MG FF - Hum Apke Hain Kaun? Updt pt 49 on pg 47 Jun 26 - Page 47

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Posted: 7 days ago

48

very nice update

geet is getting angry with maan's absence n rithan waiting n missing maan

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Part - 49


The next morning.....

Geet is a little bit late to wake up, she finds Rithan up aalready .....

Geet thinks, did this bot even sleep last night? Ohhh God! What's happening?

Geet: Rithan, what's it? What are you thinking about?

Geet knows the answer.... its his buddy...

Its the weekend and so he would naturally miss Maan the most... cause the two have always been together at weekends...

Geet didn't complain as she got some time for weekly shopping and prepping, which she does quickly for she had to make the Sunday feast for her son, its a fixed menu, Mushroom Biryani, Paneer Tikka and corn cheese balls...

Though Rithan is a poor eater he enjoys his food, savouring it like an adult, much luke his father, Geet learnt that it has come from Maan as she saw him have lunch at Vicky's place that day......

The look on Rithan's face when he is having his favorite bite is priceless....

Geet would just be happy by looking at him the whole time... and those little words of appreciation from him are like bonus...

"This is the world's best Biryani "...

"Cheese ball is better than anything I eat at the mall"

Geet doesn't have time for shopping today, she has to keep a watch on Rithan and try her best to lift his mood....

Rithan: maa, open the door, I have to go out

Geet: Rithan, no, first fresh ho jao, drink your milk and then you can go wherever you want

Geet knows that its not use stopping him, he will wait for a while and come back himself when he gets tired of waiting....

Geet decides to make Sandwiches for breakfast itself and take Rithan out later...

She could shop and also it will be a distraction for him too....

Geet is also in no mood to cook today...

Geet gets ready and looks for Rithan...

He is not there in front of Maan's apartment...

Where is he?

Geet panics, did he go in search of Maan himself?

Geet looks at the lift which is busy , she climbs down the stairs in a minute like magic and runs to the entrance...

Luckily Rithan is there only talking to the security...

Securities don't let children go out without elders....

Geet: Rithan, come on, what are you doing here?

Geet takes him to the house...

She warns him not to go anywhere without her knowledge....

Rithan is a good boy and usually he doesn't do anything without telling his mother, even when he goes to see his buddy or when he goes out with him...

Rithan comes and narrates the whole story to Geet, the hero of those stories is Maan...

Why not? Every child sees their parents as the first heroes.... haina?

Rithan takes a few bites of the Sandwich an is done...

Geet: Rithan, finish your Sandwich soon and get ready, we are going out for lunch, to your favorite pizzeria and will have ice-cream while coming back....

Rithan is not at all bothered....

Rithan: I am not hungry, I don't want to go anywhere

He then goes to the balcony and keeps watching outside ....

The bell rings...

Rithan runs to the door....

It's the groceries Geet had ordered, he goes back disappointed....

The bell rings once again.... this time Geet lets him get it.. it's his favorite pizza, he should be happy seeing that...

But no...

Rithan returns...maa, its the pizza Anna

The boy who usually keeps tracking the delivery of his pizza is now not even bothered when it has arrived....

Geet gets it... and leaves it untouched on the counter....

She knows Rithan is not going to eat....

Later in the evening.....

The bell rings yet another time, who is it?

Geet runs after Rithan herself as she too is expecting the unexpected guest... Maan... is it Maan, Geet feels overwhelmed for a second....

No, it's not....

It's the security.... he has a parcel in his hands....

Geet: Anna, I didn't order anything, it must be for someone else

As Geet is speaking, Rithan overtakes her, grabs the parcel from the security's hand and runs to his room...

What's wrong with this boy?

Geet: Sorry Anna, I will get it back from him, he has misunderstood it...

Security: no ma'am, its for Maan sir, our little boy asked me not to return it as sir is not here, he said Maan sir asked to leave it at your place, thats why I got it, you tell Maan sir that the parcel has arrived and you received it

Geet: thanks anna

Geet: Rithan, how do you know about the parcel?

Rithan: I know maa

Geet: how? Did you talk to your buddy without my knowledge or what?

How could Maan speak to Rithan ignoring Geet? Haina? He sould have called and informed Geet know?

Rithan: no maa, buddy ordered it the other day and told that it would come today

Geet: Rithan, what's this? Why did you get that? Its not ours

Rithan: no maa, its ours only

Geet is confused....

