FF: Sucha Pyaar NOTE page 56 - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
#41

THANK U ALL SOO MUCH!!!!🤗🤗

i really aprrieciate ur comments.
i am posting then next part soon wen i'm dun
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Posted: 17 years ago
#42
precap: SV marriage discussion, fight etc.
Vidya was walking home and she went upstars to her room. Shalu was there wearing a green salwar kameez.
Shalu: Di ur here? Mom said to get ready. Here she picked out a dress 4 u.
(it was a really pretty red one)
Vidya: Ok. U go i'll get ready.
***
At Sagar's
SM: Sagar beta!! Have u decided what to wear yet??
Sagar: No Mom!! Can u hlp me out?
SM: Well u should wear something traditional..wear a kurta and jeans or something.
Sagar: Ok. (he decided to wear a black kurta, and he was looking sooo hot..LOL)
***
Now Sagar and Chinu and their parents are in front of Vidya's house. They walk in and are greeted by Vidya's mom. They come in and take a seat.
VM: Shalu! jah aur aapni didi ko bula!
Shalu:Jee.
Shalu went upstairs into Vidya's room. Vidya was walking around her room all nervous, playing with the end of her dupatta.
Vidya: Shalu!! Who is the guy? Dikhne main kaisa hain?? Is he ugly? And--(cut off by Shalu)
Shalu: Whoa di!! And we can't talk now Mom said come down immeadiatly. And put a smile on ur face otherwise u know Mom.
Vidya: (groans) Fine!!!
So Shalu and Vidya are walking down the stairs, and Vidya's mom is waiting for them there.
VM: Ok Vidya beta, go in the kitchen aur sub ke liye chai lao. Aur Shalu, let's go back in the room.
Vidya: Jee maa.
So Vidya goes into the kitchen, and she's talking to herself. "Hmm, how do I get this guy to not like me?? Aha!! I'll put salt in his chai!! Perfect!! She quickly grabbed the salt and dumped two sppons into one cup. and she made sure she knew which one it was so she could give it to the guy.
NOTE: Neither Sagar or Vidya know that they're parents wanna get them married
Vidya walks into the room and she is extremly shocked to see Sagar. Sagar was looking around the room and when he spots Vidya his eyes widen. Both of them are completly like..frozen. (hehe)
VM: Vidya..(embarassesd voice almost) Chai do subko..
Vidya: Huh? Oh Chai..jee abhi dehti hoon. Sagar's mom whispers to Sagar's dad" Aachi ladki hai. And in dono ki jodi bohut aachi hai" Sagar's dad smiles and says "han"
Vidya gives the chai to everyone except Sagar. As she's giving him the chai, she glares at him. Everyone likes the chai, and when Sagar takes a sip; he's about to spit it out, but then he looks at Vidya, who is also looking at him, with an evil smile on her face.
SD: Ok so, I think we should let them talk; and see if they like each other.
VM: Han bilkul! Vidya, tum dono upar terrace pe jao.
Vidya looks at Sagar and says "Jee maa..and at looking at Sagar, she says, "Hum chalen?"
Sagar:Han chalo"
**(now on the terrace)
As soon as they get there, Vidya says
Vidya: Look, please say no! I don't want to get married yet ok!! I want to finish college first..And i can't say no..maa will kill me..please..say no!
Sagar is really happy inside, but also he's not...he doesn't know why...but he decided to make Vidya frustrated..so he's gonna make up stories (hehe kyun bechari ko tang kate ho? lol)
Sagar:Leken kyun Vidya? Kyun?
Vidya looks at him strangly: KYA?? Tum is rishtey ke liye raazi ho?
Sagar: (walks closer) Han Vidya..leken agar tum nahi karna jaati ho shaddi, then its ok..but...
Vidya looks at him: What?
Sagar: Well u see, my dad really wants me to take over the business soon, and so do I, I really want to take over too, but his one condition is that I have to get married within the next month..otherwise the power of attorney will go to Chinu, and I'll get only 10%. And I don't think I will be able to find a girl my parents like within one month. He turned around beacuse if he didn't his smile would give it away.
Vidya feels horrible..She wants to say yes for Sagar, but this is their life they're talking about. She puts her hand on his shoulder. Sagar turns around.(he controlled his laughter)
Vidya: Dekho, I would love to help u, but this is my life we're talking about. I mean..u know?
