at shubh's knowing look.

heer coughed and spluttered.

heer: his thoughts isnt worth that penny shubh...so is yours... ab muje ye samajh me nahi aa rahi ki hum kaise tum dono aawaro ke sehlu

she looked up and put her hands as if praying to God.

just then lalit and balraj decided that they can talk the rest at home so they told the kids to get into the car. lalit and balraj got into the mercedes and the other four took preet's car.

shubh sat with preet in the front. the two sisters were animatedly chatting behind wich left the guys nothing to do but bind themselves in a conversation. preet and shubh instantly liked each other. they were sooo alike...

preet: shubh ek baat kahu yaar... tera biceps are just wow

shubh tried to look modest but it backfired. he looked smug... heer and meher giggled silently.

shubh: i work out pretty hard man... kitna weights utatha hoon...

he sighed loudly.... this time heer laughed out loud.

shubh: kya hai???

heer: tum aur work out... aur kisi baat ko tum kehte nahi ki tum work karte ho

shubh: waise muje aur koi baat ke liye work karne ke zaroorat hi nahi hai... fashion photography is my passion...use work nahi kahunga me

heer: aur ye ladkiyaaa????

shubh: ladkiya toh muje dekhte hi fida ho jaate hai... muje kuch karne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai

he stretched himself as preet hit him appreciatively...

heer narrowed her eyes...it was long she teased shubh... she decided to give him a work...

heer: okay mister muscles... tum apne thakat pe itna vishwass hai...

shubh: bahut

heer: theek hai...tum ghar pahunchte waqt saare saaman uthake kamre me rakh dena...

shubh was shocked.

shubh: itna saara,,,??? meher ne toh poore ghar hi leke aayi hai

heer: haaan... tumare, meher ki aur bauji ki... saare ke saare... shart maan jaao warna keh do ki tume utni taakat nahi hai

shubh: no way i will say that

heer: toh challenge manzoor???

preet: arre haan keh de yaar...warna hum sab ladko ke naak kat jaayenge...

shubh: theek hai... par mera bhi ek sharth hai heer meri jaan

heer: kya hai???

shubh: agar me jeet jaata hoon toh tume muje india me ladki pataane me madat karogi

heer: sharth manzoor...par sirf ek ladki ko pataane me madat karoongi... one and only

shubh: ye hui na baat

they all laughed and preet pulled the car in front of the juneja bunglow. preet, meher and heer stood and watched as shubh took out the lugguages all together and stood. he could barely see his way, but he wasnt about to lose.

preet managed to stifle his sniggers, but heer and meher were busy giggling.

heer: dining hall me rakh do...wohi kaafi hai... seedhe jaake right.

shubh said something that wasnt clear for them. but they went ahead of him. he just stood there having difficulty in moving. he started cursing himself for accepting this challenge. it was way difficult than he thought... his back was already aching.

he cautiously put one leg up on the entrance stairs... and felt himself going to fall...he slowly walked but was hit by someone... all he knew was he fell and all the bags were on top of him... he felt numb from the fall... he couldnt understand wat happened... then he felt someone... he touched skin...smooth soft skin... and a beautiful smell took over him... then he heard a moan...

"ladki...", his out-of-station mind started whirring in excitement.

someone mumbled in a sweet voice, "sorry maine aapko dekha nahi"

she entangled herself from him and pulled him up too... he just stared at her. beautiful...was the only word that came to his mind.

girl: i am so sorry...

shubh: sorry??? owwww....

he had sprained himself. he held his back. heer came running hearing all the commotion.

heer: kya hua...???

then she noticed the bags down and shubh clutching himself.

heer: aastha...kya hua???

aastha: woh main...

shubh: kuch nahi...miss aastha just bumped into me and knocked out all the bags..

heer: tum theek toh ho na???

shubh: arre...mere looks ko kuch hua toh nahi na???

heer: shut up...

shubh: okie dokie... ab ye bags pahuncha deta hoon

he slowly picked em all up and even though he had the pain he put em in the room thereby winning the challenge. aastha was still looking sheepish over the whole incident. she wanted to say sorry, but she was a lot shy.

shubh knew his plan was working... dard ka natak...act in way that makes her feel she is the reason for your pain and as if u are not interested in her... this was his superhit formula on girls... it was wroking again... he grinned...all of them went to get their stuff done...all parted ways...
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AFTER LUNCH

the lunch was a grand affair... everyone was in a festive mood because of the impending marriage that was going to come in.

balraj: arre...ye teji kaha reh gayiii???

gayatri: sabr kariye bhaisaab... woh aate hi hongi...

just then teji entered with two other people...one was a middle aged lady and the other was a girl.

lalit: ye lo aagayi bhabhi ji.... aayiye aayiye... balraaj kitne bezabri se intezaar kar rahe the aapki...itni der kyu laga di???

teji smiled at the tease and went and stood next to balraaj.

teji: woh kya hai na...balwant ko achanak kaam ke silsile me jaana pada... toh maine socha daljeet aur aslesha ko yaha leke aau... waise dono waha akele kaise rahenge???

gayatri: theek kiya tumne teji...chalo...main tum dono ko kamra dikhati hoon

daljeet smiled and followed but aslesha kept on looking at shubh and preet. she was looking from one to another. preet started sniggering at her behaviour and shubh was already busy with his apple... that he hadnt even noticed wat is going on.

preet nudged shubh: dekho kaise dekh rahi hai woh

shubh looked at aslesha and managed to smile painfully...

shubh: kaafi goodlooking haii...tume suit karegi

preet acted as if going to vomit...
"looks ke saath brain bhi chahiye muje... i dont think she has that...tum kyu na try karte???"

shubh: not interested...

shubh thought"and one at a time for me..."...he looked in aastha's direction...


~~~~~~ wat do u think???
do teme ppl... plz... put in 10 secs n post a reply so that i cn know whther i shud continu or not...

and aslesha is jus a girl in the JUNEJA parivaar.... heer n meher's maternal cousin... dun mind her...

~~~Ss0j

dun hav any great work to do so wil copy paste some parts... u mite find a lot of prem heer scenes though... soryy..!!!

i did it in the kdmhmd forum as i told u... so they askd for mor premeer scenes... kya karein...???😕

and plz dun mind my hindi... i am a south-Indian... so if u find any mistakes... plz bear wid me n ask me to rectify em... i would totally appreciate it...😛


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"haila....m getting bored...", preet looked at shubh

shubh: same here...kuch plan banaao yaar

preet: picnic chale...backyard pe???

shubh: what???

preet: humare gardens bahut badhe hai... backyard it goes on and on... its landscaped... we will go to the end... waha ek summer house bhi hai

shubh: theek hai...call everyone...

preet: main yu gaya aur yu aaya...

preet walked off and came back in high spirits...

preet: bade nahi aa rahe hai... hot discussion...

shubh: kis baat pe discussion???

preet: shaadiiiiiiiii....!!!! to be accurate... sagaaayiii

shubh: achchaaa!!! toh hum jald hi rishtedaar ban ne jaa rahe hai

preet: gime a five!!! maine baki ladkiyo ko bhulaaya hai... they are getting ready and also the foooooood...

shubh: tume dekh ke toh lagta nahi ki tum khane ke peeche pagal ho

preet: khana is my first passion...then comes music... then comes girls

shubh: we have evrything in common...though for me preference main difference hai...girls music n food

before preet could retort, prem walked in carrying his bag. he looked exhausted after work. but he flashed a big smile at his brother and shubh. preet exchanged introductions between prem and shubh. the two hugged like brothers.

prem sat on the couch.

preet: bhai...aap bahut kaam kar rahe hai aaj kal... shaadi hone jaa rahi hai... kuch toh romantic ho jaao... mere tarah

prem laughed: romantic na??? tere tarah banu toh poore ke poore nalayak ban jaaunga.

