episode update by me

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hii all some of my friends were liking my descriptions so i planned to give update of todays episode
the episode starts with shambhoo asking veer to meet near mandir veer coming out of tent and dharam finding veer out of his tent and he understands very well that he has some big plan going on in his mind and wants to defeat him and not let him win . when veer sees dharam he goes inside his tent . and makes a shadow to show dharam that he is inside the tent but he runs away from the other side . dharam waits for long and wonders how can veer sits like that by keeping his hand to mouth. he grows suspicious and went towards the tent and found to his surprise veer escaped and ran away. with certaintyand anger he says he will not allow him to become successful in his intrigues and plans. veer goes towards the mandir and finds shera there with shambhoo . he becomes shocked and ask her why you are here? she says she is here to assisst him. now shera shambhoo and veer goes towards the ground of mela in dark night . veer questions shambhoo why he has brought him here. then shambhoo shows hathiyaar all swords hidden inside the vehicle and grassthey hear some noise and quickly shera and shambhoo hides themselves . veer is confident and confirmed . dharam comes following them and atlast he shouts veer when veer was hiding all swords . and he comes and says that he knows he is doing something very big and he will never grant independance to shramiks and in anger and determination veer says azaadi toh hum leke raheingey dharam chaahe tum jo bho karlo.after dharam leaves veer takes a proper breath e and shambhoo comes and says thankyou for saving me otherwise the people who steals hathiyaar gets a punishment of execution in aryanagar. shera also comes out they give money to shambhoo he leaves saying kafi hai . now shera cries and says hum chor kisi par ahsaan nahin katey i thought you have taken from me work so you will give my money. hearing sheras words veer comes to tears and says you have done good thing in reminding me you will get your money he puts some money and goes away. next day they are on the way to aryanagar and shera is getting all hathiyaar hidden through paalki by disguising herself as village woman. veer says to all the shramiks about the shera and her work one member of aryavarths listens his conversation with shramiks and informs maharaj dharam about it . there
dharam veers enemies jaiwardhan rajyasabha and agni is planning to finish veers mother and sister as they finished veers father soma . inthe name of dharam. so that dharam and veer becomes enemies.
in the mahal nivriti is very happy . she is preparing laddoos in the happiness of dharam veers arrival from the yatra and orders some servants to distribute mithhaais among shramiks too. veers mother pari comes there . nivriti greets her well and feeds her up one laddo into her mouth and says she has to prepare puja ki thhali for veer uski nazar utaarney ke liyeh but stops and realise with tears in her eyes that now veer no more can come to her. so pari consoles her by saying that even though he dont comes in the mahal but your aashirwaad will reach to him by becoming double as he gets blessings from not one but two of his mothers.
there veer realises that dharam is missing so he rushes to find him and they meet in the way and start arguing. then dharam says what i have done when veer looks he becomes tensed shera is coming among the sainiks . it is obvious she is caught by them .
the serial ends here
please do reply how you liked my update as it is my first try .😊

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Posted: 17 years ago
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👏 nice one!
just a suggestion : if u cud add u'r own comments.. u noe the funny ones and make it more better! buh goo try dear!!
ps : plzz dnt feel bad!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: vamakshi

👏 nice one!

just a suggestion : if u cud add u'r own comments.. u noe the funny ones and make it more better! buh goo try dear!!
ps : plzz dnt feel bad!

hmm yeh dear as it was my first try i should take your suggestion but if i add my comments then it s gonna become too long na dear between thankyou for liking it
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thanx what happen 2 shera y did she ask money frm veer.
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: farahnaazz

hmm yeh dear as it was my first try i should take your suggestion but if i add my comments then it s gonna become too long na dear between thankyou for liking it

oh yes... buh still.. i' mean i lil bit here and there wont make a huge difference!!😆
aand no needa thnaak😳
first try me it was surperbb!!👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: sumera siddiqui

Thanx what happen 2 shera y did she ask money frm veer.

hmm shera is so unpredictable dont know what she do at what momet now suddenly she grew mean and started crying and it looked a pretension as there was love in her eyes towards veer.😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thank u for the update... 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks farah for the update
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks Farah 4 d amazing update 🤗.. u really choose d right words 👏 👏..
enjoyed it 😊...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Originally posted by: farahnaazz

hmm shera is so unpredictable dont know what she do at what momet now suddenly she grew mean and started crying and it looked a pretension as there was love in her eyes towards veer.😊

actually doesn't wanted Veer to be punished for stealing weapons as shambhon told them that for a theif their is only one punishment "death" in Aaryanagar and if she will not pretend that she is a bad girl, Veer will not definitely give her this job, u know this is love to get some one's problem to yourself

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