Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (PraShiv SS) - Page 6

Part 6

Outstanding update... superbly written

Nice update

Good to know Sona is positive

Good that he rejected Sona. Is Sona a vamp? Dream sequence was nice. Hair strands removing scene was sweet. Her feeding him was lovely. Are the green saree pics real? Wonder who is it now. Perfect pics. Waiting for next

The green saree pics are real.can you plz comment on part5 also?

Thanks a lot.

Originally posted by: salley145

Good that he rejected Sona. Is Sona a vamp? Dream sequence was nice. Hair strands removing scene was sweet. Her feeding him was lovely. Are the green saree pics real? Wonder who is it now. Perfect pics. Waiting for next

Part 5

Guess Prarthana is jealous. Sona and Shivansh edits look very natural. So I was right, she is jealous. Glad that it wasn't Sona to go in PTA. Sona proposing Shivash was shocking. Perfect pics and edits

Hamara Dil Aapke Paas Hai (My Heart is with You)Part 7

After some time somebody entered Shivansh's house.

Prarthana:Sorry,I didn't recognize you.

He:I am Niranj Randhawa. Shivansh's father.

Prarthana was shocked.

Niranj:I will come to the point.Sonalika loves Shivansh from childhood.I also know her since she was a baby as she is my best friend's daughter.I also wish that she becomes my daughter in law.But Shivansh broke her heart for someone he met recently..ie you.Think well.Don't you think that Sonalika is the best for Shivansh?Please don't be a barrier in their story.If you were not there Shivansh would have married Sonalika happily.

Prarthana was shattered.

Niranj walked out leaving her in tears.

After some time Shivansh reached home with a lot of hope.

Shivansh:Prarthana,you wanted to tell me something.Right?What was that?I can't wait anymore to hear it.

Prarthana struggled hard not to cry.

Prarthana:I wanted to tell you that I am leaving this house as people are gossiping about us.

Shivansh was shocked and shattered.

Shivansh cupped her face in his hands and asked her painfully:What are you saying Prarthana?How can you even think of leaving this house?What about our kids?

Prarthana:Even if I leave this house I will be Pratham and Harini's mother till my last breath.

Shivansh:Atleast for the kids' sake please don't leave.

Prarthana:OK.But I will continue staying here only if you marry Sonalika.She loves you a lot.

Shivansh was broken completely.

Shivansh:I thought you were going to tell me that you love me and want to marry me.But you want to leave our house.But now you want me to marry Sonalika to stop yourself from leaving this house.This is too much Prarthana. But I will obey you as our kids need you.But listen...even if I marry Sonalika,my heart will be with you.

Shivansh walked away in frustration.

Prarthana burst into tears.

Shivansh met Sonalika.

Shivansh:You proposed to me that day.But I rejected you.But I thought a lot about it.I will marry you.

Sonalika was stunned.

Sonalika:Really you want to marry me?

Shivansh was silent.

Sonalika:Then Prarthana?

Shivansh:I am not lucky enough to get Prarthana's love.She does'nt love me.

Shivansh walked away painfully.Sonalika became upset.

Shivansh and Sonalika's engagement hall...

Prarthana was very upset.She walked out of the hall to hide her tears.

Payal followed her.

Payal told her:I thought Shivansh Sir and you love each other.Infact I am sure that you love Shivansh Sir.Then why are you letting him marry another girl?

Prarthana:Nothing like that Payal.

Payal:Don't lie to me Ma'am.I know that you also love him.That's why you went out of the hall.You can't see him getting engaged to someone else.

Prarthana burst out:Yes.I love Shivansh.

Payal:Then why?Why did'nt you tell him that you love him?

Prarthana:I planned to confess my love to him.But his father requested me to let Sonalika marry him.I thought like he said Sonalika was better for Shivansh.

Payal became sad.

Payal:Such a big sacrifice!Shivansh sir loves you Prarthana Ma'am.Then how can Sonalika be better for him?

Sonalika who overheard this got shocked.

Sonalika went near Prarthana.

Sonalika:Prarthana,you too love Shivansh.But you sacrificed your love because of Niranj uncle?

Prarthana was silent.Sonalika grabbed her hand and took her to the hall.

Shivansh looked at them.

Sonalika:Shivansh,you are not unlucky to not get loved by Prarthana.She loves you very much.

Shivansh was stunned.Prarthana could not face him.

Sonalika:It's Niranj uncle who told her to back out for me.

Shivansh looked at Niranj angrily:First you cheated my mom when she was alive.Now you cheated me too.You can never change.How can you hurt your own son?

Niranj became upset.

Niranj:I did a lot of sins.I cheated your mother by producing kids from another woman.I cheated her too and abandoned those kids.You brought up your siblings as your own children.

Sonalika and others were shocked to know that Shivansh's adopted kids were his father's illegitimate children and that's the reason why Shivansh left his father.

Niranj:But I never wanted to hurt you purposefully.I thought you would be better off with Sonalika as she is like my own daughter.

Sonalika:You should not have tried to separate Shivansh from Prarthana for me uncle.I don't want Shivansh by hurting him.

Niranj became upset.

Sonalika told Prarthana:Prarthana,please don't do any blunder by keeping yourself away from Shivansh.

Prarthana looked at her tearfully.Then she looked at Shivansh.

Shivansh cupped Prarthana's face in his palms and asked:Prarthana,what I heard was true?Do you love me?

Prarthana replied emotionally:Yes Shivansh.I love you a lot.

Shivansh smiled emotionally:I love you too Prarthana.

Prarthana smiled emotionally.

They embraced each other happily.All were happy.

Pratham and Harini clapped their hands.Sonalika and Payal smiled.

Shivansh and Prarthana got married.

Pratham and Harini were very happy to witness their parents' wedding.

Shivansh and Prarthana lived happily with Pratham and Harini.

Later Shivansh and Prarthana had a baby girl and named her Shivani.

(The credit for the edit goes to the unknown editor).

The end

Thank you everyone for supporting this SS.Please give a detailed comment on this part.Please write your favourite scene,,favourite character and why you liked that character the most.

Part 7

Amazing update.... elegantly written

good end

Beautiful story. This chapter was written so well and loved it all except when Shivansh’s Dad conversation with Prarthana and he told her to let Shivansh marry Sonalika.

My favorite scene is any PraShiv scene. But if I have to choose my favorite scene in this chapter is when Prarthana said yes loves him.

I actually liked Payal and Sonalika character in this story because they brought PraShiv together. That is my favorite character here is Sonalika lol.

Thank you for making Sonalika like Khushi here.

Please do write more stories soon!!!

Sonalika won my heart

So glad she didnt become a typical vamp