preet: aap bhi na bhai... dekh na... abhi iski jawaab deta hoon

he stormed out of the room. he came back with lalit, gayatri, teji and balraaj. prem touched balraaj and teji's feet. both of them blessed him.

lalit cleared his throat.

lalit: prem... maine ek faisla liya hai

prem: jee bauji???

lalit: jab tak tere shaadi hote hue kam se kam do mahine nahi ho jaate, tab tak tu office nahi jaayega

prem was shocked. but seeing the look on preet's face, he knew it was his work

prem: par bauji...

lalit: par war kuch nahi... maine faisla kiya hai... aur agar maine suna bhi ki tum office gaye the... toh maar padenge

prem: jaise aapki marzi

preet: ye hui na baat... aaj se aap humare saath rahenge poore din...

prem shook his head smiling... preet could be so unbelievable at times.

preet: jaldi kapde badalke aa jao... hum backyard me summer house ke paas picnic karne waale hai...all youngsters... jaldi aa jao.

prem grumpily nodded and went upstairs calling on the way, "maa... chai leke aao naa"

but nobody heard it except for heer who was coming downstairs at that time. they smiled at each other. heer looked around to see if anyone was going to the kitchen for the tea.

apparantly not...she decided to do it herself.... after all, after marriage it was her work. she bit her lips for have thought that way and blushed to herself.

she prepared the tea and brought it upstairs to his room. she knocked. no reply. she twisted the door knob. it opened. she thought she would leave the tea on the table and leave.

she got inside the room. the door slowly closed itself. the room was pretty... everything was almost arranged. she found a guitar on the bed.

she touched the guitar and instantly felt a vibration through her... she smiled to herself...there was a huge picture of prem in the room... then one of his whole family...

prem appeared to be in the bathroom...she could hear the shower on.

she kept the tea on the table and turned to leave but she saw a diary on his side table... she looked around and crept over it...

she turned the first page... there was another pic of him... she smiled to herself again...his eyes were piercing as if they caught her in a mistake.

she turned the pages till she saw the date she only too remebered...

soni's sangeet...

aaj maine usse mil li... woh jo mere zindagi bar ke saath nibhane waali hai... mere zindagi me ek khwaab bankar aayi thi woh... aur aaj ja maine usse dekha... mere khwaab se bhi sundar hai woh......... heer blushed at his comment... she never knew he thought of her as beautiful...
lagta hai baat zyaada karti hai... aur woh bhi bekaar ki...... she felt her brows crease as she read that...huh...??? bekaar ki baatein??? main???
par uske aankhe... uske aankhe ne jo kehdi...

she never read the rest...because just then an amused voice spoke...
"bina permission ke kisi ke diary padna buri baat hai"

she startled and turned around, just to see another sight that equally shocked her out of her wits.

he was standing at the bathroom door, dripping wet. he was just wearing a long towel around his waist and she could see his gorgeous body. she couldnt help but admire him like that, wet hair slopping over his face that wore the cutest smile on earth and bare chest dripping with shower drops.

she caught herself from swooning and looked down. she was embarassed for being caught reading his diary and then for looking at his bare upper body.

prem walked upto her and stood just inches in front of her. he could feel her heartbeats rise. heer felt it too and even her breath was irregular. her eyes were glued to the floor. prem put a finger on her chin and pushed it up...she looked into his eyes...

prem: bina permission ke diary padne ke liye tume maafi nahi doonga main...

heer looked scared.

prem: kyunki jo kuch bhi mera hai...uspe tume poora haq hai... my diary...is yours too... maafi nahi doonga kyunki tume maafi mangne ki zaroorat hi nahi hai

heer blushed and looked down.

prem: aur muje iss tarah dekhne ke liye...

heer looked up again...

prem: aadat daal lo darling... shaadi ke baad har din aise hi dekhne padenge...

this was too much for heer...she blushed uptill she was deep maroon and ran out.

at the door, however she stopped. she was awed prem was sooo romantic... she was taken away. she looked back at him who was smiling and drinking the tea she had made for him. he gave thumbs up to say the tea was good.

heer was overwhelmed... she touched her lips with her hand and send him the first ever flying kiss. prem was startled and a little tea fell on him in his haste to catch it. heer giggled and ran to her room all out of breath...
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in sometime, all of them were picnicking next to a beautiful summer house at the backyard. the landscaping was so beautiful. everyone were joking and talking. evn prem was chatting real animatedly. anyone could see that, prem wasnt very shy now...

heer was so happy that they were all together... the only person who seemed awkward was aastha... and that too because of shubh. everyone seemed to notice this because aastha was one who always created a lot of mayhem along with preet.

shubh looked at her and he suddenly jumped up. everyone looked at him confusedly... but he dint look at them...he had only eyes for aastha and aastha noticed his naughty look. she blushed unknowingly and looked down.

shubh dint do anything...he just started to hum a song...from mpkdh


Husn Ka Maara Hoon Dil Se Begaana Hoon
Mastana Ajnabee Thoda Sa Deewaana Hoon
Mehki Hawaon Ne Mujhko Bulaya Hain
Pariyon Ki Nagri Mein Pardesi Aaya Hain

he held out his hand to aastha...she looked at it suspiciously, stood up and walked... heer smiled triumphantly... she showed her thumbs down as if to say he wont win over aastha that easily... preet was observing keenly... prem was amused too...shubh dint give up...he walked behind aastha...


Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se
Hoton Mein Dabi Dabi Hasi Se
Aaya Hoon Door Se Karne Main Dosti
Haath Mila Lo Ajnabee Se
Jaan Lo Maan Lo Chehra Mera Pehchaan Lo
Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se

prem couldnt help but sing in between...he looked deeply into heer's eyes and continued with shubh...

Aap Ka Saath To Suhana Hain
Baaton Mein Meetha Taara Hain
Dil Ke Kono Mein Bitha Lo Ji
Kitna Akela Deewaana Hai

preet couldnt be left out so he started singing too... but he was running around...as if singing for shubh and prem... meher was giggling...

Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se
De Do Jawab Mujhe Jaldi Se
Aaya Hoon Door Se Karne Main Dosti
Haath Mila Lo Ajnabee Se
Jaan Lo Maan Lo Chehra Mera Pehchaan Lo
Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se

as the others looked on, shubh advanced towards aastha... he went and stood in front of her and sang looking into her eyes... her eyes were locked with his...

Kyon Darti Ho Dil Nahin Todunga
Main Tera Saath Nahin Chodunga
Mujhko Kabhi Aazmalo Ji
Tum Se Kabhi Mooh Na Modunga
Ladka Yeh Kehta Hai Ladki Se
Itlati Sharmaati Sharmili Se
Aaya Hoon Door Se Karne Main Dosti
Haath Mila Lo Ajnabee Se
Jaan Lo Maan Lo Chehra Mera Pehchaan Lo

at last aastha smiled at him... shubh sighed and let out his hand. she looked at it with a smile and shook it.

shubh: shubh

aastha: aastha...

shubh: ye dosthi dard me saath nibhake shuru hui hai... lagta hai humari dosthi bahut pakki rahegi...

aastha: hope so..

everyone had a great time during the picnic... when the girls went to the summer house to explore it, shubh and preet caught up with prem.

prem: kya hai???

preet: kal kya kar rahe ho???

prem: abhi tak toh kuch plan nahi

shubh and preet smiled wickedly

prem: tum dono ko dekhke aisa lagta hai ki mere saath kuch bura hone waala hai

shubh and preet shook their heads sympathetically... then laughed out loud...

shubh: humne aapke liye ek plan bana liya hai...

preet: aap bhabhi ko date pe le jaa rahe ho... one day out together

prem: uski kya zaroorat hai abhi???

