The new generation of khusum

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-1....Garv is a good friend of Kumud.Kumud used to hav crush on Garv.
{khusum's story should've been like this.....}BUt with sadness she
understands that he is madly in luv with kali.Later when she
understands Kshitij's luv 4 her,she forgets everything&falls in luv
with him.Garv later understands that his luv 4 kali is utter
foolishness since she hates him.He keeps silent.Kshitij cheats kumud
& she becomes pregnant.But kshitij leaves her & Kumud decides to
suicide.She tries to walk in the traffic block.Garv sees it & saves
her.He becomes angry:whats this kumud?can't u see?If i was not
there,u would hav...KUmud:i would've died...i don't want to liv,then
why should i be careful?garv gets shocked:whats ur problem?we 'll
solve it.kUmud:no.impossible.garv :kumud,u trust me.She:yes.He:then u
tell.I'm there with u.KUmud:i'm pregnant.Garv with a shock:what?who
is that fellow?come on ....tell me...She:kshitij.Again shock.Everyone
comes to know about her pregnancy.Garv goes to kshitij to request 4
kumud.BUt kshitij did'nt mind him:if u r so sad about her,u marry
her.Garv goes to kapoor house,sees everyone blaming kumud.Suddenly he
puts sindoor on her forehead.Everyone gets shocked.garv:u cannot
blame her anymore,she has got a husband now,her child's
dad.Myself.Kumud could'nt belieave it.garv goes out.kumud follows
him.kumud:garv,u know what u did?Garv:yes.But i'm sorry 4 taking a
decision without ur knowledge.Kumud:u r a cheater,u cheated
kali.Garv:no,kumud...i can't cheat anyone.I did'nt cheat kali.
She:stop it garv.u were in luv with kali.He:yes,but she never luved
me,she luves Nakul & i did'nt want to snatch her from him.bcoz i know
how a person feels when he does'nt get his luv.i can understand ur
feeling.i don't expect luv from u.I'll be good friend.but kumud,i'm
marrying u 4 ur child.he should hav his dad.kumud:i'm sorry
garv.Garv:its ok.kumud....will u marry me?Kumud says YES after a
moment.Abhay,Khusum,Dadi etc get relieved.Garv marries kumud.Later
kali realizes that nakul is flirt.she understands garv's true luv &
starts longing 4 garv.Garv was very caring.he was waiting 4 kumud's
child to come.Kumud becomes emotinal,she tells garv:u r not my kid's
real dad,but u r more caring than his real dad.i'm just ur friend.who
else do such a g8t deed 4 a friend?garv takes it as a joke.Kumud
delivers.Garv became a nice dad.Kumud becomes so happy..she remembers
all the good deeds he has done 4 her.Garv arranges a surprise b'th
day party 4 kumud.All the couples dance.Garv comes near her & showed
his hands,expecting her to hold his hands to dance with him.she
becomes very happy & dances.Song:tere naam....she dances close to
him.She realizes that she started luving him again.Later kumud comes
to know that kali is single.she decides to giv garv his true
luv.kumud tells garv:kali is single now,she broke her relationship
with nakul.Garv:what?why?SHe:nakul is like his brother only...he was
cheating kali...but luckily kali did'nt hav my fate.Garv keeps
silent.Kumud's eyes rose up.She:i think she needs u,so u...Garv:so?
kumud:u can divorce me & marry her.Garv:ok,i'll do so.Kumud turns
back & weeps silently.Garv:but kumud...r u happy about it?
Kumud:yes..ofcourse garv.bcoz my best friend is getting back his
luv.Garv comes near her & hold her hands:I'm ur best friend..?
ok...i'm happy about it.but i'm just a friend 4 u?nothing else?come
tell kumud..look at my eyes & tell.Kumud cries:garv...u know
onething..?u r my 1st luv.Garv gets a shock.She:i was so sad to know
that ur luv is kali.Now again i'm sad that i'm going to loose u,bcoz
ur luv is back to u,god heard ur prayers.Garv becomes emotional:u
know what i pray t god...?I pray not to get kali,but to win ur
heart.Kumud gets a shock.Garv:i luv u kumud.i can't liv without u &
our child.U will never loose me kumud...never...They hug each
other.Then a romantic Tere naam song .....Kali wants to get garv .she
wants to destroy kumud's life.Kali calls garv to talk to him
seriously.She tells sorry to garv.Garv:4 what?kali:i could'nt
understand ur luv garv...i was really rude to u.i'm sorry 4
that.Garv:its ok kali...leave it.ok then bye..kali:i want to tell u
an imp thing.Garv:whats that?Kali"i luv u Garv".garv:what?
kali:yes...really i luv u garv.Garv:but kali...u know that now i'm
kumud's husband.Kali:ya...but does she luves u?& i know that u don't
luv her.Why should u carry somebody else's kid?Garv:kali...stop
talking nonsense.i's not somebody else's kid.it's mine.And kumud is
luvly wife.She luves me.Kali:& u?Garv:i luv her.Kali gets a
shock:garv...?u r lying..He:no kali,i'm telling the truth.She is my
life.He goes.kali becomes crazy.She tells herself:i won't allow garv
to liv with kumud.Kumud goes 4 her friend's wedding to a distant
place.garv couldnt accompany her,as he was busy.Kali decides to go
there in the absense of kumud.


