FF: Pyaar, Dosti Aur Kya?[Pt.47-Pg.70] SEPT. 6th

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kmishra

@kmishra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Hi, this is my first time with a fan fic. I'll try to make it a good one.

FF: Pyaar, Dosti, Aur Kya?

Cast:

Nikhil Mathur- Sharad Malhotra-Popular. Hot. Intelligent Athletic. Kind and caring. All girls like him. But he is still down to earth and is a focused student. He still flirts a little though. Loves all his friends. Best friends with Amrita since 8th grade. Likes her but isn't sure about her feelings toward him. He flirts with her but Amrita just thinks he is being his naughty self.

Amrita Sahay-Divyanka Tripathi-Popular. Beautiful. Smart. Sweet. Kind. Best friends with Nikhil. Likes him as well but just like Nikhil isn't sure about his feelings.

Kiran Arailee- Pretty but not as much as Amrita. Likes Nikhil and tries to make him love her.

Sajid Khurana- Just like Nikhil but not as hot, intelligent, and popular. He is very nice. Loves to go out. Has a little love affair going on with Pooja.

Pooja Bakshi- Pretty. Quiet and shy. Best friends with Amrita. Loves Sajid.

Ravi Tash- Cute. Helping and thoughtful. Shy. And is waiting for the right girl.

Jay Ritra-Bad boy. Flirts with every pretty girl in college. A daily misbehaver with Amrita.

(Everyone Except Jay Are in Nikhil's group.)

Part One:

Girl's Hostel: Amrita's room.

Amrita is lying on her bad working on her laptop. Her cellphone rings. She looks at it and picks it up right away. It was Kiran remiding Amrita of the fancy dinner plans they all had planned. After five minutes of talking on the phone, Amrita steps in the shower to get ready. When Amrita is done with her shower, she comes out and goes in her room in a towel. When she walks in, she finds Nikhil waiting for her. Nikhil's wearing a suit and is looking very handsome.

Amrita- NIkhil! What are you doing here?!

Nikhil- I came here to pick you up. Everyone's probably at the restuarant waiting for us. So get ready quick and we'll leave.

Amrita- Okay. But how can i get ready if you're here? So if you don't mind *Amrita gestures to the door.*

Nikhil- Don't worry Divya. I'll just close my eyes. *Nikhil smiles slyly and closes his eyes* Okay get ready.

Amrita- Nikhil! Get out NOW! Please. *She tugs his arm.* Please

Nikhil- Okay. Okay. Fine, I'll leave. "He starts to go out of the door* Oh and Ago.mrita, you're looking gorgeous. right now.

Amrita- Nikhil leave! Badmash.

Nikhil- *Smiles and snickers* I'll be waiting outside.

Amrita closes the door and and gets ready. She keeps smiling thinking about Nikhil. Finally Amrita comes out of her room. Nikhil looks at her and just stares at her beauty. Amrita was wearing something like this. https://alldresses.com/mas_assets/product/d4009.jpg

Amrita- Do I look okay? It isn't too revealing right?

Nikhil- Yes everything is fine. Shall we leave?

Amrita nods.

At the elegant restaurant:

Nikhil and Amrita arrive at the restaurant and find their friends and go sit at the table.

Kiran- Where you guys?

Nikhil- Amrita was getting ready forever like usual.

Amrita- Shut up Nikhil. *Nikhil Smirks*

Sajid- Anyway guys, should I call the waiter now?

Pooja- Yeah. I'm starving.

Kiran- Amrita. I must say you're looking gorgeous tonight. *Everyone agrees* *Amrita thanks her* NIkhil. Do you think I'm looking nice? *Nikhil Nods* *Kiran puts her hand on his under the table. But Nikhil moves his hand right away.

They all just chat now.

After the dinner:

Nikhil is dropping Amrita off. Once they arrive at the hostel. Nikhil opens the car door for Amrita. She steps out and starts to go toward the hostel entrance.

Nikhil- Amrita. *Nikhil grabs her hand. She turns around and walks a little back toward him.* I know I haven't really told you yet but you look really beautiful.

Amrita smiles. Nikhil grabs her by the shoulders and starts to come closer. Before anything, Nikhil's cell rings. It was Ravi asking where Nikhil was.

Nikhil- Im coming. *He looks at Amrita* I have to go. Bye Amrita.

Amrita- Bye. *They both smile at each other.*

Amrita starts to walk away into the hostel. Nikhil watches her leave and then gets in the car. Before driving off, he whispers *I love you, Amrita.* And drives away.

TBC...

Well sorry for when it got a little slow. It will probabbly start to get better. Please correct any of my errors. And tell me any way to improve my writng.

Thanks for reading. =)

If you want i will continue.

Pre cap- Jay is trying to forcefully kiss Amrita.

Please comment.