preet: hume pata hai aap usse pyaar karte hai...woh bhi jaanti hai...par aapko thoda romantic ban na hoga... no ifs no buts... usse bahar le jaao... lunch karo...aish karo... samjhe???

prem: lagta hai bhai nahi...baap ho tum

preet: ladkiyo ke maamle me, main tumare baap hi hoon

befor prem could reply, the girls came out giggling. aastha and meher caaught up with the guys but heer walked away... she liked the atmosphere there, trees and peace...

preet nudged prem and pointed at heer. prem nodded and got up to follow her...
shubh hissed, "ask her out"

prem nodded again and smiled and followed heer. she saw him and smiled. she stood waiting for him to catch up.

he cleared his throat as if to say something but heer grinned mischieviously and talked first...

heer: jitna sharmile dikhte ho... actually utna hai hi nahi

prem: do not go for looks alone my dear...

heer: toh iska matlab ye hua ki tum jitna sharif dikhte ho, utna sharif nahi ho???

prem: maine aisa kab kaha???

heer: abhi abhi

prem: baap re... baatein bana ne me main tumse jeet nahi sakta

heer: maan gaye na ab???

prem: kyunki main tume haraana nahi chahta...

heer: owww so sweet...

prem: i know i am sweet...

heer looked at him in a disgusted look...

heer: main tumhari baat nahi kar rahi thi... woh dekho... two birds making their nest...

prem looked where heer was pointing...

prem: lagta hai nayi nayi shaadi hui hai...

prem said it very seriously that heer took sometime to understand it.
she punched him in the stomach. prem doubled up and fell down with a loud "ouch!"

she waited for him to get up on his own...but he innocently held his hand as if asking her to help him get up. she obliged and took his hand. before she could pull him up, he pulled her down. she fell on top of him making him yell "ouch" again.

prem: bahut heavy ho... weight kitna hai???

heer scowled: nahi bataaungi...

she tried to get up but he dint allow her to. he clasped her tightly by the waist that they stayed one on top of the other.

heer: prem...chodo muje... koi dekh lega

prem: dekhne do... muje koi problem nahi hai

heer: chodo bhi... baad me romance kar lena... abhi kisi ne dekh liya toh...

prem: theek hai... kal romance karenge... chalogi mere saath???

heer: kaha???

prem: woh surprise hai... chalogi ya nahi???

heer thought for a while...

heer: mummy jee aur bauji...???

prem: unhe main mana loonga...

heer: okay main aaungi...

prem: poora din mere saath... subah 7 baje ready ho jaana

heer: whatever u say...ab toh muje chod do

prem let her go. both of them stood up and straightened their dress.

prem: ab toh chod diya... phir nahi hoga...

heer: manzoor hai

heer and prem's eyes locked...song in background...love in the air...

is pal main hoon
aur tum bhi ho
ya dono hoke bhi na hain
kyun ho kya ho
ho bhi ki na ho
ya kehna sunna mana hain

their eyelocking session was disrputed by meher...she screamed from somehwere"didi...kaha ho??? jaldi aa jao...hum ghar wapas jaa rahe hai"

heer called back: abhi aayi...

prem nodded and both went back home along with the others.


~~~~~~~~~ i know... too much intense premeer scene... lol...
thing is shubh n aastha jus met... they cant posibly start romancing just then...

for ur info.. shubh is a hard core flirt in here... so he just takes aastha as another of his chases... but aastha is in wait for her dream man and she is starting to fall for shubh...

preet comes as a cpy of shubh... mischief makers... flirts... trouble for girls...

my next part happens to b a big premeer one with a small shubh aastha scene in it... wil paste only the shubh aastha one...

its the part that comes after the garden scene...



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back in aastha's room...

she just got into the room after a long chat with meher. she locked the door humming. she put on the lights and removed her hair pins.

she let her hair open and pulled the curtains open.suddenly a very cold wind blew... making her hair go hear and there... the wind seemed to have a brought another life into her... she started singing....

Hawa Sun Hawa,
Use Chu Ke Aa,
Use Chu Ke Aaja Zara
Hawa Sun Hawa..,
Use Chu Ke Aa,
Use Chu Ke Aaja Zara.. Ho
Kahan Hai Woh Ithna Batha..
Hawa Sun Hawa, Use Chu Ke Aa..,
Use Chu Ke Aaja Zara.. aaa
Kahan Hai Woh Ithna Batha

she pulled off her dupatta... and began going round and round...

Kaun Hai Yaad Jo Har Pal Aaye,
Yaad Woh Aaye To, Aake Na Jaaye
Kaun Hai Yaad Jo Har Pal Aaye,
Yaad Woh Aaye To, Aake Na Jaaye..
Raaz Yeh Dil Ab Kisko Bathaayein
Saamne Hai Woh Nazar Na Aaye
Mujh Ko Kiski Aahaton Ne Hai Chua..
Kaun Hai Woh Yeh Hawa Tu Ye Batha.

she decided to pick the pins on the back of the salwar... she was almost done and was about to pull it off when someone said...

"arreee....kapde math utharo yaar"

aastha startled and looked around in shock. her eyes widen more and more when she saw shubh emerge from behind her wardrobe.

aastha: TUM????

shubh: haan... main...

he seemed really unperturbed. he walked around casually and sat on her bed. aastha closed her mouth and pulled the dupatta back on her.

aastha: tum yaha mere kamre me kya kar rahe ho???

shubh: makhiya udha raha hoon

and he acted as if he is waving off flies. aastha couldnt hold a smile.

aastha: shubh...abhi nikal jaao...kisi ne dekh liya toh...oh my God... tum bas chalo

shubh: haan haan...chal raha hoon...tumhe bas darane ka iraada tha... lagta hai zaroorat se zyaada hi darr gayi... darpok!!!

he put his finger to his nose teasing her. aastha grew angry now. she put her hands on her hips and glared at him.

aastha: darpok hogi teri girlfriend.

and she took a pillow and hit him with it... imagine a cute pillow fight. both were in a world of their own. suddenly the big clock from the hall downstairs struck twelve.

aastha: arree... barah baj gaye... shubh tum chalo abhi... hum kal baat karenge

shubh: theek hai...gudnite

aastha: goodnite... ab chalo

she pushed him to the door and let him out. but he still stood there blocking the door.

shubh: waise...gaana achcha gaati ho... phir se kabhi sunaaoge???

aastha: thanks for the compliment... ab tum jaao...so jaao... okay bye bye

she locked the door again... she couldnt help but smile... some very bright smile too...

shubh clapped his hands... and went to his room.



~~~~Ss0j

another of my parts... well here too... too much premeer...

all of the family move to a fictious village where the family has a farmhouse... the part features them getting there and seeing the places...



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everything was set. the whole family left for ramnagar...and reached after nearly 4 hours.

