~*||FF-Bakhuda tumhi ho||*~{Ch-14/P-29/upd(8/12)}

Posted: 17 years ago
#1
❤️
❤️
~*Bakhudha tumhi ho*~
Hey every 1 I'm starting a new FF.I know I?m not so good in writing but I will try

So here it goes..

CAST:
Vidya: A 22 year girl.She is doing Graduation &belongs to a rich family. Her mom passed away when she was 3 & after that her father got married . Her step mom

don?t like her becuz she is the owner of his father?s property. Her father passed away too

after 3 years.

Sagar:He is 23 year old.He is a luving- shuving boy.very rich. Really smart or say Mr. Perfectionist

But after his father's death, he became really responsible & stopped enjoying,having fun,

& even forgot to smile

Shreshtha: Vidya's step sister,kinda loving sister.She is sweet.

SM: loving mom, she just wanna see her son happy.she always tried to bring a smile on his face but after his father's death he never smiled.

Sadhika: Sagar's younger sis.He luvs her more than anything else & she is like loving too

VM: Vidya's step mom. Really strict & like ahhhhh.....😡

Will introduce new characters when needed .😃
❤️
❤️
INDEX
Chapter1-Page2
Chapter2-Page3
Chapter3-Page5
Chapter4-Page6
Chapter5-Page8
Chapter6-page10
Chapter7-Page11
Chapter8-Page12
Chapter9-Page15
Chapter10-Page18
Chapter11-Page22
Chapter12-Page23
Chapter13-Page27
Chapter14-Page29
❤️
❤️

Edited by katy55 - 17 years ago

Created

Last reply

Replies

210

Views

19.8k

Users

27

Likes

1

Frequent Posters

eshaaax3. thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 17 years ago
#2
wonderful!

mi already liking it....
update soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
scorpionsavenge thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 17 years ago
#3
I really like it....Please post ur update up soooon!
bmtdluver thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 17 years ago
#4
😃It souds awesome, u have got to continue,. It sounds awesome! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT UPDATE!!!!!!
Posted: 17 years ago
#5

thanks evry 1! will update soon!😃

Posted: 17 years ago
#6

Chapter 1-Sagar's intro

We see a handsome, tall young man coming out of his cabin.He is giving instructions to

manager.He is wearing a white shirt,Black jacket & a blue jeans & he is none other than our Sagar.

Sagar: I just want this to be done immediately.Fix my meating with board members.

Manager:Ok sir!

-----------------------------------------------Sagar's home----------------------------------------------------------------------

We see an old woman sitting & going through an album.

Sadhika enters..

Sadhi: what r u looking at mom

SM:Nothing beta I just want to recollect those happy moments...hhhh....look

Sagar is looking so happy in this pic.

Sadhi: ya mom. par ab to bhai ne hasna hi chot diya hai..he never smiled after that day..

but mom have a look here....do u remember that girl next to my 5 year old bro..

SM got a flashback

-----------------------------------------------Flashback------------------------------------------------------------------------

Before18 years...............

........

Side Note: SD & VD were very close friends.But after VD's buisness settled in Delhi. He left

Mumbai

V:Sagar choriye na meri choti, mujhe dard ho raha hai.(Sagar leave my braid,It's paining)

S:Chor kaise dun. Tumhi kehti ho ki main tumhe tang karta hun to tumhe bura nahin lagta.

Tum mujhe apna sabse pyaara dot kehti ho.(But why?u only told me thant u don't mind if I

will tease u)
V:par mujhe bahut dard ho raha hai.(but it's really paining)

........

Hey evry 1 sorry I know it was short but I will update ASAP

Keep Smiling

Post ur Comments....

Edited by katy55 - 17 years ago
Posted: 17 years ago
#7

PROMO

Voiceover: Sagar se chin gayee uski khushi


We see sagar's face. He is crying in rain

Voiceover: Kya koi aayega uske muskaan lautane.

A girl bumps on him accidently

pleeez comment..will update soon
Edited by katy55 - 17 years ago
kmishra thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#8
Great Update!
loved it! cant wait till Vidya's entry.
continue soon=)
Posted: 17 years ago
#9

Originally posted by: kmishra

Great Update!

loved it! cant wait till Vidya's entry.
continue soon=)

thnx kelly will update after an hour or so..😊
kmishra thumbnail
18th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail Engager Level 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 17 years ago
#10
looking forward to it!
btw my name is spelled...Kalee😳
whats your name?😊

Related Topics

Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".