FF:Dosti, aur phir Pyaar! LAST PART pg 32! - Page 4

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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
dear dearr mann u write so welll just erad ll d parts 2dayyy nd i was taken back by seeing such an amazing piece of writing keep it up w8in for next part
luv ash
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Finally Aastha may start to realise what she feels for Shubh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I tell you , there's nothing like bringing the hero-heroine together than a courageous rescue of the heroine by the hero..........

Yay!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#33
well she will realize after a BIG HUGE TWIST!!!!!!!!!!!!! 😉😲

just wait and read
thanx for the comments, i just got back from school so, youll have to wait a bit more, let me pray and finish my HW (don't worry i only have like 2)
thanx again!!!!!!!!!!😳

😉
Edited by shubh_astha4eva - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#34
Course I'll read pal....dont worry about it.....

but I'm off to bed now , so I'll check up on the update later, 'k?

So wait for my *ahem* extremely illuminating comments till tomorrow....

BTW , you know what ? The still which both of us are using as siggies rite now , the SA in front of the train one , that wasnt in today's epi!!!!!😡

By God , they're leaving out all SA scenes on the editing table!!!!

Sheesh!!!!!!!!!!!!


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Posted: 16 years ago
#35
i know im so mad, cuz imean i read your update and you go into detail, and when i read it ti wasnt their so i thought there was a problem, oh well i ll update soon, thanx everyone for the comments!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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Posted: 16 years ago
#36
I hate the editing guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its been like what , 4 epis since Aastha returned and not even a single respectable SA moment : only when Shubh caressed her face and they hugged when she came back , and he held her hand for like 1-2 seconds in today's epi......

sheesh!!!!

But yeah , I forgot to tell you...I liked the
BOOM!!!!!! part of the update....ha ha ...BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣
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Posted: 16 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: Shubh_Aastha

I hate the editing guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Its been like what , 4 epis since Aastha returned and not even a single respectable SA moment : only when Shubh caressed her face and they hugged when she came back , and he held her hand for like 1-2 seconds in today's epi......

sheesh!!!!

But yeah , I forgot to tell you...I liked the
BOOM!!!!!! part of the update....ha ha ...BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!🤣


okay om gonna skip the recap this time

shubh brings aastha home.

Amar?: Aastha di?, ye kya hai, i meam..... who, what ...wher, when why and how?
Aastha: mein kuchh der ki liye akela rehena chhathi hoon. and thanx again shubh
Shubh: didnt i tell you theres no sorry or trhankyou in friendship?
Aastha: oh yeah sorry..... i mean.....
Shubh: its okay now go./............

aastha left and here comes all the questions!!!!!!!!!!!1

Amar: shubh what happened
Deepa, bhaiu aastha ko kya hau?
Divya: shubh?

shubh tells everything
Amar: oh that effing Mark, a son of a B****H!

amar, divya, and deepa leftto ther rooms
Shubh went to go get dinner for aastha(how sweet)
aastha's in her room watching kismat konnection!!!!!!!!!!11
shubh walks in, Aastha, yeh lo khanna
shubh puts the tray on the bed and leaves when........
Aastha grabs shubh's hand
Aastha: shubh tumko yeh chot kaise hua?
Shubh, oh ye .......um kuch nahi.....teekh hojaga mamuli se chot hai
Aastha: shubh ye koi mamuli se chot nahi hai, aur aur ye. u got hurt when u were saving me ....... again............. didnt you?
Shubh: its okay leave it.
Aastha: shubh you have helped me loads of times, now its my turn even thogh itsnot as big as waht you do. idhar ruko.
Aastha gfoes and gets that firsat aid kit.
when shes fixing the wound and stuff, you here BAKHUD A TUMHI HO playing ont the tv( wah kya timing hai!😆)

tumhi ehsaanson mein… (these 2 lines shuvbh wqatches what aastha is doing)
tumhi jazbaaton mein…

tumhi lamhaaton mein…
tumhi din raaton mein…

Bakhuda… tumhi ho, (these 4 lines shubh stares at aastha)
Har jagah, tumhi ho…
haan main dekhun jahaan jab…
uss jagah… tumhi ho…

ye jahaan… tumhi ho,
wo jahaan… tumhi ho…(these 4 lines: aastha looks at shubh)
iss zameen se falak ke…
darmiyaan… tumhi ho…

tum hi ho… beshubaa….(eyelock)
tum hi ho…

tum hi ho…. mujh.......................................... BEEP BEEP BEEP

shubh got into his senses and so did aastha(ughhhh stupid cell phone reminder)

Aastha: OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, AMAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shubh: what happened?
Aastha: ill tell you in acouple of minutes!
aastha rushes to amar's room
AMAR,AMAR,AMAR,AMAR,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tomorrows the 23rd !!!!!!!!!!!!11
Amar: so???????????
Aastha: tomorrow is April23rd, stupid!!!!!!!!1
Amar:: oh my god tomorrows 4/23!!!!!!!11, i totally forgot.
since aastha screamed, everypone came to amar's room
Aastha: tomorrow's :
SHABD BHAIYa AUR MAHI BHABHI, and ANGAD BHAIYA AUR KRIPA KI WEDDING ANNIVERSARy HAI!!!!