"woww... kitna pyaara farmhouse hai", meher exclaimed as shubh and heer nodded.

the elders had camped here together long back. prem, preet and aastha were regular visitors to the village.

the house was huge with large gardens. the place was a natural beauty full of dense trees and little lakes... it was difficult to find such a place. the junejas have so far looked after the place that the forests dont get cut and the place is not used for industrial purposes. for that reason too, the villagers there loved the juneja's.

the house was completely cleaned and that was actually a feat considering the fact that there were at least 20 bedrooms in there. the halls were huge and sunlight peeped in through long windows. there was a shade even at noon.

preet and aastha got permission to take the others outside and show them the beauty of the village. soon, they were split in couples. prem, preet and aastha knew the place by heart. prem and heer walked off together, aastha with shubh and preet with meher and aslesha. meher was giggly about this and preet was sour.
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prem and heer...

both held hands and walked upto the main market place. prem was telling about the village to heer about how they used to come there during vacations.

at the market place, prem met a couple of old men who blessed prem and heer. prem caught up with some of his childhood village friends too as heer looked on. as they walked furthur, prem saw an old lady and ran upto her pulling heer with him.

prem: dadi... kaisi hai aap???

she looked up at him and broke into a delighted smile.

dadi: prem beta...kitne din ho gaye tumse mile hue... ye kaun hai???

prem: dadi... meri shaadi ho rahi hai... ye hai mera pyaar...heer

heer folded her hands in a namasthe and touched the feet.

dadi: jeete reh beti... sada sukhi raho dono saath me

prem and heer smiled at each other.

dadi: yaha jis jiske bhi shaadi hoti hai, unko humaare thareeke ke rasme karne padthe hai... aur prem beta, tum isi gaav ke hi ho.. tumare hone waale biwi ko bhi ye karna padega

heer looked confusedly... prem smiled again

prem: pata hai dadi...

dadi looked at heer: beti, tum nahi chahti toh...

heer interrupted: aisi baat nahi hai dadi... main karoongi.

she smiled.

dadi called out the women, and there were quite a crowd by then. all women were dressed in traditional bright colored, heavily mirror worked dresses. some of the women took heer to one of the small houses and made her change.

she came out in deep orange and black choli with assorted silver jewellery. she looked really like a "gaaon ki gori"... the other women lined on both the sides leaving a narrow space enough for two peeple to walk. prem stood at the other end.

heer was given 3 pots one over the other. dadi explained that heer had to keep these three pots on her head, one over the other and walk barefeet upto her husband without letting the pots fall. it was supposed to show the efficiency of the new wife. dadi dint tell her that the path to the husband was filled with large stones here and there. prem was kind of anxious about how heer would manage. heer was having problems balancing the pots. but she looked across at prem and she got a kind of spirit in her to do it.

she slowly walked biting her lips as the hot stones bore into her legs. she was tripping now and then but she managed halfway through... she felt exhausted...it was a longer walk than she had anticipated. but she looked upto prem again and saw the twinkle in his eyes that were beckoning her. she collected her energy and walked over everything. there were barely few steps distance between them and in the haste to reach prem, heer tripped on a large stone and almost fell but was rescued by prem at the right time. heer held on to the pots and none of them fell.

the women all applauded the young couple and their love.

dadi: tumari shaadi shudha zindagi khushiyo se bhare honge.. jab ek phisal jaaye toh doosre sambhal lenge...tum dono ne apne pyaar ko nibhaya... mera aashirwaad hai ki tum dono saath janmo tak aise hi pyaar karte rahe...

heer and prem lowered their head and touched her feet. heer changed back into her own dress and turned to leave, but she was gifted the attire she had worn earlier as a token of love.

they walked away...and sat near a small thicket of woods where there were shade. heer was unusually silent.

prem: kya hua??? itni chup kyu ho???

heer: bas... kuch nahi

prem: kuch toh baat hai...bataao

he took her hands and caressed them. heer looked into his eyes. tears formed in her eyes. prem was startled.

prem: ro kyu rahi ho???

heer: tum mujse kitna pyaar karte ho... aur tumare saath ke bina ek kadam bhi aage nahi bada paa rahi hoon main... agar tumne muje chod diya toh main mar jaaungi...

prem put his hand over her mouth and stopped her from talking.

prem: bhoolke bhi aisa math sochna...

heer had tears in her eyes. she pulled off his hand and hugged him... both of them lived the hug with closed eyes and broad smiles.

heer began singing "hume na bulaana" from hogi pyaar ki jeet.


Tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana

Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana
Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Aapna vi naseeba kya khub mela hai
Sabno se sundar mehboob mela hai
Teri khwab teri chahat meri jindegani
Akhon se dur dilbar na jana

Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana

Oh wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana

Banjanow dulhan main tu mera sajan ho
Mangun yeh duyaen jaldi se milan ho
Sahi jaye na ab mujhse sanam ye judaye
Aaow barat leke choro tarpana

Oh tere pyar main mar jawa
Tere naam yeh dil kar jawa
Hume na bhulana sajni hume na bhulana
Dur nahi jana humse dur na jana

Wada kiya toh wada karke nivana
Hume na bhulana sajan hume na bhulana

it rained at that time. heer and prem ran towards the trees and stood beneath a large tree.
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meher, preet and aslesha

they were walking through a forest like region. but it wasnt actually dense. ash was feigning that she was scared and clutched on to preet.

preet was really angry but he forced himself to be calm. he slightly pulled her hands off and said.

preet: ash, tume muje itni zor se pakadne ki zaroorat nahi hai..

ash: is jungal main koi jaanwar honge na???

meher was stifling her giggles. she could see that preet was getting irritated. he glared at meher.

preet angrily: haan...yaha gaavwale aksar sher ko dekne ke kisse sunaathe hai

the effect of this simple lie was drastic.... ash clutched onto him even harder and started whimpering...

ash: preet muje yaha se le jaao....le jaao le jaao....

ash was so scared that preet had to wind up his plan and go back home with meher and ash. he had expected that she would run off alone leaving him with meher. preet was in a grumpy mood but meher dint mind. she wasnt much of an outdoor person.
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shubh and aastha

they were having a pleasant talk as aastha showed him around the village. the places they visited were mostly deserted. shubh was more than happy about this. he could understand aastha had some vibes for him. he was waiting for a chance to flirt.

but before shubh could make a lead, aastha turned onto him with a serious expression.

aastha: tumare maa papa nahi aa rahe hai???

shubh's expression stoned...

shubh: jab main paida hua tha tab hi mere maa chal basi thi...

shubh was getting emotional in spite of himself. tears were forming in his eyes. aastha held his hands and she grew emotional too.

shubh continued: aur mere dad bahut workaholic the... unhone muje maasi ke paas somp diya... kabhi kabhi baat karte hai... par close nahi hai hum dono... mere parivar toh yahi hai

aastha: theek hi kaha tumne shubh...hum tumare parivaar hi hai

shubh wiped his tears and managed a smile. aastha felt as if she was melting.

aastha: tume pata hai,,,??? jab me choti thi mere mama aur papa ek plane crash me mar gaye the... muje un dono ke saath ke saal yaad bhi nahi hai... aur dekho... muje ek pyaar karne waale parivar diya hai rab ne

shubh smiled at her smile...

shubh: ek baat

aastha: kya hai???

shubh: agar tumne kisi se mere rone ke baare me kaha toh...

aastha folded her arms: toh???

shubh: toh tume bahut bhaari pad jaayenge...

aastha: achcha??? i wil try not to tell anyone...

shubh: bhoolke bhi tumare mooh se is baat nikli toh tume main dekh loonga...

aastha: theek hai baba

aastha stared at shubh...how innocent he was... she was starting to have feelings for him...she wasnt sure... but this could be love...but was shubh the guy she had been waiting for??? the dream man???

shubh noticed the look in her eyes...it was love, he knew it... how many times he had seen that look in his umpteen girlfriend's.

shubh: aastha tumse ek baat poonchu???

aastha startled at being caught by shubh. she looked down.

aastha: kya hai???

shubh: mere liye tumare andar kuch feelings hai kya???

aastha was shocked at his straightforward question. she dint know wat to say. truth was yes, but she couldnt tell it.

aastha: nahi toh...aisi koi baat nahi hai

she purposefully avoided looking into his eyes. shubh knew wat it meant.

shubh: achcha??? tum jhoot bahut aasani se bol lete ho... par main intezaar karunga...till you say...yes

aastha looked up at him.

shubh: ab hum chale??? mausam bahut kharaab hai

aastha nodded and they walked off befor the rain came out.
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prem and heer were stuck in the rain. even though they were under the shade of a tree, they were getting wetter.

heer's shirt was hugging her figure and were up at certain parts. prem was staring at her curves. he bit his lips for doing something so indecent and looked away but then a small voice in his head reminded him that heer was his fiancee and soon to be wife.

heer seemed unperturbed by wat was going on in prem's head.