PART-2



Kali goes to garv's house during the rainy night.Garv becomes
irritated:why did u come here?u dont remember what i told u?
Kali:garv...i came here to tell SORRY.i'm sorry garv..now i
understand my mistakes.Garv:its ok.Garv goes to the fridge to hav
cool drink.Kali:garv,u want to hav cool drink in this rainy day.Garv
did'nt tell anything.Kali:ok,garv u go & sit in ur room.i'll bring
drink 4 u.Garv:no need kali.Kali:i'll.garv,u r not angry towards me
no.so i'll do it.u go.Garv goes.Kali prepares it & she mixes sleeping
pills in it.She givs it to garv & he drinks it.he falls into
sleep.kali has wicked smile on her face.when the morning comes she
sleeps near garv in that bed.kumud comes back with her baby & sees
it.She gets shocked.garv gets up.kumud hides herself.Garv sees kali
in his bed & gets shocked.kali gets up with a smile:thank u garv 4
giving me some beautiful moments.Kumud hears it & comes inside the
room.Garv sees kumud:kumud..Kumud:enough garv....why did u do this to
me?u could've told me the truth.i would not hav stood against ur
luv.but after giving me hopes,u...u r like kshitij.no
difference.Garv:no kumud...u r minunderstanding...we don't hav
anything like that.Kumud...Kumud does'ny listen to him.She goes.garvv
follows her.Garv:how can u leave me...our child..Kumud:our child?he
is my son.u r not his dad.u should not forget it.she goes.garv
becomes heartbroken.kali:did u see her true colour?she does'nt hav
any feeling 4 u.Garv becomes angry:stop it,everything is bcoz of u.u
liar!kali pretends to be sad:garv,i was not lying.it happened.garv
lost his control.Though he went behind kumud,there was no use.kali
claims that she is pregnant.No one believes garv.Kumud decides to
divorce garv.Kumud shares her worries with khusum:garv always luved
kali,i came between them.now i;m giving them a way to walk
together.garv requests kumud to cancel the divorce idea.Kumud becomes
angry:if u r a nice man,u should not leave kali & ur baby.Garv:how
can i leave our son?kumud becomes sad :he is not ur son..don't u
remember that?fINALLY DIVORCE HAPPENES & garv marries kali.Garv &
kumud's flashback with the song tere naam.....Kali was very
happy.Garv:kali,i married u only bcoz of our child.i cannot luv u
like b4.u should not expect anything else from me.But i promise that
i'll be a good dad.Kali gets shocked.She tells in her mind:what if
garv comes to know that i was lying to get him? &n bsp; &n bsp;
Khitij becomes a nice guy & apologizes to kumud.she forgives
him.He:may be its god's decision to make garv do like this to rejoin
us.kumud,will u marry me?She cries &goes away.Abhay,khusum,kali etc
force kumud to marry kshitij.Finally she agrees.Kali becomes
happy.Nakul comes $ sees kali:actually r u pegnant kali?kali gets
shocked:why?He:u don't look like expecting.tell me kali...i don't
think garv has cheated kumud.Everything was u plan.right?kali becomes
angry:YES...bcoz i need garv.nakul blackmails kali & cheats her later
by telling eveything to kali.a fight takes place.At that time kumud
goes to garv's house to giv him her wedding invitation card.she
wanted to pretend to be happy to hurt garv.She sees their fight.She
hides herself.Garv:i'll tell everyone.Kali:no use garv.kumud is going
to marry her real luv kshitij.u won't get her.GArv:if she comes to
know the truth that u were doing a cheap drama to destroy her
life...if she comes to know that nothing happened that night....if
she will know that u r not pregnant she will come to me.Kali laughs
loudly:stupid dream.she will never believe u.Who else will believe u
garv?Kumud comes inside:i'll believe him kali.kali gets shocked.garv
becomes happy.kumud cries & goes to garv's arms.She:i'm sorry
garv....forgiv me...god will not forgiv me 4 giving pain to such a
nice guy like u.Garv:no kumud.u came back to me...right?thats more
than enough. Everone comes to know the truth & garv divorces kali &
marries kumud& lives happily with her & the child.Later she givs b'th
to garv's daughter.THE END


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Posted: 19 years ago
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i will read it... not now.. when i hav enough patience to 😆

but thought i should reply, since no one else has bothered... and i thought, u deserve at least a reply to appreciate ur hard work 😊

I'm sure its good hehe.. i'll read it soon tho
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Posted: 19 years ago
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😭 Man, I wish your fiction was true! 😭

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