How I want tomorrow's epi to be!!

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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey guys!
I was just wondering...how would i want tomorrow's epi to be...and this whole planned out scene came to my mind...all at once....so i am writing it...you guyz can contribute too...how you'd want it to be! Hope u like mine!!😃😃


Riddhima is all pissed at Mallika, but happy that she finally told her off. She goes upstairs, and goes to her room. Finding no one there, she sits down and thinks over everything that had happened in the last few days.

Riddhima: *to herself* yeh kia ho gaya tha mujhe...maine aisay Mallika ko....par main kia karti...she totally deserves it...(stays quiet for sometime) par woh to sirf Armaan se baat ker rahi thi na...to mujhe itna bura kyun lagta hai...agar woh Rahul se iss tarah baat kerti tab to main aissa feel nahi kerti...lekin dost to mera Rahul bhi hai aur Armaan bhi...phir kyun....(becomes quiet)

She is sitting on the bed. After thinking over things, her eyes wander to her hands that were patterned with henna. She looks closely, then picks up a mehndi cone that was lying in a thaal. Very slowly and very minutely, she writes a small 'a' in the corner of her hand, in a design where no one can figure it out. She smiles looking at it, then again she wonders why she wrote it out. But she pushes the thoughts out of her mind as someone knocks on the door. She quickly puts the cone down and opens the door. Its Padma.

Riddhima: arey Ma ap...?

Padma: (smiling) haan...maine socha itne din huay tumse sahee se baat kiye huay....to tumse milne chali ayi...busy to nahi thi na??

Riddhima: arey nahi nahi Ma...aiye na...

She opens the door and Padma enters, while Riddhima closes the door behind her. Padma goes and sits on the sofa, Riddhima sits beside her. After a few minutes of random talk, Riddhima suddenly puts her head in Padma's lap. Padma is surprised, but she gently caresses her hair.

Padma: kia baat hai Riddhima...tum..?

Riddhima: kuch nahi Ma...bass kafi arsa ho gaya apki godd main sarr rakhay huay...is liye...

Padma smiles, knowingly.

Padma: hmm..wese kafi achi arrangements kerwai hain sab ne...

Riddhima smiles and nods

Padma: main to mehndi ki arrangements dekh ker hi shock ho gai....phir pata chala sab kuch Armaan ne kia tha...

Riddhima at once sits up

Riddhima: KIA? Armaan ne? woh sab kuch Armaan ne kia tha?

Padma: Hmmm! Kia baat hai...Armaan ka naam sunte hi tum bohat excited ho gai ho...

Riddhima blushes

Riddhima: nahi Ma aissa nahi hai...

Padma: Riddhimaaa! Tum khud se chahy jitna jhut bol lo...mujhse nai bol paogi...main tumhari Ma hun...

Riddhima: Ma ap kia keh rahi ho...mujhe kuch samajh nahi araha...

Padma: samajh nahi araha ya samajhna nahi chahti?

Riddhima looks at her

Padma: dekho Riddhima...meri baat ghaur se suno...tum mein aur Armaan main kia hai, woh to main nahi janti...per main yeh zarur janti hun ke woh larka tumse bohat pyaar kerta hai...

Riddhima: apko kese pata...hum sirf dost hain Ma...

Padma: beta tumne kabhi uski ankhon main nahi dekha? Uski ankhon main dikhta hai ke woh tumse KITNA pyaar kerta hai...kal mehndi mai jab tum donon stairs se neeche utar rahay thay...tab sach main lag raha tha ke tum donon ik doosre ke liye bannay ho...

Riddhima gets up, starts pacing

Riddhima: Ma, main manti hun pehle hum donon main...par ab aissa kuch nahi hai...woh mera aik bohat acha dost hai!

Padma: haan...main maan leti..main maan leti woh sirf tumhara dost hai agar uske chehre per tumharay annay se khushi na ati hoti, tumhare kahiin na hone se woh udaas na hota, harr waqt uski ankhain tumhain na dhundhti hoti to main maan leti Riddhima...par aissa nahi hai...

Riddhima is quiet

Padma: Armaan bohat acha larka hai Riddhima...woh tumse bohat pyaar kerta hai...haan main manti hun uss se kafi ghaltian hui hain, par ghaltian to sabse hi hoti hain na Riddhima...meri baat manoo...ussay aik mauka do....tumhain Armaan se ziada pyaar kerne wala larka kahiin nahi miley ga

Riddhima's flashback to New Year eve on the terrace...Armaan holding her close: Jo insan tumsse iss dunia main sabse ziada pyar kerta hai woh tumhare samne kharra hai Riddhima...