prem approached her with slow steps. heer suddenly noticed wat was going on. his eyes told her the naughty stuff he was about to do and she edged backwards to get out of his way. she hit the large tree trunk and gasped. prem was just millimeters away from her.

prem whispered: us din ka kaam poora kar raha hoon

heer had a vivid flashback of soni's marriage reception wen he had done the same thing and kissed his mom.

heer: par....

but before she could say anything, prem clasped her on the shoulders and kissed her full on the lips. heer's eyes widened... then she closed her eyes and accepted the kiss and returned it. suddenly everything seemed so hot. prem's hands came down from the shoulders to the waist... they soon found the hem of the shirt and the way up through it...

heer was taking long and deep breaths by now...they broke apart and smiled at each other. it was as if they had been doing this forever. they dint feel much awkward as they normally would hav. the rain had subsided and they decided to walk back.

on the way back, they heard an ice cream cart coming with jingles. kids came running from all directions and heer started pulling prem.

heer: dekho prem... ice cream...

prem: dekh liya...ab chale???

heer: mazaak chodo... muje ek khareed ke do na

prem looked at her with sceptical expressions.

prem: tumara dimaag kharaab ho gaye ho kya??? abhi hum bahut bheege hue hai aur itni thandi me ice cream??? shaadi ke din tume bukhaar ho jaayenge

heer: main kuch nahi jaanti... muje lake do

prem shook his head hopelessly. she couldnt be won over in these cases.he bought her one and watched her eat it with enthusiasm like a three year old. he smiled at himself....they then went back home...




~~~Ss0j

i know its too much to read... bt take ur time...
i myt be out of station for a wyl... so u wont be able to read any sooner...



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t was really late and aastha wasnt asleep... she was thinking about wat shubh had said. she blushed. suddenly her cell phone buzzed. she startled as no one calls her late at night. she is known to be an early nighter. she looked at the identity of the caller....it was shubh... she smiled.

she picked up the call.

aastha: kya hai???

shubh: bas neend nahi aa raha tha...aur muje laga tume bhi nahi aa rahi hogi

aastha: achcha... tume kaise pata??? main toh so rahi thi

shubh: bataaya tha na... jhoot math bolna

aastha: theek hai theek hai... ab phone rakho... muje sone do

shubh: nahi

aastha: kyu???

shubh: nahi rakhoonga...bas

aastha: rakh do na... kal bahut kaam hai

shubh: theek hai...ek sharth par

aastha: kya hai???

shubh: mujse abhi kaho ki u love me

aastha was shocked.

aastha: pagal ho gaye ho kya??? main nahi kahoongii

he was silent for sometime...

then suddenly shubh started singing... "dont u love me" from chura liya hai tumne

--MALE--
Dil ki lagi mein dhadkanon pe ikhtiyaar nahin hota hai
Ishq voh jalwa hai jo pardanashi nahin hota
(Teri ada, teri nazar
Teri hansi, teri umar yaara
Kehti yehi, poochho dil se
Don't you love me baby?) - 2

--FEMALE--
Teri ada, teri nazar
Teri hansi, teri umar yaara
Kare dillagi, raat hai aadhi
Just go to sleep, baby

--MALE--
Teri ada, teri nazar
Haseenon ka har tevar sachcha nahin hota
Ikraar karke izhaar na karna achha nahin hota
Hey, la la la la la la la la, la la la la la
Aisa bhi kya humse gila

--FEMALE--
Anaari sanam mujhko mila

--MALE--
Jo bhi kaho, paas aane do

--FEMALE--
Mm, aayi badi neend, so jaane do

--MALE--
Neend to hai ek bahaana

--FEMALE--
Kadam na aage badhaana

--MALE--
Lagega darr akele mein

--FEMALE--
Phasaao na jhamele mein
So jaao tum, milenge hum sapnon ke mele mein

--MALE--
Teri sharam, teri haya
Teri saansein, teri dhadkan yaara
Kehti yehi, poochho dil se
Don't you love me baby?
Teri ada, teri nazar

--FEMALE--
Maana intezaar ka aalam bada sakht lagta hai
Lekin kya kare, dil ki baat zubaan pe aate aate waqt lagta hai

--MALE--
Samjha karo, tumse ishq hai

--FEMALE--
Sambhalke raho, is mein risk hai

--MALE--
Koi gham nahin jo bhi ho sila

--FEMALE--
O, besharam ho tum kitne bhala

--MALE--
Ek nazar dekho to idhar

--FEMALE--
Deewane kyoon ho is kadar

--MALE--
Khidkiyaan dil ki khol do

--FEMALE--
Hamein tum tanha chhod do
Yun na udo khayaalon mein tum, raahon ko mod lo
Teri zubaan, teri vafa
Teri aarzoo, teri justjoo yaara
Kare dillagi, raat hai aadhi
Just go to sleep, baby

--MALE--
Teri ada, teri nazar
Teri hansi, teri umar yaara
Kehti yehi, poochho dil se
Don't you love me baby?

aastha was liking it but she wanted him to keep the phone. just as he stopped singing she said.

aastha: shubh...bahut raat ho chuki hai... main rakh rahi hoon... phir se aaj phone mat karna...okay? goodnight.

and she cut the call... she was grinning from ear to ear and so was shubh. it wouldnt take much time for her to be in his arms...
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NEXT MORNING

at breakfast, teji and gayatri were having talks which the others heard.

teji: jaanti ho...prem aur heer ke shaadi ke mahurat bahut khaas hai... aise ek din sau saalom me ek hi baar aate hai... kehte hai as malaaye hi badal lo shaadi ho jaate hai

gayatri: achcha hua... humare bachcho ke pyaar aur mazboot ban jaayenge...

heer and prem looked at each other and grinned. under the table, prem caught heer's hand and squeezed it. heer glared at him and let go. preet and shubh sniggered at prem.

prem: kyu hans rahe ho tum dono???

preet: kuch nahi bhai...

shubh: lucky guy huh... saalom me khaas muhurat mili hai shaadi karne ko

prem grinned and tried to look smug about it as heer avoided looks from aastha and meher.

prem: itna jalan achchi nahi hai.. ek kaam karo...tum dono bhi kisi ladki ko dhoond lo aur shaadi kar lo usi din...

ash nudged preet when prem said that. preet looked at her expression and made a puking gesture.

preet: shaadi??? no wayyy

shubh winked at aastha.

heer: prem, kripa ne muje phone kiya tha aaj subah

prem: haan...main poochne hi waala tha...angad aur kripa aa rahe hai na shaadi me???

heer shook her head sadly.

heer: kya hai ki...naina aunty, angad ki maa un dono ke rishte se naraaz hai... angad se reh nahi gaya aur dono ne kal register marriage kar li. woh nainital jaa rahe hai aaj... shaayad hi humari shaadi me shaamil ho payenge.

prem: at least dono khush hai...

heer: woh toh hai

they dint get much time for romance for the day and the next day too. the mehendi function was solely for ladies and prem missed heer sorely. preet tried to sympathize his brother...but dint work. he was just grimacing the work load put on his head.
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THE SANGEET DAY

guests all hav arrived and the hall was filled. evryone was happily chatting... preet was talking to a guy he had just seen come in. shubh caught up with the two guys. preet looked at shubh.

preet: shubh...inse milo...mera bachpan ka dosth, lakshya.



shubh and lakshya looked at each other for one whole minute with mouths wide open and then hugged with a loud laugh.

shubh: lakshya, tum...???

lakshya: tum yaha kaise shubh???

preet: hold on... tum dono ek doosre ko jaante ho???

shubh: haan... humne MBA saath me ki di...

lakshya nodded...

the three guys shared a cute moment of get together.

prem and heer were brought down and seated at two ends. heer was in a brown and gold choli and prem in cream sherwani. aastha and meher ran upto heer and asked her to sing. she refused and whispered something in aastha's ears. aastha's face split into a grin.

she walked upto prem and told him to sing.
he shook his head too...

aastha: ye achchi baat nahi hai bhaiyya... aapko gaana hi padega... hum aapse gavayenge

she then walked off to preet and shubh. meher joined her and they planned to do something. suddenly all the lights dimmed and the dance floor shimmered with little lights.

meher and aastha started off with the humming along with a couple of other girls.

o ladke diwaane kaha se aaya tu
dulhan ko le jaane kaha se aaya tu
o ladke diwane kaha se aaya tu
dulhan ko le jaane kaha se aaya tu

shubh and preet came to the centre too. shubh caught onto aastha's hand and sang.{shubh's part in red and aastha's in green...}

chal pyaar karegi

aastha played along... she wasnt too embarassed now. the way he looked, she was sure he loved her... and she was happy...she smiled at him too.

haan ji haan ji

mere saath chalegi

she pulled off her hand from his in mock horror.

na ji naa ji

shubh folded his hands.

tu haan kar ya naa kar teri marzi soniye
hum tujhko udhakar le jaayenge...
doli me bitaakar le jaayenge

aastha danced too
hum ghar me kahi chup jaayenge
sang tere nahi hum jaayenge

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi na ji naa jiii

prem and heer were delighted at this jodi. so were the others.

gayatri whisperd to teji: kitni achchi jodi hai na???

teji: sach me... lagte hai ke ek duje ke liye hi bane hai

gayatri: kyu na hum prem aur heer ke shaadi ke baad dono ki baat chalate hai

teji: manzoor hai gayatri... dono bahut pyaar karte hai ek doosre se...

gayatri nodded and smiled.

prem took the lead now... he went to heer and held her hands and romantically looked into her eyes. {prem's part in blue and heer's in magenta}

o gore gore mukhde waali
o kaale kaale naino waali
maan mera ehsaan ke maine haan kar di
tu warna kunwari reh jaati
ye shaadi humari reh jaati

prem flashed a naughty smile as heer glared at him.

CHORUS- tu warna kunwari reh jaati
ye shaadi humari reh jaati

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi

heer stamped on his leg and sang na ji naa ji


heer danced with meher.... she moved around her mother and father and saas-sasur!

jaa main nahi karti shaadi waadi
mujko pyaari hai ye aazadi
main toh apne babul ke baaho ki bulbul hoon

bas tujse muje ye kehna hai
pinjre me muje nahi rehna hai

CHORUS-bas tujse muje ye kehna hai
pinjre me muje nahi rehna hai

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi na ji naa jiii


everyone were wishing the couple to be happy for ever. there were whispers, "rab ne bahut achchi jodi banaayi hai... aise hi bani rahe saalo"

prem left the joke aside now...he caught heer by the shoulder and looked into her eyes...

aankho se kaajal le jaayenge
zulfo ke baadal le jaayenge...

prem was lost in her eyes... he dint contine... shubh continued for him

hum aaye hai door se yu wapas na jaayenge...
hum apni sajaniya le jaayenge
hum apni dulhaniya le jaayenge

aastha blushed. all laughed and danced.

chal pyaar karegi haan ji haan ji
mere saath chalegi na ji naa jii
tu haan kar ya na kar teri marzi soniye
hum tujhko uthakar le jaayenge
doli me bitaakar le jaayenge

prem picked up heer in his arms and shubh did the same to aastha. the guests all applauded the couples. truely heaven-made. teji wiped tears of joy.

lakshya was eyeing shubh and aastha with a look of foreboding. he had known preet and aastha since childhood and shubh since last 4 years. aastha looked so happy with shubh. he cornered shubh the next second he got him alone.

lakshya: chakkar kya hai shubh???

shubh who was wiping his prespiration froze and looked at lakshya amused. he noticed lakshya's glances go till aastha and back. shubh just shrugged.

lakshya: main tumhe achchi tarah se jaanta hoon... muje bataao... bataao ki tum aastha ke saath wahi khel nahi khel rahe ho jo tum har kisi ladki ke saath khelte aaye ho

shubh put a hand on lakshya's shoulder.

shubh: you know lakshya... muje commitment achcha nahi lagta...

lakshya: dekho use... maine use itni khush kabhi nahi dekha... she is undoubtedly in love with you...

shubh: kya karu boss... har ladki mujpe fida hai

lakshya: tumhe ye mazaak hai... tum aastha ko nahi jaante

shubh: i know her all right... goodlooking, sweet, caring, understanding...

lakshya's mouth gaped at shubh mouth wide open.

shubh all confused: kya???

lakshya: kuch nahi mere bhai... aastha apni jaadoo kar rahi hai

shubh: kis pe???

lakshya: tum pe...

lakshya started laughing like a maniac. shubh got irritated and raised his hand to whack him.

lakshya: hold it...

shubh: seede seede bata baat kya hai...warna...

lakshya: socho... jab bhi tum kisi ladki ko milte ho, the only words of description i hear is HOT and SEXY... aur tumne aastha ke baare me jo kaha... muje lagta hai janaab ko pyaar ho raha hai... AT LAST!!!!!

shubh was thoughtful. he thought over it again and again... IS IT??? he shook his head...NO WAY...

shubh: chup ho ja... muje koi pyaar vyaar nahi hua hai, samje??? ab chal khaana kha le...

lakshya grinned... shubh did look confused.. and its the start... hats off to aastha...