Sagar: I understand Vidya. But this is really important to me..Oh well..I can't force u..So I can deal with 10%..its ok...(he thinks in his head, oh shit man what if she says ok..aww man!! i have to think of something)
Vidya: Really? U will do that for me? She hugs him very tightly.."thank u thank u thank u!!! I lov---(realizes what she was gonna say and stops)
Sagar pulls her off him: What??
Vidya: Nothing!! I said nothing.
Sagar: Vidya u can't fool me ok?
Vidya: I said nothing!! She turns around to walk away but Sagar grabs her wrist and pulls her back to him.They r standing so close that they're bodies are pressed together. But Sagar is still behing vidya holding her arm. Vidya is scared.
Sagar(whispers) I love u too.
And he kisses her on the cheek and runs off to go downstairs. And while going, he says "Aur han! I'm gonna say yes! So I don't know what you're gonna do now!"
Vidya is standing there shocked. She puts her hand on the cheek where he kissed her. She blushes and runs down. She sees everyone sitting there. She glares at Sagar who smiles at her.
SD: Sagar beta are u ok with this rishta?
Sagar: I dunno dad, give me sometime to think. (while he said that, he was starting at Vidya who sighed in relief)
SM: Aur Vidya beti tum?
Vidya looks down and then at Sagar: Jee woh mujhe bhi thoda waqt jhaiye, sochne ke liye.
SD:(to vidya's mom) Theek hain behenji hum chalte hain. Aur jab in dono ne soch liye hoga toh tub hum baath karte hain.
VM: Han jee theek hain.
Now everone gets up to leave and Vidya goes to the kitchen alone. (no1 there)
Sagar sneaks over to the kitchen and sees Vidya. He walks up behind her and grabs her around the waist. Vidya is about to scream when he take one of his hands and puts it around her mouth and the other is still around her waist. Then Vidya realizes it's Sagar.
Vidya(whispers): Tum yahan? Kya kar rahe ho! Chodo Mujhe!!
Sagar: Ok! I just came to see u.
He kisses her cheek and says "Bye!!"
Vidya whirls around, but she sees that he already left.
Precap:IDK yet..still thinking
if u guys want, i can post another update since im bored.? what say???
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Posted: 17 years ago
#43
i hv the same type of thing going on in my FF...that *shrad and divyanka find out they're marrying each toher...but the scenario is a little different....I lve your story...kind of reminds of me of my fav show until it finished...KUTUMB....continue soon!
our suhaag raats will probably clash..heheh
LOVE IT!
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Posted: 17 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: lexie

great update.......
can we have another one soon.....................

hey im priya
whats ur name? and tahk u 4 readin my ff
Priya_SD thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: kmishra

i hv the same type of thing going on in my FF...that *shrad and divyanka find out they're marrying each toher...but the scenario is a little different....I lve your story...kind of reminds of me of my fav show until it finished...KUTUMB....continue soon!

our suhaag raats will probably clash..heheh
LOVE IT!

haha😆 mabye they will clash...but then agian i mite delay a lil' bit b4 the wedding..u no, sum more cute SV scenes...
kmishra thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#46

i'm probably going to have it after 2-3 parts more...i've made my readers depirved of many scenes...im gonna put the SR before skl starts...ughh...anyway lookign forward to the update!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
#47
awesome update! awww they like each other..continue soon!
rmj1990 thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#48
awwww that was soo cute...typical sagar lol...
i hope they say yes....
they both secretly like each other=P
wicked update..cont. soon
Ankuu thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#49
ahaha awwwwwwwwwww soo cute...lol
loved it hun =)
continue soon hun =)

rainydays. thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
#50
i just started reading ur ff and i just wanna say itz AWESOME!!!
vidya gets mad easily😆
anyway..can't wait to read ur next update. plz continue soon😊

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