Tuj Se Naraaz - Fan-Fic - 09-05-08- P3&4-Pg 3 - Page 3

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Posted: 17 years ago
#21
that was too good
loved the emotional part
plz continue soon
hope its the wedding in the next part
luv heli
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Posted: 17 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Radha...Shyaam

I never thought that anyone would pair up Manthan and Krishnatulsi together cause I always imaged her with Lakshya and now with Eklavya... but your fan-fic is so different and emotional that made me have few tears in my eyes... And the video was great, superb and many more...

Please continue soon... 😳



Thanks a-lot Radha...Shyaam

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal
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Posted: 17 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: redi50

that was too good Thanks

loved the emotional part I'm glad that you liked it
plz continue soon
hope its the wedding in the next part Your wish came true
luv heli



Once again thank you, Heli

Apnki Pyari
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Posted: 17 years ago
#24
Part Three
Previously - Manthan blames Kt for Eklavya's death. Mihir also agreed with Vaidehi in getting Kt married to Manthan. After learning the truth... Kt and Manthan both wanted answers and now they are getting married.


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Three weeks later

Day One… Engagement

Entire family gathered around, Kt and Manthan for the ring ceremony.

"Come' on Kt, place this ring on Manthan's finger" Archita told Kt

Kt smiled at Archita and took the ring from Dammi Chachi's hand. While she placed the right on Manthan's finger few tears escaped from her eyes and Lakshya notice that and felt for Kt and how destiny always play his dirty game with them.

"Here Beta" Nandani gave Manthan a ring so he can place on Kt's finger

"Now Bro, it's your turn to put this finger on Kt's finger" said by Archita and Pari

Manthan also smiled at them at everyone than placed a ring on Kt's finger. Entire family clapped for them and gave both of them their blessing afterwards Pari made her announcement.

"Ladies and Gentlemen… May we have your attention for quick moment? Like we all know that we all are here gathered for Manthan Virani and Kt Virani's engagement celebration. And now we kindly ask… them to come up forward and dance on this sizzling, sexy song - O Re Piya from AAJA NACHLE" said by Pari and Archita.

Everyone who attended at the engagement celebration clapped for Kt and Manthan.

"Pari, before making the announcement… you could have asked us? How can I dance with Kt?" Manthan told Pari

"Come' on Bro, she is your fiance… You don't have to ask permission you just have to command" Archita told Manthan

"Maybe…! You guys are right" Manthan told Pari and Archita

Afterwards Manthan asked Kt to dance with him and slowly the evening came to an end in each others arm. Afterwards Manthan carried Kt into her room and left from there.

"Beta, are you asleep?" Nandani asked Manthan in his room

"I can spare few minutes for you Choti Maa" Manthan told Nandani and placed his head in her lap

Nandani: Thanks Manthan

Manthan: Choti Maa, why are you thanking me? What did I do?

Nandani: Thanks for understanding your Mihir Dadu's decision and don't think that he is selfish, but whatever he is doing is for Baa and her health condition. Once you and Kt get married everything will be back to normal. Also I am proud of you son (placed a tiny kiss on his forehead and notice that he had fallen asleep on her lap)


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Part Four

Next day, Manthan woke up early in the morning and thought about the events took place in his life few days ago after Eklavya death and decided to discuss few things with Bhoomi.

Manthan takes a quick shower than heads toward Bhoomi's room where Joydeep told him that Bhoomi is in Archita's room. So Manthan heads toward Archita's room.

"Sis, do you have few minutes for your Bro?" Manthan asked Bhoomi

Bhoomi nods her head

Bhoomi and Manthan go into the garden to discuss few things, but before Manthan could finish Bhoomi interrupted him and told him "Bro, we will discuss whatever you have to say during the Menhdi rasam because I have to help Dasksha Chachi"

Manthan: Whatever Sis… You take your time while I figure out few things on my own.

Manthan leaves from there and heads toward his friend's house…

In the evening everyone gathered around Kt because today was her Menhdi Rasam.

One of the ladies over there said "Poor Kt, she doesn't have a mother-in-law who can put the Shagun Ki Menhdi"

Nandani heard that comment and leaves from there. Even Manthan heard those ladies and leaves behind Nandani his Choti Maa.

"Did you guys see Nandani anywhere?" Karan asked Dammi and Ganga who were busy getting the Shagun Ki Menhdi ready.

"Actually, Karan she was over here few minutes ago" Ganga told Karan

Karan thanked her and leaves from there while Nandani cried in her room.

"Those people are right! I don't have any rights on Manthan or his wife" Nandani told herself while crying

"Choti Maa, you have full rights on me and my life even Kt who is going to be my wife in few days" Manthan told Nandani

Nandani stared at Manthan for awhile… Afterwards she got up and hugged Manthan so tight and told him "even if I find my son… you will always be my first priority in my life even after my son comes back... cause you make me complete inside."

"Indeed… Nandani (Karan looks at Nandani than Manthan with a smile on his face with few tears in his eyes) Manthan makes us all completed inside" Karan told them

"Including me too" announced by Bhoomi (who also joined in the hugging group with Manthan, Nandani and Karan)

After awhile menhdi rasam ended with Nandani applying the "Shagun Ki Menhdi" on Kt's hand and legs.

(Guys… I have made a mini video of Manthan and Kt's marriage and also all the rasam took place because it's kinda hard to explain. So I hope you like the video I created and in the background song is mixed with several other songs)


[YOUTUBE]http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xPR5TqC1_wI[/YOUTUBE]

***

Please forgive me if there is any mistake cause I kind of wrote these two parts in a rush and also tomorrow is my cousin's engagement so I will post next part maybe by Sunday or something...

I hope you guys like this part

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal
Edited by Kasamm - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#25
omg kinjal{my cousin's name}
the vm looked so real
nice part
plz continue soon
tc heli
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Posted: 17 years ago
#26
gr8 part
cant wait for kt-manthan marriage
the vm was gr8 too
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#27
Awesomely Done 👏

The wedding part is mind-blowing and I love the idea of making video mix... it was superb.

One more thing! I am less active so I will try to comment whenever I get time...

Apnki

Sneha
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Posted: 17 years ago
#28
It was a really great part
Yay! They got married!
Now waiting for the real story to begin

Also continue soon as you get time...

Apnki

Kaajal

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