~~~Ss0j

any comments ppl???

okay this is the last part m doin now...




preet, shubh and lakshya ate together. shubh appeared to be thinking again...preet filled lakshya with shubh's tatics since he reached mumbai. lakshya was particularly amused by the entire-lugguage carrying episode.

lakshya nudged preet and showed out shubh's preoccupancy.

lakshya: preet...kyu na hum shubh ko aur ek challenge de???

preet: i am in for it... kyu shubh???

shubh came out from his trance and looked confused.

shubh: kya???

preet: tumare liye lakshya ek challenge dene waale hai

shubh: oh yea??? kya hai???

lakshya thought for a while.

lakshya: shubh u r a born flirt... ek kaam karo... ahi us plate se jo bhi ek glass pani lega usse tumhe kiss karna hoga... yadi woh ladka ho ya ladki

preet sniggered and shubh's eyes popped.

shubh: lakshya???? tuje me nahi chodunga...

lakshya: pehle karke aa...

preet: arre dekho dekho...aastha abhi pani leke gayi

shubh and lakshya looked. yes...aastha had a glass in her hand and was drinking from it.

lakshya: chalo mera sher!!!

shubh: pehle se hi keh raha hoon... lip kiss nahi... bas gaal me...

lakshya: kyu sharma raha hai yaar??? tuje aise pehli baar dekh raha hoon...

shubh: chup kar bhe...

shubh walked upto aastha as preet and lakshya looked apon. he stealthily caught up on her. she was busy chatting with some of her friends. he tapped on her shoulder and she turned.

she looked at him expectantly as if waiting for him to speak. by that time preet and lakshya had brought prem, heer, meher and the others to watch the scene. shubh turned back and looked at them with a pained expression. he knew himself that this wasnt him... he never felt do nervous about kissing before... he knew aastha wouldnt be liking wat he going to do but he rarely thought about his girlfriend's feelings.

he got a kind of enthusiasm from lakshya's facial expression. he turned with closed eyes and put his lips on where aatha's cheeks where seconds before but he felt himself locked with a soft pair of feminine lips...

he broke of shocked. aastha was shocked too. preet and lakshya did some double taking and whoops. shubh smiled even. but aastha was reddening at the public display... she dint think when she did it but slapped shubh hard.

shubh's face turned to a paper white color. what angered him wasnt the whack or her anger, but her tears. she was crying now. she ran off from the hall. lakshya and preet appeared on shubh's side. prem put a hand on his shoulder but he dint face them. he made his way to his room too.