Riddhima opens her eyes...to see Padma patting her head'

Padma: mujhe ab jana hoga...par jo kuch maine khaa haii...uske barray main sochna zarur...huh??

Riddhima nods and Padma leaves...

Riddhima walks to the window and looks outside at the moon. She closes her eyes for a second and Armaan's face, smiling and winking at her, flashes across her. She at once opens her eyes, shocked at her self.

Riddhima: kia main bhi....Armaan se....par...(self wondering)

Scene change...


NEXT SCENE coming up in a few minutes.

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Posted: 17 years ago
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awwww...i loved it!!!! really nyce 😊
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Sirf aik comment 😭 😭 !!!

Khair...thanks a lot!!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
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welcome!! dont worry ..im sure ppl r still reading...lamba hai na!!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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superb! i want it jus like dis!

karishma
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Posted: 17 years ago
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aaawww..dt ws sooooooo cuutteeee 😳 😃 i luvd d way u wrote d dialoguess....jus luvd it 👏
now toh evn i want it dis way 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
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wOoow...i jus loved it...
i so wish dat happens in dmg.. 😳 😳

actually na ridiz ko sirf correct guidance ki zarurat hai.. 😆 ..warna evn v r wel aware dat she luvz armi...😳 😳
bas she needs a BIG push...to her feelings... 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG
it wz awsome 👏
i jst lovd it
i hop spmthin lyk dat happnz! 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Okay...so that was just scene 1....do you want me to continue?
Pebblez thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Chalo main likh hi deti hun...lolz...

Scene 2


Armaan is in the kitchen, talking to the servant

Armaan: haan aur yaad rakhna...khanay ke waqt sab servants bahar honay chahiye...koi bhi idhar udhar ghum na rhaa ho..okay?

Servant: jee sahab jee...

Armaan: aur agar kisi cheez ko zarurat ho to mujhe bata dena...

Servant: jee sir...

Just then Rahul comes in.

Rahul: tujhe main puray ghar main dhund raha tha...tu yahan kia kar raha hai?

Armaan: tere liye apne haathon se khana bana raha tha...soch raha tha tu ayega to tujhe apne haathon se khilaun ga (sarcastically)...abbay idiot, kal sangeet hai...uss ki tayari ker raha tha...

Rahul smirks

Armaan: wese bhi tu to koi kaam karta nahi hai siwaye pura din Muskaan ke peeche ghumne ke...

Rahul, making a sad face, sits down on the stool while Armaan is standing next to him, his hands on his hips

Rahul: haan yaar...kia karun....main jitna uss ke qareeb jata hun...

Armaan: woh utna tujhse door bhagti hai...haina??

Rahul: right par...tujhe kaisey pata?

Armaan: ([putting an arm on his shoulder) abbay yaar...yeh sab larkian hain na...aik jaisi hoti hain...larka kitna hi acha kyun na ho, inhain talnay main maza ata hai...

Rahul: hmmm...par tujhe kia problem hai...tere to ird gird ghumti hain larkian...harr waqt!

Armaan: arey kahan yaar...woh puranay Armaan ke satah hota tha...

Rahul: aur woh Mallika??

Armaan: Mallika? Abbay yaar...uss item bomb se to meri jaan chuth gai...thank God...

Rahul: woh kese??

Armaan: pata nahi Riddhima ko kia ho gaya...us ne achi khassi suuna di Mallika ko...

Rahul: RIDDHIMA ne? MALLIKA ko? (shocked)

Armaan: haan yaar...i am shocked too...pehle to aisse uss ne kabhi ksii ke sath behave nahi kia(just then some one calls armaan)

Armaan: AYA!! Chalta hoon...(then hits Rahul on the head) kuch kaam ker le tu bhi...(and goes away)

Rahul looks at him going away...(the RAOOOL C-c-c music plays behind)

Rahul: hmmm..to Riddhima ne Mallika ki insult ki...par kyun, yeh Armaan abhi takk nahi samajh paya...chal Dr.Rahul, ab tujhe hi kuch kerna parray ga in donon ka...(smirks to himself)


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