New FF: Parivaar aur Pyaar

Since I'm bored to death on the weekend, I have decided to write a FF. I promise I won't take long to update it as I know how it is like to be anxious – it's like pure torture like right now waiting to see what will happen on KDMHMD on Monday!

This FF will be based on KDMHMD, but characters will be from other serials as well but with a little difference.. it will be a mixture of traditional and modern characters and personalities.

The primary location will be California, and New York, US.

The name would be "Parivaar aur pyaar" I might change it later on..

Characters: (some characters will enter the story later on)

Harshit Chopra ~ as Prem Juneja– the eldest one out of his two brothers. He has his own company which is separate from his father's. His personality is more of want to have fun with a bit of seriousness. He is not at all like in the serial – he will do things that his parents will say to him as long as he is also happy meaning if he also wants to do it. He believes in love and is currently dating Priya Mehra. His company is situated in California.

Panchi Bohra ~ as Priya Mehra – She is girl friend of Prem and she also considers Prem as her Best Friend as she have known him since they attended college. She works for Prem's Father. She also has a sister name Pooja Mehra.

Roshini Chopra ~ as Pooja Mehra – sister of Priya and is currently studying/working in New York. Her best friend is Heer Mann.

Aditti Gupta ~ as Heer Mann – She is a spoiled sister and is also modern in dress up, and knows what she wants. She has attitude but at right amount. She will not take No as an answer and will not give up on things she really wants to have. She is currently single and doesn't want to settle down right now. She has two important people in her life: one her sister, Diya Mann Walia and other her best friend, Pooja Mehra. She also owns her own company and is very business minded. Her company is situated in New York.

Prachi Desai~ as Diya Mann Walia– She is the elder sister of Heer and loves her very much. She works at her husband company. She makes sure that Heer gets everything she wants so she spoils heer a lot. She is married to Jai Walia.

Ram Kapoor ~ as Jai Walia – Husband of Diya and treats her wife's sister Heer, as her own sister. He has his own company and as well as helps out at his wife's sister company. His company is situated in California. His company is very famous and many companies wants to do business with his company, one of them being Prem Industries.

This story line is merely more interaction with the above characters and not much with the parents in the beginning. Prem's parents are same as in the serial. Heer parents are not alive so her sister has brought her up. Priya and Pooja's parents are Mihir and Tulsi (from the serial KSKBT).

Rest of the characters like Prem's brothers will be introduced later on.

I hope you guys like the intro and please let me know what you think.

Thanks

Komal

i am waitnig for the ff komal di.

I love all the characters..........I give u 100 out of 100 for the actors selection...........now, can't wait for the FF............tfs

very nice dear very good do cont soon i will be waiting

Hi Komal!

The character sketch sounds great! I like the fact that it will be more modern and western.

Looking forward to reading.
Love,
~Payal

Sounds great, im really looking forward to the first part!

Here is Part 1:

Heer is working in her office and researching about different companies as she needs to decide which company will be best for her company. She calls Pooja over to her cabin and ask for her suggestions on how to get more information.

Heer: Pooja, you know how I want to expand my company and I would like to work with one of the best companies. I have narrowed down and Prem industries seems to be doing very great and I would like to get more information on the owner. Do you have any suggestions?

Pooja: hmmm y don't you set up a meeting with the owner and then you can see how he is?

Heer: But I don't want them to know that I want to do business with them, I want to find out first then make a decision becuz I don't want to be stuck position where I won't be able to leave if I don't like it.

Pooja: you're right..we need to first know about the owner..y don't you call your brother-in 'law maybe he might help you..

Heer: no I want to do this on my own'maybe I myself need to pay the owner a visit but I cant let them know that I am the owner of a company'maybe I shuld apply for a job position there and in that way I will know how they deal with the matter'wat u think?

Pooja: mmm well that also sounds good but you have to be careful..but I know you will do it..

Heer: yes I have to be very careful'so lets book a flight to California'

Pooja: sure!

Prem is in his office and he is interviewing for his Personal assistant position. As his last PA had to leave the job due to family emergency so now he really needs a PA. He has done a lot of interviews but has not found the Perfect PA who knows how to do everything without him giving training.

Recently, he received a email from a girl name heer ' she has attached her resume and is interested in applying. Prem is looking at resume and he notices that she has only worked at a small firm before. So he calls Priya

Prem: hi sweetheart, how are you?

Priya: Hey im gud..wat abt you?

Prem: Im gud but I need your help

Priya: tell me

Prem: well you know that I am hiring for my PA position and haven't found any

Priya: yes I know'

Prem: well I just received a email from a girl name heer, she is interested but she doesn't have enough work experience..should I give her an appointment?

Priya: mmm well you should if she is willing to do the job and you need PA so badly..i wish I could help but I have my own job..i think you should at least give her chance

Prem: yes I think you're right..ill give her a chance..so am I seeing you tonight for dinner?

Priya: yes sure! I also need a break from work..wat time will you come by?

Prem: how about 8?

Priya: sounds good ..so ill see you at 8..

Prem: yes bye sweetheart

Priya: bye

Heer is checking her inbox and she finally sees an appointment letter from Prem industries and she is very excited..i knew he will reply'

Well California, I am coming'it will be exciting experience

I think I should also call diya di..she will be so happy to see me'

That was great!

Great start!

I'm looking forward to what Prem will do about Priya when he realizes he's in love with Heer...

Though, I'm sure thats not in the works for a long time to come...

Anyway, continue soon! :)

Love,
~Payal

very nice start good i am looking forword for heer and prem's meeting do cont soon dear