Gehra Hua...Deeper it became...Aryaman Ahana Radhika FS - Page 4

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Posted: 6 days ago
#31

Awesome update Jasmine.Radhika is so selfish.She is behaving like chugalkhor aunty.Not letting Ahana and Aryamann marry each other.Backbiting about them .In the line You are so tall and handsome.It's written Radhika Di is so short .Rightly said In love the height doesn't matter. She bribed the astrologer.But her plan did not succeed.Their marriage date was finally fixed.The mehendi function was good.The pic black outfits u put is lovely.Aryamann is a nice guy .He made the provision of visiting her sis on a daily basis .Aww he cannot see Ahana sad even for a minute.That's the quality of a good guy.smiley9Waiting for the next update

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Posted: 6 days ago
#32

Thank you very much.

Thanks for pointing out my careless mistake.

Originally posted by: Surilikoyal

Awesome update Jasmine.Radhika is so selfish.She is behaving like chugalkhor aunty.Not letting Ahana and Aryamann marry each other.Backbiting about them .In the line You are so tall and handsome.It's written Radhika Di is so short .Rightly said In love the height doesn't matter. She bribed the astrologer.But her plan did not succeed.Their marriage date was finally fixed.The mehendi function was good.The pic black outfits u put is lovely.Aryamann is a nice guy .He made the provision of visiting her sis on a daily basis .Aww he cannot see Ahana sad even for a minute.That's the quality of a good guy.smiley9Waiting for the next update

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Posted: 17 hours ago
#33

Gehra Hua...Deeper it became...Part 5

Thank you everyone for supporting this story.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Aryaman:Since there is mehendi in your hands you cannot eat food on your own.So I will feed you.

Ahana nodded with a smile.

Suddenly Radhika came near them.

Radhika:Aryaman, you can feed her whenever you want after marriage.But from now onwards i won't be able to do that always.So please let me feed my di.

Aryaman nodded with a smile.

Ahana too smiled.Radhika took a plate of food and fed it to Ahana.Ahana smiled.

(Created by me with the help of AI)

Aryaman smiled seeing the beautiful scene.

Radhika was crying.

She remembered Ahana feeding her food

(Created by me with the help of AI)

and helping her do homework in childhood.

(Created by me with the help of AI)

She remembered how they both enjoyed a lot together.

They enjoyed a lot in the swimming pool.

They had a lot of fun on Holi.

They enjoyed picnics together.

Ahana and Radhika partying..

Radhika massaging Ahana's shoulder.

Radhika:I had spent so many beautiful moments with Ahana di.But I remembered only how strict she was with me and that caused anger in my mind for her.I was so foolish to not see her good side.I am so late in realizing her value.

Radhika took a framed photograph of hers and Ahana and looked at it emotionally.

Ahana who reached there saw it.

(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor)

Suddenly Radhika burst into tears.

Seeing her cry,Ahana went near her.

Ahana:Radhu...why are you crying?

Radhika:Di....I never liked you controlling me.I was so angry with you that I wanted to get rid of you.

Ahana:It's okay Radhu. Don't be guilty.I was also over strict with you.It was my fault too.

Radhika:No Di.Recently I understood that you were doing everything for my best and you were my lucky charm.I am sorry Di for misunderstanding you.

Ahana:It's okay Radhu.Don't feel bad.

Radhika:When you became busy with Aryaman and started spending more time with him,I started becoming jealous. I realised how much I love you and I can't share you with anyone else. So I told Aryaman to break up with you.I even lied about Aryaman's character and told you to leave Aryaman.I stooped so low that I even bribed the astrologer to tell our parents that you both should not get married..I am ashamed of doing that.

Ahana was shocked by her revelation.

Radhika:I am really sorry Di.But don't get married and don't go away from me Di.

Ahana became emotional and hugged Radhika.

Ahana:My baby!I love Aryaman and I want to marry him.But that won't reduce my love for you.I love you the most and nothing is more important than you for me.

Radhika looked at her emotionally.

Radhika:Really Di?

Ahana:Yes.My marriage won't separate us.I will visit you regularly and you will also visit me regularly. I promise.

Radhika:I also promise you Di.

They hugged each other with a smile.

(Created by me with the help of AI.But Priyanka's face is done by me with the help of face swap).

Ravish told Suzie:Why are you so beautiful Sweet heart?

Suzie:Because I went to the beauty parlour and did make up to attend the mehendi function.

Ravish:What a joke!You wore make up and i didnt even know that.No problem.

Suzie:I spent so much of money to put make up and you didn't even notice it?How mean Ravish!

Are you blind?

Suzie was really angry.

Ravish thought:I curse my tongue for saying this truth.

Ravish:Don't be angry Suzie.What i meant was...without make up also you look the same.I mean you look gorgeous.You are a natural beauty.

Suzie blushed:Really?

Ravish:Yes.

Parmeet went near them.

Parmeet:Ravish beta...

Ravish:Yes dad.

Parmeet:Is she the girl to whom you talk on the phone daily?Your phone girl friend?

Ravish:Yes dad.She is not just my phone girl friend. I mean not only on the phone,almost everyday I talk to her directly.

Suzie said with shyness:We meet outside daily.

Parmeet smiled:Oh!Cool!I am proud of you for carrying my legacy.I also used to meet your mother daily before marriage.

Ravish smiled.

Ravish:Only before marriage you used to talk to mom daily?Not after marriage?

Parmeet:Very nice question beta.But after marriage we were staying together.But she was mostly in the kitchen.So I used to go to the kitchen daily to meet your mother.

Ravish and Suzie laughed.

Suzie:So cute...

Parmeet:Carry on guys....

Parmeet walked away.




Aryaman and Ahana danced at the Sangeet function.

Aryaman and Ahana got married.

Radhika gave a box to them.

Radhika:This is my wedding gift for both of you.

Ahana opened it.It was a framed photograph of Aryaman and Ahana.

Aryaman:Beautiful!

There was a note too.

Ahana read it:I love you very much my Di.You are the best sister in this world and you are my world.

Ahana looked at Radhika emotionally.Aryaman too looked at Radhika.

Ahana became so emotional that she hugged Radhika with a smile. Radhika smiled emotionally.

(Thank you Sydell for this edit).

Aryaman,Raghav,Pragati and Parmeet became very emotional seeing it.

The end

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Posted: 14 hours ago
#34

Radhika feeding Ahana was sweet. Ahana’s past moments with Radhika were cute. Finally Radhika confessed and their hug was sweet. Ravish and Suzie are hilarious. The sangeet dance was romantic. Radhika’s wedding gift was so cute. Perfect pics. Favorite scene is Radhika realizing the worth of Ahana and favorite character is Parmeet because he is hilarious.

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Posted: 13 hours ago
#35

Part 5

Outstanding update... superbly written


nice end


thank you

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Posted: 13 hours ago
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Posted: 9 hours ago
#37

I was surprised that Radhika confessed the truth! But I wish Ravish and Suzie also got married.

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