Rithan opens the baggage, its CSK jerseys for Rithan and his buddy....

Geet now understands it...

Rithan has been telling about how Maan is a crazy IPL fan and how he doesn't even let Rithan watch youtube when the matches are on...

Rithan started watching along with Maan and he now knows many teams and players...

They both are CSK fans it seems...

Even Geet knows about the prodigy VAIBAV SURYAVANSHI from her conversations with Rithan...

So they were going to watch Sunday's match together wearing the jerseys....

That's why Rithan is badly wanting to see his buddy before this weekend...

Now everything is clear, now Geet would have to do something before Rithan starts missing his buddy again....

Geet has got an idea, she will give company to Rithan in watching the matches...

They will start watching today itself...

Tomorrow Rithan would wear the jersey and watch the match.... haina?

Geet: this is nice Rithan, you will look just like a CSK player in this, haina?

Rithan: yes, I am Sanju and buddy is Dhoni

Rithan shows the names on the jerseys...

Rithan: see, the jerseys are here, buddy will come tomorrow definitely

What to do with this boy? Geet gets angry with Maan, why did he plan so much and just vanish?

Geet: ok, lets see that tomorrow, we can watch the match together today, ok

Rithan: ok

Geet: give me a high five then, let's go and eat the pizza now, let me warm it for you

Geet thinks that the pizza might lift his mood further....

Rithan: who eats stale reheated pizza? Make me a fresh Sandwich, they are so delicious, much better than this pizza

Geet is shocked, he likes her Sandwich more than his pizza?

It's not Rithan speaking, its Maan Singh Khurana speaking....

Maan has influenced Rithan in the right ways too at times, even though he has mostly spoilt Rithan with his pampering....

The boy sleeps with the jerseys by his side with the hope that his buddy will come and they can watch CSK match live at the stadium the next day as promised by Maan...

Geet is in for a surprise tomorrow...haina?

Next morning....

Rithan is all ready...

He has already tried the jersey ...

He is looking at himself in the mirror and is smiling big....

He then changes it... why boy? You are so happy wearing that...

Geet is very happy to see that smile after a long time.... she wants to see him like that only..... thats every mother's wish, haina?

Geet: Rithan, why don't you wear it now itself?

Rithan: no, I will wear it for the match along with my buddy.

Geet: ok as you wish

Geet too has a tiny bit of hope and a lot of expectations that his buddy will come somehow to make things easier for Geet.....

Or she will have to take the hard path and make the boy understand the truth....

She is just waiting to tell the truth about hiw his buddy has gone never to return, he has gone back to his life and the two of them should also do so...

The bell rings again...

Rithan runs screaming... its buddy... buddyyyyyyy, I am ready

Geet opens the door and its not Maan...

It's Pradeep, the driver...

Geet is surprised, is Maan coming too?

Geet looks behind....

Pradeep: akka, here, I came to give this

He gives an envelope.... is it any letter from Maan...

Geet opens and sees it...

Its tickets for today's IPL match...

Geet: what's this? How would you get it?

Pradeep: I have a client who is a CSK staff, I got it from him, Maan sir asked me to arrange it

Geet: ok then, how much it is? I will pay it

Pradeep: akka, Maan sir already paid it

Geet: what? When?

Pradeep : then itself, sorry akka, it came to my hands this morning only, sorry Rithan to have kept you waiting

Rithan: thanks anna, where is buddy?

Pradeep: akka just inform sir that you received the tickets, he is not answering my calls

As is he would answer Geet's?

Geet: ok, thanks Pradeep

Pradeep: I will leave then

Geet: wait Pradeep, I will get you your favorite filter coffee

Pradeep: sure, how could I miss your coffee? I even told Maan sir that its the best, he wanted to try it too, did you make it for him? You should have, haina?

Geet doesn't know Maan had such a wish, she had never offered him even a cup of coffee... haina? It was always Rithan who would ask Maan to join him for lunch or dinner....

Maan always obliged....

Geet didn't invite Maan but also didn't object to Rithan's wish to bring his buddy....

Geet gets a call in a few minutes....

It's a new number, but looks familiar...

Geet takes it... maybe official... she remembered seeing that number on the office mobile....

But who knows her personal number?

Geet: halo, who is it? Please call the office number

Geet, don't cut the call like always, its important....

It's Maan...

He tried calling her earlier a couple of times, but she ignored as it was an unknown number....

Geet goes speechless...

Geet: thanks for the tickets

She cuts the call....