shubh kicked the chairs in his room as he raged about. he was angry...very angry. why the heck she had to cry??? those tear filled eyes pained him very much. he felt himself soften as he thought about the liplock. he changed himself and settled on the bed.

heer and meher knocked and entered aastha's room. aastha was crying her eyes out. she dint know why she was crying.... she thought it was for hitting shubh. she saw the hurt in his eyes after she slapped... his pain hurt her too. why did she hit him??? why did he hav to do that in front of everyone???

heer put a hand on aastha shoulders. aastha wiped her tears and regained her composure. lakshya and preet too barged in. both were angry by the looks of it. lakshya dint show it. preet came over to her and shook her.

preet: what is ur problem huh aastha???? tum pehle kabhi bhi itni over react nahi karti dhi... ab kya hua tume???

aastha looked at preet hard and threw his hands from her shoulder.

aastha: shayad tumne dekha nahi... usne sabke saamne muje kiss kiya. just to show that he can do anything to any girl because he is mister all that

lakshya walked upto the pair.

lakshya: aastha... apni zabaan ko sambhalo...

and he explained wat exactly had happened. aastha felt so angry with herself for misunderstanding shubh. she felt sad. she cried again.the others left her and moved to their own rooms.
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next morning....SHAADI KE DIN

prem was living the day.... the day he had been waiting for... at last heer would be his... from today nite, he would have his love in his room too...

heer was sweetly living the last few hours of single life... but she had no dejection... it was wat she wanted to be... prem's wife.

they enjoyed the solitary moment of the most important day of their life till they were disturbed by their kins. aastha and meher came upto help heer with her dressings and make up. lakshya and preet decided to bug and tease prem.

after wat seemed a long annoying teasing prem desperately wanted to change lakshya and preet's target. he missed someone...

prem: arre... shubh kaha hai????

preet seemed to be noticing shubh's absence just now.

lakshya: arre... kaha gaye humare mr.hot??? main dekh ke aata hoon.

he walked off leaving preet help prem to get dressed. prem had finished dressing when lakshya walked in again.

lakshya: woh keh raha hai nahi aayega... he is still angry about yesterday... uske ego!!! oh my God...

prem thought for a while...

prem: bas aastha hi kuch kar sakti hai... jake use bata de

preet took the initiative this time.
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heer in her bridal attire was pleading with shubh. he was still in his casual things. he was shaking his head over and over again.

heer: please chalo... shaadi ka muhurat aa raha hai... tum nahi aaoge to kaise hoga... come on shubh

shubh: heer...maine kaha na.. nahi aaunga... i cant face all those people after wat happened yesterday

heer: shubh please...

shubh: no

shubh then turned around. heer was so dejected. but suddenly someone kept a hand on her shoulder. heer turned to see aastha.. aastha mimed to heer not to worry and to go. she wil bring shubh down. heer smiled and left closing the door behind her.

aastha: shubh...

shubh turned and saw her. his face swelled in anger.

shubh: muje tumse koi baat nahi karni...chale jaao

aastha walked upto him and put a hand on his shoulder. instinctively he pulled her hand off him.

aastha: itna gussa achchi nahi hai...

shubh: tum kaun hoti ho muje ye sab bataane waali???

aastha: tumara dosth hoon

shubh grunted: dosth... my foot.

at that time his gold chain got stuck with his shirt. the already angry shubh got even more angry and he pulled the chain off his neck. aastha went and picked it up. the hook had bent. she put it straight.

aastha: ab ye bachpana chodo... i am sorry

shubh: kya kaha???

aastha: sorry... maaf karo na???

shubh: theek hai theek hai

shubh relaxed by now. he was feeling better. he smiled. aastha was happy too. she walked upto him and made him sit on his bed. then she put the chain on his neck. shubh smiled... then suddenly his eyes widened in shock.

he remembered wat teji mann had said the day before...

teji: jaanti ho...prem aur heer ke shaadi ke mahurat bahut khaas hai... aise ek din sau saalom me ek hi baar aate hai... kehte hai as malaaye hi badal lo shaadi ho jaate hai

aastha who was oblivious of this grew confused.

aastha: kya hua???

shubh took the chain and looked at it.

shubh: aastha...ye tumne kya kiya...???

aastha: kya kiya???

shubh: tume yaad nahi mausi ne kya kaha tha??? aaj ke din bas malaaye hi badal lo...shaadi ho jaate hai

aastha gasped... now wat happened???

shubh then smiled and took off the chain.

shubh: ab tumne jo kiya...main use poori karta hoon

and he put the chain on her neck. she gaped at him. shubh smiled.

shubh: agar tume is rishte se khushi nahi hai toh hum is shaadi ko abhi issi waqt thod denge...

aastha suddenly said: nahi!!!!

shubh: i know ye humare soch ke khilaaf hua tha... par if u r not happy with it,...

aastha: main khush hoon... shubh shayad tume pata hi hai... i love u

shubh: i know...

aastha smiled: ab hume sabse ye baat kehni chahiye...

shubh: nahi abhi nahi... abhi thoda romance karne do... pyaar ka izhaar toh abhi hua hai... lets have some fun

aastha looked at him confused...

shubh: naa math karna... ab tum jaao... muje dress karne do...

he turned to pick his sherwani.. sensing that aastha hadnt left, he turned back on her.

shubh: unless u would like to stay and watch

aastha's eyes grew round as the meaning of his words hit her...

aastha: badmaash kahin ka...

shubh: apne pati ko aise gaali dogi???

shubh showed mock anger and aastha blushed.

aastha: okay baba...sorry... main chalti hoon... jaldi aa jaana

shubh: ab ek pal ke liye bhi judaai sahi nahi jaati???

she bent down to kiss her. but she grew shy and ran off.
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SHAADI...

prem was already seated on the mandap. he was in a richly worked red and gold sherwani... looking heavenly with the sehra... all the girls present there were sighing that such a hot and handsome guy was getting mariied...he was looking around. preet was busy ushering guests in with lalit and balraj. shubh was putting flowers. the other guests were all seated and talking amongst themselves. the pandit had already started the pooja..

gayatri came upto prem and kissed his forehead...

as everyone waited, prem's eyes searched for his love.

the pundit: muhurat nikla jaa raha hai... dulhan ko bhulaiye..

gayatri: jee abhi aayi...

she went upstairs. in a few seconds, the girls parade appeared. gayatri and teji lead the way. aastha and meher held heer who looked ethereal in a deep red choli and gold ornaments......

song in background... taare hai baraati from virasat.

akhiyaan milake channa paawe na judai we
akhiyaan milake channa paawe na judai we
deve na tari menu saari khudai we,
akhiyaan milake

taare hai baraati chaandani hai ye baarat,
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath ,
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum.
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baat

heer walked upto him and seated herself next to him. prem looked into heer's eyes and saw the same happiness he felt in them. they smiled at each other as the moment that were to bond them for eternity arrived.

tare hai baarati chaandani hai ye baarat,
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath ,
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum.
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum

they both put floral chains on each other. both sit again and put sindoor on heer's mang. heer feels her life fulfilled and prem understands her feeling because he feels the same too. wen he put the mangalsutr tears filled his eyes at having found his better half. heer smiled at him. he could live with this vision forever.

ganga jamuna se bhi paawan tera mera bandhan
tera prem hai fulvari aur mera man hai aangan
janmo janmo ka hi sajni tera mera saath
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath ,
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum.
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum.

they both stand up. aastha ties their shawls telling, "bilkul radha krishn ki jodi lag rahi hai.... aap dono ki jodi sada salaamat rahe..."

and balraaj did the kanyadan. he was pretty emotional and wiped his tears and kissed his daughter.

