Tuj Se Naraaz - Fan-Fic - 09-05-08- P3&4-Pg 3 - Page 2

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Posted: 17 years ago
#11
nice concept and part
well i never thought that anyone would pair kt and manthan
but its intresting
plz continue soon
and plz pm me
luv heli
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Posted: 17 years ago
#12
gr8 part
feel bad for kt
thank for giving me the link
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: kvn1983

really a nice one⭐️ awwsome😉 too gud😊 and their is Karan Nandani😉 also and dont show that Manthan hates🤢 nandai i wish he loves her😊 more than tanya😆😊 (Don't worry about Manthan and Nandani's relationship cause once you read if parts you will have teaars in your eyes),so Manthan think its Kt due to her Eklavya died😲 (Yepp! Manthan thinks Kt is responsible for Eklavya's death, but the truth is someone else responsible for Eklavya's death😉) plz show their marriage soon😊😛 and make that manthan😉 start loving Kt plz continue it soon😊 and thanks for the pm😉 (Oh! Don't worry Manthan and Kt's marriage will happen soon. And your welcome... 😳)

"Is Saadgi Pe Kon Na Mar Jaye Ae KHUDa
Waar Karte Hain Aur Haath Main Talwar Bhi Nahi
Chup Chup K Humara Deedar Karte Hain Wo
Aur Poocho Tou Kehte Hain K Pyar Bhi Nahi. ."




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Posted: 17 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: **esha**

awesome

loved the 1st update (Thanks a-lot... you don't know how much it means to me)
cant w8 to no wat going to happen next
update soon plz



Apnki Pyari
Kinjal

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Posted: 17 years ago
#15

Originally posted by: Iqbal Neha1

great update sounds really intresting



Thanks and I'm glad that you liked it...

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Posted: 17 years ago
#16

Originally posted by: redi50

nice concept and part

well i never thought that anyone would pair kt and manthan
but its intresting (I'm glad that you liked it and I love Manthan and Kt's sizzling jodi)
plz continue soon
and plz pm me (I will)
luv heli



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Posted: 17 years ago
#17

Originally posted by: cutie13

gr8 part

feel bad for kt (Don't feel bad for Kt cause her life will change after her and Manthan get married 😉)
thank for giving me the link
cont soon



Your welcome
And if you need the link in future I will give it to you...

Apnki Pyari
Kinjal


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Posted: 17 years ago
#18


Please do take your time Kaajal because I am not in a hurry

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Posted: 17 years ago
#19
I'm extremely sorry about the delay of not posting the second part, but I was kinda busy with school and plus my sister's engagement is coming up this Saturday so I will try to post it by Thursday or Friday... depends on my school work and other things....


I hope you guys will like this part and the next part will be much emotional in it. So make sure you have a tissue boxes with you...


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Part Two

Kt was sitting in her room when she heard several people arguing about her. So she decides to go and check what is going on. At the same time Manthan and Lakshya entered shantiniketen.

Both Krishnatulsi and Manthan were devastated after hearing Mihir Dadu's announcement about their marriage. And that marriage has to take place in few days.

Mihir Dadu: Does anyone have any objection about Manthan and Kt's marriage?

Nobody altered a word against Mihir's decision but Kt demanded answers because it was about her life not anyone else life. Even Manthan wanted answers – after-all it was about his life.

Both Manthan and Kt asked for answers from Mihir Dadu…

Mihir told them "I know that you (pointing at Kt) can live with Eklavya's memory forever but for that I will loose Baa forever. And I can't loose Baa anymore after I also my mother and father" Mihir told Kt

"But in all that…. Why do I have to marry Kt who I don't get along with? And we both are totally opposite each other?" Manthan told Mihir Dadu

Vaidehi thought to herself – If Dadu change's his decision than all my plans will be shattered? I have to do something.

Vaidehi leaves from there and goes toward Baa's room where she was resting.

Baa: Who's there?

"Baa, it's me… Vaidehi" she told Baa

"Come here Beta" Baa told Vaidehi

"Baa, I came to tell you that Kt said no for another marriage and we all know that Manthan will keep Kt save and sound" Vaidehi told Baa

Kt couldn't take it anymore and breaks down in-front of everyone and demanded answers from Baa (meaning Tulsi).

Kt heads over to baa and asked her "Baa… you're the one who said – I was your daughter instead of your daughter-in-law and today why aren't you saying anything against Mihir dadu's decision in getting me married to Manthan. Baa I can live my entire life with Eklavya's memory but please don't do this with me"

For the first time Tulsi looked helpless in-front of Kt and also felt guilty that she couldn't do anything for Kt.

Vaidehi brought Baa out where everyone was…

Baa looked at Kt who was shattered by Mihir's decision

While Baa was convincing Krishnatulsi for this marriage while Bhoomi followed Manthan who had left from there few minutes ago.

"There are you?" Bhoomi told Manthan

Manthan stared at Bhoomi than told her "how can I agree to marry someone I hate?"

"Manthan, you remember… Even I hated Joydeep because of his personality and now look… we are so happy in each others arm. Who knows Kt… could change your life for good and one day you fall in love with her" Bhoomi told Manthan

Several minutes there was a dead silent between them afterwards Manthan told her "Maybe your right Sis… it doesn't bother to give destiny a chance, and who knows that one day I could fall in love with her"

"That's the spirit, Bro" said by Bhoomi

Bhoomi hugged Manthan while Karan watched them with tears

Next day, Tulsi came into Kt's room who cursed her destiny and how it plays game with her. Tulsi tried to tell Kt something but Kt just ignored her and told her "Baa, I only agreed for this marriage only for Baa's sake but I can't forgive you for not saying a word in-front of Mihir Dadu"

Tulsi sat down beside Kt and told her "Maybe destiny has something else planned for you Krishna"

"Maybe your right, Baa… Destiny must have planned something else planned for me but I wonder why did destiny play game with my emotions?" Kt asked Baa

Tulsi placed her hand on Kt's head while she kept her head on her lap and told her "Maybe destiny wanted you and Manthan together in first place… that's why you didn't get married to Lakshya in first place and Eklavya was just a mohra to bring you guys together"

Krishna just stared at Baa than hugged her saying "maybe your right… Baa"


Apnki Pyari

Kinjal

Edited by Kasamm - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
#20
I never thought that anyone would pair up Manthan and Krishnatulsi together cause I always imaged her with Lakshya and now with Eklavya... but your fan-fic is so different and emotional that made me have few tears in my eyes... And the video was great, superb and many more...

Please continue soon... 😳




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