Edited by kmishra - 16 years ago

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Posted: 17 years ago

Its a good start!!! Im looking forward to the next update... And the title for this FF is awesome.. Pyaar, Dosti Aur Kya? I love it!!! And its a brilliant start so keep it up!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

that was REALLY good, continue soon i love it

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kmishra

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Posted: 17 years ago

That means a lot. Thank you very much.

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Maria

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Posted: 17 years ago

Awesome! This is amazing! Continue soon..precap seems interesting.

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kmishra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thannk You Very Much. Will update soon =)

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Sonali

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Posted: 17 years ago

awesome start! I guess it's like Ishq Vishk and Jaane Tu Ya Jaane Na
very good choice in names and setting!

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kmishra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Thank You. Will have an update by tonight.

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kmishra

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Posted: 17 years ago

Part 2-

Amrita, Pooja, and Sajid were walking to the boys' hostel to hang out at the lounge they had. Pooja and Sajid held hands every once in a while but they wanted to keep their relationship secret because they didn't want it to be such a big deal. The whole group knew about their love and affair but they didn't say anything because they could tell it was meant to be a secret.

Before they reached the boys' hostel, Amrita said she had to drop off her books in her room.

Pooja- Do you want me to go with you?

Amrita- No it's fine. I'll just drop them off in my room and come right away.

Sajid- Okay. Come fast.

Amrita leaves. She goes in her room, drops off the books and goes to the bathroom before she takes off to the boys' hostel. Amrita has trouble locking her room since the lock is a little jammed. All of a sudden a voice says: Lock's not working?

Amrita- Ye- *She stops as soon as she looks up.* What are you doing here, Jay?

Jay- I just came to help a friend. *He comes closer.* I think the problem is from inside. *He opens the door.*

Amrita comes inside as well.

Meanwhile, in the lounge:

Ravi- Hey, where's Amrita? Shouldn't she have come here a while ago?

Sajid- I don't know she said she was just going to drop her books off in her room That's all right? *He looked toward Pooja.*

Pooja- Yeah. That's all she said.

Nikhil-I wonder what's taking her so long. Should I go see?

Kiran- Yeah, I'll come with you.

Pooja, Sajid, and Ravi look at each other, because they know that Kiran will do something to ruin Amrita and Nikhil's conversation.

Sajid- Umm Kiran, I wanted to ask you something in private.

Kiran-Tell me later after we get Amrita.

Sajid- But it is urgent.

Nikhil- Maybe you should stay if it's that important.

Kiran-Okay.

Meanwhile:

Jay- Done! The lock was just a little stuck No problem.

Amrita- Okay, Thank you. Bye.

Amrita started to leave, expecting Jay to follow her, but instead he grabbed her hand and pulled her to him.

Amrita- Jay! Leave me! *She struggles to get out of his grasp.*

Jay- *Presses her against the wall* What's wrong, Amrita? None of your friends are here now. Just give me a chance.

Amrita- Jay, please leave me. *Tears started to run down her face.*

Jay- Sorry, Amrita. I've waited too long. I can't control myself anymore. *Amrita's dupatta falls.*

Jay starts to come closer. He tries to forcefully kiss Amrita. Amrita is shaking her head to get out of his grip, but it is too hard; he has her nailed to the wall. Amrita is continuously saying to leave her. As soon as Jay is right about to kiss her.

Nikhil- Jay! Leave her right now!

Amrita and Jay look up.

Amrita- Nikhil! *A small smile comes on her face.*

Jay-What if I don't? What if I don't leave her, what will you do, Nikhil?

Nikhil starts to charge toward Jay and takes him by the neck. Nikhil has Jay against the wall now. Amrita picks up her dupatta and is in shock.

Nikhil-Did you get your answer?

Jay- Why do you care? Come on we're guys. We both know why we're really with Amrita. *Nikhil punches him in the stomach.*

Nikhil- What did you say?! *Lowers his tone* Listen. Not all guys think about the same thing. Not all guys are like you, Jay, who don't respect women. Understand? Now say sorry to Amrita now.

Jay has no choice but to apologize since Nikhil had him almost strangled to death.

Jay- Okay. I will.

Nikhil released him.

Amrita is still a little stirred up. Jay walks by her, looks at her, apologizes and just leaves.

Amrita- Thank you, Nikhil. If you hadn't come today then, I don't know what would have happened. Tha-

Nikhil- Amrita, you know you don't have to thank me. We're best friends for as long as I can remember. It was my duty to do this.

Amrita steps closer to him. They both look into each other's eyes. They both come closer and closer.

Precap- Pooja is telling Amrita that Nikhil loves her but she just doesn't know it. Sajid and Ravi are telling Nikhil that Amrita loves him but is just unsure whether he likes her back or not.

Will update soon =) If you guys want.

Please comment.

Thank you,

Kmishra

Edited by kmishra - 17 years ago