Shubh, deepa, divya: what???????????????, (confused)

Precap: PARTY< PARTY< PARTY🥳

hope you enjioyed, ill update again later!!!!!!!!

😉
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Posted: 16 years ago
#38
okay this is my 2nd update for today!!!!!!!!!!

recap:
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Aastha: OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!, AMAR!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Shubh: what happened?
Aastha: ill tell you in acouple of minutes!
aastha rushes to amar's room
AMAR,AMAR,AMAR,AMAR,!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! tomorrows the 23rd !!!!!!!!!!!!11
Amar: so???????????
Aastha: tomorrow is April23rd, stupid!!!!!!!!1
Amar:: oh my god tomorrows 4/23!!!!!!!11, i totally forgot.
since aastha screamed, everypone came to amar's room
Aastha: tomorrow's :
SHABD BHAIYa AUR MAHI BHABHI, and ANGAD BHAIYA AUR KRIPA KI WEDDING ANNIVERSARy HAI!!!!

Shubh, deepa, divya: what???????????????, (confused)
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update
Shubh: Whos shabd, mah, angad,and kripa?
deepa, divya: ho?
Aastha: okay , shabd is my older brother, and mahi is his wife, mahi has a twin kripa married to angad who is shabd bhaiya's friend., and i call him lovingly bhaiya .
Shubh: oh, see you guys hide alot of things, next were gonna see a baby come!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aastha: hahahahahaha, very funny shubh.
aastha: okay me and amar were going to plan a surprise, and as you guys can see we totally forgot.
amar: we have this whole week off of college, and i had booked tickets a long time ago, and swayam is also coming.
Shubh: okay.

next morning: they all get readyto go to the airport to Canada.
shubh: everyone ready?
amar: yes
Shubh: where's deepa, aastha, and divya?
amar: girls
deepa, n divya: girls wat?
amar: nothing nothing.....
oh i for got my cell upstairs.
shubh goes upstairs and gets his cell and leaves. he pases by aastha's room and sees that shes struggling to puit her necklace on.
shubh: oh god aastha, tum abhi bhi tayar nahi ho?
aastha: ye stupid necklacce close karega nahi( im sorry again my hindi is the worst!!!!!!😭😭)
shubh goes upto aastha and ties the necklace for her
aastha closes her eyes as she feels shubhs touch.
they could almost hear eachothers heartbeats.
Shubh: aastha?
Aastha: uh.yeah.......
Shubh: chale
aastha: thanx
Shubh: aastha!!!!!!!!!!!!!
aastha: oh yeah no sorry no thankyou

they reached the airport, they went into the plane and sat.:
shubh, aastha, deepa, divya, amar.

aastha doesnt like plane rides, so when the plane started, she held shubh's hand real tight, not realiziong its shubh, .
shubh looked at her confused and then saw that aastha was scared

a couple of minutes later(15-20)
aastha still had her eyes closed, she had falklen asleep shubh was reading a book and then aastha leaned in shubh's shoulder for the whole time, and of course shubh didnt mind, and he fell asleep as well.

im gonna skip over to them being at shabd's house.Aastha: BHAIYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
shabd:


Shabd: hi chutki!!!!!
aastha: dont cal me that, aur hamari pyuaari mahi bhabhi kaha hain?
mahi:

mahi: aastha!!!!!!! aur amarkaha hai???????
amar: yaha!!!!!!!!!
amar came from behind and scared mahi!!!11111
mahi: hes srtill the same
Aastha: angad aur kripa kaha hai?
kripa:


anagd:


anagd/ kripa: hi !!!!!!!!!11

Shabd: ye kon he?

Aastha: okay bhaiy, ye hai shubh, ye hai, deepa, aur ye hai,divya. later, shubh aur deepa ka bhaiya:swayam bhi ayge
Shabd: welcome
at nihght they all sat in the living room watching a movie, they watched jab we met

aastha: didnt watch she was outside in the porch on the swing.
shubh: saw this and went to her:
shubh: any problem
aastha: huh...oh.....noo its nothingim a bit tierd\ed.
shubh: then go to sleep, and dont forget abpot the you know what.
aasthga: exactly. thats the problem.
shubh: youre the one who said you wanted a surprise?
aasth: ohhhhhhh, imean wer dong everything, but we forgot to do the biggest hting.
shubh: what?
aastgha: the gifts, where am i supposed to go get htem
Shubh: the mall, dont worry i have everything setup
aastha: shubh!!!!!!!!!, thankyou thankyou thankyouthankyou !!!!!!111, she hugged him
shubh: ughhhhhhhh you keep forgetting, no sorrys no thnkyou's
aastha: oh yeah sorry, i did it again.........

precap: i decided to put thte party event in the next update, sorry so next update is PArTY,PARTY,PARTY,PARTY
hope you enjoyed!!!!!!!!!!!!! it was a bit boring, but oh well.

😉


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Posted: 16 years ago
#39
niceeee updateee dearrrr go on love ur style of i ncludinggg otehr chars and allll choc utee
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Posted: 16 years ago
#40
plz continue with ur ff
i love it

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