Prem Heer not talking anymore!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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SCENE 1
Veera is hospitalised.Everyone in the family goes 2 c her.Veera explains Prem why she was forced 2 take this suicidal step.Prem is shocked 2 know that Heer kept

the truth in hiding.
He decides 2 talk about it 2 Heer.
SCENE 2
Prem is at home.Heer is sitting down praying 4 Veera's speedy recovery.Prem decides 2 wait.After some time Heer enters Prem's room.
"Arre tum kab aaye?"
"Abhi.."
"Veera kaisi hai.."
"Tumne aisa kyun kiya Heer..?"
"Kya kiya maine.."Heer is scared.
"Tumne mujhse yeh sab chupa kar kyun rakha..."
"Prem mujhe kuch samajh mein nahin aa raha tha.Ghar mein sabn kitne khush the.."
"Aur tumne sab ki khushi ko maatam mein badal diya..."Prem cuts her short in between.
"Maine?"Heer is shocked at the allegation.Tears well up in her eyes.
Prem leaves the room.
SCENE 3
It's early morning & Prem is in the hospital.
"Maa aap poori raat jagin hain,aap ghar jayiye.Main hoon naa yahan par."Prem tells Gayatri.Gayatri doesn't know that Prem is angry at Heer.She returns home.
Heer is packing her clothes in her room,just then Gayatri enters.
"Heer is waqt kahan jaane ki tayari kar rahi ho?"
"Maa Veera ke liye mannat maangne jaa rahin hoon,Ajmer mein."
"Jab tak tu is ghar mein hai mere ghar par koi mushkil nahin aa sakti."Gaytri blesses Heer.
SCENE 4
Prem is in the hospital.
"Bhaiya main aap se ek baat kahun?"Veera asks Prem.
"Bolo."Prem says with a faint smile.
"Maine bhabhi ki baat na maan kar bahut badi galti ki.Unhon ne baar baar mujhe warn kiya lekin phir bhi maine Rishabh ko sahi samjha."
Prem starts regretting his rude behaviour 2 Heer.
"Kya tum ab bhi Rishabh se shaadi karna chahti ho?"
"Nahin."
"Aur aaj jo waada woh tumse kar kay gaya hai.Tumne to uska proposal accept kiya naa."Prem reminds her.
"Bhaiya aise vaade woh pehle bhi kar chuka hai.This time I m going 2 teach him a lesson.Is baar uski izzat ka aisa tamasha banaungi ki woh zindagi bhar yaad

rakhega."
"Veera tum pehle theek ho jaao."Prem gently pulls her cheeks.
SCENE 5
Every1 at home is really worried.Prem returns home.
"Prem.."Gayatri is in tears.
"Kya hua maa?"Prem fails 2 understand everybody's reaction.Gayatri tells Prem about Heer.
"Toh kya hua.."
"Abhi abhi ek phone aaya hai....Heer ka accident ho gaya hai.."
Prem feels that he will faint.He 4gets his anger.He rushes out.
SCENE 6
Prem is driving on the highway route driving his car,he is continuously wiping his tears that r blurring his vision.
SONG HERE
To phir aao mujhko satao
To phir aao mujhko rulao
Dil baadal bane
Ankhein behne lagein....Anhein aise uthein jaise aandhi chale.
FROM AWAARAPAN
SCENE 7
Prem has been driving all night.He finally reaches the mosque in Ajmer frantically searching 4 Heer all around.He enters the mosque & kneels down as though

completely defeated.He suddenly feels a familiar girl seated next 2 him.He looks at her & discovers it is Heer.
"Heer"He almost cries out suddenly.
Heer opens her eyes & is shocked 2 c Prem.Prem's eyes have a luk as though asking 4 forgiveness.
SONG HERE
"Kaise batayein tumhe aur kis tarah yeh kitna tumhe hum chaahte hain..
Saaya bhi tera dikhe to paas jaake usmein simat hum jaate hain."
FROM KISMAT KONNECTION
"Tum theek ho naa Heer."
"Kyon kya hua.."
"Maa ne bataya ki tumhaara accident ho gaya.Pal bhar ke liye aisa laga jaise meri duniya khatm ho gayi."
"Prem main theek hoon."
"Maine gusse mein tumhe pata nahin kya bol diya..."
"Prem tumhe haq hai."
Heer wipes his tears.
"Chalein."
Prem holds Heer's hands.
SONG HERE
Ek Heer thi aur tha ek raanjha
Kehte hain mere gaon mein
Sacha ho dil to
Sau mushkilein ho
Jhukta naseeba paon mein
FROM SINGH IS KING

Luv u all frnds.Big welcome 2 all new members on this forum.Enjoy.

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naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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my dear friends do check page 2 do you agree with me
brb dont go please .............. you vanish away 😭
you scared me as heer met an Accident . thank God she is save . by the way why dont you write a ff every week end we all will love to read that as you are very great writer . you only predict . i am requesting you to start a ff please as your all 4 part are beautiful .
i wish this happen but i cannot see prem crying any more .
😡
an other week
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oh my god ...wait i am reading ..nice one
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Posted: 17 years ago
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great ff loved it

keep it up👍🏼

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Posted: 17 years ago
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very nice dear ....very gud...keep it up yaar...superb

wid love
PARTH😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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that was nice😊
only if the balaji creatives thought this way😭
naddiya26 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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are you going to make a ff please
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Posted: 17 years ago
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i know and only in one epi!!!man i like this!!
khushix thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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nice one...👏👏 was actually imagining the scene...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow tht was brill, 4 a sec i was thinking this was a written update of the day, ur 2 gd u shud b part of ekta's team or something writing the next parts seriously ur amazing.
thanx 4 such a nice read..but plz continue
xxx

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