Maan keeps calling....

He messages.... its about Rithan, pls let me talk to him Geet....

Geet gives the phone to Rithan next time...

Maan asks Rithan to put the phone on speaker...

Rithan: hi buddy, I know you will come, the jerseys are here, I am ready, lets do it

Maan: listen buddy, I have something important to tell you, first of all I am very sorry for everything, it was an emergency, I had to leave, now also I won't be able to join you, you go with your mother

Rithan: no, you promised

Maan: I know, but I can't, I know you are mama's boy, and you will be mama's boy always , so be a good boy and listen to your mom and don't trouble her, ever, you know she is here for you and you only, she will take you to the match, there is nothing she can't do for you, I can't do all that she does for you, you be a good son and enjoy your time with her, I know you will have a better time with her, ok

Rithan is disappointed, but he agrees with his buddy....

Rithan: ok

Maan: thats my buddy, bye buddy , love you, just make sure you go there ahead, before the crowd comes, ok, take care, bye

Maan cuts the call....

He didn't speak to Geet? Or she didn't speak to him?

Anyways its upto Geet now, Maan has confirmed it.... no Maan, no buddy, only Geet and Rithan.... who needs anymore else? We are more than enough for each other, haina?

Geet thinks about what Maan said... he was trying to tell Rithan that it will be Geet only hereafter, haina?

She forgets about what he said about getting to the grounds earlier....

The bell rings....

It's Pradeep again... what's it now?

Geet: yes, Pradeep

Pradeep: akka, aren't you ready yet? We have to go now, or it will be too much chaos

Geet: what?

Pradeep: Maan sir called, he asked me to go a little earlier itself, you must know

Geet: haan, we are almost ready, haina Rithan

Rithan insists that Geet wears Dhoni jersey, and Geet had to agree...

Its Maan's size, a little oversized for her, but its all good....

Geet is experiencing a live match for the first time, she is going into the crowds for the first time...

there is always a first time, Maan has made her experience a lot of things for the first time, haina?

Pradeep takes them to the grounds, introduces them to that client who arranged the tickets, his family has also come...

Pradeep: Sir, please take care

Client: I know, you ask your sir not to worry, they will be sitting with my family only

Maan had talked to him too....

Pradeep: akka, I will be here only, in the parking, give me a call anytime, ok, I will leave

They enjoy the match with CSK winning, and Dhoni is at the grounds for the first time....

Rithan gets so excited, he tries to run with the other kids to go meet Dhoni....

But Geet stops him...and he stays with her...

Later that night....

Geet is still angry with Maan, but she would appreciate whatever he did for Rithan today...

Geet also had a good time after seeing one of her son's wishes fulfilled...

She is happy that Rithan didn't miss it though Maan is not here...

Geet: so, now you must be very happy, haina Rithan?

Rithan: yes, so so happy, I saw Dhoni

He goes back to that moment with his eyes wide reliving that experience...

Geet: that's a dream come true moment, haina?

Rithan: yes

His excitement vanishes for a moment...

Geet: what Rithan?

Rithan: its just that I missed something

Geet: what?

Rithan: if only buddy had been there, we would have got Dhoni's autograph today

Geet knows that she couldn't do that, she hates all that, and so Rithan stopped...

Whatever it might be, Geet can't deny the fact that she can't fill Maan's place in Rithan's life, not as a father but as a buddy...

He will always miss his buddy...

Geet hates Maan more for this.... rightly so... this is unforgivable....

Geet can forgive him for neglecting Rithan as an infant, or she might have already forgivven Maan for that for it didn't hurt Rithan that time, it only hurt her, but this time Rithan is more hurt than her...

There is no way she could forgive that, haina?

Edited by ghsp2fan - 2 days ago
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Posted: 2 days ago

Part 49

Of cos Rithan misses Maan

He indeed is more like Maan

Geet was upset that Maan just left

Liked that Maan is fulfilling Rithan's wishes

Glad that Maan called Rithan

Maan should not have left

His son needs him


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Posted: a day ago

Wonderful and beautiful ❤️ update

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Posted: an hour ago

Looks like Maan has decided to leave them alone since he saw first hand his son is taken care of. Geet is a good mother. But now he is missed a little too much.

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Posted: an hour ago

Geet had a right to be concerned when she heard about the boarding school for the kid. But now the situation is very different. This time Maan backed away so Geet could have Rithan in her life. He doesn't want to come between mother and son.

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