he looked into prem's eyes: meri beti ko khush rakhna

prem: jee uncle jee... heer humesha khush aur sukhi rahenge... ye aapse mera waada hai

they held hands tightly and walked seven rounds around the holy fire as the guests and family showered flowers on them... each step taken bonded the two souls together for coming births... their love deepend...

tu hai jeewan mein jo preetam sukh nahi mangu dooja
aarti nayno se karti hoon man se teri pooja
mein to dharm hi samjhun teri kahi hui har baat
saathon fere honge ab haton mein leke haath ,
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum.
jeewan saathi hum deeya aur baati hum

after the saat phere, they were declared MAN AND WIFE... they took blessings from everyone... they had big smiles... everyone was happy with the jodi... truely heaven made...

only daljeet seemed to waste time finding fault... she hissed at ash" heer ki make up thodi zyaada hai...dekho kaise bhoot ki tarah safed dikh rahi hai"

preet and meher overheard. preet tapped daljeet and said "aapne kahi apne baare me toh nahi kaha??? muje laga aap bhoot ki bare me kuch keh rahi thi..."

aastha and meher giggled heartily as dj's face turned to a color of blackcurrent.
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almost everyone were busy chatting and eating. the others left the newly wed love birds alone as the way they wished it.

prem and heer were totally tired after the long formalities and photo shoot. but they enjoyed it... after all they wont get married everyday...

both of them took their food. heer made to move to a corner, but prem caught her at the elbow. heer's whole hand shook.

heer: kya kar rahe ho???

prem: batein chodo...aur chalo mere saath...

he dragged her out into a private garden just on the side of the kitchen where they wont be easily disturbed. there was a big white swing. both of them sat on it and began nibbling their food...

prem: tumhe nahi lagta ye shaadi sab jald hua???

heer looked at him. why was he saying like that???

heer: mmm,,,....

prem: achcha hua sab jaldi hua... nahi toh mujse aur sabr nahi hota...

he said with a naughty grin... heer tried to look angry but smiled instead.

heer: ab ye mazaak chodo... khana kha lo... bahut bhook lagi hai

prem slowly ate watching heer... she was defenitely very hungry... she finished her food in an eye blinking time.

prem was amused at her speed... and her hunger.

prem: do din se kuch nahi khayi kya???

heer: subah se kuch nahi khayi... aur pichle do hafto se mera diet chal raha hai

prem's eyes widened: diet??? kis liye??? already dubli pathli ho...

heer: shut up... meri figure maintain karni hai na??? aur shaadi ke liye kuch zyaada hi bhooka rehna pada in dino...

prem: heer... ye achchi baat nahi hai... tume khaana chahiye... u girls... always go on stupid diets... agar figure maintain karni hai toh exercise karlo...

heer: arre baba... exercise nahi hoga mujse...

prem: ha haan... bas bhooka rehna jaanti ho na...??? jab me jaaunga exercise ke liye tume bhi utaake le jaaunga... no arguments... pehle ye kha lo...

prem folded and tore a piece of roti and filled it with curry and extended his hand to heer. she looked at him... then slowly smiled and opened her mouth... and for the next few minutes, prem fed heer and himself.
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SUHAAG RAAT

prem was pushed into his room late that night by preet and shubh. their teasings had gone to the nerve-breaking level... but prem tolerated... not everyday they get this situation...

prem felt himself going to fall but caught himself. he quickly locked the door and smiled when shubh and preet chorused "HAVE FUN!!!"

he turned to see his room in a completely different way... there were flowers all around and candles of all shapes lit everywhere... the balcony was opened and there was a cool reeze fluttering in... after taking in the beautiful sight, he looked at his bed... yes, his dulhan was there... face covered with the red ghoongat...

he slowly walked and sat next to her...he pulled off the ghungat and stared at her beautiful face all with different kind of ornaments... he slowly took them all off... after all the ornaments were taken off, he smiled at her and laid himself on the bed.heer smiled and put her head on his chest. she drew circles on his body making him smile...

prem: kuch zyaada hi pyaar aa raha hai kya??? suhaag raat hai isliye ya phir kuch mangne waali ho???

heer: prem!!! tumhe kaise pata chala ki main tumse kuch maangne

waali hoon???

prem: tab hi itni sweet si dikhawa kar rahi ho...

heer: chodo bhi... dikhawa nahi hai... sach main pyaar aa raha hai tum par...

prem sarcastically: haan haan....

heer punched him playfully and prem laughed out loud.

heer: suno... abhi bas 9 baje hai... ek ice cream la doge???

prem: tumhe humari suhaag raat me bhi ice cream ki padi hai???

heer: tumhi ne toh kaha tha ki tum meri har khwahish poori kar doge...

prem: this is blackmail... abhi ice cream chahiye kya???

heer: haan... please...

prem: theek hai ruko... main laata hoon

heer looked at him and made a cute face...: main bhi chalu???

prem saw her look and understood that she wanted to get out right then and she wasnt going to take no for an answer. still in their heavy worked wedding attire, prem jumped down the window and helped heer down.

they hid behind trees and ran out through the gate. they ran down a deserted road with nothing but moonlight leading their way...

prem panting: this is the most weirdest first night ever in history

heer: prem heer ki love story bhi weird hai na???

prem: woh kaise...????

heer: think back... hum ek doosre se pyaar karte hai... kabhi humne ek doosre se ye kaha hai???

prem thought: theek kaha tumne... humne kabhi naha kaha...

heer: wahi toh... hume kabhi ye sab kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi padi hai... issi liye nahi kaha...

they walked and reached an ice cream parlour. the people around there was feeling strange about these two customers in wedding dresses...

both of them had an ice cream and walked back slowly... it was nearing ten... the moon seemed to be smiling on them... they stealthily got up to their room. prem fell onto the bed as he shook off his shoes.

prem: rab hi jaana kya hota agar kisi ne hume chori se balcony climb karte hue dekh liya toh

heer giggled... she sat next to him. he was slowly closing eyes... his breaths were deep now... heer felt annoyed.. how could anyone sleep like that on their first night???? she shook him angrily...

prem groggily: ab kya hai??? bahut thak gaya hoon heer... sone do na

heer: nahi... abhi pyaar karna hai...

prem: ohho...

he sat up and touched her face...

song in background... saasein meri from jigyaasa...

saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de
saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de
bechain hain baahen meri
besabra hain aankhen meri
ab haya ke yeh parde hata de
saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de
bechain hain baahen meri
besabra hain aankhen meri
ab haya ke yeh parde hata de
saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de

he breathed on her neck... she hugged him impulsively...

meri aaghosh mein jism tera khile
subaha tak na ruke pyar ke silsiley
oh meri aaghosh mein jism tera khile
subaha tak na ruke pyar ke silsiley
dheere dheere pighalne mein bhi aayega mazaa
tu jalayega toh bhi jalne mein aayega mazaa
bechain hain baahen meri
besabra hain aankhen meri
ab jala main mujhe tu bujha de
saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de

prem rounded her by the waist and undid the knots of her top... she moved away from him... but he caught her again and pulled her back to him..

aarzoo na koi aaj adhuri rahe
yun kareeb aaon mere ke na duuri rahen
aarzoo na koi aaj adhuri rahe
yun kareeb aaon mere ke na duuri rahen
mere har dard ka tujhko bhi ehsaas hain
hai tujhe bhi pata meri kya pyaas hain
bechain hain baahen meri
besabra hain aankhen meri
ab jala main mujhe tu bujha de
saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de
saansein meri saanson mein tu mila de
in shabnami hothon se kuchh pila de


a very cold wind came through and all the candles were blown off. prem carried heer to the bed... that night bonded their heart and bodies for eternity... ab heer prem main aur prem heer main poori tarah sama gaya hai...


~~~Ss0j

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until we meet again..
asta la vista...
khudafizz...
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